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Originally posted by: memze

awesome ff i luve dit aww anagd is so sweet and kripa is so ...kripa lolz anyways loved it the promos interesting cant wait for the next part 😛

gald you like the fan fic i will conitnue hopefully today again but i just need to figure out a few details....if you see how i type of my parts i think every one would go in to shock mostly because when i type up a part it makes no sence because it is writen in all code then i have to go back and fix every thing to make one part make sence lol😆

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wow. great promos. very interesting. cont soon.
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Billionaire Khanna

Angad was a very careful rider; he stuck to only the back rode to avoid human contact with any one. He was very successful, he had not pass one car or person walking down the streets and that is very hard to do counting the fact that they were riding in a place where the world was looking for them.

Seven hours had passed and still Angad and Kripa were in California because they had to stick the to back roads it was very hard to get around quickly. It was starting to get dark and both needed a place to stay. Angad stopped his bike a few miles away from a very luxurious Ren ace hotel. Both Angad and Kripa kept there Helmet on incase someone saw them. Angad hid his bike behind a few bushes and then took out his cell phone.

"Who are you calling" Kripa asked in a whisper of the darkness.

"The person that can give a place to stay in the Ren ace hotel." Angad said waiting for the person on the other side of the phone to pick up. Kripa wanted to ask many questions as to how they would get into a hotel so luxurious with out having any one see them but she was to tired to question.

Within a few minutes a long black limo came up to where Angad And Kripa were standing. Angad took off his helmet and so did Kripa. "Come on let's go" Angad said getting in to a limo. When Kripa saw the limo she was now have more then a billion questions pop in to her head and this time she did not remain quite.

"Angad, what is with the limo?" Kripa asked confused and thinking how cans a guy that was desperate for money yesterday, know a person that owned a limo. Inside the limo it was very luxurious. The seats were leather, with a small TV inside. Kripa saw a man inside of the limo that looked to be about her own father's age. Kripa had seen the man before on TV; he was the owner of the Ren ace hotel.

Once getting settled into the limo Angad introduced the man to Kripa. "Kripa this is Reece Ace, he was my fathers best friend and took care of me after my family passed away." Angad said with a smile. This was the first time Kripa heard Angad's voice so cheerful.

Angad was very happy it had been two years since he last met Mr. Ace and he really missed his family along with it. Mrs. Ace was a sweet woman. "Uncle Ace, where is Mrs. Ace?" Angad asked with question. Mr. Ace replied with a frown saying, "She is in the hospital with my daughter" Angad got worried " Sweetie became sick again?" Angad said with concern. Angad had lived with Mr. Ace's daughter for five years before moving out of the Ace's mansion to live on his own. He used to call Alison, Sweetie as a nickname.

"Alison will be fine it was just a little stroke" Mr. Ace said with a smile and then gave a disappointing look. "So, Angad tell me are you starting a new business called helping super models run away?" Mr. Ace said with humor.

"It is a long story" after Angad, said this the limo stopped behind the hotel. "Angad you and Miss. Sharma can go throw the back stairs to the royal suite, which you must know where it is since you and Alison used to play in there a lot as youngsters. "Thanks uncle Ace" By saying that Angad and Kripa got out of the limo and ran up the stairs making sure no one saw them. To Angad's luck the maids were switching shifts and the hallways were empty. Angad and Kripa made their way to the door, which was locked.

"Great it is locked" Kripa said with worry that some one would see them.

"Oh that is no big deal" Angad knocked on the door in three different spots and bam the door flew open.

"How did you do that?" Kripa said amazed. Angad did not even break open the door, he just knocked on it in three different places like you would knock on a door when going to some ones house.

"Me and sweetie used to come here all the time we did not want to do our home work and uncle Ace would look for use all over the hotel. Every time he would lock the room up me and sweetie just came back into the room by learning that all the doors in the hotel are opened by a card key and in the rich rooms there are locks inside the door so if you knock on it in three places the lock from inside the door opens up.

"Wow" Kripa said amazed and then jealous that he called Mr. Ace's daughter sweetie.

The room was very beautiful from inside there were red silk bed sheets and a small fireplace across from the bed. The room seemed very cozy that any person would love to live in. Kripa noticed that there were a few books and magazines on the floor and the bed was made very messily.

"Angad, why is the room so…" Before Kripa could say any thing Angad finished for her "Messy? The maids are not allowed into this room, it looks like after I was gone Sweetie spent a lot of time in here." Every time Angad would say sweetie Kripa felt like stabbing the girl before she even meet her.

Angad went up to the fireplace and started a fire while Kripa just sat up on the bed. "Angad, what happened to your family, I know I am not any one close to you and probably do not deserve to ask but you left the Ace family and they seem to care about you." Kripa was blabbing and she knew it as much as Angad did. Angad found it amusing that Kripa tired to put concern in to her voice but she was just one good at being a sympathetic person. Angad did not mind talking about his family mostly because he believed that sharing your pain made you pain less painfully and it was true he used to talk about his family a lot to Mrs. Ace and Alison.

Once the fire was up and running Angad took a seat across from Kripa on the bed

" When I was growing up I had a wonderful family, in fact the best family that any one could dream for. I used to go to Bellaire Academy. Kripa knew that school very well; it was an all boys' school, full of trust fund kids. My grandmother used to bake cookies every day I used to come home from school they were the best cookies that any one could ever taste. My mom was a housewife and was the sweetest person you could ever meet; she would understand me like no other. My little sister, Stacie the light of the life she would be the loudest person in the entire house and the most annoying, we used to fight a lot but always there for each other when we needed it. And last of my dad, Owner of NTSC fashion House Company. "Kripa knew this company better then any thing, she modeled for the company about a million times and bought most of her clothes from that place.

"I don't understand if your dad owned that company then…" Angad again finished for Kripa "I was a trust fund kid just like you, I am a trust fund" Kripa's mouth opened to say many questions but Angad just continued to talk not allowing her to talk at the moment.

"My family and I were going to go to Paris for a vacation but I was grounded after making a 32 on history on my report card. So, when my family left for Paris I was staying with the Ace family until they got back. That was the day when I had found out that their plane had crashed right at take off and every one in my family was in serious conduction. I was 12 at the time. When I reached the hospital I found out that my dad had already passed away but mom, Stacie, and grandmother were still alive. I ran to Stacie room first and saw her with bandages all over her, although we fought a lot we had this bond that we had between each other. Stacie was unconscious and so I did not bother her and ran to my mom's room, by the time I reached her room she also passed away, and it was the same with my grandmother. Only Stacie lived. Stacie lived for only a week and was unconscious the whole week. All my family members were buried together, during the reading of my fathers will it said that if any thing was to happen to him every thing was to go into my mothers name and if something was to happen to my mother every thing was to go to my grandmother and if anything was to happen to her then every thing was to be split between my sister and me and if anything was to happen to any other the children then the other child would inherit all the money at the age of 25. Until I turn 25 the Ace's family took care of my father's business." Angad said, Kripa was surprised that Angad wasn't in tears because she certainly was.

"The Ace's family took care of me like there own son, and I loved them like my own family. Alison and I were best of friends and when growing up, as teenagers we used to hang around this room a lot. Alison was a weak child from the start and fainted a couple of times. When Alison became fifteen and I was sixteen she became like a normal person, weak but stronger enough to go out by herself and live a happy life. Alison and I started dating when she was fifteen and I was sixteen and we spent a lot of time together and loved each other so much that we would go so far as to think of our wedding" Angad said this with a smile to his face while Kripa was felling a pang in her self like something sharp just hit her though the stomach.

" Alison was my first love and I was hers but things between us was just not the same, we thought of each other like brothers and sisters more then a couple and soon enough broke up. She was seventeen at the time and I was eighteen, after a few months after our break up I left the Ace's mansion to find myself. In the world of glamour and riches I lot my self and I set out on a quest to find who I was. That was when I fell in love with riding bikes and that was when I started to do ticks on it risking my life many times. The Ace family always asked me to come back to their house but I liked living on my own it gave me a change to think. Uncle Ace would always send money but I would send it back saying I wanted to live on my own until I was 25. When I turn 25 the world will know who I am and until then I wanted to stay in the shadows of the world going to malls and seeing what people like to wear, after all I am to inherit a fashion house company." Again Angad side with a little smile to his face and Kripa knew Angad was now going to mention Kripa into his life.

"In order to live I used to do work in little clothes shops and did not make much money. I would steal little things like food, but never money, from places when in desperate need. I just could not take money from the Ace's family after what they had done from me and even though they always sent money knowing I would send it back they never stopped. They would keep sending money and I would just keep sending it back. All the money that was made in my dad's company would be directly transferred into my bank account and it is still in the bank collecting dirt. I do not plan to spend one penny of that money until I turn 25, I just wanted to stay away from the world of fame but then you came along. You brought my life back in to fame from the second you knocked into me in the mall." Kripa was feeling so bad for Angad at the time but he seemed to have no regret about it.

Angad looked at his life like a movie. Angad believe that some movies are sad and others are happy it just depended on the time if he would have a happy ending or a sand ending. So far his life was very good. Yes, he did not have a family of his own but he did have peopled that loved and cared for him and that were good enough for him for now.

"You went through so much and going to go into the same world I want to get out of," Kripa said with small tears running down her checks. Angad scooted up to Kripa on the bed and wiped the tears out of her eyes with his thumb.

"You don't have to feel sorry for me because I like my life and I have nothing to blame, I did not go to collage but I finish a very good education from high school and I think I will be fine in life but after we go to Mexico, you will live your life and I will live mine and when I turn 25 and you 23 we will meet again in some formal rich party and we will laugh about all the stupid things we have done together. We will talk about how we meet in a mall when I was 20 and you 18, we will live happy every after in different worlds. I bet by the time I am 25 you will be married and have little kids running after you." Angad said playfully and Kripa just took a soft silk pillow and hit Angad on the head.

"Stupid, prince rider" Kripa said hitting Angad with the pillow over and over until Angad grabbed the pillow from Kripa's hand and just hit her back playfully. Kripa grabbed the other pillow and both started to play a game of pillow fight.

Angad and Kripa lied on the bed side by side after the pillow fight. Angad turned his head lying down looking a Kripa, who was also lying down. "Hey Kripa did any one ever tell you that you look sexy as hell when lying on the bed after a very messy fight" Kripa turned her head away from Angad blushing with her face turning red. Kripa had been close to many guys before but they were never being cool like Angad. They would never have a pillow fight, those guy only talked about what their daddy could pay for.

"Hey Angad, did any one ever tell you that you look hotter then fire when you are shirtless." Kripa said laughing jokingly.

"Oh, really" Angad said in amusement almost in the shadowy voice that made him impossible to figure out. Angad sat up on the bed and took off his leather jacket and then took off his wet shirt from when he was riding in the rain. Angad then came on top of Kripa with intense eyes looking into hers.

"So now what do you think of me" Angad said intensely.

Kripa wasn't so taken back by Angad shirtless mostly because she had been around many models and a lot of them were shirtless when it came to modeling but Angad looked not just like a model but also more. He had a different type of eyes of the color of blue and brown. He looked into her so differently, he treated her different. Angad treated her like a person, like a true person!

Kripa was unable to speak after Angad came on top of her; he was just so…so…undesirable and unexpected. He did things that she would never see coming. "I…I, think you are…" Kripa was just not able to find the true words, what was he to her? What did she think of him? Was he just another person to her or was he more?

"I don't know what I think of you" Kripa said and when Angad continued looking into Kripa's eyes he could tell Kripa was very confused, she really did not know what to think of him.

"How about for now be remain friends, if something is to happen, it will" Angad said with a smile but did not get off of Kripa, he remained on top of her for the reason that she was one hell of an attractive woman. Come to think of it he would not mind all that much to seduce her into bed with him but then again she was a prissy princess and her rich daddy would not be all the happy if he found out that his daughter came back home pregnant.

"Angad, you can get off of me now" Kripa said with a laugh.

"Sorry," Angad said then lied down on the bed beside Kripa. "So, you don't mind sleeping in bed with me, do you?" Angad said with the shadowy voice and this time when Angad used the tone with those words, it put shivers down Kripa's spin.

"No, I don't mind" Kripa was surprised she was able to even get those words out of her mouth. She was sure she was going to faint just thinking what it would be like to really sleep with Angad Khanna.

Angad took out his backpack that was in front of the fire, now dry. Angad took out a shirt that was a little damp but a lot warmer then what Kripa was wearing. "Here" Angad said throwing the shirt onto Kripa's face.

"Wear my shirt others wise you will catch a cold." That was when Kripa noticed that her clothes were wet from when she entered the hotel room. Kripa looked around the room with her eye to see if there was a bathroom but there was none.

"Angad isn't there a bathroom in here?" Angad then remembered that there was no place for Kripa to change.

"Oh sorry Kripa, when me and Alison were little we used to spend all our time in here that is why Uncle Ace had the bathroom sealed to a wall so we would eventually have to come out of the room." Angad said really forgetting that the bathroom was no longer in the room.

"I will turn around and you can change, ok," Angad said turning round think that would never happen with a super model in to room. As soon as Kripa's shirt was off her wet body Angad turned back round looking at Kripa intensely, her back was facing him so the only thing he could see was her back but he had to admit it was one hell of a sexy figure to see. Her back was perfectly tan and looked very soft and delicate.

"Angad, quit staring" Kripa called out. Angad was surprised, how did she know that he was staring at her. Angad did not turn back around but instead just came closer up to her and grabbed her bare stomach and turned her around quickly crushing her into his bare chest. Angad looked into Kripa's eyes intensely dragging his hands up and down her back and then stopped at the hooks of her bra. His fingers unhooked it the hooked them back up. He did then about five times and neither Angad nor Kripa said a word they were just looking into each other's eyes looking for some answer but both just saw confusion. Both did not know what they wanted from the other.

"How did you know I was looking" Angad said in a whisper still playing with the hook, taking it off and then putting it back on over and over. He was unable to make a decision, he wanted to seduce her into bed with him more then ever but then another part of him told him it would not be right but then the other part of him said you think of her more then a friend.

"I just knew" Kripa just whispered back. Kripa did not know what do to she was never in a position like this before. She knew very well what was in Angad's head but she just wasn't sure as to what to do. Yes a part of her wanted to lead him on but the other part was confused and unknown. She was only eighteen and she just did not want to do something that would ruin her life and career.

Angad saw the same thing in Kripa's eye that he felt and just took the shirt he had thrown at her and had Kripa put both her arms through the sleeves. Angad started to button the shirt from the top to the bottom, letting the tips of his fingers touch Kripa's chest and stomach.

"Remember I said if something is to happen it will, tonight is not that time" By saying that Angad picked Kripa in his arms and lied her into bed tucking the sheeting in so she would not get cold. Angad then closed the lights and, lied be side her looking into her innocent face while she just looked back with out saying a word.

Ok every one, it took me a very long time to write this part so you all better comment and tell me truthfully of what you think of this part, even the slient readers out there. you have to comment other wise i will quit writeing such long part and spend the rest of my three months summer in my pool or the forest across my house.

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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow. awesome part. ak r soooooooo cute.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awesome part..... can't beleive kripa acutually ran away.....well continue soon...can't wait 2 read wat happens next. 👏
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Originally posted by: pal89711

awesome part..... can't beleive kripa acutually ran away.....well continue soon...can't wait 2 read wat happens next. 👏

thanks for the great comment

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Posted: 18 years ago
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sooo cuteee. lovedd both partss😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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u r the best!!
thanx for updating another part!

angad's past is soo sad

loved the romance and teasing part part

Edited by desiqt8806 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow. rani. good job. im impressed. 😉
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wow... tht was such a hot prt!!! 👏
👏 i LOVED it!!! Angad's
life story was kinda sad... it must be REALLY cool to have ur own
perrsonal secret suite in a hotel, one tht u can use anytime u want!!! i was
hoping tht AK wud atleast kiss in this prt... but no... 💔 lol... jk... the prt
when Kripa said u lok hotter than fire shirtless was soooo cheesy &
funny... i was lmao... i TOALLY love this FF!!! it is sooo unique & cute... i
love when Angad calls Kripa princess & Kripa calls Angad prince rider...
anywazzz... i CANNOT wait to read more... continue soon!!! 😛

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