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Posted: 18 years ago
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Welcome to IF 😛

ur fanfic sounds very interesting...the promo ws very good 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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interesting concept... cont soon plz!!!!!!! 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Excellent concept n excellent promo... cnt wait to read ur ff!!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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I will be posting part one really soon I just have to type in the last sentence
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Part one

All stared and he knew. Angad Khanna loved going into public places for many reasons but one of his best was because all the eyes of the sexy women always tested his charming attitude. He loved the attention mostly because he as a child never got the attention he had always craved for, but as he grew in to a handsome hunk more and more women's eyes dragged into his.

After giving the ladies the famous slow walk Angad found his way to the check in counter of the Hilton hotel. At the counter Angad encountered a lovely nineteen or so of age girl with her head buried in a people magazine. Even though Angad couldn't see the girls face he could tell that she was hot by looking at her lovely figure. Angad thought she would be perfect for his pray of the night but then thought she was to young for and twenty-three year old like him. Angad always had this thing about sleeping with women younger then him by two years but he never really minded flirting with any lady at any age.

"Hi there sexy I believe there is a room booked by the name of Angad Khanna waiting for me." Angad said in his sexy deep voice.

The girl who heard the deep voice took her glued eyes out of people magazine and as soon as her lovely calm face came out of the magazine it turned to shock when seeing Angad Khanna in front of her. As her big brown eyes looked into the green manly ones she also saw a shocked and surprised man standing in front of her.

"Kripa!" Angad's voice roared, shocked

Angad never expected that the girl that had put him in jail five years ago for her father's death would end up in Spain working at the Hilton hotel, which is spread around the world. Angad had crossed the border to Spain when British officers were after him form breaking out of prison four years ago. In Spain Angad had gain freedom just as any other citizen of Spain so he knew Kripa couldn't do any thing to him.

Although, Kripa was fourteen at the time when Kripa testified against Angad she remembered his eyes clearly. Kripa ever in her life had understood how any person could take another life away. Now as Kripa looked in to the same mans eyes that she saw five years ago she saw he had changed, he was a bigger devil then before and he was no longer eighteen and geeky he was twenty-three and handsome.

"Angad Khanna, when did you get out of prison, I thought you where sent for life." Kripa said with a hint of humor which surprised her and Angad as to how calm Kripa was being about there meeting.

"I was sent for life no thanks to you, but I escaped four years ago and gained my freedom in Spain by crossing the border." It was weird as to how Angad was talking so maturely with Kripa, but he knew he had to be careful of the words he uses with Kripa she was a tricky girl he knew if he turned his back to her she would stab him in the back. He still remembered clearly as to how Kripa had reacted in court five years ago when he was sentence to life in prison instead of death, she had gone crazy yelling for justice of life for life which lucky for him never happened.

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Angad was pacing in his royal suite walking back and fourth. He knew that Kripa would keep a strong eye on him, and wouldn't rest till he was behind bars. Angad thought it would be best if he stayed low on crime until Kripa was out of the picture.

There was this thing about Angad that made him different from the other killers. He could never kill a person unless he got paid for it. After pacing for five hours Angad decided to see Kripa and have a little chat, his style.

Angad went down the check in counter to find out Kripa's address but to his surprise he found out that she lived in the hotel in room 256 as part of her working contract.

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Kripa was in the little kitchen that was in her hotel room cooking dinner having thousands of thoughts come across her thinking about Angad. What was he doing here in Spain? Was he looking for her? Will he kill her? Will he kill someone else? Did he stop his lie of crime?

Before Kripa could think of anything else the doorbell rang and Kripa headed for the door thinking it would be someone from the staff needing her help. To her surprise she saw the same glassy green-eyed hunk, Angad Khanna, at the door way instead.

"We need to talk" Angad said barging in to her room without permission

The way Angad said we need to talk it sounded as if he was Kripa's boyfriend who was about to break up with her. Angad closed the door behind his as he entered Kripa's small hotel room he went strait to the sofa making him at home. Angad tried to make it look like he was bigger and stronger; the sad part is that it worked. Kripa was scared out of her wits seeing Angad sitting in such a manner in front of her.

"Angad?" Kripa didn't know what else to say. She had made up her mind the second she had seen Angad at the lobby that she would find something against him to put him back in jail but for now she just didn't want trouble with him.

"Please have a seat." Angad said this as if he was the owner of the room not Kripa.

Kripa sat across from Angad being careful of the words she chose to say around him.

"What do you want for me, Angad?" Trying to stay calm.

"Kripa, we both know that you want me dead. The point is I don't trust you." Angad said with no hint of fear in his voice, that this one girl sitting in front of him could put him in jail, again.

Kripa gained some confidence in her-self to tell Angad off. "Of course you can't trust me. You know as much as I do, that I want you dead. Then how could you trust me?"

Kripa stood up walked over to where Angad was sitting, grabbed a hand full of his shirt in her fist, and pulled so hard that he came strait on to his toes causing him to stand on to his toes, high above Kripa.

"Listen here mister I may have been a sixteen year old high school dropout but I am nineteen year old grown women and I know a thing or two about law. I will not rest until I find something against you, to put you behind bars where you belong. NOW GET THE HELL OUT OF HERE!"

Angad grinned at Kripa's sudden out burst, but wasn't all that ready to leave yet.

PLEASE comment and tell me what you think of it because your comments really matter for me to know how the fan fic is going. If you dont like it then please tell me becuase I dont want to wast my time typeing parts if no one reads them. If every one really likes this part then TELL EVERYONE😆jk

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Posted: 18 years ago
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OMG!!! tht was soooo interesting!!! i LOVED it!!! 👏 👏 👏
😳 God... i just LOVE bad boy Angad!!! he's
HOTTT!!!! 😍 😍 😆 i CANNOT wait to read more... so PLEASE
try nd continue soon!!!! 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: berkeleygirl818

OMG!!! tht was soooo interesting!!! i LOVED it!!! 👏 👏 👏
😳 God... i just LOVE bad boy Angad!!! he's
HOTTT!!!! 😍 😍 😆 i CANNOT wait to read more... so PLEASE
try nd continue soon!!!! 😛

I think every one loves bad boy Angad, I guess its a girl thing to chase afters bad boys😆

I will continue as soon as I can but I cant say any thing for sure

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Posted: 18 years ago
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ssuuuuuuper! dat was amazing!! i lovd it! can't wait for more.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Prom

"Option one you die right here in your own hotel room."

"Option two you live with me in my room as a missing person to the world. I will never hurt you once or miss treat you but in return for living with me, you will cook and clean for me"

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Posted: 18 years ago
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WOWO!!!! interesting promo, CANNOT wait to read more!!! continue
soon!!! 😛

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