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Posted: 20 years ago

Wow, that was great...👏Keep up the good work!!!

Plz continue...

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Posted: 20 years ago
tat was really good Eshika!! plz cont soon!!
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that was awsome eshika!! plzz continue soon!!!1
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cant wait to see wat kripa will do to him!!
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Posted: 20 years ago

PLEASE CONTINUE THAT WS SO GOOD😊

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Posted: 20 years ago
eshika, continue fast. I loved it.
luv ya
take care
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awesome eshika! hey check out my new fan fic, ok, keep writing! awesome story!
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Prithvi's party cont

The party is still going on……… Angad n kripa r sitting next 2 each other….. there is a starange kind of uncomfortable silence between them ………..

Kripa is lookin here n there as if searchin 4 something……

Kripa 2 herself: gwaddddddddd yeh kuch bolta kuyn nahi….????

A 2 himself: kyaaa musibaat hai !!!! aab main isshse kyaaa baat karoo….. aagar josh ka challenge na hota tohhh ish ladki kit oh main!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Dress style change karne se kyaaa hota hai….??? Aabhi tak wohi attitude hai….. behenjee waali……!!!

Then again kripa is lookin here n there …..

A: kisi ko dudhd rahi ho kyaaa???

K: nahi main toh bas yese hi….

A: kripa ek baat poochu???

K: hummmm

A: kyaaa tum ne mujhe sach mai maaf kardiya…????

K: kuyn ??? tumhe aaisa kuyn lagta hai ?

A: actually kripa…… mujhse kabhi bhi kisi ladki ne usss tarah se baat nahi ki.. jiss tarah se tumne ki…..issilye sayed main kuch jyaada hi over react kar gaya… I'm really sorry…..

K 2 herself: yesa lagta hai jaise saach main hi maafi mang raha hai…….. aagar iske plan ka pata na hota toh main toh aagayee hoti iske bato main…….. natak baaz kaheen ka … acting bhi kyaaaa kamal ka karta hai……

A: kyaaa soch rahi ho kripa??? Lagta hai tumne mujhe aabhi tak maaf nahi kiya….

K( giving that fake smile): aaery nahi baba ush baat ko toh main kab ki bhoola chuki hoon….aab toh hum frens hai nah right?????? So frens se kaise maafi????

A 2 himself: tum ne saayed mujhe maaf kiya hoga Ms kripa Sharma… lekin maine nahi…….. tumhare saath toh mai yesa khilwad karoonga kit um zindagi bhar yaad rakhogeee Angad Khanne se ulazne ka anzaam…..

K 2 herself: bewakuffff!!!! Aapne aap ko bahot smart samj ta hai……. Lagraha hoga ki maine isse sach main maaf kardiya…… issko pata nahi main isske saath kyaaaa khel khelne wali hoon……..

A: kripa main yeh kaise maanloo ki tumne mujhe maf kiya????

K: arey aab kyaaa sab k samne chillak kahoo ki maine tumhe maaf kiya…..???

A: no no no itna jyaada karne ki koi zaroorat nahi… bas ek dance karlo mere saath…..

He then kneels down in front of kripa makin a cute innocent boy type of face…..

A: may I have the honour of dancing with the beautiful lady plzzz!!!!!!

K( all smiling): y not????

It was a soft romatic number goin on but suddenly the song changes 2

Teri kurthi sexy lagti ve…. Kurthi sexy….

Teri chunari sexy lagti vee .. chunari sexy….

Then both of them just look into eachothers eyes n burst out laughing……

Prithvi n Damini Bose

D: prithvi beta….. tumne mujhe bataya nahi ki tumhari kripa se mulakaat kab huwee….

P: aarey mom… aaj suba hi toh mila hoon usse main…..

D: ooo hooo toh itne kam time main voh aapki itni aachi dost kaise ho gayee…????

Prithvi is all blushing…….. n all embarrassed

D: she's sweet nah…..???

P: mom!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Plzzzzz….

D: okay baba okay naaraz kuyn hote ho !!!! mazak bhi nahi kar sakti kyaa aapne bete k saath????

Then prithvi is all smiling n lookin at kripa……

Okay 2 B continued….

Guyzzz plzzz read my new fac fic named Vaada- the promise

Love ya

Eshika 😛

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Posted: 20 years ago
wow that waz really good continue soon!
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Posted: 20 years ago
awesome part, brilliant pls pls pls post the nxt part asap 😛

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