Pyaar Mein Hulchul LAST PART/EPILOGUE p49

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Shina

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Posted: 18 years ago

#51

Cute one!! ☺️
But u btr not make it Zaib-Kripa 😡 . Me want only AK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😛
Sorry! Got a bit hyper. 😆 😆 😆
Cont soon!

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Aisha

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Posted: 18 years ago

#52

hi G-R-E-A-T, MIND BLOWING, AMAZING PART 😃
i just love it 😃 ...
but i agree with the other that it should be AK....
but anyways
just make AK together,then happy 😃 😳 ...

Plz continue soon...
today 😃 ....
iam dieing to read the next part....

Love
Aisha 😳

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eternal

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Posted: 18 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: deeya123
gud part but make it ak.

again i say if u get the point of twins ull love my story...😳

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eternal

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Posted: 18 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: nsheena
Cute one!! ☺️ thanx shina
But u btr not make it Zaib-Kripa 😡 . Me want only AK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😡 if u understand twin concept......😛
Sorry! Got a bit hyper. 😆 😆 😆 its okay...
Cont soon!

i will try...😳

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eternal

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Posted: 18 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: Xo-PuZen
hi G-R-E-A-T, MIND BLOWING, AMAZING oh how i love being flattered....PART 😃
i just love it 😃 ... thanx a bunch
but i agree with the other that it should be AK.... i repeat if u understand twin concept u will understand my story even better
but anyways
just make AK together,then happy 😃 😳 ... 😳

Plz continue soon... i will try...
today 😃 .... not sure
iam dieing to read the next part....

Love love ya 2 sukhi😳
Aisha 😳

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avantika

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Posted: 18 years ago

#56

awesomest sukhi.

i am being very sorry to not to be posting a commenting on you story. i am having to be so busying that i canting evening continueing my own fanfictioning. very very sorry. anyways awesome, fantastics, please be continueing soon

hugs and kisses

the oneing and onlying
avantika Y 👏 😊

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eternal

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Posted: 18 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: *Avantika_4eva*
awesomest sukhi.

i am being very sorry to not to be posting a commenting on you story.its okay sweety i am having to be so busying that i canting evening continueing my own fanfictioning. very very sorry.its okey dokey anyways awesome, fantastics, please be continueing soon i will try...

hugs and kisses hugs and kisses to you to...

the oneing and onlying
avantika Y 👏 😊

love ya sukhi😳

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eternal

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Posted: 18 years ago

#58

Recap:

Kripa: why are u staring at me like that?

Zaib: who said I was staring at you, have you looked at urself in the mirror….

Kripa: how mean, don't talk to me…stupid duffer, idiot…

Zaib: just shut up…

Kripa: stares at him, and then all of the sudden thinks damn he is hot, looking at those sexy brown chocolate eyes…and his dholey sholey….woooh..that is some good stuff…wait what kripa shut up…what are you thinking…?

Zaib: I know im sexy and all, but would u stop staring at me….jeez

Kripa: just shut up and turns her face the other way…

Zaib: damn I love her attitude….

Todays Episode:

Kripa: oh god how longer do I have to sit next to him…its been hours…yet it seems like a century…

Zaib: hmmm..im bored let me bug this chipkuli…..ahh idea…

After hours of sitting next to each other…zaib finally began to feel sleepy…

Zaib: (yawns)

Kripa: aaaah…..oh god what was that, yeh admi hai ya Bandar…? Main airport kab ponchoongi (arrive, don't now how to spell)

Zaib immediately falls asleep on kripa's shoulder…..

Kripa: oh no he just didn't…

Zaib: smiles…oh she smells good (thinks)

Kripa: (thinks) how do I get him off of me…ah yeah…

The next thing u know kripa jumps out of her seat as fast as she could…eventually making zaib hit his head on the window…

Zaib: awww…what is wrong with you woman…cant u let a poor man sleep?

Kripa: why don't u go to sleep, just keep ur darn filthy head off of me, understood…

Zaib: damn, attitude…oh well…

Hostess: excuse me ma'am is there a problem?

Kripa: actually yes…(is cut off)

Zaib: no…there is no problem…my wife here is mad at me…see we recently got married…and she wanted to go to Switzerland but as you can see were going to London instead…

Kripa: WHAT THE HEL* DID YOU JUST SAY? ME…AND UR WIFE…TO HEL* WITH YOU!

Hostess: excuse me, ma'am plz buckle up the plane will be landing…but before she could continue…

Old lady: what is ur problem? Keep ur mouth shut, there are people here other then u and ur lovey dovey husband…next time u use a word like that in front of me…ur gonna get it from me understand…aaj kal ke bacha…how rude.. (next thing you know is the old lady grabs kripa's hand and pushes her to her seat….

Kripa: oh god, no she just did not…(thinks) I can just kill him right now…and her

Zaib: wow….look how mad I got her (thinks) who cares…u should have seen the look on her face she looked like she was gonna explode…oh and this old lady…oh how I love her…damn look at the old hag go….

Kripa the buckles up…as the hostess asked her earlier…

~at the airport~

Kripa is now walking around when all of the sudden she….screams…., and unfortunately zaib is right next to her…

Zaib: damn woman just made me go deaf…

Kripa: GAURI! TUM YAHAAN KYA KAR RAHIYE HO..

Gauri: surprise…kaisa laga yeh surprise…

Kripa: is ka matlab ke tum bhi…oxford university kiliye select ho gaye..

Gauri: ha….ab chale university chalte hai…

Kripa: okay…

Gauri and Kripa arrive shortly at oxford university..and immediately find out that they are roommates…so they settle in…after unpacking and making the room look like home…..

Kripa: im hungry…lets go to a restaurant…

Gauri: okay, where do u wanna go…?

Kripa: I don't know..u decide…

Gauri: okay lets go to Cesears…

Kripa: okay….

After eating kripa and gauri get up to leave when kripa bumps into zaib….she was just about to fall when he caught her…they stared into each others eyes….until….

Kripa: let go of me..now

Zaib: as u wish…and lets go of her

Causing kripa to fall hard on her butt…

Kripa: owww….(is then helped by gauri….) stupid Bandar, idiot, lafanga, u little as*hole….

Zaib: eh chipkuli chup….and then walks away…

Kripa: oh u will have to pay for that…

~Meanwhile in Mumbai~

Gayatri: tanya bheta, wake up aaj tumhe Mumbai jaana hai, jaldi kar..

Tanya: oh sh*t aaj mujhe waha ponche naa hai…aaye mama…

Tanya then dresses in a hoochie mama skirt, and a halter top….with black heels…straightens her hair,..and then puts on some make up and rushes out the door…with her bags…

Gayatri; areh tanya breakfast toh karlo…

Tanya: nahin mama…mujhe late ho raha hai bye, bye papa…

Tanya the arrives shortly at the airport where as our angad…is still sleeping…

The next day, tanya has settled in at her aunt's house…who unfortunately is still single…and angad….

Naina & dilip: angad…wake up aaj pehla din hai college ka aur tum ab bhi soh rahe ho…hurry up..

Angad: mom dad sonhe doh naa..

Naina: (then goes up to angad, and yells in his ear)…

Angad: aaaahhhh! MOM, CANT A MAN SLEEP,..

Naina: HE CAN, BUT FIRST GET UR SORRY BUTT UP, TAKE A SHOWER AND GO TO SCHOOL NOW!

Angad: im in for it….I better go…

Angad then takes a shower, and rushes out the door dressed in a white shirt and blue jeans, w/o even eating breakfast…

In less then 10 minutes he is at the university….and catches up with prithvi, josh and mishti…

Angad: hey guys…

Prithivi, josh and mishti: hi angad…how u been?

Angad: good…

Ding ding ding ding..the bell rings and then rite when angad was about to walk into class he bumps into a girl…none other then tanya..

Tanya: hey watch were ur going…

Angad: damn she is fine….

Tanya: stop staring at me…she then turns around and walks into class…..

Angad: I have got to get her no.

Tanya: he's hecka cute…oh well…

Angad: comes in and sits next to her…hi…im angad…and brings forward his hand…

Tanya: hi im tanya..then shakes his hand…

They then started to talk…and in less then a day..they were going out….

Meanwhile back in London:

Kripa and gauri get to school and find out they have the same classes…where as zaib does too…kripa and gauri walk into class, and sit down…then zaib comes in and sets right behind kripa….

Kripa: Gosh…yeh yahaan bhi…I wish I could just kill him….

Zaib: this is gonna be fun..the chipkuli is in front of me…heck yes…

Well that's it for now….don't get mad at me for angad and tanya, zaib and kripa…I repeat if u understand twin concept u will know what happens next…just don't kill me…

Edited by tweetylicious - 18 years ago