Because Of You-6. Hate all-pg9(Note pg11)

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hello64

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Posted: 18 years ago

#11

i love ur ff milly 👏

and ur continuing so fast 😉 good improvment 😆

kanwer 😳

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Milly

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Posted: 18 years ago

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Originally posted by: hello64
i love ur ff milly 👏

and ur continuing so fast 😉 good improvment 😆

kanwer 😳

lol thx i already started the next oart should be up by 4

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shraddha

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Posted: 18 years ago

#13

wow great part continue soon 👏 👏 👏

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Milly

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Posted: 18 years ago

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3. Ashamed

She looked at me smiling I felt my anger grow as i watched her smiling at me she was the reason my life was hell. She came up to me and lightly held my hand. I felt like I was about to die by her touch but i kept my face blank and kept myself from letting my anger out. She called one of the servants and ordered them to keep my stuff in my room. She and Angad walked together showing me around the whole mansion. From the kitchen to every bedroom, the study room, the living room, the game room, and a room filled with liquor. Angad was watching me from the corner of his eyes he could see the anger in my eyes. He watched me as if he knew everything that happened to me. I walked silently not saying one word waiting to see where my father was, to see him and run into his arm and ask him why he left us and how hard life was. We stopped in front a large family portrait in the living room. In the picture was Manisha and Vivek, his arms were wrapped around her, there was a guy he looked the oldest obviously she knew it was Josh, he looked handsome in the black suit and his hair gelled. There were 2 girls in the picture I realized one looked about my age and the other maybe 2 years older then me. Then at last there was another guy he seemed older then me but not much maybe a year.

The family looked perfect. Everyone was happy, they're eyes should it and their bright smile as well. For a second I wished it were me and my mom in there but it wouldn't happen. I was shown my room it was the size of the 2 bedroom apartment maybe even bigger. There was a platform bed covered in black and white silk sheets the pillows were fixed in order. The large windows were on the far wall next to the bed with curtains in were white and black. There was a mirror and a dresser which were of dark wood almost looked black. There were paintings around the room and flowers on corners. A sofa and a coffee table in one corner for maybe 5 people to sit and talk. On another corner sat a computer desk, and an empty book shelf. The room was wonderful, elegant and luxurious a room she wouldn't afford not even in a lifetime.

The walked in on the dark black carpet and sat on the bed she went through her luggages and slowly unpacked everything putting them into everything where they were supposed to be in. About an hour later she was done she went into the bathroom and took a shower came out in clean pair of jeans and a white top. I heard a knock, I quietly opened the door and saw my father Vivek Sharma standing in front of my. He had a stern face I looked at him, he wore a dark business suit I didn't know what to do or say first when I thought of meeting my dad I thought he'd actually be smiling when he saw me and keep his arms open for me to run into him and hug as tight as ever but now seeing him I felt like hiding under a rock and never coming out. "Kripa. Come I want to introduce you to the rest of the people who live here." he turned around his hands in his pockets. I came out of the room shutting and walked next to him. He first knocked on a door and a girl that looked a couple of years older then me stood in front of us. He now had a smile on his face as the girl launched herself into his arms. "DADDY!!" she screamed, "calm down I want to introduce you to a GUEST that is staying with us." I felt my heart sink when he said guest. "Kripa this is Sanjana, Sanjana this is Kripa."

"Hi" she said.

"Hi" I whispered.

"Ok now further onwards." Vivek said

We walked to another room he knocked again. another girl who looked the same age as me looked at me first she was happy then after looking at me she gave me a dirty look. "Tanya this is Kripa shes a guest whose going to be living with us for a while." He said as he wrapped his arms around her and made her face me. "Hi" I whispered. "Hi" she said with attitude.

"HEY DAD!!!" someone screamed from behind. I turned and saw Josh at least there was someone who wouldn't mind being related to me. "Hey baby sis." he said as he approached us I thought he was talking to me but my heart shattered when I saw him wrap his arm around Tanya. My eyes got teary as he looked at me it was as if i could see the hate in his eyes for me. I excused myself and walked to my room and cried about how my father and brother were both ashamed to even have me here.

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Short well because i gotta go somewhere will continue tomorrow or maybe later tonight i said id post it at 4 i posted it at 1:30 anyways comment not like continue soon or anything something longer thx😛

Edited by ~*Milly*~ - 18 years ago

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cheeselova

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Posted: 18 years ago

#15

i really feel sad for kripa
why did she went back to her father
and josh i didn't expected this from him

altogeather awesome part

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Madiha

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Posted: 18 years ago

#16

awwwwwww awesome parts!! its really goodd and sad man!! why would they be ashamed to have her there? josh wouldnt even acknowledge her?! thats sad!! poorr kripaa!! continue soon!!

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candyprincess

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Posted: 18 years ago

#17

great part
aww i feel so bad for kripa 😭
cont soon

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Sakshi

@imdudehead

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Posted: 18 years ago

#18

nice part...its getting very interesting..I predict that one of Viveks daughters (maybe Tanya) likes Angad and when ak fall in love shell tell her dad she wants to marry him...i think i am wrong but it just a prediction...anyways pls continue soon 👏

Edited by imdudehead - 18 years ago

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Sakshi

@imdudehead

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Posted: 18 years ago

#19

nice part...its getting very interesting..I predict that one of Viveks daughters (presumably Tanya) likes Angad and when ak fall in love she will tell her dad she wants to marry him...i think i am wrong but it just a prediction...anyways pls continue soon --- oh my did i write this twice😭 my bad and i jsut realized it said that one of Viveks daughters are bigger than kripa...that means Vivek had a Affair poor kripas family anyways continue soon

Edited by imdudehead - 18 years ago

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Abhilasha

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Posted: 18 years ago

#20

hey mills... awesome part... poor kripa... i feel soo bad for her... i seriously didn't expect that from josh... i guess he's mad at her...and he supposedly "hates" her cuz she chose her mom...and he had to with his dad?... adn heck yea thats depressing... make it a little less depressing... cuz depressing is not fun!... anywayss do continue sooon...

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