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cute part .............kripa jealous 😆
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OH YA GUYS, AALIYA HAS A SON NAMED RAHUL.

Angad and Kripa stand holding each other.

A: Kripa...

K: Shut Up Angad ok, mera paar dukh raha hai, aur tum yaha par aaisa...

A: Disappointed- Oh, maina soocha- He helps her back to the bed and sits down next to her... Main soocha

K: Naughty- Tumna kya sooch Angad?

Angad looks into Kripa's eyes, he figures that Kripa is enjoying to see Angad in this state.

A: Hurt- Kripa, ek baat batao.

K: Kya?

A: Kuch Nahie... main abhi aata ho.

Angad gets up to leave when Kripa holds his hand.

A: Kya hua Kripa.

K: Tumna khana khaya?

A: Haan...

K: Jooth.

Angad doesn't reply, and Kripa lets go of Angad's hand.

A: Tum betho main tumahra liya khana le kar aata ho.

Angad leaves the room.

K: Kabhi nahie sudraga.

A few minutes later Angad comes back with dinner and hands the plate to Kripa.

A: Aur kuch chaiya?

K: Haan

A: Kya?

K: Sit Down Angad, ur my husband, not my servant.

A: Nahie Kripa..

K: Theek hai, tum jao, mujhko bhook nahie hai.

She puts the plate to aside and picks up her book.

A: Kripa ziddh mat karo..

K: Angad zidh main nahie tum kar raha ho.

Angad throws his hand in the air and sits down across Kripa holding the plate in his hand.

Angad moves his hand to feed Kripa but she holds his hand and feeds him first.

K: Teary- Tumahra khay bhina maina ajj tak nahie khaya tho aaj kaisa khathi.

A: Kripa tum hum dono ko yeh saaza kyun de rahi ho?

Kripa takes the plate from Angad's hands and puts it to aside.

A: Tum mujhse door reha kar kudh ko nahie, mujhko saaza de rahi ho, main tumko bauth door raha ho, ab aur nahie.

Kripa moves closer to Angad and holds his face.

K: I'm sorry Angad...

A: Sorry? Har baar sorry... pata nahie kis idiot na yeh word baanya, sorry?

Kripa laughs at Angad's childish behavior as she wipes her tears.

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After dinner.

Kripa stands next to her window, her body supported by the wall, she stares up at the moon, as she thinks back to New York, and the kiss Angad and Kripa shared. Soon Kripa feels Angad's arms slip around her. Kripa lets herself lean on Angad now, Angad follows Kripa's gaze to the moon.

A: Kya dek rahi ho?

K: Kuch Nahie Angad.

A: Aagar kuch nahie tho cholo, u shouldn't stand for to long.

Kripa turns around and holds Angad's arm for support, Angad looks into Kripa's almost silver eyes. Angad moves closer to Kripa, and before that second can pass he kisses Kripa, in the long period of 2 years, finally Angad and Kripa share a long kiss, finally Kripa breaks the kiss and hugs Angad tightly.

K: I love you Angad.

A: I love you too Kripa...

Angad picks her up and lays her down in bed, kisses her good night and makes her go to sleep.

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3 MONTHS LATER

Kripa is sitting next to Angad while he talks to someone on the phone, suddenly Kripa feels nauseous and runs into the bathroom. Angad puts the phone down and waits for her outside. Kripa comes out wiping her face.

A: Holding her shoulders- Kripa kya hua tum theek ho na?

K: Angad calm down jaan, I'm fine!

A: Good!

K: Um… Angad..

A: Kya?

K: Angad I think…

A: U think Kripa???

K: I think

A: I don't know what do think, lakin I think we should go out for a few days.

K: No. Aacha pelha meri baat tho suno.

A: Kya hai Kripa???

K: I think…. That… I'm…

A: I'm, ur… what KRIPA?

K: Angad, I think I pregnant!

A: Good news Kripa, ok cholo ab soota hai.

K: ANGAD?????? Tumna lagtha hai theek sa suna nahie, I'm pregnant.

Angad looks at her- Tum jooth tho nahie bol rahi.

Kripa puts her hands on her hips and tilts her head. Angad ur mad…

A: Kripa, u serious??

K: Haan Angad, I'm serious.

Angad jumps in joy and twirls Kripa around as well.

K: Angad. Kya kar raha ho, rukho naa…

Angad stops and tightly hugs Kripa.

A: I'm the happiest person alive at this moment!

Kripa pulls away from his and holds his hand- Angad I need you this time, please mujhko ek baar phir…

Angad covers her mouth and hugs her again- Pechli baar jo hua meri majboori thi, mera bas chala tho main tumko kabhi bhi chor kar na jao- ek pal tumko akela na choro.

A: I love you Kripa..

K: I love you too Angad.

A: This really call for a celebration!!!!!!

K: Matlab?

A: Um… how about a dance with my lady love?

Angad puts his hand out for Kripa, who takes it. Angad pulls her closer and twirls her around. Angad and Kripa dance hold each other, reliving every moment even spend together.

Next Morning.

Angad wakes up before Kripa, takes a shower and makes her breakfast in bed. When Kripa wakes up she finds Angad not beside him, she looks into the bathroom but he's not there either. Kripa is a little worried, and scared now.

K: Angad…

Kripa is standing her back towards the door, Angad quiely comes in and sets the tray down and creeps up behind Kripa.

A: AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

K: Ahhh, she quickly turns around and hugs Angad, who hugs her back laughing.

K: ANGADDDDDDDD, I hate u soooo much! God, dara diya na mujhko, meri jaan he nichal gyi thi.

A: Ok baba sorry. He kisses her cheeks. I have a surprise for u!

K: Kya?

A: Breakfast in bed!

K: Aw, cho chweet!

A: I know…

K: Main brush kar aao?

A: Ya!

Kripa leaves into the bathroom to brush, and then comes out in a little bit. Angad makes her sit back down in her bed and puts the tray in her lap.

K: Angad ur the sweetest ever!

A: I know…

Anagd feeds Kripa and she takes a sip of her coffee.

K: Lakin is sab ki kya zaroraat thi?

A: Kykuni aaj sat um koi kaam nahie karogi! Sab kuch main karoga! Tum sirf aaram karogi!

K: Moti ho jaogi Angad!

A: Tho ho jao

K: Angad ur too much! Main saara kam karogi ok.

A: Lakin kyun?

K: Yeh mera liya, aur inka liya aacha!

Angad grins and Kripa finishes her toast and puts the tray away. Angad puts his head in her lap and hugs him around her waist, kissing her stomach.

A: Kirpa, I want a baby girl!

K: Main janti ho.

A: Kaisa?

K: Because all father want a girl!

A: Really?

K: Haan?

A: Tumko kaisa pata?

K: Jab main Arjun ka saath pregnant thi tab maina pregnancy book read kie Thi?

A: Kyun?

K: Hits his head lightly- Stupid, mera saath aur koi jo nahie thi.

A: Oh! Kaaash main hota.

K: Kassh! Kher ab yeh saab choro, aur we have to go to the Dr.

K: Waisa vo hai kaha?

A: Vo dadi ka saath mandir gya hua hai?

K: Yeh mera bata kam aur Dadi and Aaliya ka beta sayda lagtha hai.

A: Its good!

K: Kyun?

A: Kukuni vo tumahra saath chipka retha aur tum mujhse door rethi.

K: Angad??? Ur really too!

1 years later.

Angad and Kripa and blesses with two beautiful daughters, Nisha and Neha! (lol, I couldn't find names)

Kripa puts Nisha in the crib beside Neha and goes to sit down beside Angad, Angad is about to puts his arms around her when Neha starts crying.

A: Kripa, ek rona band karthi hai tho doosri shru!

Kripa laughs and goes to Neha, and caresses her head until she falls asleep.

K: Angad tum betho main Arjun jo dek kar aati ho.

A: Sighs, Ok!

Kripa smiles and leaves to check on Arjun, to Angad's good faith he's sleeping peacefully, w/ Aaliya son Rahul, and Aaliya sleeps besides both of them.

Kripa walks to Aaliya and wakes her up.

K: Aaliya utho…

Aaliya slowly opens her eyes and stands up when Josh comes storming in.

J: AAALIYA?????

Aa: JOSH CHUP!!!!!

J: Oh sorry…

K: Bahar cholo!

They all go outside and close the door behind them.

K: Tum dono bilkul ek jaisa ho, waha Angad impatient hai aur jaha Josh tum!

Aa: Sach much…

A: KRIPAAAAAA

K: Lo aawaz aaygi! I'll go now- good night guys.

Aa-Josh: Good night.

Kripa walks back to her room and slips into bed next to Angad.

K: Angad u have no patients!

A: Thanks Kripa, lakin aagar mera pass patients nahie tho tumahara pass time nahie, saara din ya tho tum Arjun ka saath hoti aur ka phir Nisha ya Neha ka pass.

K: Aacha abhi kis ka pass ho?

A: That doesn't count abhi tumko neend aay jaygi aur tum so jaogi, aur main…

K: aur tum, tum yaha par betha betha mujhko dekho ga aur mujhko taang karoga.

A: Aur nahie tho kya.

K: Bol liya, ab meri sunno.

Kripa rests her head on Angad's chest and hugs him closing her eyes- Agar tumko yaad hai tho kal subha humari wedding anniversary hai!

A: How can I forget the day, the day I made the biggest mistake of my life!

K: ANGAD???

She pulls away from him and turns the other way.

A: Kya yaar, I was kidding.

K: Whatever…

A: Kripa.

He pulls back and she hugs him again.

A: Main maazak kar raha tha, I can never regret marrying u!

K: I know that!

A: Good, so now cont with what you were saying.

K: Kuch nahie kal subha batao gi!

A: Ok!

Kripa lays down now- Good night Angad!

A: Dekha…

Kripa opens her eyes and turns towards Angad.

K: Kya hua?

A: Kuch nahie- good night.

Kripa kisses Angad and they both sleep.

Next Morning.

Kripa wakes up and showers.

She goes and feeds Nisha and Neha, who fall asleep soon again. Now she fixes breakfast for the house and goes to wake up Angad. BUT, to her surprise Angad is already up and ready.

K: Good morning Angad

A: Happy anniversary Kripa!

Kripa smiles at walks to him and gives him a warm hug.

K: Same to you!

A: Tumna mujhko uthaya kyun nahie?

K: Maina sooch ki main tumko soona do.

A: Kyun?

K: Taaki tum mujhko tang na karo and I can get some work done.

A: Oh really!

K: Oh yes.

A: Aacha give my gift now.

K" Gift???

A: Gift!

K: Well…

Kripa kisses Angad with all her love and the breaks away, yeh tha tumahara pelha gift

A: Aur doosra?

K: Well, she hugs him once again- Tum humasha boolta ho na, I don't spend time with you, aaj ka saara din main tumahra saath raho gi, tum mera saath jo karnaa chatha ho karo!

A: Good!

K: Mera gift!

A: Ab rukho! Have patients Mrs. Angad Khanna!

Kripa and Angad leave the house, and go to the mandir first, and then they go to the beach, and lastly they have a romantic candel night dinner in a hotel Angad books for them alone.

Kripa sits across Angad, and looks at him with loving eyes.

Angad gets up and walks next to Kripa and kneels down in front of her.

K: Angad kya kar raha ho?

A: I'm gonna propose to u!

K: But I'm already married TO YOU!

A: I know.. just wait and watch.

K: Ok…

Angad takes out a beautiful ring and holds it in front of Kripa.

A: Kripa, will you marry me in every life u live? Will you be mine till the time this world ends.

Kripa is shocked at Angad words- her heart fills with joy

K: I will!

Angad smiles and slips the ring into her figure, Kripa holds his face and kisses both his cheeks.

K: Angad, I love you!

A: I love you too.

They finish there dinner and head back.

Angad drives while Kripa looks out the window into the sky. Suddenly the car stops.

A: Ab isko kya hua?

K: Bahar nichal kar dekhoga tho pata chala ga na.

Angad gets out and opens the bounet, from while comes out gas. Kripa gets out of the car and shuts the door.

A: Kripaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa yeh tumna kya kiya.

K: Kya?

A: Sweeheart we are locked out, and the key is inside! And my cell is inside

K: What!

A: Yep!

Kripa walks to Angad when suddenly it starts raining. Kripa and Angad look around and find a small barn across them.

Angad walks in front of Kripa, who suddenly gets her heal stuck in something and falls on top of Angad who falls on the floor. Luckily its all hay and he gets saved from hurting him self.

A: Kya jathka tha!

K: Kripa flips her her of her face and tries to sit up, but falls back down.

K: Angad choro mujhko.

A: Kyun?

K: Aaisa he!

A: Tho main bhi nahie choroga, aaisa he!

Kripa looks into his naught eyes, and smiles at him- Angad tum bauth shataan ho, utna he uitna college main tha!

A: I know that!

K: Tho mujhko choro ab?

A: Nahie

K: Angad????

A: Ok fine.

Kripa rolls away from Angad and lays beside him closing her eyes.

Angad just looks at a relaxed Kripa, and moves closer to her, Kripa opens her eyes when she feels Angad's hot breath on her cheeks.

Kripa just looks at Angad, who slowly moves closer.

Angad's lips slowly meet Kripa's when the camera freezes, and the story ends!

Ok I know it's a retarted but I had to end it! Hey but its unique! Lolzzzzzzzzz

Neha!

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Posted: 19 years ago
very very nice end
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Posted: 19 years ago
Beautiful ending neha !!!!!!!!!!!!!! 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
dat was an amzing ending 😃 k-a forever together
now i cant say cont soon 😭
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: hot_girl_2525

dat was an amzing ending 😃 k-a forever together
now i cant say cont soon 😭

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Posted: 19 years ago
it was so sweet,amazing ending 👏 👏 ,and now even i cant say cont soon 😆 but wait u have other fan fics too 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
nice ending neha loved it
it was a really nice part 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
Great story. Very nice ending. 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
it was a gr8 story n a even more beautiful ending 👏

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