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Sujalthegreat

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Posted: 18 years ago

#161

I'm leaving after the fanfic is over, so I will be here till its finished

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sonia

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Posted: 18 years ago

#162

we will miss u n ur ff yaaaaaar

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xoxsubhaxox

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Posted: 18 years ago

#163

aww why r u leaving? and plzz dont end ur ff too soon!! i reallyy love it!! 😊 ...plzz cont soon! 😃 😃

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Umam

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Posted: 18 years ago

#164

hey y havn't u updated yet??? plzzzz continue soon!!!

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Sujalthegreat

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Posted: 18 years ago

#165

Finally guys here is the next update lol !!!! Sorry for keeping you guys waiting for toooooo long.....!!!!! To make up for the time, I have made this update longer then the others. So you'll have more to read. lol. 😆 😆 😆

Also for all you Prem lovers out there, there's a lot of Prem in this part.

And also as this is a love story. I've decided to add something different to the facfic. 😆

Part Eight

Kavya: Funny really funny
Sujal: I'm serious
Kavya: Bhai just relax, she's coming back here tomorrow
Sujal then smiled.
Sujal: Thanks Kavya
Kavya looked at his watch and realised what time it was.
Kavya: Bhai, we've got that meeting in a few minutes.
Sujal: Oh good job you reminded me… come on lets go.

The meeting went really well and so did the whole day. For the first time Sujal was glad after seeing Kavya taking interest in work, rather than females, although now and again, he did try his charm on some of them.

Meanwhile back at home, Prem was sitting outside the house looking up at the sky. He lifted his hand up and looked at the picture of Mukti and just stared at her. He wanted to rip the picture up, which reminded him of her. It brought back his past. No matter how hard he tried to, he just couldn't bring himself to tear up the picture.
Sneha: Prem
Sneha walked up to Prem and put her hand on his shoulder.
Sneha: Why are you doing this to yourself?
Prem: Doing what?
Sneha: You know what I'm talking about…Why can't you just forget about her?
Prem: How can I?
Sneha: I know its difficult, because you loved Mukti a lot, but you can't carry on living like this.
Prem got back up onto his feet and was about to walk away, but then stopped. He turned and looked at Sneha.
Prem: Just answer me one question
Sneha: What?
Prem: Have you managed to make yourself forget about Aryan?
Sneha didn't reply. She knew she couldn't answer the question, because she herself knew she hadn't forgotten about Aryan.
Prem: See, its not easy to forget is it…Its impossible to forget your true love. I loved Mukti more than my life, but she left me, when I needed her. How could she do that?
Sneha got up and walked up to him.
Sneha: We can at least try and forget about them.
Prem: Look at me and tell me to my face that you want to forget about Aryan.
Sneha just looked at him, but couldn't find the words to tell Prem that she wants to forget about Aryan.
Prem: Aryan could be out there making something out of himself and he may come back for you. What about Mukti? She left me for no reason at all.
Sneha: Prem….
Prem didn't let Sneha finish
Prem: Sneha, look just leave me to deal with it on my own. If forgetting about Mukti is written in my fate, then so be it.
Prem turned around and saw Sneha, with her back turned towards him. He knew that Sneha was upset, because of what he had said to her. He went up to her and turned her around. She was still looking down. Prem lifted her face up. There was a tear running down the right side of her face.
Prem: Sneha, life is like a story, it has a beginning, middle and an end. We're just playing the roles that have been written for us. Our lives have already begun, but when the middle and end comes, no one knows. I mean one minute I could be here and the next…
Sneha: PREM!!!!! Don't you ever say that again!!!!!!
Sneha just hugged Prem tightly and refused to let him go.
Prem: Sneha… look….Sneha
Sneha just didn't want to listen to a word Prem was saying to her. She just didn't want to let him go. All her life Prem always looked out for her and took care of her and now he said something like this. How could he say something like this to her.
Prem: Okay….okay…look Sneha I'm sorry, I won't say that again. But Sneha, its going to happen one day.
Sneha: Yes it will, but I won't be alive at the time.
Prem: Sneha…just shut up
Sneha: See how it feels…how do you think I felt when you said that to me.
Prem pulled himself away from Sneha and held both his ears.
Prem: Look I'm sorry… I promise I won't say anything like this again.
But Sneha refused to even look at him. She turned and was about to walk away.
Prem: Hey Sneha…come on now…I said I'm sorry…if you don't forgive me…then I will leave
Sneha turned towards Prem. But he wasn't there
Sneha: Prem…Prem…Prem
She couldn't see him anywhere.
Prem: BOOOO!!!!
Prem made Sneha jump. He was stood behind her the whole time, while she was looking for him.
Sneha: I hate you, you're always doing this to me
Prem: But you still love me and care about me
Sneha started to smile, knowing that Prem was right.
Sneha: I will forgive you if you don't mention or do anything like this again.
Prem: I promise…come on lets go inside.
Before Sneha could do or say anything, Prem picked her up and carried her all the way to the front door. Like as if she was a baby or something.
Sneha: Prem put me down right now…I'm not a baby
Prem: Yes you are… you're my baby sister
Prem refused to put her down, till they actually got back inside the house. After he put her down, he just stared at Sneha.
Sneha: What's up? Why are you looking like that at me for?
Prem: Nothing…I…I just missed you a lot.
Sneha: I think going away has made you soft
Prem smiled.
Prem: I guess so, but don't tell Sujal bhaiya and Kavya, especially Kavya. But I meant what I said Sneha, I missed you a lot.
Sneha: I missed you as well.
Prem: I'll tell you what, why don't me and you go out somewhere…my treat.
Sneha: What?
Prem: What do you mean what, is it strange that I feel like giving my sister a treat. I just want to spend time with you, that's all.
Sneha: Hello? You're going to give me a treat?
Prem: Of course, you might as well take advantage, because you never know, when the old Prem the prankster will come back.
Sneha: No thank you, I like the new you… so where are we going?
Prem: We'll think of something

Prem and Sneha ended up going to watch a movie, and then went to do some shopping.

Meanwhile back at home, Sujal was just lying on the sofa, just staring at the ceiling. He just couldn't stop thinking about Kashish. Everywhere he was looking he could see her smiling at him. Her smile was driving him crazy.
While at the same time, both Sneha and Prem came back.
Sneha: Hi Bhaiya
But Sujal didn't reply back. Sneha looked back at Prem then back at Sujal. She started to wonder what was going on.
Sneha: Helloooo, bhaiya
Kavya: There's no point.
Sneha: Kavya, what's happened to him
Kavya smiled.
Kavya: Lets just say he's completely gone, there's no way back for him, and the diagnosis, is a 4 letter word.
Prem: What are you talking about?
Sneha: Kavya, will you just tell me straight, what are you talking about?
Kavya: Try and understand will you…4 letter word and a condition like this.
Then it hit Sneha, what Kavya meant.
Sneha: I don't believe you… no way
Kavya: Why not
Prem: What's going on guys?
Sneha: Bhaiya is in love
Prem: What??? No way
Kavya: Yes way…the girl is called Kashish and she's going to be working in our office, starting tomorrow.
Sneha: Everything sounds like as if its all planned out.
Sujal: What do we do tomorrow then?
Sujal's voice just startled Sneha.
Kavya: So he does talk then.
Sneha: Shut up Kavya….What do you mean what do we do tomorrow?
Kavya and Sujal didn't know what to say, as Sneha doesn't know what happened earlier on.
Kavya: Well for some reason, Kashish Ji thinks I'm bhaiya and bhaiya is me.
Sneha: You are joking right?
Sujal: No he's not
Sneha: What makes her think that?
Prem and Sneha listened, while both Sujal and Kavya told them everything that had happened since the first meeting. Prem just couldn't stop laughing after hearing about what happened.

Sneha: This is ridiculous. Bhaiya, this is all a lie, this…this just isn't right.
Kavya: Just relax will you, just let me deal with it.
Sneha: Oh yeah sure thing, you're a specialist in this are you?
Kavya: Obviously
Sneha: Yeah you probably are…I mean you're record says everything doesn't it, you're already holding the record for the most consecutive slaps in the world.
Prem just burst out laughing after what Sneha had said to Kavya.
Sneha: And you can stop laughing as well…this isn't funny Prem.
Prem: Okay…okay
Sujal: Sneha, what should I do? You tell me
Sneha: Bhaiya, if I was you, I'd tell her the truth, about yourself.
Kavya: Oh yeah! And what happens if she leaves
Sneha: Well at least she'll realise that bhaiya has the decency to tell her the truth.
Then Sneha, turned towards Sujal.
Sneha: Bhaiya, if you don't tell her soon, she'll eventually find out and she'll think you were just taking advantage of her.
Kavya: Well at least let bhaiya and Kashish get to know each other, first.
Sneha: If you two want to lie to her, then go ahead, but don't say I didn't warn you.
Then Sneha walked away and was about to go upstairs, when Sujal stopped her.
Sujal: Sneha, I just don't want to lose her.
Sneha looked back at Sujal.
Sneha: You really love her a lot don't you?
Sujal: Yes I do…I love her a lot
Sneha: Bhaiya tell her the truth then. I don't want to see you get hurt. Prem and me know what that feels like, we don't want to see you get hurt.
Sujal: I will tell her, I promise.
Sneha sighed.
Sneha: So what does she look like?
Sujal: Pretty very pretty, in fact she's beautiful.
Sneha: Is that all, what else?

SUJAL SINGS "BHOLI SI SURAT, AANKHON MEIN MASTI" 😆 I thought I'd add songs in this fanfic as well.

In the background Angad turned up.
Angad: Hey guys what's going on?
Kavya: Don't ask, just don't ask
Angad: Is everything okay?
Kavya: Yes…Bhaiya is in love
Angad: What? Oh great there goes another one, I'm the only one left then.
Kavya: What are you talking about? There's me also.
Angad: You have Anjali.
Kavya: Did you have to mention her name?
Angad: Why, what's wrong with Anjali?
Kavya: You got a day or two?
Sujal: Listen Kavya, Anjali is a great girl and she loves you a lot, what more can you ask for.
Kavya: I don't know, its just that I don't think I can ever get along with Anjali, there are times when I think we're on different wavelengths. We both want different things.
Prem: Like what?
Kavya: Like commitment, I don't think I can give her that.
Sneha: So why don't you tell her that?
Kavya: I always try to, but whenever I see her or hear her voice, I just can't bring myself to break her heart. I know she loves me a lot. That's why I can't do it to her.
Angad: You're going to have to do it sometime.
Sujal: I know its going to be hard for you, but you're going to have to make up your mind, whether you want Anjali or not.
Kavya: I know, I will
There was a brief silence, as no one spoke for a few seconds, everyone looked at each other
Then Angad spoke.
Angad: Oh I forgot Kavya, I came to ask if you wanted to go to the club or not.
Kavya: I might as well. I could do with a change of scenery.
Angad: What about you, Prem and Sujal?
Prem: Yeah sure.
Sujal: Count me out guys
Angad: Of course Devdas, you stay here and think about your Paro

Angad, Prem and Kavya arrived at the club and Kavya tried to work his magic once again.
Kavya: Look at all these pretty butterflies.
Angad: Yes, they are pretty and most of them also have a mean right hook.
Kavya: Funny…
Prem: You better behave yourself, If Anjali finds out…..
Kavya: Do you always mention her name, to annoy me
Angad: Isn't that Anjali back there?
Kavya instantly turned around, but Anjali was nowhere to be seen.
Kavya: Funny guys really funny. I'll just go and get the drinks.
Angad: He's never going to improve is he.
Prem: I guess not.
Angad: So what about you? Where did you go?
Prem: Here and there. Where ever fate would take me. I just wanted to get my head cleared after what happened.
Angad: And have you?
Prem: I'm just going to have to see. So far so good.
Kavya: Here we are guys. Here are your drinks.
Angad: What about you?
Kavya: I'll be back, I'm just going to chat with that cute girl over by the bar.
Prem: Anjali won't like this one bit
Kavya: Just shut up Prem, do you honestly think that I'm afraid of her.
Prem: I didn't say that.
Kavya: Well then…?
Prem: Ok then… I'll bet you that by the end of the night you will get beaten up here in this club by a female.
Kavya: Oh really…I don't think so and I'm willing to bet the pair of you that I will dance with one of these females and I won't get slapped or anything.
Angad: Yeah right, that would be a first.
Kavya: So guys do we have a bet?
Angad: Done
Prem: Done
Kavya: Great, I shall see you two later.
Kavya walked away from them and headed towards the bar.
Prem: What was the bet again, he said that if he gets to dance with a female and doesn't get slapped, he wins the bet, right?
Angad: Yes that's right.
Angad pulled out his phone and dialled a number.
Prem: Who are you calling?
Angad: Just a reinforcement, to make sure we win our bet. Prem: Ouch, you are so cruel
Angad laughed
Angad: I know, aren't I?

Meanwhile Kavya was getting along really well with the female.
Kavya: I'm sorry I didn't quite catch your name
Female: Anjali
Kavya: What?
Female: My name is Anjali
Kavya: This name isn't going to leave me wherever I go. Its like as if like her, her name is also keeping a watch on me.
Anjali: Excuse me, what did you just say?
Kavya: Nothing…I was just admiring your name, really nice name. Pretty as you are.
Anjali blushed
Anjali: Thankyou
Kavya: Hey do you wanna dance?
Anjali: Yeah sure

Both Kavya and Anjali made their way onto the dance floor. Prem and Angad were surprised that Kavya was actually dancing with a female and didn't even get slapped.
Prem: What are we going to do?
Angad: Relax, the package should be arriving some time now.
Back on to the dancefloor.
Anjali: I hope you don't mind me asking, but have you got a girlfriend
Kavya: No not anymore.
Anjali: Why what happened?
Kavya: Just didn't get along. She was just getting really annoying.
Anjali: Didn't you try talking to her, like telling her it's over?
Kavya: She just wouldn't take no for an answer. She was a complete psycho. To be honest I couldn't care less about her. Look at you….
Anjali: What about me?
Kavya: I'm attracted to you…I think you're the one for me
Anjali: I don't believe you. What if you leave me like you left her?
Kavya: I never liked her, but you…I'm already in love with you.
Anjali: Really
Kavya: Yes really
Kavya held her closer to him and looked into her eyes.
But then someone tapped him on his shoulders. Kavya turned around.
Kavya: Anjali !!!!
Anjali had tears flowing from her eyes. She just slapped Kavya really hard.

Edited by Sujalthegreat - 18 years ago

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sumayyah patel

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Posted: 18 years ago

#166

ooooooo. he gt slapped bare HARD by her. looks like prem & angad won the bet. u added in Mukti then, thanks so much. nice to know a bit about their love story. so sweet. he can't 4get her that means he still loves her & sujal behavior was alarming for a guy who said that he won't fall in love. Overall, a fantastic update done by you. can't wait for the next one. please update soon

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Sujalthegreat

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Posted: 18 years ago

#167

Originally posted by: Patel 1993
ooooooo. he gt slapped bare HARD by her. looks like prem & angad won the bet. u added in Mukti then, thanks so much. nice to know a bit about their love story. so sweet. he can't 4get her that means he still loves her & sujal behavior was alarming for a guy who said that he won't fall in love. Overall, a fantastic update done by you. can't wait for the next one. please update soon

Thanks !!!!!! Sorry for delay though. As far as Sujal is concerned, love can't be controlled it happens when and wherever is pleases, no matter what you say, including "I won't fall in love" hehehehehehehehehe😆

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Kaz

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Posted: 18 years ago

#168

wow!! gr8 part!!

continue soon!👏

Edited by SujalkiDeewani - 18 years ago

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Daebak

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Posted: 18 years ago

#169

hey nice part.,.............ouch!! poor kavya.......i think he's had it this time......good n proper......anjali will leave him n he'll regret it!!! 😆