FAN-FICTION BY BUBBLES

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Posted: 20 years ago
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Write guys, since no one is actually posting any story – I'll try to write something

Arjun is in the bathroom having a shower, he realises that he has forgotten his towel (ok I know this is a bit filmy- excuse my poor imagination)……..so, he shouts out 'Bhavri….Bhavri….kaha ho tum???!!..bavri, I've left my towel on the bed, get it for me, hurry please. I'm getting late'

Bhavri is in the kitchen preparing food for the family, she's running around trying to find some flour- her face smurred with white chapatti flour she realises that she has to give arjun his new shirt she bought for him….without looking she runs upstairs towards her bedroom were she bumps into manasvi on the stairs….'bhoomi, where are you running of to? And your face (she laughs), Ahhh, now I know, you're running up to arjun? Huh? Acha acha, you go, I'll manage downstairs' manasvi giggles and continues walking down the stairs.

Bhoomi then hears arjun calling her 'Bhoomi, itta time kyon lagaya?'- confused, bhoomi runs into the bedroom and sees shefali handing the towel to arjun. Arjun does not see who has handed the towel to him and then closes the bathroom door.

Bhoomi has a look of anger and sadness on her face and she stands at the door way staring into shefali's eyes..'why are you looking at me like I have committed some crime? Its actually YOU who did the crime, you came in between two lovers! Arjun loves me, when he closes his eyes he sees me, when he is asleep I come in his dreams! Not you!! I'll see to it that he leaves you'- with that, shefali sneers at bhoomi and starts to make her way out of the room.

'stop', bhoomi hold on to shefali's hand ' who do you think you are? I can't be bothered to tell you about mine and arjun's relationship as it is obvious to everyone, but I want to warn you to stay away from us…and this is my last warning, otherwise I will…'shefali then pulls her arm and says 'really, what will you do? You and arjun don't even have a patni aur pati ka rishta, and you're telling me to….' Shefali stops mid way and turns around to look at arjun, who is now standing with his vest and trousers on.

'shefali!!!!!!'

well, it stops there…how do you like it ?? shall I continue,lol

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Posted: 20 years ago
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…this is the next part of the story (fan fiction)continued………………………………………………………………………………………

'shefali, how dare you, it is none of your business, me and bhoomi are husband and wife and…….' Arjun comes to an abrupt end when shefali holds on to bhoomi's mangal sutra.

'yeh mangal sutra tumne sirf isliya bhoomi ko pehnaya, isko badnaami se bechane keliya!! (the only reason you put this mangal sutra around bhommi's neck is so that you could save her from further humiliation) arjun, you don't love bhoomi, you love me, that's why you and bhoomi don't have a pati aur patni ka rishta!!' shefali pulls harder on the mangal sutra and as she is about to pull it off, arjun grabs her hand, at this point bhommi is shocked at the same time crying.

'shefali, bhoomi is my wife and my friend and I will not tolerate anything against her. I love her and she is my present and future. Now could you please leave!' Arjun looks at Bhoomi and gives her a reassuring smile.

Shefali bursts out crying and storms out of the room.

Arjun leaves the room (with his shirt on of course,lol) and tells Bhoomi 'I might be late today, so have your dinner because I don't feel like holding my ears and begging for forgiveness today' as he says this, Bhoomi giggles and wipes her tears nodding her head softly.

…………………………………………………………….NEXT SCENE…………….

Bhoomi is washing her hands after massaging her grandfather's feet (baisa's husband, I can't remember his name), at the same time she is looking in the mirror and smiling to herself, she remembers the memories between her and arjun.

'Bhoomi, Bhoomi, kaha ho tum?' manasvi is looking around in bhoomi's room trying to find Bhoomi.

'bhabi' Bhoomi comes out of her memories and walks towards manasvi, 'Bhoomi, we're all invited for dinner at the Malhotra's, its baisa's orders that we should all go as they are old friends, Mr malhotra's son is getting married today.'

'bhabi, I don't know about arjun, he said he would be a little late. But I can get ready and as soon as he comes, I will bring him with me. I think all of you should go first, we'll come later'. Manasvi smiles and gives Bhoomi a gold and maroon saree with a gold necklace and earrings . 'Here, take this, Baisa has told me to give it to you. You will look beautiful in it, I will be wearing a silver and blue one'

Boomi accepts the gift from Baisa and feels the embroidery on the saree, 'bhabi its lovely, thankyou. I'll wear this and go to the party' Bhoomi is still looking at the necklace and then looks up at manasvi and gives a confused look. 'Bhabi, why are you smiling?' Bhoomi gives manasvi a curious look. 'Bhoomi, baisa says that arjun will be very tired when he comes back, and going to the party will exhaust him. So, we decided that you should stay back and wait for arjun and both of you should go as a couple to wish the newly wedded, some other time' manasvi then holds onto bhoomi's hand and says ' umm, as for the saree, you can wear that today, since you and arjun will be home alone tonight I think it's a good idea for you two to get to know each other better' manasvi gives a small smile and walks off.

(The romantic music plays in the background)

Bhoomi remains standing, almost unable to digest the words that manasvi had just said, she then shakes her head and pats her hand on her head and starts to laugh.

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Posted: 20 years ago
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👏gr8 goin bubbles we all r njoying so keep posting hney...u rock babes
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Posted: 20 years ago
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the second one is good.. malhotra n sons.. wat ideas.. 👏
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Posted: 20 years ago
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oh gr8 going bubblessss... its realy nice keep it up..😃
luv, eshah
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Posted: 20 years ago
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NICEEEE!!!! WAITING FOR U TO CONTINUE! keep up the good work! 😃
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Posted: 20 years ago
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hey guys, i'm chuffed- thanks for the great feed back, so here it is.....

…………………………………NEXT SCENE…………..

Its dark and very quiet in the heritage house, bhoomi is sitting infront of the mirror wearing the maroon and gold saree, her hair is open blowing in the wind which is being let in by the open window. Bhoomi starts to put on her maroon bangles, her earrings, then her bindi and lastly her payal. She was about to tie up her hair when she hears a knock on the door, she slowly makes her way to the door which is only made visible by the lamp near the mirror, 'umm, kaun hai? Kaka? Maine kaha kaun hai?' her voice was starting to tremble now, she moved ever so slightly and all that could be heard was her bangles and payal, as she turned the door knob the door flung open and she screamed. Bhoomi jumped back with her eyes closed and her hands over her ears, her heart beating so fast…… 'Bhavri, hahaha, tum dar gayi,hahahaha, bhavrii, main hoon, arjun' arjun moves towards bhoomi and puts his hands over hers and pulls her closer to himself.

Bhoomi still has her eyes closed, she walks closer and closer to arjun, with arjun pulling her gently, she gradually gets very close to arjun and Arjun whispers in Bhoomi's ears 'Bhoomi, tum aakhen (eyes) khol sakti ho'. Bhoomi slowly opens her eyes and looks directly into arjun's eyes, she then hugs him. 'Bhoomi, arjun ki bhoomi itnee jaldi darr jati hai, haha' arjun starts to laugh and is stopped by bhoomi who places her hand over arjun's mouth, 'Arjun, I love you…I love' her voice tails away and she removes her hand from arjun's mouth and starts to walk towards the switch to turn the lights on. Arjun stands looking at her, he has a mixed expression on his face, a mixture of excitement, sadness and simply a confused expression.

Bhoomi walks down the stairs towards the kitchen to get something to eat for Arjun, she's lost in thoughts and starts to think towards herself ' I love you Arjun, and I will wait for the day that you accept me as your wife, the day our souls become one'.

Bhoomi starts to put the yohurt in the tray when Arjun enters the kitchen ' Bhoomi, I want to tell you something', he takes the tray from Bhoomi's hand and puts it down on the work top, 'tum is sarree mein bahut ache lag rahe ho',Bhoomi smiles and says 'khana is ready'. They both walk to the dining table, with bhoomi leading the way, as they sit down Arjun turns off the lights. 'Arjun, what are you doing?' Bhoomi eyes start wondering around the room, searching for arjun in the darkness, 'Bhoomi, it's a perfect day to have a candle light dinner' Arjun places the candles on the table, and bhoomi starts to place a roti on Arjun's plate, just then Arjun grabs hold of Bhoomi's hand and walks towards her, as she gets up he kisses her on her forehead 'Bhoomi, mein janta hoon ke maine bahut time lagaya, lekhin I love you, aur shahid mujhe kuch waqt laga, but I want you to know that you mean a lot to me, you're my friend, my wife and I want to be with you always and I know God wants this also', he looks down at bhoomi, who has now got tears in her eyes 'Bavri, tum ro kyun rahi ho?' Boomi says (in hindi of course) 'Arjun these are tears of joy, but I'm sorry also',arjun looks on puzzled 'sorry??', Bhoomi replies 'whatever you said in english, I didn't understand, tumne kya kaha tha?'. Arjun bursts out laughing and hugs Bhoomi, 'Bhoomi tumhe sirf itna pata hoona chahiye ke main tumse pyar karta hoon'.( all you need to know is that I love you)

………………………..NEXT SCENE……………………………….

Arjun wakes up and finds that Bhoomi is not sleeping next to him, there is bright light In his room and he can hear people laughing and talking loudly outside, he gets up in his white kurta and looks out of the window, then it struck him, it was holi!

As soon as Arjun realised it was holi, he knew instantly that Bhoomi would come running in and splatter him with colour, he hid behind a wall and waited for Bhoomi's arrival. Just then the door flung open and Bhoomi stood in to doorway holding red powder in her right hand, all dressed up in red and white Salwar kameez she shouted 'Arjun! Happy holi!!' she started to look around the room and walked towards the bed, Arjun grabbed the thal of powder in her other hand and threw red powder on her head and than ran out of the room shouting ' This time I was the first one bavri,hahaha,catch me if you can'. Bhoomi looking fustrated at the same time happy, followed Arjun out of the room ' Arjun, just wait, I'll get you'. Both of them are running one after the other on the balcony, arjun stops with bavri looking directly at him with the red powder in her hand, she laughs and throws the powder towards arjun and screams 'Happy holi'. When the mist of powder is cleared, she finds mansen standing infront of her with his face and clothes covered in red. Mansens's nostril's are flared and his mouth scrunched, he raises his hand…..

Arjun who ducked now gets up and looks at Mansen's face,bhoomi looks on shocked and almost shaking with fright. Just as mansen was about to retaliate with his harsh words, baisa makes an entrance , 'mansen, dekh kar acha laga ke tum be holi ke festival mein khel rahe ho' she laughs and gives an indicaton towards bhoomi and arjun to leave.

Yuvraj see's his dad wiping his face and he walks towards him 'who did this??!! I will not spare that person, I will teach that person a lesson. Tell me, who was it?' mansen replies 'that dirty servant, Bhoomika, what else can she do apart from spreading dirt and mess every where she goes. I was going to teach her a lesson then and there, but at that time Baisa stopped me. Never have I been so insulted!' Mansen looks angrily down the balcony staring hard at Bhoomi . 'papa, I will teach her a lesson , she needs many lessons and so does her Arjun. Today she smurred your face with red and I will colour her face with black!' Yuvraj leaves and has a twinkle in his eyes as he has wicked smile on his face. Shefali hears this conversation and starts to smile.

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Posted: 20 years ago
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i've posted a very very long one- hope you guys enjoy it!

i'm going to canada for 2weeks by the end of this week, so i won't write anything, so i'll bombard you guys with long stories this week😆

i hope you guys don't forget about me , because when i come back, i want to see the same enthusiasm i'm recieving right now😊

btw, guys (and girls of course) could you make sure you update the latest happenings in saarthi and please ensure you've posted them on the august update post (the one with no comments) - thanks😛

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Posted: 20 years ago
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it is great imagination
thanks a lot

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Posted: 20 years ago
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we gladly accept ur bombardments.. 😆 😉

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