perfect pair!(kyunki saas)last part pg.24 - Page 2

part 4


kt and laksh woke up to the noise of people banging on there door

kt:laksh wake up

l:mhhhhh.......

he pulled ke closer

kt:laksh wake up!

kt shook him and he opened his eyes

l:WHAT!

kt opened the door for eklovia and manthan guys


e:were gonna go swimming get ready!

laksh went to the washroom to take a shower

piya:kt u can go shower in our bedroom heres the keys


kt grabbed some clothes and took a shower

kt opened the door to see piya and nikky waiting

n:lets go kt the boys r waiting for us

p:u have ur bikini under that rite

kt:yeaa!

they all went to the beach that was infront of there hotel

kt and nikky went to the changerooms to change there clothes while piya went and told them they be back in a few minutes


the 3 girls changed

and wlaked towards the guys

laksh was amazed at how hot kt looked

eklovia looked away because he didn't want piya to think he was staring at her


manthan was also suprized

laksh held kt hand and led her to the water and they spalshed and played sinec they were the youngest

manthan and nikky just sat on a blanket nikky was i guess getting a tan while manthan kept staring at her thinking about what he did yesterday


piya and eklovia was talking

nikky:what r u staring at?

m:um u!

n:dont stare

m:ill stare at what ever i want!

n:and what about yesterday what was that about!

m:what!

n:that kiss?

m:oh.....................nothing

nikky rolled her eyes

after a few hours they had changed and were walking back to there hotel to get some lunch


to be continued

awesome part..this is a nice fanfic..good work! 😆
Continue Soon!! 😉
Love,
Zinu 👏

part 5

after eating lunch the cuples went back to there rooms to get some rest ............well mybe just laksh,eklovia,piya and kt wen tto go rest manthan and nikky were gonna fight

nikky went into the room first and took a shower because they were just playing in the water at the beach

when she came out she saw nobody in the room manthan had gone some where so nikky climbs into the bed and makes herself relax


it was realy hot so she went to open the window and guess what she saw......................................................... ............................................................ .............


manthan was flirting with this girl!

well manthan was just asking her if she had the time

but nikky didn't know that

nikky was shocked

nikky stomped back to the bed and picked up the phone

she was going to call her mom

nobody picked up so she hung up and started to cry

n:why did i have to end up with manthan?hes always so mean to me and he dosent even cre that he's merried!

she went to her suit case and pulled out a picture of her and manthan from there engagment

she ripped it an have and kept the picture of her and threw the picture of manthan on the ground

nikky cried and whiped her tears

she looked at some papers of the hotel and saw there was a spa downstiars so she left anote for manthan saying she was at the spa


she was getting a massage from this MAN!

when manthan came into his room he saw the note and he saw the picture of him on the ground

he felt bad

so manthan went downstiars to the spa and asked the reseptionest if nikky virani was there

the redeptionest led him to the room nikky was getting pampered in

he opened the door and saw that nikky had gotten her hair curled and cut





(it's like that but it's just that her hair is black with some brown streaks)


she had also gotten her nails done she was now just reading a book waiting for her toe nails to dry

manthan thought she looked beutifull

nikky looked up

n:what r u doing in here

m:man i just wanted to see my wife

n:why don't u go see that girl u were flirting with outside

m:um.......what!

n:i saw u flirting with that women outside the 1 with blond hair and a short SHORT skirt and tight clothes!

M:U MISUNDERSTOOD!i was just asking for the time so just chill!

n:how can i chill when my husbands a beast

she started to tear up

manthan now had sat down

n:u disrespect me and treat me like i am nothing.u come home late like 1 in the morning everyday.u dont even come when were having pooja's.

manthan was now starting to cry a little to becuase he realised what he had done

nikky was crying alot

n:u know how it feels!MANTHAN i thought it would off been great marrying u because ur family is so perfect but ur not! piya and kt r getting alon with there husbands but U ,u just totaly ignore the fact that ur merried and have a wife!


manthan whiped his tears he couldn't belive he was crying himself he left because he new he was going to cry more if he heard nikky talk about him

he went back to the room

she collapsed on the bed

m:I AM SO SSRRY!nikky i've been such a fool what will i do to make this up to u!


that night manthan did not come back to his room he went to the bar and got drunk then at 1 o clock laksh had gotten up and was gonna go get a water bottle and saw that manthan was drinking


he stopped him and took him back to his room he reached into his pocket and pulled out a key then laksh opened the door and lay him on the bed next to nikky who was sleeping

laksh then left

in the morning nikky woke up because manthan was moving around sine he had drunk so much the night before he was sick

nikky was suprised to see manthan beside her holding het head

n:where were u last night?

m:i was at the bar and the i remember laksh brought me to my room..........ow my head hurts

n:why were u drinkig?

m:cause i was worried that nikky wouldn't for give me...............omg nikky what r u doing here?


(manthan didn't actually know he was talking to nikk he thought he was talking to him mom bacause he had a head ache)

n:manthan! she started to cry

n:u scared me i thought something had happened to u

nikky got up

manthan did too

m:nikky for yesterday i was so sorry what i have done to u was very wrong u deserve more then i gave u and i am sorry


nikky smiled a little

m:i also love u!

nikky was shocked she opened her mouth to say something but notheing came out

m:from the first dy i saw u i thought u were beutifull and now u showed me that u r not just a preat face but ur personality is beutifull too..well when i see u talking to kt or my mom.it's just i was sad that i wasmerried it ment i had to get a job and yeah.

m:just remember i realy am sorry and i love u

manthan was gonna go outside but he was stopped by a hand

he turned around

n:sit down ill give u some advil

nikky pulled manthan to the bed she made him lie down and she gave him some advil and some water

nikky was about to leave

when manthan got her hand and pulled her close

he kissed her on the cheek and she kissed him on the head 😃


to be continued

part 6


this part is all bout eku and piya

piya woke up she streached her arms she was on the bed and eklovia was on the sofa because hes realy nice


piya looked at eklovia he was sleepinf she went and took a shower and came out wearing this





she had curled her hair

she saw eklovia who was looking over some files

p:EKLOVIA..................oh eku why r u doing ur work this is ur honey moon it's youre time to relax not WORK!

she grabbed the file from eklovia

e:pleazzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz!!!!!!he reached for the file that piya had in her hands


p:no!go take a sower and get ready and lets go get some breakfest

eklovia took a shower

piya had actually got some fruits and yougurt fromt the restrunt and brought it to there room

she had put it on a coffee table

eklovia sat down and ate some peaches,srawberrys and yougurt

piya waited for him to finish

e:piya what r u waitinh for eat..........

p:yea i already did!

eku nodded

piya got up and walked to the window

she opened it the breeze went into the room

eku smiled

he got up a walked towards her and went close to her ear

piya got scared kinda

e:wheres my file>he wispered in her ear

piya turned arounf and gave him a look

p:eku!!!!!!!!!!!!!she playfully hit him on the shoulder

eku smiled he sat down

eku's thoughts

oh man piya i wish i could hug u i love the way u call me EKU.i love ur hair and personality HELL i love u but how can i tell u?


e:hey piya u wanna go for a walk outside

p:lets go

piya grabbed some sunglasses and her purse and went outside with eku

they were walking in the tropical forest trail

they saw some monkeys

and beside the monkey's they saw kt and laksh taking some pictures of them

kt:HEY guys!

l:can u guys take out picture

e:shure

laksh bent down anfron of eku and then kt came behind him and hugged him

eku took the picture

kt:well take a picture of u guys!

piya was about to say no but eku said shure

piya couldn't say no know

eklovia stood next to a tree and then piya came and stodd beside him

l:oh u guys caommon pose a little

kt walked towards thim and pushed piye close to eku she hit eku's strong body with her own

kt took eku's arms and made them wrap around piya's waist


kt:there u go

l:now smile

they took the picture and kt ran of becuase she saw a fountain and laksh said byt to them and falowed kt

eku and piya continued walking

eku moved his hand closer and closer to piya's

he clutched her hand all of a sudden

he heard piya's hear beat faster and faster

he took piya by the shoulder's and pinned her against a tree


to be continued

i will continue from manthan and nikky's part then eku and piya! 😃

OMG!ur fanfic is so cool......update soon and nikky 😆 thants ur name !ask ur mom if u can come over it's aman!

Originally posted by: moti55

OMG!ur fanfic is so cool......update soon and nikky 😆 thants ur name !ask ur mom if u can come over it's Aman!

hey AMAn i didn't know u went on india forums thank u for the commant and i didn't know u watched kyunki saas

gr8 fanfic just read the whole thing 👏 👏 .gr8 work i hope the next part kt & laksh near the fountain. 😳 😳

part 7

this is a kt and laksh part

kt ran to the fountain she put her hand in the water she closed her eyes laksh came to her and thought she was crazy

he put his hands in the water and SPLASHED her

kt opened her eyes

kt:LAKSH!

she punched him on the shoulder real hard


"OWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!"

he held is shoulder in pain

kt:omg laksh did that hurt?

laksh looked at her

l:hell ya

kt touched his shoulder then laksh pushed her towards him and hugged her

kt;laksh let go

laksh rubbed his cheek on hers

kt:LAKSH!

laksh held her by the waist and kisseed her neck

kt pushed him away

laksh was walking towards her and kt was walking back

she stepped on a rock and fell into the fountain

the water splashed everywhere and laksh started to laugh

he couldn't stop laughing

kt:errrrrrrrr!

laksh held his stomach because it hurt from laughing so much

kt got out of the fountain she was soaked head to toe

she touched her hair she had curled it now it was all wet and ruined

kt came close to laksh and pushed him into the fountain

laksh grabbed onto her shoulder and she fell in wit him agin

laksh started to laugh

kt splashed him with some water

they started to play in the fountain

laksh got realy close to kt and kissed her neck and then her shoulder that was bare becuase her tank top was wet and so her shirt was kinda of her shoulders

kt blushed and pulled her sleave up and then laksh kissed her on the lips!

the kiss was long and passionate they finally pulled out

kt hugged him realy tight

kt:oh i can't believe this is our last day in hawaii


now ill continue like with all the couples

manthan had took a short nap and woke up and then him and nikky took a walk and joined kt and laksh and eklovia and piya for dinner

the next day they cought there flight and went home

they walked into sn

and every1 welcomed them and they went straight to there rooms to rest

to be continued

Great part. By the way, did you read my and zinu29's FF? It's "Dil ka Rishta". If you are interested do read and comment. It's like me and her doing one FF together.
Here is the link. https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/617434/dil-ka-rishta-lk-part34-page36?pn=1I loved your FF's too.

awe such a cute part 😊
sad the honeymoon was over 😒
do continue soon 😆
Love,
Zinu 👏