*~ Jaye Kahan Yeh Dil *~New Addition #4

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hey !

Well this story might not make sense to some of the people...i dnt really knw wht i m going to write maself..itz basically for sumone really specail...jisk liye yeh FF likh raha hoon...its based on ma real life....so itz hard to write....but....i hope u ppl like it....itz abt

TWO LIVES...TWO PEOPLE.....AND THERE RELATION.....

There are some relations which go beyond words...
Some relations which define you...
But you can't define them, however hard you try

Not everybody is someone's brother, or sister...
Or someone's father or mother...
Or boyfriend or girlfriend...
Or lover or friend...
Or......

...

This kind of relation is btw Amna and Adnan lets see...whtz itz future...wud they be ever able to name it or just remain the way it is...

ADNAN

This story is very simple abt GURL named AMNA , she belong the a conservative muslim family. She is a very homy kinda gurl her family means world to her . She always thinks abt her family or her studies....this is her life.She goes to Uni and studies there..hai....and comes home...and still studies....and....she wakes all night...with...the moon and stars...STILL STUDING

AMNA

Amna: Come on yaar meri life itni bhi boring nahin hai.....i m not dat boring u see...

Adnan: Oh haan itni bhi boring nahin hai.....but interesting kya hai ?

Amna:tum apne app ko boring keha rahe hooo ?

Adnan:mein ek hee interesting cheez hoon apki zindagi mein

Amna:keha sakte hoooo....

Adnan:wht abt the two other heros in OUR story...unka intro tum de rahi hoo ke mein doun

Amna:itz OUR story....so woh edit keroo na ke itz abt a GURL tum bhi toh hooo ismein...aur woh dono bhi

Adnan:okay....baki sab ka tum abhi bata rahi hoo na.......so phele...

RAHEEL

Amna: Raheel is in Army, most of time he is out for his training and stuff...

Adnan:Aree yeh nahin temme...wht kind of guy is he....

Amna:He has a very lively personality ,i have never seen him depressed or angry,always cheering me up..always joking around with me aur u can say..humara rishta aisay hee strong hua tha..we kept each other happy

Adnan:nahin i dnt wana say anything tum bata rahi hoo na....so r u done...

Amna:Yeah....

Adnan:ab wht abt ur dat best friend....Asad Shuja . He is a Engineer has alot of time for u .....lol

Amna:dnt be mean...yaar he is a gud friend of urs...

Adnan:yeah yeah

Amna:jealoused

Adnan:why wud i be....CONTINUE

ASAD

Amna:well.....he is also not that expressive..he forces himself to express...but he doesn't know how to potray his feelings ,or u can say..he doesn't know how to make someone feel for his emotions. He is sensitive...loving bhi hai....

Adnan:ahaaan ab

Amna:ab kya ?

Adnan:ahem ab....woh HUM

Amna:Hum kya ?

Adnan:i mean decribe me na

Amna:u knw abt urself na

Adnan:haan na but yahan intro tum de rahi hoo

Amna:haan unk de diye na tum apna intro khud dou na..

Adnan:datz not fair...khair...i m photographer....and unforturnately i m studing in the same Uni as Amna is in....so pura din yeh mera sar khati hai...bas

Amna:bas....

Adnan:haan na bas...aur kya batana hai

Amna:wht abt ur ghussa...jo tum pura din muj per karte hoo...jab ke meri ghalti bhi nahin hoti

Adnan:woh toh readers wud knw...wht we are like...in cumming parts na...yeh intro hai....

Amna:nahin...mujhe intro bhi bahut kuch batana hai tumhare baare mein...

Adnan:per....next part nahin parheinge na....readers...agr abhi sab kuch bata dougi

Amna:Shutup...Adnan

Adnan:Okay

Amna: the one and only Mr. Adnan

Adnan is someone with a very Strong Emotions....

Extreme hota hai...ghussa bhi aur pyaar bhi

Adnan(teasing) :Mere pyar ka bhi pata hai

Amna:haan pata hai ab app chup rahein....pata hona chaiye...ke jab koi baat kar raha hoo toh beech mein nahin bolte

Adnan:fine ghalit hogayi

Amna:ab yahan toh tum naraaz ho lou ya sun lou

Adnan:wateva....bolo

Amna:haan so Mr. Adnan knows everything..per unn ko sunna hota hai..ek ek baat...

aur kisi na kisi terha se woh bulwa ke rehte hai...he is very cute...ghusse mein aur cute lagte hain

Adnan:Amna tang nahin keroo

Amna:tang kahan kar rahi hoon see kitni tareef kar rahi hoon tumhari....

Adnan:right....

Amna:acha na i m serious now....mood theek keroo na

Adnan:hmmmm

Amna :you are someone...who made me feel from my heart and not to think from mind....someone who touched my heart so deeply that i couldn't be away from you for one day,who let me feel the breeze of air on my face and made me listen to the sound of flowing water,someone..who made me talk to myself...who made me acquainted with who i am...someone not perfect...but still better than perfect......

Adnan(smiling):Aur

Amna:aur bhi suna hai

Adnan:haan na

Amna:Aur yeh...ke...

Adnan:ke...

Amna:ke....mein

Adnan:ke tum

Amna:ke mein ghar jaa rahi hoon.....itz late...

Adnan:kya yaar....u r soooooooo unromantic

Amna:tumhein kaha kisne ke mein romantic hoon

Adnan:ghalti hogayi...ke maine asa socha

Amna:kal....chemistry ka test hai....do study

Adnan:sunai nahin de raha....BYEEEEEE Amna

Amna(smiles):pagal....BYE

Adnan:ab Amna toh chali gayi so let me tell u sumthing more abt this story......Raheel was in the same Uni as we are now..but woh mere join karne se phele hee Army mein chala gaya so mein khabhi mila nahin usse...Amna se suna bahut hai..seems like a nice guy......and Asad is Amna's friend but Amna is Asad best friend....so all and all friendz hain......and....WE 3 Love Amna....this story is abt.....whom does she loves...how to circumstances affect the feelings.....wud we gave up to the circumstances

Edited by Adiii - 17 years ago

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Posted: 18 years ago
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brill intro.......sounds very interesting....based or ur life u said? coool, plz write more soon 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: Gaurav''s Love

brill intro.......sounds very interesting....based or ur life u said? coool, plz write more soon 😊

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hey..thanks...well yeah i said dat itz kinda inspried frm ma own life....😎

Edited by Adiii - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Awesome Its very interesting 😃 by the way i also have my real life story online anyways cont soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: Anam Ali

Awesome Its very interesting 😃 by the way i also have my real life story online anyways cont soon

glad u liked it....and yeah i saw ur FF too...wud read is sumtime 😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
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i really like it! its really good!! continue soon! 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hi Mr i just read ur story and it sound too cool to me 👏 waho wat a intro of ur story seems ur life is too intresting as ur story awsome cant wait to read more 😉 pls post it soon
Edited by shruti_gauri1 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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What An Heartwarming And Brilliant
start 👏

I wish i was Aamna...three handsome guys gaga over me, how kewl would that be. 😳

And how boring of Aamna...itna studious hona acha nahin hai. 😛

Adnan's character sound so cute. 😃

Keep it going Adi, LOVE it. 👏
Edited by CuteAreej - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Its brillant. The intro was so so so good. now just cant wait for the first part. waiting eaagerly.

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Some other charaters


They aren't so imp in this story but they are there for a short while

Faisal


Amna's annoying younger brother , who luvs teasing her sis . He too studies in the same Uni as Amna is in .



Maharukh


Adnan kiddo sis....who he luvs alot and is one of the person who means alot to him. She just want to see her bro happy no matter wht .

Ayesha


Adnan's ex gurlfriend....still in his life as a friend....things are kinda awkward wen he has to face Amna and Ayesha at the same time....


ALL THE STORY IS SET IN A UNIVERSITY WHERE ALL ARE FRIENDZ I M NOT TAKING THIS STORY TO THE FAMILY AS THEY AREN'T MUCH INTO IT SO I DIDN'T GAVE THERE INTRO BUT OFCORUSE ADNAN AND AMNA HAD LOVING PARENTS WUD INTRODUCE THEM IF I FELT THEY NEED TO BE HERE.

Edited by Adiii - 18 years ago

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