**Dosti Mein Pyaar** Part 50 p.146 - Page 18

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Posted: 18 years ago
haiii haiiii dat made me MELT lol
girl r u sure dis is ur first fan fic???:O m speechless! lol
i have a request cud u plz write in a darker colour or jus make it bold thnxxxx
i gtg revise will post a longer comment next tym mwahzzzz
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Posted: 18 years ago

thanks a lot!

Originally posted by: goldi2

ok well.. hmm 1 + 1/2 down 1 1/2 more to go:P lol
great part lol goshish finnaly neev relaises .. wow did praachi just get kidnapped? lol
continue soon


lol not for long lol! after the next part the score will change lol! hmm you never know!

Originally posted by: angullgrl91

omg. wat happened? pretty plz cont soon. dat was a nice long part. ur fan fic is so totally cool n i no say this like everytime i comment but i cant help it. it just is. hope nuthin bad happens.


lol thats soo much! aww soo sweet! hmm as for anything bad we'll just have to c...

Originally posted by: erier101

Ah, ok im gonna stop slacking off, i was gonna come up with a nice big comment got hte previous part, but i had to leave nad by then the part was posted...anyways, fab part, yay k-a are together...and neev's way of getting together with prachi are already seeming cute 😉 ... i just want the a-k matter settled soon, once and for all 😳 😆 continue soon 👏 v


lol thanks! yup k-a are together, and n-p well you'll find out in this next part what happened! as for a-k that will come up tomorrow!

Originally posted by: lil_desi_goddes

brillant!!

simply brilliant!!

please do continue!!


👏


thanks soo much!

Originally posted by: berkeleygirl818

i am soooo sry i cudnt comment on the last prt.... was busy!!!! 😳 but i
read it & it was AWESUM!!!! 👏
👏 👏 👏 YAYAY.... they KA r together!!!! schoooo
schweettt!!!! 😳

FINALLY he realized he loves her.... soooo cuteee!!! 😳 i LOVE the way
he's behaving with her.... its REALLY cute!!!! 😆 the flashback scene
was sooooo cuteee!!! i LOVED it.... OMG... wht happened to Prachi??? who
kidnapped her??? i hope she is ok... i think it MIGHT be a joke by
Neev to confess his love or sumthing!!! 😕

ughhh.. Prem.... i am not liking him in this FF... he is seperating AK!!!
nd wht is wrong with Angad??? why is he acting like tht... he shud fight to
get his love back!!!! 😕 wierdo... welll hope things fix up between them
soon too.... 😳

i CANNOT wait to find out wht happened to Prachi & wht is going to
happen between AK... so continue soon!!! 😛


thanks soo much! yup ka are together and n finally got in his senses, lets hope he's not to late... good prediction, you will find out if your right or not in this part itself! hehe good lol prem is not so nice as you will find out in tomorrow's part! yea he should fight but then again he has no clue he is in love...

Originally posted by: ridhijai

Great part.
liked it.
👏


thanks soo much!

Originally posted by: armaghan0

awsome part really cute


thanks a bunch! 😊

Originally posted by: *Ejaz4Hinna*

haiii haiiii dat made me MELT lol
girl r u sure dis is ur first fan fic???:O m speechless! lol
i have a request cud u plz write in a darker colour or jus make it bold thnxxxx
i gtg revise will post a longer comment next tym mwahzzzz


awwww soo sweet! lol yea it is my first! yea i'll change it just tell me if its ok now k..

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Posted: 18 years ago

Chapter 14

The black car stops in middle of an area surrounded by trees and plants. There is fog everywhere making it all the creepier and the night's sky, pitch black, making the place seem that much scarier. The door opens and someone pulls out a struggling Prachi, who is wearing a blindfold and has her hands tied behind her back. Her screaming for Neev, has died down in soft whimpers. She hopes Neev would come and save her, but feels she may never live to see him again. The man is dragging a struggling Prachi, but his face isn't visible since he is wearing a black ski mask. He ties Prachi to a tree with rope and from the car calls another man on the cell phone saying, "Your work is done!" and drives off. Now she is weeping and horrified by the deafening silence, which is followed by the chirping sounds of crickets. The smell makes it seem like a forested area with lots of plants and trees. She is confused about her whereabouts. Anxiety clogs Prachi's mind and she is panicking. She hastily rubs the knot against the course tree to liberate herself from restraints. She is able to loosen the hold of the rope on her hands and rips it off of her. She runs quickly taking off her blindfold. She is just happy to be free and doesn't want to stick around waiting for whoever that man is talking to on the phone to show up. She hunts for a path to lead her away from the darkness. Looking around gives her, the chills because if the trees are not blinding enough, the fog is making it all the more worse. She finally stumbles onto an area and is shocked.

It looks simply beautiful. The place is extravagantly decorated. She sees a little white tent with candles lit and flowers all over. There are rose petals leading the way to the tent, which out looks a serene lake. The moon's glowing reflection could be seen in the still lake. She finds herself gazing at the midnight sky filled with stars. It is enchanting. On the table were two dinner plates and wine glasses along with a wine in the center. She stands there in admiration. She feels someone approaching and the anxious feelings come rushing back. She doesn't dare turn, hoping it would disappear. But now this person stood right behind her breathing heavily, scaring Prachi to bits. Oh how she wishes that Neev would come and save her, but she knows that wouldn't happen because she had seen him leave for home. The man begins to speak in a gentle whisper, "Ab nahi bhagogi? By the way surprise kaisa laga?" and she freezes. The voice is familiar, so familiar that she launches herself in the man's arms.

It is her Neev. She sobs so violently in his arms that even he gets worried. He just hugs her, letting her feel his presence. After a while she pulls back and looks at him and started beating him senseless. Neev laughs in pain while she beat him and yells, "NEEV!! HOW COULD YOU? I THOUGHT I WAS GONNA DIE YOU… you… IDIOT!!!" She stops hitting him now tiresome and just sits on the grass, while Neev lies on the floor next to her. Prachi had actually realized what she was doing and she is still not supposed to be talking to him. There is something that she just has to know. She asks getting up, "Why did you bring me here?" Neev gets up and taking her hand and leads her towards to a huge rock from where the lake looks gorgeous.

He makes her sit down and he looks towards the lake and has his back towards her. He says, "Prachi, these past three weeks, only I know how I have spent them. But it gave me time to think, about everything, our first meeting, our past, our present and most importantly our future. You are so very important for me Prachi. You know that you have become my…aadat. I just know that I can't live without you, without you being by my side. These past weeks have shown me what life is like without you and I never want to face that again, I CANT GO THROUGH THAT AGAIN!" Neev turns to Prachi and levels with her because she is sitting on the rock and continues, "Prachi, I'm madly in love with you, I love you with all my heart and I hope you can forgive this idiot for giving you so much pain…I know I hurt you a lot (Neev chokes up)…" Prachi placed her finger on his lips, with tears in her eyes says, "Only I can call you an idiot… I love you idiot, I love you" Neev pulls Prachi into a hug and both cry in happiness. Neev says to her, "Prachi…" She says questioningly, "Yea…" Neev whines, "I'm hungry can we please eat or you want to cry the whole night…your such a wuss!" Prachi looks up at Neev and she starts slapping him again while Neev just hugs her tighter.

They finally make their way to the tent and have a nice dinner, while occasionally Neev grabs her hand leaving Prachi to only blush. They both gaze into each other's eyes, a pool of love in which both seem to be drowning. Neev adoringly gestures for a dance and Prachi hesitantly agrees. She is getting really nervous under his intense gaze. She knows he loves her, but it was overwhelming to see how much he loves her. His gaze is so powerful and the love clearly visible, it scares her to think that she might wake up. She pushes all these thoughts aside thinking she just got her happiness and now no one would take Neev away from her, never.

Neev and Prachi dance romantically to from Ta Ra Rum Pum. Neev and Prachi sway with the rhythm and looking intently in each other's eyes.

hey hey ey ey ey ey hey hey hey hey......
tumhe pata toh hoga, tumhi pe main fida hoon
tumhe hai jabse chaaha, hawaaon mein udata hoon
tumhi mere har pal mein, tum aaj mein, tum kal mein
hey shona, hey shona, hey shona, hey shona....
tumhe pata toh hoga ke mere dil mein kya hai
chalo kahe deti hoon, kabhi nahi jo kahaan hai
tumhi mere har pal mein, tum aaj mein, tum kal mein
hey shona, hey shona, hey shona, hey shona....

Neev and Prachi listen to the song thinking how it reflects both their feelings. Their eyes communicate their feelings. It is so blissful and the song made the moment all the more perfect dancing in each other's arms.

tum jo ghussa bhi karo toh mujhe pyaar lagata hai jaane kyun
main toh jo bhi kahu tumhe ikraar lagata hai jaane kyun
chhodo bhi ye ada, paas aake jara, baat dil ki koi keh do na
hey shona, hey shona, hey shona, hey shona....Neev grins thinking that the song is saying everything in his heart.
Prachi looks away shyly as he turns her and brings her
close to his own body. saari duniya ko chhodake maine chaaha hai ik tumhe
maine jindagi se maanga hai toh sirf maanga hai ik tumhe
abb isi chaah mein, abb isi raah mein, jindagibhar mere tum ho na
hey shona, hey shona, hey shona, hey shona....Prachi thinks about how her life was without Neev, before
she met him and after the fight. She knows that no matter what
Neev would always be there for her as he always has been.
She looks back into those passionate eyes.tumhe pata toh hoga, tumhi pe main fida hoon
tumhe hai jabse chaaha, hawaaon mein udata hoon
tumhi mere har pal mein, tum aaj mein, tum kal mein
hey shona, hey shona, hey shona, hey shona....
shona, hey shona, hey shona, hey shona.......
hey hey ey ey ey ey hey hey hey hey......Neev gives Prachi a kiss on the forehead and just sway
listening to the beatings of each other's hearts.

They eventually went home in Neev's car and he says his good bye to Prachi at her door. She leans over and kisses his cheek whispering, "Bye Neev!" while Neev is in a daze holding his cheek and blushing as he watches her go inside.

Leave Comments Guy! Preview: Angad and Kripa Patch Up!

Edited by Numera* - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
oyeee...tht was awesum!!man...they r together now!!YaY!!now kripss nd angad are left...hmm..the 2 will b difficult but im sure u hav sumthing up ur sleeves.. 😉anyways the update was too good!!update soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
omg awesum
wow loved ur scenery i cud actually imagine neev tellin prachi 😃
now make angad realise abt his feelings abt kripa which i know u will do it perfectlyu well
continue soon 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
haiiiii such a lovely part 2 read....lol i so knew it was neev!!!!! lol tht was his plan alll along or maybe kavya told him......neways tht was sooo adorable!!! esp neev's speech lol sho cute n u used hey shona....lol wat a coincidence i just got bak frm cinema after watching the movie....it was soooo goood i loved it....lol took a lot of time 2 bug my brother but he finally gave in lol n this song is prob my fav out of the film.....neways bak 2 ur ff.....ooooooooh angad n kripaaa patch up....cannot wait!!!!! 😃 plz plz plz continue sooooon 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
awesome part~~~ i knewwww it!! i was like i bet neev got her kidnappedd!! lol, so k-a got together first, tehn neev-prachi, and now its a-k's turn!! lol1! well, let em patch up first!! cant wait!! very cute part btw!! continue soon!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
WOW!!

neev and prachi 2gether!! 😳

please do continue!!

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Posted: 18 years ago
wow neev and prachi so cute and adoreable but what about angad and kripa only they are left ys angad mad he also dated a lot of fgirls cant kripa date a guy 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
OMG... YAY.... i guessed it rite!!! i am just toooo gud... hehehe... jk!!! 😳
but tht was sooooo cute & adorable... they r FINALLY together!!! YAY... i
think i am oging to jump up & down & scream... hehehe..... jk... this prt
was like awesum!!! 👏
👏 nd the 'Hey Shona' song is like my new fav
song.... did u watch tht movie??? i sooooo want to see it...
anywazzz... i CANNOT wait till AK patch up... its abt time... hehehe...
TOTALLY awesum... nd continue soon!!! 👏

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