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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow great part continue soon 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#12
Awesome part n awesome concept.... n i really like angads dad!!!!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#13
great part 😊
kripa is soo sweet and so is angads dad
hope angad comes to his senses and realises that he loves kripa and not simone
cant wait 4 the next part
continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awww... sooo cuteee & saddd at the same time too!!!! 👏 👏
👏 i LOVE Angad's dad... but i
HATE Angad & Simone... he BETTER b guilty... 😡 😡 i hope sum
REALLY cute guy cums by & he & Kripa start dating or sumthing like tht...
to make Angad jealous!!! 😉 i wud LOVE tht!!! 😳 just a suggestion!!!
😊 this is REALLY interesting... i CANNOT wait to read more... conitnue
soon!!! 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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PART TWO

next morning... angad woke up by someth8ng wet on his cheek... he yawned and stretched... he noticed he was in the terrace... then he remembered last night and thought he must hve fallen asleep talking to kripa... he turned to his side and saw kripa sleeping carelessly... a lil farther away form him... he stared at her for a moment... got up, picked hr up and took her to her room nad put her on the bed... tugged her in and was about to go... but turned aorund adn looked at her innocent face he has alwyas adored ...she must not be the prettiest girl alive... but she was for him... noone could be prettier or more innocent that she was... he quickly brushed teh thought off before it could take roots adn left the room...

while entering his house... he bumped into yash... " sory dad..." angad said... trying to read his expression... yash gave him a cold look and just nodded and left for jogging... angad sighed... how was he to make his father accept simone... after all he had always been fond of kripa... he shook his head and walked to his room... hpped on to the bed and fell asleep again...

30 mins later...

BOOOM! THUMP! CRASH! AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!

agad was woken up by these noise... he almost fell off his bed... he rubbed his eyes and slowly walked dowstairs... and instantly burst out laughing... as he saw simone on the floor... and kripa on the doorways biting her tongue... kripa ran to simone and helped her up... " i am soooooooooooooooooooo sorry simone..."

simone angrily glared at angad adn soo did kripa... angad shut up and chuckling came downstairs... " angad you should have warned her!" kripa said with big angry eyes...

" i dint know you would do it again... thankgod simone..sweety you saved mee..." angad chuckled again... simone stomped on his foot and limped upstairs... " HEY! sorry!" he went behind her... picked her up and took her to her room apologizing... as soon as they were gone kripa and naina... angad's mom both started laughing...

" good job kripa..." naina said wiping her tears that formed because of laughing soo much...

" aunty! she got hurt and you are saying good job?" kripa said trying to be serious... but couldn't help and laughed as welll... " anywayss i had come to tell you that if you need any help with teh preparations with teh marriage DONT ask my help... cuz i am from teh girl's side... not kartick bhaiyaa's side..."

naina shocked... "WHAT? WHY?"

" aunty... mishty and prithvi begged mee to be there to help them...soo sorry aunty... i need to be there... and the 'DONT ask for my help' was just a dialogue... call me anytime you need mee... okk... byee!!" she kissed naina's cheeks adn ran out adn bumped into yash... " UNKLE! do you know anything else than giving mee a heart attack???"

yash laughed and said... " sorry... why are you ihn such a hurry?"

" oh i was going to mishty's place... i need to help her with shopping, preparations, decorations, and everything else... after all damini aunty has asked... noo actually begged mee to help her..." kripa said proudly...

" when will you be back.. i need you to help mee tooo..." yash said...

" do you guyss think i am a maid???" kripa siad making faces... " i am only helping one side.. eitehr teh girls or teh guys...(yash was about to say something) and before you say anything.. i am helping mishty... cuz she asked for my help first... now bye bye..."

yash made a sulking face and kripa sighed..." learn to live without mee da-unkle... i cant always be with you..." she kissed his cheeks and left... after 5 mins she returned grinning... she kissed his cheeks again..." thankxx for teh new car!"

****

at around 1 am... kripa sneaked into her house... ' thankgod everyone is asleep..." she whispered to herself... she wasin angad's house... that was her way of going to her house when late... she sneaked to teh terrace adn saw angad pacing around glancing at her terrace everyt now and then...and then cursing... seeeing his face she felt like kissing him... but she stopped herself... she walked behind him and screamed... "BOOOO!"

angad jerked and turned around to find a laughing kripa... she laughed holding her stomach.. wyhile he just stared at her... after sometime she controlled herself... and asked " what are you doing this late awake? you should bee sleeping..." she said gasping for breath...

" i can ask you teh ame question..." angad said raising his eyebrow...

" well i was at teh beach... was bored and dint want to come home early so went there.. and fell asleep.. when i woke up it was 12 already... went to starbucks and had some really warm coffee and now here i am..." kripa shrugged..." now help mee get to my terrace...

" you're not jumping are oyu?" angad siad...

" of course i am..." kripa answered smirking...

" but... i thought you were scared of heights... you could barely look down from teh tearrace and now you're gonna jump teh whole space??" angad asked...

" many things have changed angad.. soo have i..." she winked..she went ot teh railing and jumped... she turned around adn gave a flying kiss...and waved " goodnight ...sweet dreams..."

angad stood there wth hs mouth open wide... he walked downstars and went to sleep... and no doubt he dreamt about kripa...

****

" i wanna go shopping!!!" simone whined... her shrill voice was getting into everyone's nerves.. her and angad had been arguing for hours... while yash adn kripa were listening to music adn playing chess(thats what i do with my dad) naina being very impatient asked angad to take her... defeated he said fine... kripa was gigling and yash was chuckling... they ahd never seen anagd soo frustrated...

" kripa theres a phone for you...." angad yelled over the music she was listenign tooo... kripa took teh phone from him ..

" hello..."

" hey babes... ssup?"

" OMG! hey... how are you? what teh hell...where are you? i was waiting for you yesterday... dude thats soo not koool... you had promised mee... adn its your sisters marriage adn i agreed to help her cuz of you...and you./.. idiot aren't ehre yet!! when are you coming???" kripa yelled all at once... suprising angad who was right behind her...

" sorry sorry sorry... i am sorry i am not tehre... but i got hings to take care of here so i couldn't... anywayss... do you remember what is in three days?" teh person asked...

" ofcourse... my birthday..." krpa answered...

" exactly... i'll make a surprise entry there... i promise..." the person said...

kripa smiled broadly... " okkie... oh and DONT... i mean it...DONT try teh stupid fire thingy again..or i'll kill you!" kripa said...

" hahaha you still remembered that? ofcourse i wont kripss... bye babess... do wait for mee..." teh perso said joking...

" of course i will... have been waiting for eth past 6 months...now more three days is nothign... byeeeee sweetheart/..." she gigled...

" byee...."

kripa hung up...and angad asked " who was that?"

kripa turedn to him... she looked really excited..." you'll know three days later!" thas all she said and ran to yash...

angad went behind her adn saw her whispering something into yash's ear... he stooop up and they both hugged... and he looked excited... angad cursed himself for bringing smone here... atleast he would have some quality time with his family... now all he does is be with her... she doesn't give him hie 'space'... and that was twh thing he needed teh most right now! what teh hell was he thinking???? how could he even think that about simone... wasn't she supposed to be 'the one' then why was he regretting on being with her... confused he went to his car and waitied for simone to take ehr to shopping...

this part was boring... form next part there will be more AK scenes... thats what i have planned for.....soo i dont expect much comments here... but plss do comment...
Edited by MUNNIBABA2006 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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great part
poor angad
hope u get rid of simone soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awesome part cont soon plz!!!!!!!!! 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awesomeeeeeeeeeeee...!!!
okkie i am going to kill you some day!
you doo soo many things and never bother to tell mee anymore... NOT FAIR! 😭
okkie anywayss that was such an awesome part..and it was fab!... continue soon...
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Posted: 18 years ago
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boring?? areu kidding me? those were fab parttsss!! lovedd emm!! i think mystery dude is pritz and he sounds like a total sweetheart who gonna make angad attracted [well realize his feelinds towards] .. kripa by being close to her 😉 lol!! continue soon 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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HEY

well.. i read the 2 parts today.. and i told madiha to remind me to comment cuz i was feeling lazy.. but decided against it..

this is really good.. it keeps my attention.. i lvoe it.. and i love kripa and yash's relationship..
and hte part wasnt boring at all!

it was prithvi wasnt it? angad is gonna be jealous.. yahoo! lol..

cant wait for the next part

mansi

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