City of Devils - Chapter 7, page 18; 6/21 - Page 8

poor angad... but he deserved it...
continue soon

Originally posted by: berkeleygirl818

wow... tht was AESUM!!! 👏
👏 i LOVED it, but REALLY
short!!! lol... awww... Angad still loves her... sooo cute... i think he shud
try and win her back!!! i hope he does!!! feel bad for him, he must be
devastated tht Kripa has a kid!!! 💔 anywazzz... his FF is soooo different
& unique & it has sum of my fav characters in it, like Brucas!!! 😍 i
CANNOt wait to read more... continue soon!!! 😛

aw THANKS! your comment made my dayy 😃 yup angad still loves her😳😳 and thank you - I LOVE BRUCAS too. i hate peyton&lucas. EW. haha thanks againn😳

Originally posted by: muqualp

its sooo good keep it upp

thankss muqu 😳

Originally posted by: amneetkaur_24

wow, i love this fan fiction! Fabulous part and Cont. Soon!

lol thankss😳 and i will.

Originally posted by: kriti_6teen

poor angad... but he deserved it...
continue soon

lol yeahh he deservedd it. but it'll get better!

just catched up awesome parts,i loved the way uve written it its so different from other ff anyways i cant wait till theyre meet and even though i love angad to bits i hope kripa punches him ..and then i suppose he can cum round to my house and ill put the medicine on him lolz anyways that was awesome pls cont soon 😛

shaz

OMG..THAT WAS STUNNING.

CONTINUE SOOOONNN! cant wait.

nice part
keep it up
plz cont soon

Originally posted by: memze

just catched up awesome parts,i loved the way uve written it its so different from other ff anyways i cant wait till theyre meet and even though i love angad to bits i hope kripa punches him ..and then i suppose he can cum round to my house and ill put the medicine on him lolz anyways that was awesome pls cont soon 😛

shaz

thankk youu :] and different how? like bad, or good? lol and HAHA no he'd have to stop by mine firstt 😉😆

City of Devils

That Undeniable Spark.

"Her name's Neha! She's my new Aunt's daughter!" She squealed, obviously excited to have a new friend.

"And who's your new aunt?" Piya chuckled to herself.

"My new aunt's name is aunt kripa! She's very pretty!" Piya merely nodded and stood up. She looked towards a shocked and hurt angad. She walked to Angad and put a hand on his shoulder.

"I'm sorry." She whispered. He nodded and went back to his car, realizing he forgot his cell phone in there.

She had a daughter. She was probably with someone then. He sighed, sadly. Prithvi walked out of the house, worry etched on his face.

"What happened man?" He asked.

"She has a daughter." Angad replied, and Prithvi already knew what he was talking about. Prithvi knew exactly how much Kripa meant to Angad, and he was willing to do whatever he could to help Angad win her back.

"I'm sorry man. But maybe," He paused for a moment, forming words in his head, "maybe she's not with whoever it is."

Angad shrugged and gave Prithvi a manly hug before re-entering the condo.

***

Kripa stretched in the king sized bed, and out of habit, flipped over and put her arm over Neha. No Neha? She slowly opened her eyes and took a good look around the room. No Neha.

She got up and went to the top of the staircase after looking in every open door, and saw Neha eating pancakes with Lucas, Brooke, and Audrey. Kripa scrambled down the stairs and walked straight to Neha.

"Honey, you know very well that you are supposed to gently wake mommy up and tell her you're going downstairs when you do!" She said, frustrated.

"But that would ruin your sleep mommy!" Neha said, pulling off the angelic smile.

"Yeah, but that's better than waking up, searching for your darling baby when you could be sleeping knowing your baby is downstairs eating pancakes." Kripa said, taking a bite out of her pancakes and then going to give Lucas, Brooke and Audrey kisses on their cheeks.

"Uh, hi guys!" A shy voice said, weakly. Kripa turned around. She knew that voice, that voice of treason.

"Hello, Piya." Kripa said, coldly. She wasn't mad anymore. But she hadn't forgiven nor had she forgotten.

Brooke got up and hugged Piya, Lucas in tow. Two seconds later, a handsome man with short dark brown hair, brown eyes, wearing jeans and a polo walked in, side to side with the man Kripa had avoided for years now. The man who she had given her heart to, trusted with her eyes closed, who she had loved unconditionally, the man who had broke her heart – leaving no one to pick up the pieces, stood next to the other guy – his head bent in anxiousness. The three went around the table saying their hellos to Lucas and Brooke. Kripa was next.

"Hi, I'm Prithvi. I'm Piya's boyfriend." Prithvi said, extending his hand.

Kripa reached for it, gripping it firmly, "I'm Kripa, Piya's ex-best friend." She said bitterness evident in her voice.

He chuckled and quirked an eyebrow, "so I've heard. I'm going to guess the brown kid's yours?"

It was her turn to chuckle this time, "Yeah, her name's Neha." She said, catching a glimpse of Angad to see if he showed any emotion as she said that. However she wasn't ready for what she saw. She saw pain; frustration, hurt and maybe a hint of tears cloud his eyes. That maddened her. He had no right to be upset by the fact that she had a child. He lost her a long time ago, and there was no way she was putting herself through that again. As if to prove it to herself, she walked past him, head held high and all, brushing her shoulder on his on the way. She couldn't deny the spark that buzzed through her body as she did that though, she sighed. This was not the way she wanted this to go. She did not want to fall back in love with him again, or even question her hate for him. But who ever said she was out of love with him?!

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