Dance- Pg 26 NEW PART READ!!

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joti

@love_jaan

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Posted: 18 years ago

#61

HEY JUST CATCH UP WITH YOUR FF AND ITS ROCKING BUT ONE THING WHY ARE AK STUPID SORRY BUT THEY SHOULD STAY TOGETHER BUT HEN WE WOULDN'T BE ABLE TO READ THIS PART BUT UMMMMMMMMM 😕 😕 NEVER MIND I AM KIND OF CONFUSED AND IRRITATE AND IN BAD MOOD 🤢 😡 🤢 SO HOPE YOU CONTI SOON AND HOPE TO READ MORE OF AK TOGEHTER ALL THE BEST 😛 😊

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Cytherea

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Posted: 18 years ago

#62

tht was awesum!!OMG..kripss is going baq to claim his love..lol..i hope rahul dsnt follow her or sumthng..but now the 2 will b closer to each oder once more!!YAY!!awesum update..continue SooN

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sameira

@AKForever

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Posted: 18 years ago

#63

hey that was an awsome part 😊
continue soon

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Ridhi

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Posted: 18 years ago

#64

Awesome ff.
loved it.
both love each other...now can't wait till they meet again.
plz cont. soon.

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Neha

@miss_neha

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Posted: 18 years ago

#65

Awesome part... kool shes gunna try it wid angad... btw i totally luved da last line!!!

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aditi

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Posted: 18 years ago

#66

way 2 go kripa & let u & angad b back 2gether & that 2 4ever

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Moonlight_Ansh

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Posted: 18 years ago

#67

wow great part i like meenal she is such a understanding women and kripa is going back to india cant wait read to wat happens wen the meet.

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kriti mehera

@Love''sAngel

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Posted: 18 years ago

#68

cant wait 2 see AK 2gether... that 2 soon
continue soon

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Laiba

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Posted: 18 years ago

#69

👏 👏 👏 amazing part! loved the last Kripa dialogue👏 cont soon😃

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Amneet

@amneetkaur_24

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Posted: 18 years ago

#70

Meenal left Kripa in the room. After a couple of minutes she got herself together and went back into living room. She smiled and took Rahul's hand in hers and led him outside.

When they reached outside Kripa found it hard to spit the words out.

Rahul- Kripa....is....is everything alright?
Kripa- Oh, yea...well....I have to tell you something Rahul
R- Yea, go ahead
K- I don't want you to hate me after this and I hope you understand me and don't break our friendship
R- Kripa, you're scaring me, come on, tell me, what's going on?
K- Rahul.....I just agreed to date you and....I can't
R- But.....I don't understand, ...why?
K- When I told you about my past, I told you everything but the one fact that mattered the most, .......I didn't come here in a search of a better job....I came here because I felt I had to be away from Angad Khanna.....because I didn't want to fall in love with him, which I knew I would if I stayed there....

The only thing the two heard after that was the wind. Kripa sighed as she tucked her hair behind her ear.

K- Rahul.....it's easy to love in this world, but it's hard to find true friends that will stick with you in the good and bad, I don't want to lose a friend like you

Rahul sighed and smiled weakly.

Rahul- Kripa, if you know you two are meant to be together, then I want to be one of the last people to come between you two. And another thing, we'll always be friends, forever.
Kripa smiled- Thanks Rahul
R- No problem. You've been away from him long enough, do yourself and your Romeo a favor, and go meet him.
Kripa smile and hugged Rahul, who was happy he got to know things before anything between them began.

Later that day, Kripa quit her job and booked her plane tickets to India.

Rishi- Sis, you love him?
K- Yes!
Rishi- Wow.........sorry, but.....who was to know, you'd fall in love with the same man you divorced.
K- I can't wait to go see him!
Meenal- When did you book your plane tickets darling?
K- Tomorrow night, if it were up to me I'd go right now, but....packing and everything, so do you guys want to head back tomorrow too?
Anand- Actually, our return tickets are in about three days, so we'll wait.
Rishi- Yea, I need more time to vacation here
Meenal- But Kripa, did you even start packing yet?
K- No mom, I'm going back to the apartment right now, so bye

Kriapa hugged them and headed back. She saw Alliya sitting and staring at a blank television screen.

Kripa popped down next to her and hugged her.

K- What are you thinking of?
Al- I don't want you to leave at all
K- I'm really sorry Alliya, .....because of me your going to need to find a new roommate too
Al- Finding a roommate won't be a problem, but finding a best friend again will
K- Hey, don't you dare find another best friend, as long as I'm alive we'll be best friends, got it?
Alliya smiled- Got it

Al- You know......I'm thinking about visiting India this summer
K- Oh my gosh! You so should
Al- And if you and Angad get married, then be sure to invite me
K- Your the first person on my invite list
Al- But Kripa.....I may sound selfish for saying this but.......can't you just fall in love with Rahul, stay here with me, continue your life in New York?
K- Alliya, I could stay here, I could live here, keep my job here, but.......I can never fall in love again, because I LOVE HIM!

Alliya laughed and smiled seeing Kripa so happy.
Al- Your crazy
K- What can I say, you wore off on me
Al- That's true. Come on, I'll help you pack
K- Thanks

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Kripa hugged everyone at the airport.
K- You two better come visit me in India
R- We will
Al- Yea, and you better call me every day!
K- I will, bye guys

Rishi- See you in India sis
K- Bye Rishi, don't do anything stupid
R- man sis, trust me
K- I do, bye mom dad
Anand- Bye honey, take care
Meenal- Call us when you get there
K- I will, love you all!

Kripa sat in her flight. Throughout the flight, she was the most hiper person there, she was so happy she was getting to meet Angad, she couldn't sit in her seat.

Kripa looked at the guy next to her. His face was covered by a magazine .

K- Hello

The man finally put his magazine down and looked at Kripa. He had brown hair and green eyes. He was a well built man and very attractive too she had to admit.

man- Hello
K- I'm Kripa, what's your name?
Man- Vijay Malhotra
K- Nice to meet you, so why are you going to India?
Vijay- Other than the fact that I'm Indian and it's my country, erm....a dance show
K- Dance show? Awesome, I love dancing, are you a dancer?!
Vijay- No, but I own the dancing hall where the dancers to plays and stuff, you said you like dancing?
K- Yes, I love it! I can dance all day if I had to, but......you know, just a hobby
Vijay- No, no, if you love dancing that much, then there must be some magic in you, here.....here's my card, if you ever have time, drop by and meet me
K- Erm.....not that I ever will come, but I'll take it
Vijay- Who knows whats written in your destiny, perhaps even dancing

Before Kripa could respond the plane's lights started flickering.
Kripa- What's happening?
Vijay- Everything will probably be fine....I.....it's probably just....----

Pilot announcement- Everyone please stay seated in your seats and stay calm, we are having some difficulties.....all passengers stay seated

Ten minutes later, Kripa felt the plane sinking drastically. Everyone on the plane screamed, but Kripa didn't. She had tears in her eyes, if this was the last day of her life, then God cheated her. He let her fall in love without giving her time to confess it to the one person whom it mattered to most. She would never get to tell Angad how much she loved him.

Vijay- ****!! ****!

Before the plane hit the ground, Kripa whispered to herself, "I love you Angad------------------------------------------------------- -------------------------------------------:

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Angad found Kripa's apartment number. He called it.

Alliya- Hello
Angad- Hello, is...Kripa Sharma there?
Al- ......who's speaking?
Angad- Angad Khanna
Al- Angad Khanna! Oh my gosh, Kripa is coming to India to meet you!
Angad- She is?
Al- Yes, now I think I told you too much, just wait a couple of more hours and all your questions will be answered
A- Wait, who are you?
Al- Alliya, Kripa's roommate and best friend, okay, bye
A- .....bye

Angad smiled. While Angad was thinking to meet Kripa, Kripa had done it. She was coming to meet him. He would make everything perfect. He ordered his mansion to be decorated, her favorite flowers, roses, were put up everywhere. He had the chef make her favorite type of food, Chinese. And ordered the best wine available. This night would be perfect.

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Kripa opened her eyes slowly. She felt nothing but pain. She knew she was injured. She looked around. She was in a hospital. She had a tube going up her nose and an IV needle in her wrist. She felt it hard to breathe.

A nurse saw her eyes open and rushed towards her.

Kripa slowly and in a light light voice spoke to her, it was painful, but she needed to.
Nurse- The doctor should just be coming back. Don't worry, you'll be fine, with time, all your wounds will heal.

Kripa- I......I don't remember anything......who am I?......Who am I!?
Nurse- I don't know ma'am, you were found by some people on the coast of a beach, that's all anyone knows about you.
K- What? .......what country is this?
Nurse- Dubai.......ma'am......I think you should rest. I'll call the doctor.

The nurse left the room. Kripa closed her eyes. Who was she and where did she come from. Did she have any family, did she have anyone that cared about her? She died to knwo the answer to these questions. She felt empty not knowing who she was.

The doctor came in and walked towards her.

Kripa- Doctor........who am I?
Doctor- I'm sorry, I don't know.
K- My memory.....will it ever come back?
Doctor- It could.....there's always hope. It could take a couple of days or a couple of years for it to come back, or it could never come back. It all depends on how your brain will function.
K- Then what do I do? Do I have any family......where am I supposed to go?
Doctor- I can tell your Indian....meaning from India, it could be your family could be there, but I have no idea. It'll take two weeks for you to heal, meaning you'll have to stay in this hospital for two weeks. Then, even after, you'll need healing, but that'll just consist of taking some medicine and taking care of yourself.

Kripa had tears in her eyes. Who was she? The question spinned in her head over and over again. After the doctor left, she put her hand in her jean's pocket. There was a small note in there. She quickly opened it and read it.

"Vijay Malhotra
88437 Vandani Road, Delhi
Dance Club
Ask the receptionist for me, just tell her your name and come meet me
By the way Kripa, like I said, you never know what destiny has planned for you, so don't tear this up"

Her name was Kripa. She felt her heart fell relieve. It brought her so much comfort that she knew her name. She would go meet Vijay Malhotra, perhaps it was him, that might tell her something about her identity.

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The candles had all melted. The food was cold and the violists left.

Angad told the cook to throw the food away and told the servants to clean up. He called Alliya again.

Alliya-..............hello
Angad- Where's Kripa, she never came
Alliya- Angad......flight 237 crashed......Kripa was in that flight......no one survived......no one
Alliya cried as Angad froze. He couldn't believe what he was hearing.
Angad- .....I don't believe you
Al- ...Kripa is dead.......all the bodies burnt with the plane fire......she loved you, she just wanted to meet you, how could God give her such a big punishment for that........ she was so happy....----
Alliya couldn't take it anymore and disconnected the phone. It was too hard talking about it. Kripa's parents were even more broken then her, Rishi had lost his big sister, whom he loved more than anyone in the world, he hated God for taking her away from him.
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Two weeks had passed. Kripa was going to India in search of her identity. Did she have a family? Any friends? Did she love someone, did someone love her? Or was she just a lonely girl alone in this big world with no one that cared if she were alive or dead? She died to know.

Thanks for the wonderful comments. I know the story is changing, but keep reading, im just setting up the story still, kind of, lol. It's going to get much better, promise. Comment and even make predictions if you'd like!

Edited by amneetkaur_24 - 18 years ago

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