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Sujalthegreat

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Posted: 18 years ago

#171

thanks guys, will try my very best to update real soon, and not take as long as I did with this one lol 😆

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Sujalthegreat

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Posted: 18 years ago

#172

PROMO 5 -: COMING UP SOON

Sneha and Kripa wake up and come down. No one is at home. They look around, but can't find anyone. Then suddenly out of nowhere, some one grabs hold of them from behind and another person blindfolds them. They keep on asking who it is, but no one replies. They start to get really scared. They are taken out of the house and into a car.

Edited by Sujalthegreat - 18 years ago

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Umam

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Posted: 18 years ago

#173

great promo plzz write the next part soon!!!

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sonia

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Posted: 18 years ago

#174

greatttttttttttt 👏

jaldi cont karna... sadyaan na guzar daynaaaaaaaaaaa 😆 😆 😆

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xoxsubhaxox

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Posted: 18 years ago

#175

awesome update and promo...i fee; bad for prem..i wonder why mukti left..and uh oh kavya is in BIG trouble!!! and i wonder who took sneha and kripa in the promo!!
plzz cont soon!! 😃 😃

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sumayyah patel

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Posted: 18 years ago

#176

great! a promo. sounds very scary. wonder who took them (sneha & kripa)

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Sujalthegreat

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Posted: 18 years ago

#177

Great news guys. I will be updating later on today. For definite this time, as I've typed it up now. But I don't know, if I will have time to post it, as I have to go to work soon. If I don't post it before then. for definite it will be posted as soon as I get back from work.

This update will be shorter then the previous update lol. 😆

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sumayyah patel

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Posted: 18 years ago

#178

looking forward to the update. a short one is nt so bad. hoping the next one would be better & longer

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Sujalthegreat

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Posted: 18 years ago

#179

Part Nine

Kavya was shocked and yet inside himself he was feeling guilty. As he knew that Anjali had heard everything.
Kavya: Anjali…I…I
Anjali: SHUT UP!!!!!
Anjali was about to slap him again, but then she stopped.
Anjali: Why…why did you do this me? If you didn't love me…why didn't you just say it?
Kavya: It's not like that
Anjali: You're right, you're not to blame. It's my fault, I was the one who was crazy about you. I was the one who was chasing after you, doing everything for you…like some pet.
Kavya: Anjali-
Still Anjali didn't let him finish.
Anjali: I haven't finished yet. You just had to tell me, just once…just once, forget about leaving you, if you had told me to kill myself…I would have done that for you happily.
Kavya: Anjali listen….
Anjali was about to walk away, but Kavya grabbed hold of her hand. But Anjali turned and slapped him again.
Anjali: DON'T YOU DARE TOUCH ME AGAIN !!!!! IT'S OVER…DO YOU HEAR…IT'S OVER BETWEEN US…YOU WON'T SEE ME AGAIN…NEVER !!!!!
Anjali just burst into tears and ran out of the club. Kavya went after her, he never intended on Anjali finding out like this. He knew that what he did was wrong. Anjali loved him like crazy and yet he broke Anjali's heart.

Anjali stopped outside in the car park. And fell down onto her knees and started to cry. Kavya came up to her and was about to put his hand on her shoulder, but then he stopped. He just stood there helplessly.
Kavya: Anjali…
Anjali got up and didn't even look at him or say anything to him, she just walked away. But Kavya still came after her. He kept on calling after her.
Kavya: Anjali…Anjali
Eventually Anjali stopped, but she didn't turn to look at Kavya. She just didn't want to see his face anymore.
Anjali: What do you want now? You've ruined my life now. What more do you want?
Kavya: I never intended on you finding out like this…I…
Anjali: I hate myself, more than I hate you. How could I…how could I, have let someone like you touch me.
Kavya just stood looking helpless. Despite what he did to Anjali, he wanted to help her. He wanted to make sure that she was fine. But Anjali wouldn't let him anywhere near her.
Anjali: You know what, I honestly thought that I had found my life partner… someone who would be with me in every part of my life. He would support me, when I would be happy and whenever I was sad.
Anjali sighed.
Anjali: My world would begin with him and end with him…but how wrong was I. My world ended, before it even started and yet I couldn't do anything about it.
Kavya: Look Anjali…
Anjali: If you're coming after me, to make sure that I'll be fine, then I'll tell you this…I'm not as weak as you think I am. You can leave me alone…I'm not going to end my life or anything.
Anjali walked away.
Kavya: Anj…
Anjali turned around this time.
Anjali: I swear to you, from now on you come anywhere near me...I will kill myself.
Then Anjali turned and walked up to a taxi and went away.
Kavya looked on, as Anjali went away. He never felt so guilty. Similar things had happened with other girls, because of him, but yet, why did he feel like this, he asked himself. He hated himself so much for what he had done to Anjali. He never loved her, so why did he feel broken from the inside. It was like as if a piece of his heart had left him.

For several minutes, he stood outside, rooted to the same spot. Memories of his past with Anjali, kept on running through his mind. Especially this one time, when he was ill and she had come over and took care of him. She was so stubborn at the time, that she had even refused to leave, till he was better. The memories had brought a smile briefly on his face and even small tears started to form in his eyes.
Kavya felt a hand on his shoulder.
Kavya: Anjali…
Kavya turned around. It wasn't Anjali. It was Prem and Angad.
Angad: Are you okay?
Kavya: I don't know.
Prem: Look everything will be fine.
Kavya: But how can it? Why is it whenever we get something we want, we're still not happy. I mean I've finally got rid of Anjali, but yet I'm still not happy.
Prem smiled breifly at Kavya.
Prem: You know what this means don't you.
Kavya looked back at both of them and realised what they meant.
Kavya: No way guys…me and Anjali. You got to be joking.
Prem: Well how else would you explain it?
Angad: Kavya…listen to me…you've had so many girlfriends in your life, that even I have lost count, but why only after leaving Anjali, you're feeling like this.
Kavya: I don't know…
Prem: Have you ever felt like this, after leaving other girls?
Kavya: No, but that doesn't mean that I'm starting to fall for her. I'm just feeling guilty, because I didn't want her to find out like this.
Angad: Yes, but like I said, you've done the same to many other girls, but why are you feeling guilty, after Anjali has found out. You should be inside the club celebrating, that Anjali has left you.
Kavya: Fine…If that will convince you two, then so be it, lets go and celebrate.
Kavya walked back towards the entrance of the club.
Kavya: Are you guys coming or what?
Both Prem and Angad made there way towards Kavya.
Prem: No matter how much you deny it Kavya, but I will make you admit it that you have fallen in love with Anjali.
Angad: Count me in as well.
They both smiled at each other, as they followed Kavya back into the club.

Sorry guys, but this is as much as I could get done today so far. let me know what you think of this part....is it getting better or not. Please be truthful, as I want to make each part as good or better than the previous parts. If you don't wanna post, then PM your comments to me.

Edited by Sujalthegreat - 18 years ago