Colours of my Life (AK): The End (Pg 33) - Page 10

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Posted: 18 years ago
#91
Awsome ff!Finally got some time to catch up to this!OMG this part and the other previous ones were frickin' hilarious! I was seriously laughing my head off. It was so funny when Kripa shoved a hankercheif up his mouth 😆 hahhahahahaahaha and then pushed him down to teh floor 😆 omg you crack me up!I really enjoy this ff and your others. Its really great except i have a few questions.........I'm confused 😕 😆 . BEing confused is my thing 😆 Ask Mahida so don't be worried but the thing is somehow kripa is 16 again, somehow she is married to angad, somehow she lost her memory and parents and somehow she is...............21 as well. 😕 lol see im more than confused =] its all good but i just want to get one thing cleared up....im not suppose to know the somehows right? 😆 anyways the ff may be confusing but it is awsome 😃

xoxoxoxo

kanwer 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
#92
LOLZ, HILARIOUS PART HUN! OMG I seriously think that Kripa might be Pregnant, It can happen right? Lolz Im having a little prediction session right now...

Angad, is quite Arrogant, I noticed, lolz 😆 Maybe becuz it was brought up so many times, By the lovely Kripa... 😆 😃 😛

There are so many things, I want to know about her past with Angad, how they fell in love, if she's pregnant or not?(Thats a big one) and if Angad actually Loves her or not.

Oh, and that gay thing, jaan you now, its pissing me off, Stop that, lolz 😆 I dont want my Angad baby to be known as gay!! 😳 😳 .pweeez! 😛


Hehe, N E Wayz, Hun really super super duper great part, Continue Soon, Please sooner than last time.

Luv you!🤗

Shantelle 😛
Edited by Bolly*_Crazed - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#93

I'm in a hurry right now, but I will definitely come back, and reply to the comments 😃😃 The part is a bit rushed, hope it isn't too bad 😊

Part Seven - HE-❤️-TTACK

I opened my eyes when the first rays of the sun cast their web on my face almost blinding my vision. Placing a hand on the side trying to cover the sunlight, I woke up dazed, completely lost over my surroundings, until I felt a hand holding mine, and I almost nearly smiled at the memory of last night when I'd kicked my husband so hard that he'd landed straight down on the floor.

I turned to look at the person holding my hand, who was half hidden under the covers with a boyish grin tucked on his face, looking absolutely adorable, just breathtakingly handsome.

Now, if only I could stop the snoring. For such a cute guy, a lion's snore sure did not suit, did it? Playfully, I covered his mouth with my fingers, he stirred a bit, and just when I thought he would wake up, and kill me he started to breath from his nose. The snoring died.

Sweet. That was excellent. I was good.

Smiling brightly, I almost patted myself in the back, and turned to get up, when I heard the snoring start again. I groaned in disappointment,

and covered his mouth with my fingers. This time he stirred several times, but I was so confident that he wouldn't wake up at all that I failed to notice the instant release of my left hand from his. Thrilled that I'd miraculously managed to get my left hand out from his grip I I closed his mouth tightly with both my hands, and the next instant my eyes went completely blurry, and my heart jumped right in my mouth, as I was rolled over to the other side with the lion on top.

I swear I'd merely blinked, and he had managed to twirl me around nicely, and managed to roll on top of me within a matter of seconds.

I nearly blushed with his gaze on me, "What do you think you're doing?" he asked seriously with his penetrating gaze on mine. I foolishly choked, "ha ha ha" I laughed lamely trying to avoid the inevitable explanation, but when his expressions did not change. I hesitantly blabbered the first thing on my mind, "I was ah…quite concerned that your nose was not functioning properly"

"Really?" he asked, amusement clearly visible in his eyes, "Do I snore darling?" I almost lost my mind over that last word, and this time my heart did not just merely jump right in my mouth I felt it jump up and down, literally hammer my chest, "Yes… Noo… I mean.. No".

He chuckled, and I was instantly furious. He is responsible first of all responsible for making me so nervous that I manage to make a complete fool out of myself, and here he is sitting laughing over the 'world's most stupid tag' I am wearing, "You snore like a lion!" I began angrily, then racked my brains for something worst, "No, it's actually more like a motor rolling making grr grr grrr noises" Was he just smiling when I went gr gr grrrr?? "You know what sweetieee piee you snore like a pig!" I looked at his face angrily satisfied with those last words, but somewhere I felt bad for using them. Instead of turning red in anger like I would have, if I were in his place, he just looked at me with a bored look. Talk about the nerve of this man! What was he made of? Stone? And, why is he looking at my…????

"Just why the heck are you staring at my lips??" I yelled furiously on top of my lungs, and he smiled, his gaze still on my mouth, "Because" he said, and his lips crashed on mine, and I died out of a heart attack.

All my anger evaporated in thin air, as I heard him truthfully say, "Because, I wanted to do this from a very long time" he was so pleased with him self, "Now what does this tell you honey?" he teased with a boyish grin, as he tucked a strand of my hair behind my ear.

If only I could wipe that boyish grin off his face, because I swear that boyish grin was driving me literally insane! It was all due to that infectious grin that I was starting to like him! Like, really really like him. "What?" I said all lost, because I was all lost in staring at that slow lazy smile, "That I'm not….." he began before he kissed me again, "not gay" I finished a little too brightly.

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Edited by Andekhi - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#94
god.. that was amazing. u should continue.. i just read the whole ff just now.. its amazing.. continue soon..
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Posted: 18 years ago
#95
It was great, but too short man!! That was only one scene, though I have to admit, it was cuteee😉 Continue Soon!!

<3 Madiha
Edited by erier101 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#96
gr8 part but too short 😒 never mind but it was really good. so atlast she got to know that he's not gay. i'm really satisfied 😆


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Sana
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Posted: 18 years ago
#97
hun that was amazing, they kissed, and angads snoring, kripa holding hsi mouth with her hands, angad, getting on top of her and kissing, that was so cute, update soon cant wait, lots of love and best wishes, sukhi 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
#98
👏 👏 👏 wow great part 😃 😃 😃

im a bit confused at this part

That I'm not….." he began before he kissed me again, "not gay" I finished a little too brightly.

is she saying that Angad is not not gay =is gay

or is she sayin is not gay? thankyou if you could answer that cause i have difficulty lettin things in my small brain-btw einsteins brain was smaller than most people 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
#99
lol hehehe that was soo funny:P lol but that reminds me of this frined of mine lol he talks in his sleep LMAO its soo funny and soooooooooo shocking HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAA lol omg cant stop lauging now lol like literly im laughin out loud lol:P but its more to the fact wat he says in his sleep!! lol omg its embarrassing sumtimes especailly when there r mor people listening and it has sumting to do with u! ok lol noo i dont wann rmeber that now:P lol
but w.e it was a really nice part:D:D:D:D:D lol
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Posted: 18 years ago
The world is bright again! Her husband is not gay anymore 😆 😆 Congrats Kripa! Loved the part, gosh the insults were funny! Didn't affect him though! Glad that he is finally grinning like a fool instead of being a 'stone' all the time!

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11 years ago

~Love makes Life~ KRIYAANSH DRABBLE SERIES 'completed'

Banner Credit goes to -chamkilli- A girl full of enjoyment lives in a chawl, never tries to get effected by any one, she and her sis live with

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