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Prom

"Kripa, sometimes you have to think like a cop to get away from one."

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Prom

"Mr. Khanna you will not, I repeat will not..." Before Kripa could say anything else her words were cut off by...

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Part 7

Kripa wasn't all that worried when Angad didn't return for two hours. She was still angry at him but knew she liked every moment of that passionate kiss. After about two hours and thirty minutes of waiting for Angad to return, he finally returned. Angad instead of just driving away just sat in the car looking into his rearview mirror.

"Angad why aren't you driving away, the cops will be surrounding this place a mile a minute." Kripa was starting to get worried if she and Angad would get caught.

"Kripa, sometimes you have to think like a cop to get away from one." Angad just said this keeping his eyes just glued to the rearview mirror.

"WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU TALKING ABOUT, Angad Khanna you have gone mad." Kripa screamed part of the sentence and the other half she just said it stressfully.

Angad was kind of getting annoyed as to how stupid Kripa could be "Look Kripa, if I run then the cops will look for a car going a bit faster then normal but if I sit here making out with you then the cops will think we are two honeymoon couples at the right place at the wrong time."

Kripa didn't register a word Angad said after the words make out "Mr. Khanna you will not, I repeat will not..." Before Kripa could say anything else her words were cut off by Angad's lips on her's.

This time Angad hadn't kissed her, not only because the cops were coming around the corner but because he was tempted to by his own will. Kripa must have felt the something because this time she caved in and kissed his back with twice the passion from before.

Both forgot the main reason as to why they were kissing one another, it was like coming up to a random person and just making love to them, right there and then, it was weird and a disgusting in a loving way but overall both wanted something more then a kiss, they wanted the other to commit which was something neither was willing to do.

Soon the cops knocking on Angad's car window broke their passionate love seen. Angad broke his passionate yet meaningful in a weird way kiss and rolled down the window showing no sign of guilt on his face.

"Is there a problem, officer?" Angad said almost sounding sarcastic but could pass for serious.

"No, just a break in a few miles from here, I suggest you and your…uumm… wife should head home" The officer said this almost a bit embarrassed that he had to walk in on the two couples in such a way.

"Sure thing" Angad gave a smile and then rolled up his window and then started the car. It was about ten minutes in to the ride home, when Kripa realized that Angad wasn't driving towards home!

sorry for the short part again but I was running out of time and was unable to post a long part

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Posted: 18 years ago

Prom

Mixed in sand and love= WHAT?

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Posted: 18 years ago
fab part!! omg i knew he was gonna kiss her!! lol!! wonder where he is taking her 😉....OMG!! mixed in sand and love= erm what i think it means...are they gonna ahem ... too embarassed to even say it!! lol!! continue soon 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
great part and promo let me guess there a the beach 😳 oooo interesting
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Originally posted by: erier101

fab part!! omg i knew he was gonna kiss her!! lol!! wonder where he is taking her 😉....OMG!! mixed in sand and love= erm what i think it means...are they gonna ahem ... too embarassed to even say it!! lol!! continue soon 👏

sorry to say but ahem its not going to happen, unfortunately, well at least not so soon😳

what i mean to say was "Mixed in sand and love=....(sorry wont tell) you will have to wait to find out😉

glad you liked the part, I thought ppl would hate part 7...thinking I am coming on to strong, if you get what I mean😛

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Important messag- Hi every one I kind of need your help on something, I am not sure if I should end this fan fic soon like in two or three parts and start another fan fic or if I should keep continueing and make it longer, what do you all think...is this a good fan fic to keep going or should I finish this one soon and start another?

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Posted: 18 years ago
i think u shud make it longer becuz it's an interesting concept. Awesome part cont soon plz!!!!!!!!! 👏
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Originally posted by: iqbals4ever

i think u shud make it longer becuz it's an interesting concept. Awesome part cont soon plz!!!!!!!!! 👏

thanks for the help, if any one has a diffrent thought please say so because I do not want to keep writing if people are geting bord out of there wits lol😆

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