Fan Fic: Pyaar Main Kabhi Kabhi - Page 188

way to go .... keep it up .... 😉 😉 😉

neha jaldi karo... 😡 😡 😡
Kayla~

the part was awesome.....Angad-Kripa scenes are so cute....please continue soon

neha hon continue this fanfic im dyin to read the next part. love ur fanfics 😊

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what happend neha ... didnt' u alredy got us com fix.... 😳 plezzz cont... soon can''t wait i am dying.....

They all go to the mandir and then drop Kishtij at Josh's house, and then go shopping for karva chauth. Its's raining so they quickly rush into the mall.

Kirpa and Angad enter the Citi Mall, and instantly millions of fans gather around them asking for auto graphs. Soon Kripa and Angad are seprated, Angad is surrounded by lots of girls, while Kirpa is surrounded by boys. The only diffrance is that Kripa is singing autographs, while Angad is flirting with the ladies. Kripa sees him madly and now refuses to sing more autographs. At this point Angad notices Kripa's strange behavior, and he also knows she is very jealous by the fact that he's flirting with so many girls. Angad decides to flirt more with girls. At first Kripa tries to ignore it, but Angad keeps flirting, now Kripa is really mad, she turns on her heals and walks to the lift and presses the button to go to the next floor mumbling under her breath. Angad notices this and runs to her, but before he can enter the lift she walks in and the shuts, Kripa gives him a cold look throught the glass doors, and then turns the other way. Angad watches her go up and stands there with his hands acrossed against his chest, and a sweet smile across his face.

He waits till the lift comes back. And then goes to the second floor. He looks around but doesn't find Kripa, and then sees her inside a shop looking at saaris and stuff. Angad grins, and walks into the shop and hugs her from the back like nothing happened, Kripa turns around and pushes him away walking to the other side, giving him another, "I dont wanna talk to you" look.

A: Shit, ab kya karo??

Right then his cells rings, he disconnects it- and then gets an idea. He smiles to him self, and SMS's

Kripa is busy looking at Sari's and Lenghas. She picks up a really heavy red/crimison saari, with bronz, and golden patterns on it. She holds it against her self, over her sholder, when her phone vibrates. She looks at it, she has just recieved a SMS 😉 She reads it-

K: I Luv u- Angad

Kirpa delete's the message, and doesn;t reply to it, and conts to look at her self in the mirror sadly, she wishes if Angad was there, she sadly looked into the mirror and then sees Angad standing on the other side of the store looking at her, he gives her a thumbs down, and Kripa throws the sari on the salesman. 😆 And turns to leave. But this time Angad comes in her way.

A: Hi Kripa

Kripa just walks past him pretending he wasn't even there. And walks on to he elevator, and goes up one floor to the food courts, on her way she turns and doesn't find Angad there, she's a bit disappointed and gets in line to get herself some cold coffee, she pays and turns around to find Angad standing there.

A: Good idea Kripa! Thandi Thandi coffee pio, tumahara gharam dimaak thandha ho jayga.

K: Angad aagar tum nahie chatha ho ki yeh saari cold coffee main tum par girado tho mujhko saaf saaf boldo i'll be more than hapapy to do it.

A: No, i dont want you to do that.

K: Then leave is sa pelha i loose my temper.

And Kripa leaves the place into a jewelery shop.

A: Ab kya karo???

Right then he spots a little kid sitting eating with his parents, and a few other kids, so about 4 kids in total.

Kripa is looking at rings when that kid walks there, and pulls her hand.

Kripa looks down and bends in front of the fair boy.

K: Hi beta.

Kid 1: This is for you Aunty.

K: Thanks beta, yeh kisna...

The kid runs away, Kripa looks at the flowers, the beautiful red roses.

K: Angad?? Nahie...

She looks at the ring in her hand that she's n love with, but then puts it back and walks out.

She happily walks into another store with antquies and looks around, when another kid comes to her.

The kid pulls her out and points to the preforming stage at the food court, and finds 2 other kids standing there, holding the sing- I AM...

K: I am??

And then you see Angad come stand behind Kripa, and wisper into her ear...

A: Sorry.... I'm really sorry...

Kripa smiles to her self, but then hides her smile, and then stands there like a brat, her nose high in the air.

Angad picks up her hand and gently slips a ring into her fingure, the same ring she was looking at eariler.

Kripa turns and looks at him.

A: Sorry kaha na...

Kripa smiles and then walks away, and Angad runs behind her...

A: Kripa...

Everyone is looking her and Angad now.

A: Yeh aaisa nahie maana gi...

He runs back into the food court, and grabs the mic on the stage...

A: Kripa...

Kripa stops and turns and looks at Angad whoes standing about 30 feet from her...

A: I'm sorry jaan... and i love you!

The voice goes throught the whole Mall, and everyone instanty knows it's there fav rock star Angad on the mic...

A: Kripa... Kaha na Sorry, ab gussa choro bhi.

Kripa can't belive what Angad was doing, and everyone was looking at her, her cheecks were turning crimson red, and she Quickly starts to walk to Angad, and everyone is around the two...

Kripa stands about 5 feet from Angad in total shock.

K: Wispering- Angad kya kar raha ho??

Angad puts the mic away.

A: Holding his ears... I'm sorry...

Kripa can't help smiling any more, but doesn't respond, and everyone is cheering- ANGAD KRIPA... and the whole mall surround thw hottest pair today, waiting for Kripa to reply...

A: Ab kuch kaho bhi...

Kripa runs into his arms and hugs Angad berring her face into his chest totally emmbarssed, shy, yet happy. Anagd happily hugs her back 😳

Everyone claps for them while taking picture's with there cell phone's.

Then we here someone call out... Smile please...

Kripa and Angad look the other way finding Josh, Neha, and Aaliya standing there, and they click a picture of the two love birds.

Everyone slowly starts to leave as Josh and Aaliya make there way to Kirpa and Angad...

Aa: Yeh sab kya tha??

A: Kuch sayda nahie- Kripa mujhsa thoori si naaraz thi, maina is ko flowers diya, ring dhi lakin yeh nahie mani...

K: Aacha- tho yeh bhi batado ki main naazar kyun thi??

A: Haan main tho bas vo us lad-----

Aa: ????

K: Haan haan kaho ki tum tho sirf about 10 girls ka saath one by one flirt kar raha tha??

Angad bites his toung while Kripa hits his sholder and Aaliya laughs, Angad puts his arms around Kripa...

Aa: Looking at a teary josh- Aap log cholo, main aati ho.

Angad and Kripa start argueing over something, and leave, Neha is busy talking on the phone, and Aaliya walks to Josh...

Aa: Josh, yeh kya??

J: Wiping his tears- Kuch nahie, bas Kripa aur Angad ko deek kar mujhko roona aagya ki hum dono kitna dry couple hai...

Aa: Tumko kisna kaha that we're even a couple... (i don't know if they have confesed there love yet, if they have well too bad- were gonna pretent like they havn't!😳😆)

J: We're not a couple?

Aa: Nope!

J: Theek hai...

He sees Neha walk his way, he pulls her, and puts his arm around her, tho theek hai.

He turns to Neha

J: Neha, my love will you be my girlfriend, he quickly winks at her.

Neha gets it all- Ofcourse Josh! Tum nahie janta kitna mera dil tum par tab sa fida hai jab sa hum chootha chootha baaacha tha...

J: Lakin neha, hum ek doosra ko jaanta he nahie tha...

N: Nahie Josh, tumko yaad hai school main ek ladki thi jisska naam Neha tha- aur tum Josh, remember???

J: Oh ya! 😆

J: Hay! Mera khoya hua pyaar aj mujhko wapis mil gya, they both hug each other, while Aaliya's face drops to the floor. She actually believes this retarted story of theirs.

Angad and Kripa hear all this and can't stop laughing, Aaliya gets all teary and runs from there, but Angad holds her hand.

Josh and Neha pull away and can't stop lauging anymore.

Aaliya tries not to cry, and Angad and Kripa hide there smile as well.

J: Neha chala?

N: Haan josh cholo...

A: Mujhko Josh sa kuch baat karni hai, tum aur Aaliya cholo...

N: Ok... Chala aaliya?

Aa: Haan...

They both leave, and Angad turns to Josh...

A: Eyeing him- Josh? What's up??

J: What's up kuch bhi nahie...

K: Bahi, tumahra aur Aaliya ka beech main kuch haie ya Neha aur tumhra beech??

J: Well, he puts one arm around Kirpa and one around Angad, cholo betho bata ho, they all it down to enjoy coffee. Josh explains the whole joke, and they all laugh.

A: Tumna meri bhaan ka saath aacha nahie kiya...

J: Aacha, aur tumahri stupid si behan pyaar kar thi hai lakin kaha gi nahie.

A: Shayad Aaliya ko Kirpa ki behaan hona chaiya tha, waisa tumna usko kaha?

J: Nahie- lakin usko pata hai?

A: Good- tum dono ek he catogory ka ho.

J: Matlab?

A: Well, tumahari yeh pyaari si behaan- mujhse pyaar karthi thi lakin mujhko 2 MONTHS ka baad bataya... Aur main jaanta tha lakin insa suuna chatha tha...

K: Shut Up Angad

J: So i sould tell her?

A: Nahie Nahie, tum usko nahie Neha ko batao ki tum Aaliya sa pyar katha ho- paagal, idiot.

J: Chill man, i'll tell her...

A: U better...

N: U guys done?

Aaliya refuses to even look at Josh.

A: Ya lets go, aur Kripa ji aap, chalia aapko abhi apni dress chooes karni hai...

K: Aagra tumna vo harkat na kari hoti tho abhi tak main ghar par hoti.

A: Ab sorry kaha na...

K: Theek hai cholo.

Neha's cells rings and she has to leave.

A: Josh drop aaliya, he winks at him and they leave.

Aa: Trying to hide her tears- Chala?

J: Yep!

In the Car...

Aa: Josh tumna kabhi Neha ka baara main bataya nahie,

J: Haan, what??

Josh parks the car at the side of the road and looks at her is dis belief- u believed that?

Aa: Now relizing her mistake- Nahie...

Josh looks at her...

Aa: Haan. 😳

Josh hits his head on the stearing wheel, and then starts laughing non stop, Aaliya gets angery as tears on angr roll down her eyes.

She steps out of the car and stands in the rain, Josh walks to her.

J: Aaliya...

Aa: Mujhko choro...

J: Tum paagal ho Aaliya... Kya tum nahie janti ki main kisi aur sa pyaar kar tha ho,

AA: Kissa?

J: Holding her face- Tumsa... 😳

Aa: I knew it ki koi stupid si....

AA: WHAT?

J: Smiling haan- I have loved you for the longest time, for alomost a year and a half now.

Aa: Tho abhi tak baatya kyun nahie?

J: Tumna kaha ki tum bhi mujhse pyaar karthi ho?

Aa: NAhie

J: Tho ab kaho

Aa: I love you!

They both smile and Hugs eah other

Mean while Angad and Kripa.

Kirpa is pissed off becasue Angad is once again flirting with the sales laides.

Lady- Sir, aapni wife aapar phir sa gussa ho rahi hai.

A: Oh! 😆

Angad walks to Kripa...

A: Hi Kripa...

K: Angad get lost...

A: Fine...

He turns to leave

K: ANGAD???

A: Turning around- Ya?

K: Kaha chala?

A: U just said get lost

Kripa throws a sari on his face- I hate you...

A: Ok, hate me for ever pelha yeh try karo.

Kripa takes the lengha from the sales lady and walks into the changeing room.

She comes back a few minute angry still- Angad is not at all takes by her beauty this time.

WHY? Because she's angry, her blouse looks retarted and her duppta was in her hand still floded.

K: Coldly- U like it?

A: Uff kRIPA, get a life...

He pulls her to the mirror and ssnatches the duptta from her.

He straightens her shirt and then puts the duppta over her head, and then thy both look into the mirror

A: Ab tum dekho...

Angad moves out of the way and Kripa looks at her self.

K: Angad, idhar aao..

A: Standing behind her- Kya?

Kripa looks at him from the mirror.

A: Oh oh! He puts his arms around Kripa.

K: See now i look perfect!

A: Kyun? Whats so special now vs. last time...

K: Different yeh hai ki tum mera saath ho..

A: Aww, my jaan- how sweet...

K: Very, ab chala??

A: Ya.

They purchase the dress and head home!

hey guys i need help i need a guy for my self in this fan fic- who should it be?????? 😳 😳 😆