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Posted: 18 years ago
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angad to chipkoo nikla 🤣 but i like 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Thanks sweetmittal, deeya and ka!!

Angad is chipkoo and we all love it ..we love him whatever way he would be 😳
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Part: 9

Angad is driving home without talking a sentence but remembering Kripa. Anittah is talking about the party and Aaliyah. She is teasing him about Aaliyah but he didn't comment anything as he is in deep thought of Kripa. Anittah thought he is interested in Aaliyah and decided to hint Naina about this.

"Kya hua Kripa? Are still thinking about Angad's comments? Are you upset about me dancing with other girls?" Prithvi asked when Kripa is silently in her own world staring out of the window. She smiled and shook her head "Nahin, Prithvi! I know you for so many years and those girls too. I know what you are. Angad to aaj aaya hai and he doesn't know about us. Don't worry, I know you very well."

"Haan, probably you are right. He is new to us. But I heard about Angad's reputation. It's good one way Dilip Uncle put him in his company. He will know everything slowly." Prithvi smiled back.

"But, Man! He is hot" Aaliyah commented loudly on Angad. Kripa and Prithvi exchanged looks and smiled at Aaliyah. Prithvi raised his eyebrows at Kripa as he understood something about Aaliyah. Kripa agreed with smile but felt uneasy about Aaliyah and Angad.

"Mujhey kya horaha hai? Jalan? Why do I care about him? Coz he likes me, shows interest in me, and I feel he should see me only? No, I shouldn't think about him" she firmly thought but her mind again went around the party and Angad. His dance, attitude, authoritative tone towards her, and his touch everything waking her inside. She felt shiver inside and touched her throat to settle herself, and suppress the tremble inside.

Prithvi directly drove to his house and Kripa surprised "Prithvi! Mama, papa must be waiting for me. Kabhi aur din aaoongi."

"Just have a moment with my mom and go. Mein phir do din tak shahar mein nahin rahoonga" Prithvi softly requested. Kripa couldn't resist his wish.

Damini warmly received them and made tea for all. They talked about the arrangements of the wedding, Kripa's wishes. Damini showed her shopping for Kripa and Prithvi for their new life. All talked on different topics and Prithvi drove her home after an hour.

Prithvi is slowly driving and Kripa surprised "why are you driving so slowly?" Prithvi looked into her eyes "I don't want this drive to finish. I'm not getting enough time to spend with you, Kripa! I'm on tours and busy at work. Phone bhi nahin kar paa raha hoon. I thought I will take you out from the party but it became late in the party. And Harshu also didn't allow me to leave as we met after a long time. I'm really missing you."

Kripa blushed "Ek do mahina ki baat hai, phir we will be together, right? I will tour with you too wherever you go. I'll do correspondence course so I don't need to go to college regularly."

Prithvi surprised "Wow! I'm impressed. You already thought about us. I'm glad, Kripa!" he pressed her hand and continued "I liked the idea. We can continue our honeymoon till we have kids." He mischievously looked at her blush for his statements. He pressed his hand on her head "I wish we get married soon, pata nahin, yeh gharwaley kyon humesha muhurat ke naam par humey door rakhtey hai."

Kripa laughed "To ignite the desire in people like you" and gave chirpy looks at him and Prithvi grinned.

Kripa yelled when they passing her house, "Prithvi! You are missing our apartments."

"Sorry! It's your fault. You took me into dream world" Prithvi lovingly looked at her and put sudden breaks. Kripa screamed "OUCH!" for the jerk she got for sudden halt of the car.

Present day:

"Sorry! Kripa! I lost in thoughts." Angad apologized for sudden break to halt the car. Kripa unbelievingly looked at him and turned around to check the surroundings "Mein bhi kahin kho gayi thi, Angad!" she thought. She slowly looked into his eyes.

He realized Kripa was also recollecting the past.

"Angad kitna badal gaya hai. Wo josh, attitude, wo mischievous looks, wo apnapan, kahan kho gaya hai?" she searched deep into his eyes.

"Iski aankhon mein wo mastiyan kahan kho gayi hai? Kya chupa hai in aankhon mein? Abb yeh aankhein Kuch kehtey nahin mujhsey. Kitni badal gayi hai. How is her life? Now she is a complete woman, a wife, a mother. Meri Kripa nahin hai iss Kripa mein." He thought and tears came as he felt heavy at heart.

She lowered her eyes to hide her tears too. He twisted his lips "Goodnight, Kripa!"
She shook her head as reciprocating and got down of the car and closed the door. He expected she invites him inside and she wished he requests to follow her. Both of them didn't realise at that moment that the distance had grown between them, now they are strangers not even friends.

Kripa looked at him and stretched her lips as bidding bye and he gestured with eyes to bid bye. His eyes followed her till she disappeared into the elevator.

He closed his eyes leaning at head rest, two tear drops fell on cheeks. She wiped her tears as the elevator door locked.

"Agayi, Kripa? Sur toh ab tak tumhari baarein mein poch pooch kay thag kar sogayi ti. Prithvi ka kayi baar phone aya tha." Kripa surpised "Prithvi yahan phone kiya tha?"

"Haan, kyon yahan nahin call karsakta? Aisey kyon pooch rahi ho?"

Kripa shook her head sideways and walked into her room "He has my mobile number. He should call me."

Gayatri followed her into the room "Bahut pareshan tha bechara. Tumhara mobile nahin laga hoga."

Kripa twisted her brows and checked her mobile, it is in silent mode. She apologized, "Haan, Maa! Bhulgayi, cell vibrate mein thi."

Gayatri sighed "Chalo, khudi uusey phone karkey batao." She walked out to go to bed.

Kripa called Prithvi but it went to message and she left message for not available when he called and apologized for keeping mobile unavailable too.

She changed into night dress and caressed Sur and softly kissed her cheeks and hid her face in her stomach. Her thoughts again fell back into past.

Angad straight away walked into his room ignoring Anittah's enquiries. She checked him lying on the bed without changing his dress and sighed silently with tears filled eyes. "Yeh kya naseeb likha hai in donon ke jindagi mein" she asked God, The Unseen Power who plays the Universe at his will.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part: 10

Two fresh tear drops escaped from Angad's eyes. He couldn't sleep. He got scotch and sat in front of Kripa's picture and fell into past again.

Past:

Now Naina is seriously searching for girls for Angad after Anittah informed about Angad's interest in Aaliyah. She is not sure about Aaliyah as her bahu as she dislikes Aaliyah's personality. But she thought she will keep her as backup and searching for girls at her equal status. Angad unaware of this latest development is still dreaming about Kripa and trying to meet her in person. Kripa is avoiding the direct appearance in front of him to control her mind too.

Whole city is busy in preparation of arrangements for Ganesh Navaratri celebrations. Khanna Industries also arranged a medium size idol in their lobby and performing prayers every day. Angad is surprised for this tradition in the office. Dilip explained the tradition of doing the prayers and as it became a tradition at work places too.

Naina also brought the idle into her house and arranged to perform the prayers every day three times in traditional way. Angad is surprised for the arrangements in the house and Anittah and Dadi explained the event celebrations. Damini and Suryaban Sharma families are compulsory guests all ten nights. Angad repented once again for missing the opportunity of meeting Kripa in the past years.

First day Naina arranged puja in a grand way and asked Angad to stay home after work as she invited many guests. Angad agreed without fussy as he is craving to see Kripa.

Gayatri also put Ganesh idle for 5 days and performing pujas everyday. "Kripa! Aaj tumhey papa ke paas jana hi hoga. Hum ghar mein mithaiyan banakar kha rahey hai aur bechara tumhara papa wahan canteen mein zunk kha raha hai. In thyohaar ki dinon mein tum meri baat maan na hi padega. Pata nahin shadi honey ke baad meri taraf dekhegi bhi ya nahin." Kripa smiled at her taunts.

Gayatri is teasing her whenever she gets a chance as Prithvi told recently about his prospective abroad trip for two years by end of this year.

Gayatri is happy for her would-be son-in-law going to Belgium on project but feeling sad to send Kripa away from the city. Damini is also proudly telling everyone about Prithvi's foreign tour and planning to join him soon leaving the job. Dilip already started looking for a reliable person in her place. Damini fixed the wedding date after Deewali and before Prithvi's foreign trip.

Kripa wore a light sea green sari and went to Khanna industries to give lunch to her father. She prayed not to be caught by Angad till she reached the floor. She is stunned to see Angad in the elevator only. He greeted her and praised her beauty with his eyes. She sighed and turned her looks away from him.

He followed her till Suryaban Sarma's seat "Sarma Ji! Aaj mein bhi aap key saat lunch khaloonga. Lagta hai aaj bada dabba agaya hai gar sey!!" He mischievously looked at Kripa ignoring her irritating looks.

Sarma pleased as his boss wanted to eat with him "Navratri chalraha hai na, Angad! Tumhara Aunty ki bhi adat padh gayi hai. Pura dus din toh nain karpati magar paanch din puja manati hai" He asked Kripa to serve lunch to Angad also.
All went to the long canteen hall located in the same floor at the end where the Ganesh idle is kept. Kripa sat beside Suryaban and Angad on the opposite side. Damini also joined them to share her sweet dishes with Angad. Damini is now showing interest in Angad more as she felt Aaliyah is liking him when she overheard Anittah teasing Aaliyah several times. Misthy and other employees also joined with their lunches.

Angad kept pulling Kripa's sari frills down under the table throughout the lunch. Kripa is kept giving angry looks but as usual Angad ignored them and immersed in praising the food.

The treasurer, Jyotish Pandey came to their lunch table after an hour "Kripa! I'm glad you are here too. Abhi puja shuru hogi. Tum gana sunakey hi jana hai. Sarma ji sey har roz poocraha hoon tumhari barein mein. Har saal tumhara gana sunney ka adat hogayi hai. Iss saal tumhari saas sey tum kuch jada hi sharma rahi hai. Kahin wo tumhey mana toh nahin kar rahi hai na?"He joked and Damini interfered, "Arey Pandey Sir! hum bhi bahu ki darshan ke liye taras rahi hai. Wo, aaj kal mujhsey bhi nahin milti." Kripa blushed.

Angad raised his eyebrow at Kripa asking explanation as he is also in the same position as Damini and she gave angry looks. He pulled her sari mischievously leaning back as if he ate too much. Other employees are enjoying talking about the puja and the upcoming bonus for Diwali as their boss is in good mood in the lunch room. Angad is also cutting jokes with them but didn't stop harassing Kripa. Damini and Suryaban Sarma are immersed in instigating the employees as they also get some benefit for that.

Misthy's eyes caught Kripa's irritation and Angad's naughty acts. Damini went to the idol and arranged for the prayers at 4. She called Kripa for some clarification as half dozen employees brought some instruments for the songs such as tabla, harmonium, taal and flute.

Kripa is about to get up but her frills are stuck in Angad's two feet. She is startled and begged with eyes but he ignored. Suryaban also reached Damini and called Kripa to join them. Kripa is tensed as she might caught by them and begged Angad but he is still stubborn to relieve her.
Misthy is observing them from her table. Kripa pretended to set the carriage back when Damini called her again. Angad at last held one of the lids from Kripa's hand "Promise karo puja ke baad meri cabin mein aavogi." She is fumed and her nostrils flared, tears filled. She slightly shook her head sideways refusing his request.

"Okay, let me enjoy here then" he again relaxed and watching her and the preparations of the puja and mingling talks with other employees. All are in good spirits and enjoying the festive mood.
Angad raised eyebrows when Damini again called Kripa "Kripa! Wo sab baad mein kar sakti ho, peley yahan aakar yeh batao ki tumhey aur kuch chahiye puja ke liye?"

Kripa looked into Angad's eyes and whispered by touching her corner of eyes secretly "Promise!!"

Angad got up with a big sigh and reached Damini and folded his hand front. Kripa tried to stop her anger and sob and finished fast packing the dabba. She found Angad's keys before leaving the table and a cheer came on her face. She checked Angad as busy with the people near idol and picked his keys. She walked to the corner of the other table to drop the keys in the garbage bin silently and walked to Damini with a joyful face as if she won a lottery. Misthy is startled and surprised for these two person's 'cat and mouse' play.

The prayer is done religiously for an hour with Kripa's melodious voice as she sang Jai Shiv Onkara; Om Jai Jagadish Hare.

After everyone took Prasad they retired to their seats. Angad reminded her with his eyes once again. Kripa smiled rolling her tongue inside and giving him mischievous looks. Angad felt happy and left.

Misthy caught Kripa who is slowly walking alone in the corridor. Kripa is stunned "Hi, Misthy! Kuch kaam tha?"

Misthy looked into her eyes "Kya ho raha hai?"

Kripa confused and shook her head sideways "Mein samjhi nain"

"Mein samjh rahi hoon. Why is Angad behind you?" Misthy slowly and softly asked her. Kripa filled tears and bit her lips. Misthy consoled her as took her in her embrace with one hand "I'll take care of him. You go home"

Kripa surprised and smiled between tears "Thanks, Thanks a lot."

Misthy ordered one of the peons to remove the keys from garbage bin and sent to her cabin and she walked into Angad's cabin.

Angad, who is eagerly waiting for Kripa, surprised at her sudden visit "TUM?
"Kyon kissi aur ki intezaar hai, kya?" Angad startled and searched for words. Misthy sat infront of him "Tum Kripa ko kyon ched rahay ho?
Angad surprised "Misthy!!"

She continued "I saw you harassing her, pulling her frills under the table, taking promise to meet you here"

Angad sighed and leaned back and silently flipping the pen between fingers.

"Angad! I know you for long time now. I know your habits, friendship with girls and everything. But yeh habit kya hai? Ek susheel, innocent, nave girl ko chedna? Wo bhi ek already engaged girl ko? What's going on? I warned you even at their party. I thought you are just admiring her. But this is mere crazyness. Stop this nonsense immediately. Tum uski jindagi bhi nahin balki tumhara aur Dilip Uncle ka reputation ka bhi aag laga raha hai. Do you know how seriously Damini and Sarmaji take this? Change this behaviour and forget about that girl." She softly but strongly scolded him.

She stopped when there was a knock on the door and turned to see the peon waiting with the keys. She took them and sent him away. She gave the keys to Angad and he looked confusingly at her.

"You left the keys on the table and Kripa dropped them in the garbage. Be careful with her. Don't harass her and get several lives into trouble. She doesn't like you and your behavior. And all over this she is engaged."

Angad bit his finger nails after Misthy left. He looked at Kripa's picture on his screensaver and nodded his head. He caressed his keys and laughed and kissed them. "Kripa!!" he mumbled her name longingly "This is my obsession, mera pyar ko samjho. I firmly believe you are mine. Tumhare bina mere jindagi adhoora hai."
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Posted: 18 years ago
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nice parts di. angad is very naughty boy. poor kripa continue soon. 😳 😳 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awww poor angad he loves her so much
gr8 part


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hey im ur new reader
gr8t part cont soonn 😃
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Thaks all 😳

Welcome new reader 😳
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Part: 11

Angad is upset for Misthy's soft rebuke and spent the rest of time in his cabin watching Kripa on screensaver and thinking seriously about his obsession until 9.

"Am I really going out of way to think about her? Why do I feel to stay with her for life? Why do I want my life with her? Kya hai iss ladki mein. Is this jealous that someone is going to have her? Kyon main iss ladki ko itna importance deraha hoon? Does she need such attention? Why don't I divert my mind on something else instead of dreaming about this girl? Wo kissi aur ki amanat hai. Am I greedy of someone else's property? Why am I feeling so tortured to forget about her? Uski baarein mein NA socney ke decision bhi itna dard kyon derahi hai?"

By the time he reached home everyone at home is gathered for the puja. He straight away climbed stairs to his room without noticing anyone in the hall. Naina and Dilip exchanged looks and gestured Anittah to look into the matter.

"Bhaiya! Jaldi sey taiyyar hojao. Neechey sab log aapki hi raah dekh rahey hai. Why are you so late?" Anittah hurried him taking out his cream silk kurta pajama dress to wear. Angad looked at her carelessly "Anittah! Can you please leave me alone? And tell mom that they need not to wait for me. I'll come later."

Anittah surprised for is irritation and left as she knows once Angad decides no one can make him change it. Naina is worried for Angad's behavior as he was paying attention at home for last few months and wanted to check personally. Dadi stopped her and asked to continue without him as it became normal past many years.

Angad got ready after an hour and came down with the dress Anittah took out for him. Naina smiled admiring her handsome son. He kissed his forehead and asked to take blessings of God. He folded his hands and put the kumkum on forehead and flowers in the ear. Everyone got ready to sing aarati.

Angad stood beside Dilip looking at God's feet. His mind is roaming around Kripa. "Wo aagayi hogi. I should not see her or search for her. Let me get the courage to control my heart and mind. Let her take her own life decision. I shouldn't force her. If she is mine she will come to me."

"Kripa! Shuru karo" Dilip and Suryaban asked together. Angad closed his eyes for gathering courage not to look at her.

"Angad! Tum bhi gao beta. Aaj tak kabhi puja mein nahin aya tha. Aaj bahut subh din hai. Tum bhi gaao" Devyani requested Angad. Angad annoyed at her "Yeh sab kehney ki kya jaroorat thi?" and his eyes fell on Kripa who is standing beside Devyani. She looked elegant with white Organza sari with kutch work all over and red blouse and pearl set, loosely braided hair. In one stare her figure memorized in his mind. She lowered her eyes immediately when his eyes met with her with guilt. He unknowingly admired her beauty and turned his looks at Devyani "Sorry, Dadi! Aap jaantey hai mujhey yeh prardhana geet nahin aatey" He slowly said and tried to escape.

"Koyi baat nahin beta, Kripa ke sang galena. Shuru karo Kripa!" Suryaban ordered and started playing taal.

Angad twisted his lips as there is no chance to escape "I'm sure she is in my life, I can't get rid of her or her thoughts," and his eyes caught Misthy who stood behind Naina and Kripa. She wore a green silk sari for a change and smiled raising eyebrows at him. He stretched his lips remembering her scolds. Kripa started the aarati with stuti and Angad joined her and others followed them.

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Her voice is again breaking his decisions. He thought while singing "this is not possible for me to stay away from her. I should stop attending these pujas. That's the only way probably I could control my mind. Whenever I see her I feel like I kidnap her somewhere where no one can separate us." He smiled for his thoughts even while singing the aarati. He scolded himself for thinking about Kripa standing in front of God and praying aarati.

As soon as aarati is done Kripa, Anittah and Aaliyah distributed the Prasad. Kripa came to him as she is distributing to everyone in his line. Angad met his eyes with her. She noticed his blaming looks and lowered as she felt guilty. His eyes followed her till she has disappeared in the crowd.

"I don't think I could control myself as long she is in front of me" he thought and went to his room. He changed his dress into is casual jeans and T-shirt and walked out. Naina caught him and asked to stay till the dinner is over. He apologized and excused himself. Kripa and Misthy are talking to each other and overheard them. Kripa felt disappointed and looked at his way. He gave a careless look at her and walked out. Misthy dropped her hand on Kripa's shoulder and gestured as everything will be alright. But Kripa felt bad for him leaving the place without having dinner.

Angad made sure not to attend the puja in time rest of the days and went home at midnight after spending time outside as he knew Kripa and others will spend time in his house for next ten days. He tried to divert his mind on work but burst into anger several times which Misthy handled on his behalf. She consoled him whenever he felt uneasiness and tackled the situation.

On 11th day Naina insisted Angad to stay home until the Ganesh is bid farewell. He agreed and came home early. He got ready in light sky blue sherwani as per Naina's instructions and came down to meet the guests. Everyone praised his attire and enquired for not attending the past pujas. He gave a pale smile and changed the topic. He spotted Kripa staring at him all the time. He tried not to look into her eyes as much as possible. He knew his mind and heart never listen to him when it comes to Kripa.
Kripa is extremely looking gorgeous today with light blue chiffon sari with beads and kundan work and matching jewelry. His eyes are checking her whenever she is busy with someone else and not looking at him. He turns his eyes immediately when she turns to him and pretends talking seriously something with the person in front of him rubbing his neck behind. She smiles for his steeling his eyes and felt relieved as he is normal today.

After formal rituals everyone bid farewell to Ganesh and left the idol with other big idol installed at the end of the street to send him through them. After that everyone started having dinner. Angad decided to go upstairs without having dinner and relax from the crowd. But Misthy stopped him to have dinner with her.

Anittah and Aaliyah pulled Kripa for dinner "Abb khana khalengey we had enough so far. I'm tired" They settled beside Misthy and Angad. Angad's eyes are stacked at Kripa burrying his earlier promises and firm decisions. Misthy nudged him to divert him but he carelessly laughed at her "You know Misthy! I controlled all these days. But one thing I realized these days that I can't stay without thinking about her. My love on her multiplied by each day I stayed away from her. As much I try to get rid of her that close I'm drawing towards her."

Misthy laughed at him "Tum bilkul pagal hogaye ho. Iski ek hi ilaz hai. Uski shadi jaldi hojana"

Angad shook his head as agreeing "you are right, I should get her married soon, nahin toh pagal hojaaoonga." He winked at Misthy leaving her in shock and walked to wards Anittah and other two. Misty sighed and hit her head for his craziness.
He wished them "I hope you all enjoyed well the past ten days."

Aaliyah excitingly replied "Haan, Angad it was so wonderful. Where were you all these days? I didn't see you."

"Main toh yahin tha. You didn't come first day, right? You can ask Kripa. We sang aarati too. Right Kripa?" he stared into Kripa's eyes. She faintly smiled and shook her head as confirming his statement.

Anittah went to fill her plate again. Angad moved side to Kripa locking her between him and Aaliyah. He flirtingly looked at Aaliyah and started enquiring about her studies. She is explaining in excitement about her search for jobs and asking his opinions.

Angad's right hand is touching Kripa's shoulder and Kripa is trying to avoid him but he is moving closely to her whenever she is trying to move away. She stopped when she noticed she would bump into Aaliyah and she might notice their play.
She gave angry looks at Angad when Aaliyah is immersed in explaining about her future plans. He winked at her and whispered "I missed you" Kripa dropped jaw and turned her eyes.

Aaliyah finished her plate but still nibbling the last piece of roti as she doesn't want to leave Angad. Angad noticed and told her to fill her plate and he will wait for her.

Aaliyah felt happy and left Angad and Kripa alone. Angad took a piece of panneer from her plate and acted as if it is delicious since it has her germs. Kripa is afraid to stand alone and turned to leave and Angad held her waist and whispered "Stay here, Please" Kripa shocked and checked if anyone sees them and she saw Misthy observing everything standing a little away from them. Kripa felt relieved and yelled "Misty!" and turned to Angad "Excuse me" and walked fast to reach her. She sighed and gave relieved looks at Angad. Angad grinned and excused himself from Aaliyah and Anittah as soon as they reached him. Kripa and Misthy giggled which irritated Angad.

He finished his dinner and gathered everyone in one place to have a musical night. Aaliyah and Anittah screamed in joy and gathered in the hall. Angad took his guitar and asked everyone to join him.

Older people retired into corners watching the youngsters enjoying the music. Misthy and Kripa tried to settle beside Devyani but Anittah pulled them into the center. Kripa stood silently while Angad started his songs.

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Dil keh raha hai tujhse yu ristha jod lu
Teri dhadkano ko chu lu tera jism odh lu


He danced to the song giving flirtatious looks and showing his hands towards Kripa but Aaliyah felt he is singing for her as she is also standing beside Kripa. Misthy and Kripa only know whatever Angad say or sing now. Misthy smiled at Angad as he winked at her several times and sang moving around her. She gave playful slaps at him for which he bowed as taking her wishes. Kripa once suspected Misthy if she has joined Angad too. He moved closer to Kripa singing with husky voice into her ears but looking at Aaliyah for not giving a chance of suspicions.

Naina noticed Aaliyah's blush and showed to Damini also. They both smiled and whispered into each other ears something about Angad and Aaliyah.
Dadi noticed Kripa's uneasiness and Angad's eyes on her and startled for unwanted development.

Ankhon mein teri hain mera he chehra
Chahe tu yeh mane ya na mane
Teri Mohabbat pe hain mera pehra
Chahe tu yeh jaane ya najaane
Tere liye main jaate hue lamho ko mod lu
Teri dhadkano ko chu lu tera jism odh lu


Kripa decided to move away from there as his eyes are constantly on her. Aaliyah is under impression as if his eyes are on her. She is shaking her body for his song. Anittah is also shaking her body giving smiles at Angad and Aaliyah as she felt Angad's interest in Aaliyah.

Kripa slowly walked to Dadi and sat at her feet leaning to her knees. Devyani dropped her hand around her and smiled at Kripa. Angad smiled wickedly and took steps towards Devyani and sang as if he is singing at Devyani and touching softly Kripa's cheeks while touching Devyani's palms on Kripa's soulder. He kissed Devyani's palms winking at Kripa. Kripa is startled at his acts and felt conscious if anyone noticing them.

Bechaini ko chain tune diya hain
Bin tere Mushkil hain reh paana
Ho paana hain tujhko hain yeh tay kar liya hain
Tu hain ishq mera jaane jaana
Tere labo se pyar ki kaliya tod lu
Teri Dhadkano ko chu lu tera jism odh lu…..


Angad sang couple more songs on the request of young guests. He requested Kripa also to sing but Kripa softly refused with excuse of discomfort in her throat.
After two hours everyone retired to their respective homes. Misthy caught Angad in a corner alone with Kripa beside her. She warned Angad once again when Kripa is also with her.

He checked Kripa from head to toe and touched his heart with is right hand "It's not my fault Misthy. Issey bhulaney ko Mera dil nahin manta hai." Kripa bit her lower lip to stop her tears and lowered her eyes. Angad bent on her "Tum bhi maanlo, Kripa! I know you have feelings for me." Misthy stopped him by dropping hand on is left shoulder Angad! Cup karo, do you realize what you are saying?"
He gave a cold look at her and looked at Kripa shaking his head sideway "It's not yet late, Kripa! Tumhara dil ko pehchanlo."

Misthy sighed as giving up and dragged Kripa away from him. She bid bye to Angad and everyone. Angad waved his hand with mischievous looks.
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haila lol. plz continue. this is getting better

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