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Posted: 18 years ago
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r u trying to pair naina and huda/aalekh plz dont do this we love rn and would love too see them together by the way grt starting??

Raj?????????????????????????/
n dont tel me tis hudaaa
plz ans dese que also
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Posted: 18 years ago
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write soon...............
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey great going

Where is raj?

is there in the scene

i think he is the new vice principal

what say?

pl update soon

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: chiky n choc

r u trying to pair naina and huda/aalekh plz dont do this we love rn and would love too see them together by the way grt starting??

Raj?????????????????????????/
n dont tel me tis hudaaa
plz ans dese que also



Dear Choc,
Thanks for replying, dear! No, I'm not pairing Alekh with Naina, did you get confused because I've typed AS/NS? NS means Neelu Sahani, if you don't know.
And about RN, I will try to write some of their scenes (I'm not good at writing romance, especially not of a pair I don't like much), but I will pair HN (This is one of the things that I've gotta do for my most fave pair!)
But even so, it's not going to be a romantic fanfic, it's majorly suspense that you can expect soon. Keep replying,
Tess
P.S:You can expect quite a few RN moments in the 6th and 7th chapters.
Edited by poetess13 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: yoginisahakari

hey great going

Where is raj?

is there in the scene

i think he is the new vice principal

what say?

pl update soon



Thanks! You'll get to see Raj real soon, probably in the chapter after next.
And about Raj being the new vice-principal, you guessed right!Try to guess the head of drills too (it's totally obvious).
I'll update today itself, if I can. If not, some other time this week.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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In the last chapter I forgot to mention that Aashna is Aakash's and Neelu's child. In the fic, I've assumed that Rohit has not been seen by any of Pooja's friends.
Edited by poetess13 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Chapter 5: Decisions


Lieutenant Pooja Ghai treaded up the stairs to her bedroom on the second floor. She looked at the royal blue carpet on which she staggered and then shifted her gaze to the brilliant chandelier hanging above. She rubbed her eyes tiredly and continued to walk up. At last, she finally reached in front of her bedroom.


The corridor spun before her eyes and the yells of her ninteen year old cousin in the hall below echoed in her head. With great effort, she managed to push open the door and almost fell inside doing so. She held herself upright and walked towards her bed. Exasperated, she laid down on her bed dreading the coming week.


For the past one month, she had been receiving threatening calls from the man who was once her love. For whom she had enrolled at KMA and faced humiliation, physical and mental strain. Who, after a six-month search had finally returned in her life and whom she herself had bid goodbye to almost two years ago.


Yes, Rohit Ahuja, her ex-fiance and love was the one responsible for Pooja's miserable state. He had proofs of certain sins Pooja had committed in the past, sins that could not only end her career, but could also lead her to the gallows. He had been threatening to submit those proofs to the seniors of the army.


That day, Lieutenant Ghai had received another phone call from him. That year, he was going to enroll as a Cadet at KMA, using an excuse for his age, to keep a close watch on her. To constantly blackmail her and make her life hell. But Pooja had a choice. She could give up her job at KMA and take up the post at a base camp at Sikkhim.


That year Pooja's teenage cousin, Riya, the one creating ruckus below, had been admitted to KMA. Riya had been obstinate about joining KMA because her role-model, Pooja di had done so. However, her orthodox parents had been against the idea of their daughter joining the army. Only after immense persuasion by Pooja and her parents, they had agrred to send Riya to KMA, on the condition that Pooja would remain in the academy.


Pooja understood Riya's feelings. She knew how badly her cousin wanted to pursue her dream. But was that good reason for Pooja to face a vengeful Rohit? As Pooja debated on what to do her mobile rang:


"Hello, who's speaking?" she asked fearfully.


"It's me Pooja, Ali."

"Oh, hi!" she spoke relieved.


"What's the matter, not happy to speak with me?"


"Oh, no no. Nothing like that. I was just stressed out that's it. Lots of work, you know."


"Of course, I understand. I have some great news to tell you!"


"What's that?"


"Lieutenant Hockey Coach, Major Ali will be the drill supervisor at KMA this year. We'll be together again, just like old times!"


"Wow!" Pooja said with a sinking heart.


"You'll be there right?"


"Definitely. Goodnight, then."


"Goodnight, love."


With all his sisters married and his success in all his missions (for which he had earned medals and high salaries), Ali was now the son of a proud, well-off Subedar. He was also engaged to his KMA-time love, Pooja. But being busy in his work, he hardly spent any time with Pooja he was enthralled at the prospect of spending a year with her at KMA.


However, Pooja was distraught. Now, she had to return to KMA. She couldn't let Ali down, no she couldn't. Her eyes filled with tears. She then remembered her flight was the next day. Quickly wiping off the tears, she rummaged through her Almirah. "I hope I haven't thrown my ticket," she thought, "here it is."

She dragged her suitcase from below her bed and was about to begin packing when she heard a defeaning thud. She ran downstairs along with her parents and two of her cousins to find Riya guiltily picking up the shards of her now-broken Hockey trophies, once made of shining glass.

Edited by poetess13 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey great going

pl continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey very good..........plzzzzzzzc contniue plz
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: iamsmart

gr8 part


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sana



thanks very much!

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