FAN-FICTION BY BUBBLES - Page 8

right guys, please do write your views about the fan fic, it helps a great deal…..so here goes the next part, theres a twist towards the end…….

Arjun is lying on top of Bhoomi, both look into each others eyes (I know that is very typical). Bhoomi turns her head away from Arjun and closes her eyes. Arjun starts to laugh and gets up from the bed, 'Bhoomi, lets check if the bed is ok. With your weight I think it must have collapsed'. Arjun continues to laugh and walks towards the bathroom to have a shower. Bhoomi gets up from the bed and starts to think to her self 'Arjun, why are you stopping your self? I know that you love me, but why are you hiding your feelings?' Bhoomika gets up from the bed and starts to straighten up the duvet covers.

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The sun shines brightly on to Bhoomika's face, she rubs her eyes and feels a hand on her shoulder, she quickly turns her head to see Arjun lying next to her on the bed. Bhoomi sits up and takes another look at Arjun. 'Why is Arjun sleeping on the bed? Why isn't he on the sofa? How come I didn't realise? Has arjun accepted me as his wife?' Bhoomi thinks to herself and then smiles on the thought of Arjun accepting her.

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'ganu kaka, aaj Sunday hai, isliye main khana Arjun ko room main dooghee' Bhoomi collects a tray and starts to place juice, toast and some fruit on it. 'Bhoomi, you're up very early today. Kya baat hai? Arjun normally eats breakfast downstairs, why are you taking it to your room?' Manasvi looks at Bhoomi with a confused expression , 'Arre manasvi, ab Arjun ki shaadi ho chuki hai. I think Bhoomi wants to have Breakfast on Sunday's with arjun alone. What do you think?' Satya places his hand on manasvi's shoulder and raises his eyebrows towards Bhoomi. Manasvi and satya start to giggle. 'Bhaiya, aap bhi na. Arjun was late to go to sleep last night,so I thought I'd serve him breakfast in bed.' Satya and Manasvi reply at the same time 'acha', they all start laughing and Bhoomi grabs her tray and walks quickly out of the room.

Shefali is in her black dressing gown, she has an angry expression on her face, she walks out of her room and makes her way towards Arjun's bedroom. The bedroom door is left open and she sees Arjun sleeping on the bed. She is shocked and remains standing in the door way,' 'Bhabhi, aap? Aap ko kuch chahiye?' Bhoomi walks into the bedroom and places the tray on the table. 'Nahi Bhoomika, main tho bas, walk kar rahi thi', shefali walks out of the room . Bhoomika then locks the door and walks towards Arjun.

Bhoomi starts to do up the open buttons on Arjuns shirt, she then places her hand on arjuns hair gently and says 'Thank you Arjun. Aaj mere zindagi ka sab se khoobsoorat pal hai'. As Bhoomi starts to move away from arjun, her duppata gets pulled. (the romantic music plays) 'Arjun, mujhe chordo, please.' Bhoomi then turns to look back and sees Arjun sleeping, she then looks at her duppata and sees her duppata trapped under arjun's arm. Bhoomi then pats her head and starts to laugh.

'Bhoomi?' Arjun opens his eyes and sees Bhoomi laughing, he then removes her duppata from under his arm. Arjun gets up and sits up on the bed, 'Ab hasna band karo. Bhoomi' Arjun rubs his eyes and then looks at the bed, he then has a serious expression on his face.

'Arjun, kya hua? Tum kuch parechan dikh rahe ho.' Bhoomi stops laughing and looks at Arjun, 'Bhoomi, I'm sorry. Last night I was feeling so tired, I didn't realise that I slept on the bed. Mujhe maaf kardo'. Bhoomi then realises the Arjun slept next to her by mistake, she turns away from from Arjun and says 'Arjun tum bhi na. your breakfast is on the table, I brought it upstairs today. I'm going to have a shower, tum khana ka lena' Bhoomi walks into the bathroom and closes the door.

Inside the bathroom bhoomi cries and cries, she sits on the floor , 'kyun arjun kyun? Why can't you accept me as your wife. I know I'm uneducated, stupid, villager, servant…..but I love you, and that's what matters' Bhoomi continues to cry.

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Arjun is downstairs sitting down with Satya. 'Arjun, I think I should go down to the factory and check if the material has arrived. It was supposed to arrive yesterday, but there were delays'. Arjun looks down at the export order and says, 'Bhaiyya, I can go. You and Bhabi must have had some plans for today, I'll go.' Satya pats Arjun's shoulder and smiles 'Arjun, you have some responsibilitles towards your wife. I will take manasvi with me to the factory and then I'll take her to lunch, but you need to spend more time with Bhoomi. The only time you meet her is before you go to office and then, when you come back home for dinner.' As satya lectures Arjun, Arjun starts to blush , 'Bhaiyya, ok. You go to the factory.' Arjun then leaves and Manasvi takes his place on the sofa. 'aap Arjun ko bahut advice dehte hai, but why don't you use that own advice on yourself?' Satya laughs and gives Manasvi a hug, 'chalo, lets go to the factory, and then I'll treat you to some thing very special'.

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Arjun and Bhoomi are in the shopping centre, Bhoomi is looking around in the saree section whilst Arjun is standing behind her playing around with his phone. 'Arjun, I don't really like this dress, in the last shop the sarees were much more prettier, hain na?' Bhoomi looks up and sees that no one is standing behind her. 'Arjun? Please, where are you?' The longer Bhoomi starts looking for Arjun, the more worried she becomes. Bhoomika runs out of the shop and looks left and right, she then sees a phone booth and runs towards it to make a call. 'Arjun, tum kaha ho?' Bhoomi starts to sweat and dials Arjun's mobile number and then realises that she has no money on her.

Bhoomi leaves the phone hanging on its cord and runs towards the car park.'Bang' Bhoomi falls on the floor 'Bhoomika? I'm so sorry.' Suraj gives a hand to Bhoomika so that she can get up. Bhoomika gets up from the floor looking tired and worried, 'are you ok? You here alone?' Suraj looks concerned seeing Bhoomika in that condition. 'yes, I'm fine. I was looking for arjun, I can't find him, I was in the shop and then…..' Bhoomi gets frightened and wipes the sweat of her forehead. 'Arjun? I just saw him leave. He looked like he was in a hurry. But its strange why he didn't tell you. I'll drop you home, if that's ok with you.' Suraj then waits for a response.
'Bhaiyya, I don't understand why Arjun left so suddenly. Its ok, I will make my own way home, please don't worry', although bhoomi knew that she had no money, but if she did go home with suraj, arjun would never forgive her. 'Jaissi aap ki marzi. Lekhin, aap ke paas paise hain na?' Bhoomi eyes start to avoid eye contact with suraj, 'jee, main theek hoo. Aap jaye, main khud ghar chale jao gi' Bhoomi then slowly walks out towards the exit.

Suraj's phone rings and he answers 'kya!! Bomb blast, Krishna textiles mein? Who was inside the building? ………its Sunday, so the factory should have been empty……kya! Yeh nahin ho sakta' sooraj turns his mobile off and runs towards the exit.

As soon as suraj approaches his car, he hears a girl screaming. Suraj runs towards the place where the screaming is coming from and he sees Bhoomi being pushed in to a black van by two men. 'HEY! STOP…I SAID STOP' Suraj runs towards the van, but the van speads off .

Suraj tries hard to follow the van, but it was of no use, the people in the black van were out of sight and so was bhoomi.

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oh bubbles....first bhumi cried in bathroom and now two more accidents...
Please continue....

👏 👏 👏 bubbles u rock kya twist hai luvd it 😊

Just wonderful.eagerly waiting to know where is ARJUN?wht happend to BHUMI? and who was in the factory at the time of blast?pls post it as soon as possible.just can't wait.Pls write something abt arjun's mind regarding Bhumi. 👏

excellent 😃 . u have written exactly what i wanted to read 😛 .
now could u write something like bhoomi and someone else 2gether and arjun jealousget my point.
😆 dat someone else could b sooraj
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bubbles u r online so post the fic plsssssss 😭

ok guys, heres the next part- enjoy

'what should I do? Shall I call the police? Or should I tell Arjun first? But, the bomb blast…….and bhoomi…………..i……what shall I do?' Suraj is driving furiously on the road, he then decides to talk to Arjun in person.

In the goenka house, people dressed in white are entering and leaving . Suraj's car enters the premises and he is shocked to see the large crowd standing outside the mansion. Suraj gets out of his car and starts to walk towards the goenka house, his heart pounding so loudly that it can be felt in his throat. 'kaun tha factory mein? Aaj tho Sunday hai, factory tho band thi.' Suraj's mind is filled with questions. Just then some one grabs his shoulder.

'tum! Yaha kya dekhne aye ho. Tumhe tho bahut khushi hogi, hain na? Arjun aaj barbad hogaya. Arjun ki takhat mitee mein mil gaye. Main tumhe ander nahi jane do ga!!!' Arjun grabs suraj's arm and pushes him out of the gates. The press reporters come running forward to catch all this on camera. 'Arjun, mere baat suno. Kaun tha bomb blast mein?!' Suuraj yells at Arjun, but Arjun continues to push and hit Suraj. At first Suraj doesn't fight back, but seeing Arjun out of control, Suraj grabs Arjun and pushes him against the wall. Arjun has hatred in his eyes, his face burning with rage, tears start to flow out of Arjun's eyes. 'Arjun, I have complete sympathy, I know that you treat me as your enemy, but I came here for a specific reason. Please listen to me. Calm down.' Arjun looks up at Suraj and pushes him off himself, 'Sympathy? And you! You've destroyed me! My family, I'll kill you and all your coward friends. Want to hurt me? Hit me, hit me……but why my family???' Arjun pounces at Suraj one more time.

'suno!' Before suraj could say anything, Arjun punches him in the cheek, 'Arjun, bhoomi!' Suraj manages to get a few words out of his mouth, his mouth now covered in blood. 'Bhoomi? kya hua bhoomi ko?'. Suraj explains the whole situation to Arjun, and just then shefali arrives. 'yeh kya ho raha hai. Ghar mein kitna kuch ho gaya hai, aur aap dono lar rahe hai. Bhoomi ka phone tha, who is waqt mandir mein puja karne gayi hai. Suraj, she was not kidnapped. Tumhare akhen ka dokha ho ga. That must have been some one else. Chalo arjun, pundit ji bula rehe hai.' Arjun and shefali walk back inside the house.

Suraj is left standing, 'Shefali, I don't know why you're lying. I know that who I saw was bhoomika.'

Inside the Goenka house, everyone is quiet. Shakuntala has tears flowing out of her eyes, she is starring at the picture opposite her. She looks lifeless, with no expression on her face, she continues to have tears flowing down her face. Shefali is standing with Arjun in the door way, Shefali puts her hand on Arjun's arm for reassurance. Gunvati is holding onto Yuvraj and is crying loudly. Mansen is sitting down next to his wife, looking distraught. Baisa is crying quietly, looking at her shattered family.

Two bodies are lying side by side, both are encased in flowers, the pundit is performing the last rites.
Arjun can't bear it any longer, the dead silence, the rituals, the crying…..Arjun runs out of the house, Shefali follows him. 'woh, mere bade bhai nahin the, woh mere pittah the, woh mere dost the. I loved him, he was my life. Why did he leave me? Why? He left me, his wife, his mother and family. What will I do without him? I miss you bhaiyya…..i miss you', Arjun starts to cry and kneels on the floor 'Bhaiyya, please come back, I'll never tell you off, I'll never……please baiyya' Shefali kneels down beside Arjun and holds him in his arms. It starts to rain, both of them are hugging each other, Arjun cries louder and louder, whilst Shefali consoles him 'Arjun, himmat se kam lo. Please be strong, if not for your self, then for manasvi bhabi. Manasvi bhabi is lying in the hospital, she doesn't know what her kismat has in store for her. You are her favourite devar, she believes you, trusts you. For manasvi bhabi…..please, control yourself.'

Keshav is sitting in the hall, he quietly turns to his dad and whispers in his ear, 'baba, bhoomi kaha hai? Usko is bure (bad) waqt mein, yaha hona chahiye.' Baba and keshav both look worried.

The pundit then announces that its time to cremate the bodies. Baisa closes her eyes, she's unable to see the events taking place. 'Manasvi, she doesn't know that when she opens her eyes, her life will be gone. Her satya is no more. Mera beta….mera beta' Shakuntala holds onto her husband and hides her face. She continues to cry.

Both the bodies are carried out of the house. The pundits start to recite the holy words, and lead the family members out of the house.

'VISHAKA!!! VISHAKA…..VISHAKA' As the second body is taken away out of sight, Gunvanti starts to scream louder and louder. 'meri beti, bhagwan, itne badi saza!! Meri phool jaise beti. Vishaka….vishaka' Mansen holds onto Gunvanti, he stops her from running outside, Mansen continues to stare at Vishaka's face, he remembers her child hood and lets out a small tear. Yuvraj is trying hard to stop his tears , his eyes red, he continues to walk out of the house. The holy rituals get louder and louder. 'VISHAKA!!!' Gunvanti falls to the floor.

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Bhoomi is tied to a chair in the dark. She lays unconscious, her hair open and face covered with sweat.
'eh, ladki. Open your eyes! We've got orders to keep you alive.' Water is splashed onto Bhoomi's face, she slowly opens her eyes and takes a few deep breaths.

'tum kaun ho? Please, let me go. Mujhe ghar jana hai.' Bhoomi starts to cry, 'please, mujhe chordo'. The men around her start to laugh and one of them walks forward towards bhoomi, 'mein chordoo? (he laughs)' The man slaps bhoomi, they all start to laugh again, just then a mobile phone rings, 'madam, ladki theek hai. Aap jo bolo vohi ho ga. Waise ladki hai bahut khoobsoorat……..koi baat nahin, kaam ho jaye ga, lekin…hamari fees?' The man puts the phone down and starts to smoke a cigarette, he blows the smoke on to Bhoomi's face. Bhoomi starts to cough, she turns her face away from the guy. 'sun ladki, zada nakre mat dikhana, samaji? Waise, shefali madam ko tumse kaun si dushmani hai?'

Bhoomi hears shefali's name and looks up in horror.

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'how sad.I must go to meet gunvantiji and shakuntalaji. Two deaths in the family and one kidnap! Vishaka was such a lovely girl and satya was a son every maa wishes to have. Manasvi is in intensive care, she'll be devastated when she regains consciousness. I feel so sorry for them. Who could have planned the bomb blast?' Chaiji has tears in her eyes and walks towards suraj, 'beta, Bhoomi tumhari bhabi hai. Yeh tumhara farz hai, you have to find her.'

'chaiji, I don't know who's behind the bomb blast, but I have my suspicions on shefali concerning the kidnap. I'll find bhoomi. She called me bhaiya in the shopping centre, I have to protect my little sister.' Suraj walks out of his house and chaiji smiles to herself 'acha laga suraj, tumne Bhoomi ko apna samja'

for all you Arjun and bhoomi lovers, there will be a few problems between them soon. But you guys will soon know about Arjun's feelings towards Bhoomi.

why problems....and now why kidnaping...and that's a good twist...vishakha too died? but why mansen is not regreting on his deeds...
please continue...... 👏 👏 👏

Pls solve the probs soon which u r going to create between Arjun & Bhumi.Pls bring Shefali's sacchai in front of Arjun & the condition of Bhumi 😭 .PLS DO IT FAST.