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Posted: 18 years ago
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JAYE KAHAN YEH DIL



Its has been a week dat Adnan joined the Uni...he has been too busy with Ayesha dat he haven't met Amna and Asad for long. Itz a sunny morning as usual Adnan is waiting to Ayesha in Cafteria and as usual she is late...he is really getting angry on her .
[Ayesha enters the cafe with Asad n he seeing Adnan goes to him]
Asad:Hiii
Adnan:Hii
Asad:how r u ?
Adnan:okay (still not looking at Asad his eyes are still at door.....waiting for Ayesha anixously)
Asad:Ayesha aajayegi why dnt u have a coffe with us till then(Amna also walks to them)
Adnan:No thank.
Amna(interups): come on kab tak yahan akela khare rahooge sit with us..uska intezaar humare saath beth kar bhi hosakta hai...
Adnan:ummm okay...
( Amna and Asad are talking abt various random things...Adnan is not paying much attention....his temper is just raising dat Ayesha isn't here yet...wenever Asad or Amna addresses him he contribute his views to tell them he is right there....after like half n hour Ayesha enters tha cafeteria all in smiles...Adnan ignores her...she walks to the table they 3 are sitting at...and pulls a chair for herself)
Ayesha:Hiii everybody !
Asad:Hiii...where have u been ?
Amna:Hii...Adnan has been really waiting for u ...
Ayesha:Hiii...Adi
(Adnan doesn't reply he gets up frm the table )
Adnan:i have a class guyz i gotta go c u laterz...BYE (he leaves without seeing toward Ayesha)
Ayesha:Isse kia hua ?
Ayesha:kafi dayer se tumhara wait kar raha tha so mayb datz why
Ayesha:i knw but i have alot of work to do...studies and job doing both isn't easy.....
Asad:haan
Ayesha:anyhow i wud see u guyz later too
Asad:okay Bye....
Amna:Bye
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Adnan comes out after attending the class....sees Ayesha waiting for him....he ignores and pass by her
Ayesha:Adi meri baat toh sunooo...
Adnan:dnt call me Adi my name is Adnan
Ayesha:i knw but i call u Adi so mein wohi bolongi...
Adnan:fine
Ayesha:hua kia ??? bataooo toh ??
Adnan:dnt bother...jao tum apne friendz ke saath jaa kar betho...mein naraaz hoon ya kyun ghussa hoon usse fariq nahin parhta right ???
Ayesha:Adi asa nahin hai.......
Adnan:toh kaisa hai ?
Ayesha:i m sorry
Adnan:kya apko andaza hai mein kitni dayer se wait kar raha hoon ?
Ayesha:Oh yeah woh office ka ek kaam tha
Adnan:inform bhi toh kar sakti thee mujhe
Ayesha:haan but time hee nahin mila
Adnan:time milta nahin nikalta parhta hai....
Ayesha:acha ab sorry bola na
Adnan:kya karooon tumhare sorry ka...wht gud wud it give to me
Ayesha:kitna ghussa kerooge...u knw tum ghusse mein kitne cute lagte hooo
Adnan:not again.....
Ayesha:ab cute lagte hoo toh kahooongi na
Adnan(smiles):tum nahin sudharoogi
Ayesha:tumhara asar hai kya tum sudhar sakte hoo
Adnan:Nahin.....i missed u
Ayesha:i missed u too ( both share a friendly hug)
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Itz it became a routine dat Ayesha used to be late...frm Uni or rather say meeting Adnan was more imp....and Adnan gets pissed off frm just waiting and waiting....the arguements btw them were increasing and...the distance was becoming more cuz of the lack of communication.....[ btw Ayesha is a fashion designer and studing for her MBA so she is relaly busy with her media world]

A SIMILAR DAY
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Ayesha :Hiii handsome
Adnan:Hiiii
Ayesha:sorry i m late
Adnan:kaunsi nayi baat hai aadat hogayi hai
Ayesha:kya yaar....tum kitna naraaz hote hoo
Adnan:tang agayi hoo mujhse
Ayesha:Adiii...please
Adnan:wohi toh Ayesha please agr tum mujse tang agayi hooo bata dou....
Ayesha:tumhein asa lagta hai
Adnan:haan shyad
Ayesha:so wht u wana do
Adnan: i dnt knw
Ayesha:i m going to Paris for 1 month
Adnan:wht the hell ??? u r not going anywhere
Ayesha:i m...Adi ...i have to
Adnan:mein kya keroonga yaar....i m here just for u....u knw i m here taake tumhare saath reh sakooon.....so i can talk to u everyday...tum jaa rahi hooo mujhe akela chor kar
Ayesha:Adi akele kahan.....u have friend here..Amna hai Asad hai...they wud takecare of u
Adnan:i have a friend???? i dnt even knw them properly
Ayesha:Amna is a very nice gurl u wud get along with her dosti kar ke toh dekhoo usse
Adnan:but u r ma best friend....
Ayesha:haan woh toh mein hoon...but Amna is not bad be friendly with her.....best friend bhi ban jayegi...
Adnan:fine tum jao....
Ayesha:i wud miss u Adi(hugs him )Bye
Adnan:Bye....

ONE THE OTHER SIDE
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Amna:dhaakan tum mujhe abhi bata rahe hooo
Asad:haan toh aur kab batata...woh kia hai na ke tumhein batane ke liye mujhe pata hona zaroori tha warna tumhein phele bata deta....
Amna:not funny at all
Asad:sirf 1 month ki baat hai....itz just a seminar jo attend karna hai
Amna:seminar itna lamba nahi hota
Asad:yeah saath training bhi hai sum sought of
Amna:hmmm yeah i wud miss u
Asad:i wud miss u too...
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Okay 2 ppl.....away frm there frndz....all alone...wud be seeking each other company...in next part....just for TIMEPASS datz the twist....neither of them is interested in being with other...Ayesha and Asad both are not arnd...whom can be the best to be with....

I wud be continuing this FF on weekendz....
Takecare


Edited by Adiii - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#22
oh adiii yaar great part ky alih ahai awesome toooo toooooooo gooooooooooood abh dono bechare hogae adii bi aur amna bi abh kya kare dost hi chalegae 😭 lekin they could compny eachother 😳 ctninue sooooon will be waiting
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Posted: 18 years ago
#23
hey adii brilliant part 1 again yeah ayesha asad bhi na chord kar bhag gaye neways keep it up and pls post next part soon cant wait to read wat happend next
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Posted: 17 years ago
#24

When are you gonna post the next part??? Reallyyy waiting for it...😳

Love the story!!! 👏

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Posted: 17 years ago
#25

JAYE KAHAN YEH DIL

Cafeteraia
Adnan is sitting alone on the table....reading some stuff....Amna comes and sits on the table with him...
Amna: ahem..AoA !
Adnan: W/Salam
Amna: kaise hain app
Adnan: mein theek hoon... app sunaye ?
Amna: mein bhi theek hoon adhumduillah
Adnan: so kya horaha hai ?
Amna: kuch khass nahin....tum Ayesha ka wait kar rahe hoge
Adnan: ummm not really...
Amna: hehehe i knoww ussi ki wait kar rahe hooo
Adnan: well yeah aaj we had planned to go out but as usual she is not here kal uski flight hai so we wnt be together till a month now....
Amna: ahan
Adnan: u wanted to take to her ma fav place....
Amna: nice
Adnan: tum chalugi mere saath....
Amna: mein ??
Adnan: nahin tumhare padosi
Amna: hehehe nahin Ayesha ka wait karlou she wud be here waise bhi i dnt go one dates
Adnan: well hum friends hain so its not a date...just hanging out together...
Amna: kahan ??
Adnan: tum bolo tumhein chalna hai ke nahin...
Amna: acha baba theek hai....
Adnan: kewl....sharp at 7 tayyar rehna i will pick u up
Amna: theek hai...
Adnan: ab tum intezaar mat karwana
Amna(smiles): mein Ayesha nahin hoon
Adnan: tum ho bhi nahin sakti
Amna : mujhe hona bhi nahin hai
Adnan: acha na
Amna: i m going shoing
Adnan: kahan..??
Amna: meri class hai....
Adnan: okay....theek hai..
Amna: Byeeeeeee
Adnan(smiles): byeeeeeeeee
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Evening
******
In Car
Amna: so hum kahan jaa rahe hain
Adnan: tum bolo kahan jana hai tumhein....
Amna: ummmm kahin bhi
Adnan: okay i will take u to ma fav place.....
Amna: ahan...chalu
Adnan: chalu nahin yaar car mein jaa rahe hain na....
Amna:hehehehe pagal...
Adnan: Ayesha bhi mujhe aise hee kehti thee
Amna: nice...
Adnan: haan na...she is sooo sweet...i m gonna miss her sooo much....
Amna: me too
Adnan: u r gonna miss Ayesha
Amna: nahin Asad bhi chala gaya na...so i will miss him
Adnan: Oh yeah...(Adnan stops the car )
Amna: are we there
Adnan: yeah...chalein....
Amna: sure
( Its a beautiful lakes surrounded with tress and the wind is blowing...with moon on its full bloom and datz the only light arnd )
Amna: This is soooooooooo beautiful...
Adnan: achi hai na....Ayesha ko bhi bahut passand ani theee...i knew but....
Amna: hmmm yeah...
Adnan: u knw jab bhi mein akela hota hoon na...yahan ata hoon....aaj pheli bar kisi ke saath aya hoon...
Amna: yeah this place is really relaxing ....
Adnan: yeah i knowwwwww....acha boating par chalugi ??
Amna: haan na chalu....

BOAT
*****
Adnan: Ms. Amna yeh boat mein akela nahin chalne wala...apko mera saath dena padega...
Amna: tumhara saath hi toh de rahi hoon.....per khabhi khabhi lagta hai tumhein mere saath ki zaroorat nahin hai....
Adnan: matlab...
Amna: nahin kuch nahin.....
Adnan:Okay.....so temme abt u and Abhi...r u just friends...
Amna: absolutely...kyun tumhein shak hai....
Adnan: maine aisa kab kaha
Amna: so temme sumthing abt urself....
Adnan:well pata toh hai.....
Amna: nahin something i dnt knw.......

(And they keep on talking abt random stuff.....)
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PRESENT
********
(Amna commin out of class....sees Adnan..talking to himself )
Amna: Oyee kya kar rahe hooo
Adnan: tum kab ayi....
Amna: tum apne ap se baatein kis khushi mein kar rahe thay
Adnan: nahin woh mein try kar raha tha ke pagal loug kaise baatein karte hain...
Amna: mujhe toh tum per bhi shak hota hai....
Adnan: kis baat ka
Amna: ke tum normal nahin hooo
Adnan: toh ismein shak wali kya baat hai...agr normal hota tumse pyar thori hota...
Amna: right...
Adnan: naraaz hogayi ?
Amna: kyun hongi?
Adnan: gals ka koi bharoosa nahin hota na
Amna: nahin hoon naraaz ab bolo kya kar rahe thay.....
Adnan: i was telling our readers abt our first date...
Amna: woh boring date....
Adnan: haan na...jahan itni khubsorat jagah per...hum dono ko Asad aur Ayesha yaad arahe thay....
Amna: heylooo (Adnan interups)
Adnan: mein tumhare saamne hoon fone karne ka plan hai mujhe...
Amna: aaree i mean i wasn't missing Asad...woh toh tum hee Ayesha ke gun gaa rahe thay....
Adnan: toh mein ab tumse aur kya baat karta...i had no other choice....tumne bhi toh koi baat nahin ki....
Amna: haan toh mein kya kehti......
Adnan: haan yaar..Ayesha ke saamne koi kcuh nahin kehta.....she was soooo.....
Amna: wht ?
Adnan: yaar u knw na....
Amna: dude tumhari choice isn't good...
Adnan: acha ??
Amna: haan mein jaa rhai hoon( walkin away)
Adnan: aare suno toh
Amna: nahin mujhe nahin suna...
Adnan: tum bhi meri choice hooo Amna....
Amna: tum pagal hoooo Adnan....
Adnan(to himself): jaanta hoon....tumhare liye pagal hoon...

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I m continueing this FF on a special request...most of u might find it slow...or boring...but it had to be this way....as i m trying to pen down every memory of ma life.....

This is for u AJ ;)




Edited by Adildagr8 - 17 years ago

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