Anjaana Ehsaas: (AK) Part 27 Pg. 35 - Page 11

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Posted: 18 years ago
Hey, when are you going to cont, the 24th passed 😳 && i live in chicagoo!! lol 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
ok, so here's the next part...sorry, but I hardly got any time to write the part in Chicago, but I finished it tonight. I haven't edited it or anything. Hope u like it.


Part 12




The couple was now in the car. Neither was saying anything. They didn't know what to say. Angad had to tell Kripa something but he didn't know how to say it. He didn't know how she would react to it.



Angad reached over to turn on the radio. Kripa thought he was about to touch her hand so she got scared and moved her hand away. Angad noticed this and was very apprehensive now, if she was so scared now, what would she do when she found out.



Angad ' Don't worry, mein sirf radio on kar raha tha.

Kripa felt like an idiot.

Kripa ' (to herself) What's wrong with me? Mein uski patni hoon, to mujhe ghabhrahat kyun ho rahi hai. Woh ek achha ladka hain, woh mere aisa kuch nahin karega jo mujhe achha nahin lagta. To phir mein itni ghabhra kyun rahi hoon. (to Angad) Sorry, woh mujhe laga'

Angad ' It's okay. Ek baat kahu.

Kripa ' Ji.

Angad ' Kya hum friends hain?

Kripa ' Haan, yeh kya puchhne ki baat hai kya?

Angad ' To phir tumne 'Sorry' kyun bola? Dosti mein no 'Thanks' and no 'Sorry'.

Kripa ' Thikh hai mein nahin kahungi, waise kya mein ek personal baat puchhsakti hu kya?

Angad ' Abh hum pati patni hogaye hai. Tumhe mujhe kuch bhi puchhne ka hakh hai.

Kripa ' Kya tum kabhi ek serious relationship mein the ya ho?

Angad ' (feeling a little hesitant) ' Meri zindagi meine apni tareekhe se ji hain. Mein ladkiyon ke saat flirt karta hoon. I mean tha'abh to meri shaadi ho chuki hain tumhare saath, isliye flirt karna band. Lekin haan mein ek baar ek serious relationship mein tha, lekin woh bhi tutgaya.

Kripa ' Kyun?

Angad ' Woh isliye kyun ki, woh mere saath wafa nahin thi.

Kripa ' Matlab?

Angad ' Mein pehle se shuru karta hoon.




You see a red ferrari stop in front of a big mansion. The driver inside honks the horn. A girl runs out of the mansion.
Girl – Bas abh bas bhi karo, mein agayi hoon na?
Guy – Just shut up okay, abh chalo.
Both the girl and the guy walk into a club and head straight for a table with a couple already at it.
Guy at table – Hey, you guyz finally made it.
Guy – Sorry yaar Karthik, Anjali ne itna waqt lagaya tha.
Anjali – Maine? Mein tayaar thi lekin tum late aye the. Ismein meri kya ghalati thi?
Girl at table – Ofo. Yeh to roz hota hain. Angad hamesha meri best friend ko blame karta hai jabh ghalati uski hai.
Angad – Excuse me. Mein hamesha late nahin hota, Miss Monica.
Monica – Achha.
Guy at table – Monica mere dost ko pareshaan mat karo, tum bhi to hamesha late tayaar hoti ho.
Monica – Achha Karthik, tum abh mujhpe ungli utha rahe ho?
Karthik – Haan bhai, kyun nahin tumne mere best friend pe ungli uthayi hai.
Monica – To usne bhi mere best friend pe ungli uthayi hai.
Angad – bas abh bandh bhi karo.
Anjali – Excuse me, mere dost ko tumhare dost ko blame kiya hai, woh kyun chup baithegi.
Angad – Not you too.
Monica – Kya matlab hai tumhara? Kya woh kuch bol nahin sakhti? Is there a law against that?
Angad – Monica, no offense, but yeh humare beech ka mamla hai, ismein tum kuch na bolo to hi thikh rahega.
Anjali – Oho, jabh tum un dono ke beech mein bolo to theekh hai, lekin woh hamare beech kuch bole to yeh thikh nahin hain?
Karthik – You know what? Angad chalo yahan se hummein inki zaroor nahin hai.
Anjali – Ha Ha to jao yahan se. Is duniya mein ladko ki koi kammi nahin hai.
Anjali then pulls Monica and goes to two hot boys, pulls them to the dance floor and starts dancing with them really closely. Angad and Karthik also do the same. Except Angad and Monica really didn't want to. You see Angad was attracted to Anjali and Monica was attracted to Karthik, but their respective partners didn't show the same feelings back. (In case u didn't figure it out yet. Monica is going out with Karthik and Anjali with Angad.) The guy Anjali was dancing with was touching Anjali in places that Angad didn't like. To retaliate Angad started dancing a bit too close to the girl he was dancing with. Anjali could careless because she really didn't have feelings for him, but because they were datin she didn't like this. So she danced closer with her guy. Her guy took that as a sign. Anjali was not this kind of girl. She was still a sanskaari girl and didn't like boys touching her. Above all of this, the guy she was dancing with was a bit drunk and was touching her thinking she was liking it.
Guy – (We'll call him Kavya.) Hey sweety, you want a drink?
Anjali – (Still mad at Angad) Yeah sure.
She didn't know if what she was doing was right but she wanted to make Angad jealous. She knew this guy didn't have good intentions but she still went with him. Kavya bought her a drink. Anjali, who didn't drink, drank up the whole thing. She asked for more and doing so she drank about 3 glasses. Angad was watching this from a distance. Anjali then looked at Angad and saw him dancing too closely to the girl. She took Kavya and went back out to the dance floor right next to Angad. And started dancing with Kavya. Again he touched her on her waist, her neck and her legs. She was dancing with her back into his chest. She didn't mind. After all she was drunk and she didn't have feelings for Angad but just because they were dating, she felt jealous.
She was feeling uncomfortable, and moved his hand away and then turned around and put her arms around his neck and danced even more closer leading him on. He started to caress her open back. He whispered in her ear.
Kavya – You wanna go home with me, we can have a lot more fun over there?
Anjali – (In a drunk state and unable to totally comprehend the meaning of what he said) Yeah sure let's go.
So they both walk out of the club together with Kavya holding her by her waist and moving his hands up and down her back. Seeing this Angad got even more mad and followed her knowing the type of person she was and being drunk. He knew that being in a drunk state, she may do something that in time she will come to regret. So he follows them. By now Monica and Karthik have made up and have already left so he just leaves.
In Kavya's Car…
Kavya keeps looking at Anjali with hungry eyes. He sees her in her hot clothes and just wants her. Anjali being in a drunk state is seducing him like no other.
Meanwhile Angad who had been following Kavya's car the whole while, had lost his car in the traffic. He couldn't find the car anymore. Apparently he had passed Kavya's car without noticing that it was his. He tried Anjali's cell phone but she had left it in his car.
Meanwhile back in Kavya's car. He knew he wouldn't be able to hold his desire all the way to his house, so he drove to a nearby hotel and booked a room. He took Anjali to the room, locked the door. He unbuttoned his shir and took it off he took his shoes and socks off. Anjali, who was busy looking around, did not see what was going on. Kavya pulled Anjali's arm making her fall into his arms. When she felt his bare chest, she started to seduce him again. He then pushed her onto the bed. Her eyes too, were filled with hunger and desire. He went on top of her and once again kissed her passionately. The lights dimmed.
Meanwhile, Angad was getting really worried about where Anjali was and if she was okay. All he could do now was go home and pray to god that Anjali was okay.



What do you think will happen? Will Anjali be able to live with herself after this? How will Angad react?

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Hope u guyz like the part. Please tell me if you think this part was a bit inappropriate, I will edit it, even the picture. I couldn't find anything else. Please comment and I don't mean. good job cont. soon. comments. I want comments telling me how it was, what could be better and what parts u liked. I want at least 5 comments like that.




Edited by dancingdiva91 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
wow. very intense part. this tanya girl seems like such a sl**. neways, great part. cont soon.
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Posted: 18 years ago
hey great part 👏 👏
i think tanya is a b**** and how could she do that
continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: angullgrl91

wow. very intense part. this tanya girl seems like such a sl**. neways, great part. cont soon.



Thx for the comment, i'll try to update tonight.
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: sameira-90

hey great part 👏 👏
i think tanya is a b**** and how could she do that
continue soon



thnx, i'll try and update tonight.
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Posted: 18 years ago
I think I may have confused some of you guys. The fact that she slept with Kavya is not why Angad and Anjali eventually broke up. Angad knows that Anjali is drunk. And Anjali, in a drunk state is doing this, not because she really wants to. I hope this doesn't confuse you further.
Edited by dancingdiva91 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
oo ok i was confused about what was going on

i found this part full of suspense because if angad really loved tanya what happened?

i like the part with angad ad kripa...so cute

continue soon
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Edited by xobrown sugaox - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
cant wait to read next part... 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
omg.. tanya is a drunkin *****!!!!!!!!!!


i thikn she will think of her as a dirty ***** and then start... i donno.. well continue sooooonn..

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