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pallavi25

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Posted: 18 years ago

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Originally posted by: me_iq
awwwwww tht was a lovely prt sis....i luved it like others doo....wow cnt wait 4 honeymoon prts.....gr8 job...... 😳

Thanks, Iqra! Honeymoon coming up soon! 😳😳

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pallavi25

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Posted: 18 years ago

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Originally posted by: kripa0521
What a emotional part.. so both fathers are friends, what a twist! Waitng for Goa 😳 continue soon please.
Kripa.

Yeah what an irony isnt it? If Angad's dad had been in Goa, there would be no opposition to their marriage from Dilip! 😭

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Posted: 18 years ago

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Thanks girlie18, kaju, sirza, iqra, kripa 0521, deeya 123, mehandikhan, sweetmittal, sana! 😃

[color=green]Part 29

Grow Old Along With Me
The Best is Yet to Be
The Last of Life
For which the First was made!

(Robert Browning---Last Ride Together)

Goa ---January 9

Angad unlocked the door of the little house that belonged to his parents. He announced grandly : Mrs. Kripa Khanna, welcome to your little Castle!"
Kripa grinned with delight to discover that they were going to spend their honeymoon in the house where she and Angad had first consummted their relationship! She blushed happily and reached up to kiss him on his cheeks. Angad laughed and scooped her up in his arms and stepped over the threshold, carrying his lovely bride!

He held her high against his heart and chuckled wickedly: Toh Mrs. Khanna, ab kya karney ka iraada hai?"
Kripa put her arms around his neck and hugged him tighter: Jo bhi Mr. Khanna karna chahtey hain.."
Angad gave a shout of victory: ALRIGHT!!! He raised her higher and kissed her moist pink lips….. I love you, Baby…………...He carried her to the bedroom!

They pretty much had the next lunch, dinner and breakfast "in bed"!!

Finally, the next morning, they went to visit Simone and Aunt Marie. They had taken care of Angad's house while he was in jail. Simone had married Philipe and they now had a 4 year old son named Anthony! Angad had given his house for her to stay in after their marriage, since they didn't get the loan to buy a flat. But after he became Zeb, he had bought a flat for Simone and Philipe and gifted it to them as wedding gift!
Angad's family was delighed to see him back and married to the girl he loved.

Simone had already printed the cards for all the people Angad wanted to invite to his wedding. That whole day, Angad and Kripa drove around Goa, inviting friends and family members to the Church wedding scheduled for 3 days later.
They went to the little Artist's village and met Aunt Martha, who was overjoyed to see the two of them together.
They went to Stalin's house and invited Stalin who slapped Angad hard on his back and congratulated him for finally taking the "Plunge"

Angad took Kripa to Zeb's tattoo parlor in Panaji….Zeb #1 had named his parlor : Zeb's Tattoo Studio….it was a funky and wild place, yet clean and hygienic. Angad introduced his bride to Zeb and invited him to their Church wedding! Kripa took Zeb's hands in hers and thanked him tearfully for saving her Angad's life in jail.
Zeb was quite enamoured of Kripa. He took Angad aside and told him: Now I know why u went to jail for her….shes a GEM! Does she have a twin sister? He winked at Angad who laughed and slapped him on the back. Zeb offered to do a free tattoo for Kripa which she politely declined.

Angad invited all the old band members of Goa Boyz group. The band had broken up and now Philipe performed solo at parties and clubs while Simone ran a dance studio in Panaji.

After inviting everybody the whole day, they relaxed at home in front of a small fire Angad had lit in the living room fireplace. They toasted each other with champagne, looping their hands through each other's and drinking the bubbly liquid from their own glasses and then from each other's glasses! Some of the sparkling bubbles got on Kripa's nose from the champagne glass….she giggled, slightly drunk. Angad leaned over and licked the champagne bubbles from her nose. Then he moved down to her lips and throat and lower, pushing the straps of her yellow top down for better access. He pulled her down on the rug in front of the small fireplace and made gentle, tender love to her.

The next day, they went shopping for their wedding outfits in a posh Wedding Boutique in Panaji. Angad bought a Tux-style suit with satin lapels and Kripa bought a lovely and simple white lace wedding dress and a gossamer white veil.

Next they went to The Resort where they had first met. Angad was a rich and successful man now so everybody welcomed him back like Royalty. He took Kripa to the Martini Bar and they had lunch there holding hands and whispering in each other's ears. Then they went down to the beach and strolled amongst the waves, munching on their favorite ice-creams! They collected shells and watched the colorful sunset with Kripa sitting on his lap.

In the evening, Angad took her to a famous nightclub where they danced the night away in each other's arms, lost to the rest of the world and drowning in each other's eyes. They returned home at 1 A.M., so famished for each other, Angad could barely stand to go inside the house before he was tearing her and his clothes off!! They didn't even make it to the bedroom and ended up on the living-room floor again.

They spent the next day at a deserted private beach belonging to one of Angad's business friends. Kripa wore a red swimsuit and Angad his blue swimming trunks. They went swimming in the sea, splashing and laughing, playing in the waves. Angad carried her into the waves and dropped her, laughing wickedly, into a swelling, incoming wave but she clung to him, screaming with fright. Soon he was too aroused to play anymore and carried her to the changing-room, stripping off her swimsuit. They stood under the warm shower and he raised her against himself, pinning her to the wall, possessing her completely.

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The wedding was held at the same Church where they had received blessings on Christmas Eve! Father D'Souza presided over the ceremony, beaming with joy and pride. He was delighted that his boy Andy was finally getting married to his ladylove. After the disappearance of his father, it was Father D'Souza who had guided Angad in his career and helped him get scholarships for college. He had been like a second father to Angad. He couldn't be happier that this day he was getting Angad married to his lost love and also amazed to learn that Angad's father had returned to him.

Kripa looked divine in her white lace wedding dress, her hair tied up in a fancy hairstyle and a veil covering her head, coming down on her lovely face. She wore the heart pendant on her graceful neck, Angad's first gift to her in Goa and dangling gold earrings. Angad looked dashing in his dark tux, proud in bearing, as he stood for his bride at the altar with his head held high. Kripa held a bouquet of white flowers and walked slowly towards her beloved, to the strains of bridal welcome playing on the church organ.
They held hands and listened to the wedding vows read by Father D'Souza, then turned to each other and repeated the wedding vows:

to have and to hold
from this day forward;
for better, for worse,
for richer, for poorer,
in sickness and in health,
to LOVE and to CHERISH,
till death us do part,

They exchanged plain gold wedding bands and then the Father declared them man and wife. " And now you may kiss the bride'
Angad lifted her veil and planted a chaste kiss on her cheeks, but then his lips came down on hers, in a kiss passionate and longer than was stipulated in Church tradition. The onlookers, Angad's maternal family and friends, cheered him on with whoops, applause and laughter.
Kripa blushed and gently pushed him away as his kiss was getting out of hand.

As the good-looking couple walked out hand in hand, all family and friends shook their hands and congratulated them, showering them with rice and colored confetti! They got into their Honda sedan, decorated with balloons and streamers with a HUGE sign saying : "JUST MARRIED" and drove off to the Reception at the biggest hotel in Panaji.

They danced, drank wine and laughed with their guests who were teasing them. All of them wanted to meet their son, Prateek and they promised to bring him the next time they visited Goa.
Stalin gifted Angad with a painting of Kripa that he had made from memory….Angad was impressed yet a little jealous that Kripa had made such a deep impression on his artist friend.
Angad's aunt and Simone gave Kripa a beautiful set of freshwater pearls as wedding gift.

After the reception they drove back to their little house. Kripa was quite tipsy from the wine she had drunk at the party. She could hardly stand straight so he lifted her up and carried her inside. He laid her down on the bed and was leaving to go and change his dress but she grabbed his coat and pulled him down upon her. They kissed deeply, the wine on their tongues mingling and blending. He took off his coat and her veil…..she unbuttoned his shirt, and kissed him all over his chest and stomach till he was groaning with pleasure.

He whispered in her ears: I know now …Wine makes you more amorous. Aaj sey main har roz tumhey dinner per wine pilaoonga" he chuckled and then yelped as she bit his shoulder in punishment. Soon both were wildly moving against each other, as he pulled off her wedding dress and their bodies dissolved in tumultous passion!

Breathe
( Faith Hill )

I can feel the magic floating in the air
Being with you gets me that way
I watch the sunlight dance across your face
And I've never been this swept away
All my thoughts just seem to settle on the breeze
When I'm lying wrapped up in your arms
The whole world just fades away the only thing
I hear is the beating of your heart

And I can feel you breathe, just watching over me
And suddenly I'm melting into you
There's nothing left to prove Baby, all we need is just to be
Caught up in a touch, a slow and steady rush
Baby, isn't that the way that love's supposed to be?
I can feel you breathe
Just breathe

In a way I know my heart is waking up
As all the walls come tumbling down
Closer than I've ever felt before
And I know and you know
There's no need for words right now

'Cause I can feel you breathe, just watching over me
And suddenly I'm melting into you
There's nothing left to prove Baby, all we need is just to be
Caught up in a touch, a slow and steady rush
Baby, isn't that the way that love's supposed to be?
I can feel you breathe
Just breathe

I can feel you breathe, just watching over me
And suddenly I'm melting into you
There's nothing left to prove Baby, all we need is just to be
Caught up in a touch, a slow and steady rush
Baby, isn't that the way that love's supposed to be?
I can feel you breathe
Just breathe

I can feel the magic floating in the air
Being with you gets me that way

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They spent an idyllic 7 days in Goa, rediscovering each other, reliving their moments of first love from 5 years ago. They went skinny-dipping by moonlight on the private beach, making sure this time that nobody was watching them.

Angad bought sketching supplies for Kripa and demanded that she make a sketch of him in his birthday suit. Kripa obliged willingly but the sketch remained incomplete due to frequent interruptions by both model and artist.

Angad took dozens of pictures of her in various poses on the beach, on the bed, in the kitchen wearing his shirt, for his private collection of course. Every morning, he made her breakfast in bed as he had promised and brought it in to his sleepy wife on a tray alongwith a fresh rose. Of course the breakfast often became too cold before Kripa got a chance to taste it!
They cooked dinner and lunch together and ate it on the verandah overlooking the sea.

On the last day before leaving Goa, he took her to Dona Paula Beach although Kripa was rather nervous about going there. He reassured her: Don't worry Baby! Ab humein koi bhi judaa nahin kar sakta. Dona ne humein curse nahin kiya tha, hamari kismat hamarey khilaaf tha.

They sat on the rocky beach, with Kripa leaning between his outstretched legs and watched the sunset. To Kripa's relief, Dona didn't appear to her this time! Who knows, maybe Dona's apparition last time had just been a reflection of her own fears and doubts about her future? But now that she was secure in Angad's love and was his wife and mate for life, Dona didn't exist anymore.

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Pallavi

Tomorrow I end my story with an epilogue!

Edited by pallavi25 - 18 years ago

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cheeselova

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Posted: 18 years ago

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awesome part [:$]
i'll miss this fan fic [:$] [:$] [:$] [:$]

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sana

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cheeselova

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Posted: 18 years ago

#305

awesome part
i'll miss this fanfic 😳 😳 😳

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sweetmittal

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Posted: 18 years ago

#306

hey di great and lovely honeymoon parts. i love it so much. i am a little sad that this will end but i am sure we will see the same romance in the other ff.

love ya mittal 🤗

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ardis

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Posted: 18 years ago

#307

that was a very nice part im gonna miss this fanfic continue soon1 😛

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Pooja

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Posted: 18 years ago

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very beautifully written, and so true our fears many times reflect what may happen in the future, and once we are content securely they all of a sudden dont have an existance.
Kripa.

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Ritika

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Posted: 18 years ago

#309

I don't even know how to begin to praise you for your fanfic, and this sequel to it.

*stands up* 👏

Honestly, the way you have penned each and every romantic moment between Angad and Kripa, and their personality traits and everything is just MINDBLOWING. Whenever Angad would make a wicked comment and Kripa would blush, I could feel myself blushing too. 😳 I really applaud you for how you have brought the characters of Angad and Kripa to life! 😳 👏 👏

You have even written out some of my own personal fantasies, and I really liked the pirate-sea maiden sequence. ☺️ 😉 😆 And when Zeb and Kripa met, their passion was so unbelievable and so real, that my mouth was left hanging, and my cheeks burning. 😳 😆

Honestly, I don't know where you have gotten this talent from, but please never stop writing! 😛 I have recommended your fanfic to some of my close IF friends, and they have promised to start reading it (of course, it will take them awhile 😉).

It's a bittersweet moment, because it is the perfect time to end this fanfic, yet in my heart, I don't want it to end. It is such a beautiful story, I cannot even tell you. Every emotion...every lyric...every dialogue...nothing was vulgar, and even the romance scenes were handled maturely, and still hot! 😉 😆

Please start another fanfic soon PallaviDi😃, as I sure will miss this fascinating story! 😳 👏

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pallavi25

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Posted: 18 years ago

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Originally posted by: rwishka17
I don't even know how to begin to praise you for your fanfic, and this sequel to it.

*stands up* 👏

Honestly, the way you have penned each and every romantic moment between Angad and Kripa, and their personality traits and everything is just MINDBLOWING. Whenever Angad would make a wicked comment and Kripa would blush, I could feel myself blushing too. 😳 I really applaud you for how you have brought the characters of Angad and Kripa to life! 😳 👏 👏

You have even written out some of my own personal fantasies, and I really liked the pirate-sea maiden sequence. ☺️ 😉 😆 And when Zeb and Kripa met, their passion was so unbelievable and so real, that my mouth was left hanging, and my cheeks burning. 😳 😆

Honestly, I don't know where you have gotten this talent from, but please never stop writing! 😛 I have recommended your fanfic to some of my close IF friends, and they have promised to start reading it (of course, it will take them awhile 😉).

It's a bittersweet moment, because it is the perfect time to end this fanfic, yet in my heart, I don't want it to end. It is such a beautiful story, I cannot even tell you. Every emotion...every lyric...every dialogue...nothing was vulgar, and even the romance scenes were handled maturely, and still hot! 😉 😆

Please start another fanfic soon PallaviDi😃, as I sure will miss this fascinating story! 😳 👏

Ohhh Thank You sooo much! I really appreciate all your feedback! Its ur appreciation that keeps me writing more and more! 😳😃

Im grateful to all my readers and to discerning readers like you for liking my work! I will surely try to live up to your expectations!

I have started a new FF --Bhalobasha/Love! Punjabi Angad and Bengali Kripa! 😳

Thanks again! 😊

Pallavi