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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: berkeleygirl818

OMG... another FF by u... moi is soooooo excited!!!! i LOVE ur FF's!!!! 😳
this sounds sooooooo interesting & also my fav jodis... nd all of them r
already married.... so no worries!!!! i CANNOT wait till wednesday... ur
gonna continue on ur lil sis's b'day.... schoooo schweetttt!!!! 😛

awwwww thnku so much😳yep my fav jodis aswell yep already married😃lol yep im so sweet😳😆

Originally posted by: nehagupta_9

Awesome concept!!! Cnt wait for u to start this ff!!!!! Luv all ur other ffs as well!!!!

awww thnku so much😳

Originally posted by: ice _girl

post d 1st part soon n interesting concept n keep writing such good stories 😊 😊

thnk u so much😳

Originally posted by: Chotii

oooo cool! so this is anuva 1 of ur 'mixd couple' ones... oooo wow! i never actuly read mixed coupled ones cos its jus ak all the way 4 me.. 😛 but, but, but.. i'l definetly b readin this 2 c how its gonna b goin!!
xx!MWAH!xx
wil continu readin once u start!! 😃
xx Saz xx

yep another "mixed couples"😆lol good girl😆thnkz hun

Originally posted by: monikaseth

👏 wow great pl conti soon 👏

thnku😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
#12
nice intro can't wait for the first part 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#13
sounds interestin.waitin for the first part
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Posted: 18 years ago
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i luv dconcept!! its excellent..keep it up! cant wait 4 d firs prt 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thanx 4 the comments everyone 😊 i just wanna tke this time to wish my younger sister johnrockz96
a very very very happy birthday 😃 😃 😃 n tht i luv her sooo much n hope she has a very good day 😃 🥳 [:D/] 🥳 [:D/] and to let u all know tht i will b updating sometym today when i get home after uni. Again happy bday jas 🤗
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: Gaurav''s Love

thanx 4 the comments everyone 😊 i just wanna tke this time to wish my younger sister johnrockz96
a very very very happy birthday 😃 😃 😃 n tht i luv her sooo much n hope she has a very good day 😃 🥳 [:D/] 🥳 [:D/] and to let u all know tht i will b updating sometym today when i get home after uni. Again happy bday jas 🤗

hmmmmmmm intresting jiiiiiiiiiiii ............... erm UR sisterrrrrrrrrrr kaun hai jiiiiii 😆 shes my sister my dushmannnnnnnnnnnn...................happy brithdayyyyyyyyyy jaaaaaaaaaaappppy 😳 🤗.......... remember to save me some came 😭 as im not home 😆 and clean my roooooooom 😃

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part 1 - This is dedicated to my lil sis Jaspreet (johnrocks96) whose bday it is today😃love you sweetie

The quiet deserted street of Mumbai city, not even a leaf is out of place, but suddenly the atmosphere is disturbed by two roaring cars, a sleek silver Ferrari and a gorgeous black Porsche, they speed down the empty road trying to cut each other off, lets see who wins......the Ferrari takes the lead but the Porsche is not in the mood of losing and revs the engine overtaking the Ferrari. Taking that as a challenge the Ferrari hits 130mph.....then 150....then 170 overtaking the Porsche by miles and skidding to a stop at the finish line. The Porsche pulls up and the door opens, a handsome young man steps out wearing faded blue jeans with a blue driving jacket, he walks over to the Ferrari and opens the door and congratulates the driver, he puts his hand out and the Ferrari driver accepts and allows the Porsche driver to pull him out. He's wearing black boots, faded black jeans with a black jacket. He faces his opponent
guy1 - whats that? the fifth time this week?
guy2 - something like that
guy1 - you really need a new car dude
guy2 - well I'm not like you....changing your cars like you change your clothes Kavya
Kavya (Eijaz Khan) smiles victoriously
Ka - well maybe you should learn to Shlok, that way you won't lose like you always do
Sh - well I better be going, need to go home, Disha will kill me for being late
Ka - yeah me too.....see you at the office tomorrow
Kavya sees Shlok off then gets into his car and , not so fast as he was before, drives home. The Ferrari stops outside a fairly large white house, Kavya steps out and opens the front door and instantly hears a female voice
woman - you're home
Ka - yes I'm home
woman - and what took you so long?
Ka - I had a very important meeting to attend
woman - so this meeting of yours.....does it have anything to do with you racing around on the roads of Mumbai!!!!!
Kavya took his jacket off and placed it in his cupboard, he then unbuttoned the top two buttons of his shirt and took the woman in his arms
Ka - how do you know me so well?
woman - I don't know....probably because I'm your wife! You do remember who I am don't you....Mrs Anjali Nanda (Anita Hasandani)....
Ka - aah the name rings a bell
Kavya smiles and kisses Anjali's cheeks
Ka - sorry my love......Shlok insisted on a re-match
An - and who won?
Ka - me of course
An - one day you will have a major accident.....don't blame me then
Ka - I won't now.....where's my kiss?
Anjali smiles at him and pushes him away
An - no kisses until you help me with the gardening
Ka - Anjali!!! we have so many servants, why must you insist on doing the gardening yourself
An - because unlike you I haven't grown up with servants all around me, I am used to doing things myself even if there are so many servants in this house now are you coming or not!
Kavya nods his head
Ka - let me get changed and I'll join you
Anjali smiles and leaves the room. Now that was our first couple, there are two more....you want to meet them right? well lets go.....to Delhi....A Mercedes stops outside a large building, a man steps out wearing black shows with a grey suit and a white shirt, he walks into the building and everyone greets him politely...well why wouldn't they, he's the owner. He walks into his cabin where his assisstant is waiting
guy - Jenny whats on my agenda for today
J - well sir you have a meeting with Mr Saxena at 10AM, then you need to finalise the Goa deal at 12PM, lunch with your wife at 1PM at her shop, back here for an important business proposal...then....
guy - enough Jenny, you may leave
J - yes sir
The guy smiles and Jenny leaves, the guy sits in his chair and calls for his manager, the manager comes in and the guy stands up
guy - why hasn't the Goa deal been finalised?
M - sir I was....it needs a little work
guy - then why are you standing here for! go do the work!
M - but sir...
guy - what? are you forgetting who you are talking to? I am your boss....Angad Khanna! Owner of Khanna Industries
Angad (Iqbal Khan) snaps his fingers at the manager
A - don't you forget that! now go!
The manager frowns and leaves, Angad sighs and sits on his chair, he picks up the receiver and calls for Jenny
J - yes sir?
A - Jenny my friend please cancel all meetings for today
J - yes sir, any particular reason?
A - yes I'm thinking of having breakfast, lunch and dinner with my wife
Jenny smiles and nods her head, Angad stands up and leaves the building, he gets back into his car and drives off. He stops outside a shop, he looks at the sign "Kripa Fashions" he smiles and goes inside, he hears a woman speaking on the phone
woman - yes maam, your order will be dealt with as soon as possible, thank you for calling.....
She hangs up and calls for her co-worker
woman - Priya! we need to complete an order for Mrs Ahluwalia's party
P - yeah i t will be done, I think someone's just entered the shop, check it out
woman - ok
The woman walks into the shop front and stands behind the counter and without looking up she speaks
woman - how can I help you?
Angad smiles
A - well yes I was hoping to find a sexy dress for my wife
The woman jerks her head up and looks at Angad
woman - really? is it for a special occasion?
A - nope, I just feel like it
woman - well could you tell me what your wife's sizes are?
Angad comes forward and stands behind the counter and eyes the woman up
A - hmm yes she's about the same size as you
woman - i see
Angad continues to come forward until he has the woman against the wall, he puts his hand on her waist and pulls her towards him
A - in fact.....if I'm not mistaken....you are my wife...Kripa?
Kripa (Neha Bamb) smiles at him and puts her arms around his neck
K - I'm surprised you remembered, now what are you doing here?
A - maybe you don't remember, we have lunch plans
K - yes lunch plans....and its now 10 AM, don't you have meetings at work?
A - all cancelled so I can spend the day with you
K - how sweet but I have lots of work
A - not any more, just close up
K - Angad I can't
A - yes you can....here I'll do it for you....Priya!
Priya runs out to the front, Angad faces her and hands her some money
A - take the rest of the day off
P - but
A - go....now
Priya looks at Kripa who has a frustrated look on her face, she simply nods and leaves, Angad smiles then picks up Kripa's bag and jacket, hands them to her and flips the closing sign
A - lets go
K - fine!
Kripa locks up the shop and follows him outside
K - you know one day you will put me out of business
A - then I'll open another one for you, now what shall we have for breakfast?
Angad opened the car door for her and she sat in, he then went over and sat in the driver's seat and drove off. That was our second couple, we still have one more and they are no means any less than the first two, so lets go meet them......in Kolkata.....a fairly large beige house....inside there is a guy holding his ears, he is wearing jeans and a sweatshirt, he's looking at someone so lovingly while holding his ears, he lets them go when he hears his phone ring
guy - yes? no no it needs to be done tonight, no tomorrow will be too late! just get it done, I can't compromise with things like this....do you know what it will do to my reputation...look I understand we went out last night but in the morning I am your boss...Mr Neev Kapoor, now hurry up and don't call me until the job is done
Neev (Jay Bhanushali) hangs up and faces the woman in front of him
N - am i forgiven?
woman - no!
N - come on, don't be mad at me, I never meant to drench you with the hose pipe....I lost control, I said I'm sorry janu
Neev goes forward and hugs the woman and kisses her cheek
N - now stop looking at me like that......people must think what an odd couple we make don't they....I mean I party a lot and you...you stay at home and read, you should live your life...live Prachi (Panchi Bora)
P - come on Neev not the same things again
N - ok ok I won't, now smile
Prachi smiles, Neev hugs her. These are the couples and main characters of this story, you'll learn more about them as the story progresses😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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it wz an excellent prt..keep it up..
i wz online most of d time to see wether u have updated or not lol
nywyz it was very good..continue soon 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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excellent man!!!!luvvd it!!!! 👏 i am sure its gonna be intrsting!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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vely 1st part... it was gr8... luved how u introduced da different chracters, is ur story 3 diff stories or r they all gunna meet or sumthin!!!

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