Pyaar....(LRL- RN fic - THE END- pg 31)

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andreamcl

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Posted: 18 years ago

#171

Hey such a good and cute fic, I can't wait for the next part!

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Anuradha

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Posted: 18 years ago

#172

Hey ayesha pls update yaar Serial mein to R-N ke beech ki differences kabhi mitegi bhi nehi yeh to nehi pata...par u atleast update soon...actual mein ho nehi sakta to kya..fan fic padke dil khush ho jati hai...aur us mein bhi tum itnaaa wait kar wati ho?? 😕

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Ayesha

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Posted: 18 years ago

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Hey Guys! I am so so so so sorry for the delay! School is piling us with so much work, I think I will go mad doing this! So please forgive me and thanx a lot for your support, comments and most of all, comments! Enjoy!

PART 22

Raj had asked Riya to help him dress up and now he totally regretted it. Riya had made him try on every piece of clothing in his closet, and finally, after 2 hours had come on to a decision. But when he finally saw himself in the mirror wearing what Riya had told him to, all his irritation with her vanished. He looked stunning. Wearing a white wool-type V-necked top with a black leather jacket and black jeans and slightly gelled up hair, he looked drop dead gorgeous. He himself was quite stunned with the result.
Riya (proudly): well….
Raj just shook his head, laughing and gave her a tight hug.
Raj- Oh sis, what would I ever do without you? Or better, how would I ever live without you?
Riya laughed: oh very well I think… but its no time to become "mera pyaara bahi" now. You have to become "bhabi's pyaara boyfriend"!
Raj blushed while Riya smirked. Thrusting the rose boquet in his hand, she pushed him out of the door, giving him pointers on the way about how to behave.
Riya: And puhleez… don't look so nervous! No fumbling! Be confident, but not over confident! And don't forget the boquet! Now go… don't just stand here!
Finally when Raj reached the car, his mind finally cleared. While he waited for Naina to come, all the girls passing by just stood where they were, stunned and speechless, staring at Raj. When around 6-7 girls had gathered up, Raj had started feeling really uncomfortable and was longing for Naina to come. But when she did he stood stunned, his mouth open looking at a girl who looked more like an angel…
Her hair was open and she was wearing a lovely peach saree and a sleeveless blouse. He had never known that she could look so stunning in Indian attire. He went up to her with a boyish smile on his face.
Raj- Hello maam, aapko yahan pehle kahin nahin dekha hai. Aap kaun ho?
Naina- Well, mein ek pari hoon. Aur aap?
Raj- Mein prince charming! Waise agar aap kuch nahin kar rahi ho to kya aap yeh shaam mere saath bitaaogi?
Naina- Hmmm… lekin aapki girlfriend?
Raj- Aap fikar mat keejiye… who bahut bholi hai, use koi shak nahin hoga. Aur aapka boyfriend?
Naina- Who bhi bahut stupid hai. Uska koi problem nahin.
Raj couldn't control himself now. Laughing, he led naina to the car, towards their first date!

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yoginisahakari

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Posted: 18 years ago

#174

hey good going ayesha

pl continue and that to Fast

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Anuradha

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Posted: 18 years ago

#175

At last u updated...uff...but really beautifulllllllll part.... 👏 ....try to compensate the delay by posting a longggg one next 😉

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divya

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Posted: 18 years ago

#176

awesome work 👏 yaar do continue soon

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Bhumika amin

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Posted: 18 years ago

#177

hey i read ur whole it was so good..romantic 😳 dramatic 😆 funny 🤣 and excellent..................
plz write more............ 😃

ami_princess 😳 😳

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Ayesha

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Posted: 18 years ago

#178

Thanx a lot guys. I will update now. I know that this part is very short and breif but I have no choice- I am just too busy with school work. So Plz forgive me and keep commenting and reading!

PART 23

Raj and Naina drove towards their date happily chattering away. Sussenly Raj said something which almost made naina faint.
Raj: Tumhe ek surprise dena hai.
Naina: kya?
Raj: Aaj mujhe Colonel Shakti ka phone aaya tha. Unhone ne mujhse kaha ki Naveen ki case ki pehli sunwaai aaj thi. And aaj humara side itna strong tha ki unhe lagta hai ki 2-4 dino mein court humare favor mein verdict de dega.
Naina squeeled so loudly that Raj thought he will soon go deaf.
Naina: Oh my god Raj! I cant believe this! Yeh kaise ho sakta hai?
Raj: Naina, Naveen ke trial ke dauraan bahut foul play involved tha lekin is waqt aisa kuch nahin hai. Is waqt humare paas itna proof hai ki ab jeet humaari hi hogi!
Naina was on top of the world. The her dream was now getting fulfilled. Soon her brother would be proclaimed a martyr!

They soon reached a hill top and when Naina got out of the car she was speechless. There, right on top of the hill, from where the entire Ambala looked so beautiful was a table for two with a candle. Waiters stood around treating them oh so royally! Naina felt like a princess as she was led to the table.
Naina: Raj… yeh sab….
Raj: Accha laga?
Naina: Its beautiful… magar tumne… I mean kaise…
Raj laughed: Meine Marios mein special order di thi aisi setting ki.
They ate their dinner chattering away about Naveen, KMA, the upcoming exams etc. After they finished the dinner, they sat under a tree, Raj's head on Naina's lap (the waiters had mysteriously disappeared). The silence was so peaceful, the moon was so bright, that the night seemed all the more romantic.
Raj: Naina
Naina: hmmm..
Raj: mein soch raha tha
Naina: Kya?
Raj: hum itne khush hai na ab
Naina: haan, ofcourse. Kyun?
Raj: Nahin, bas yunhi…. Humare future ke bare mein soch raha tha. Agar humara ajj, jahan humei sab se chupna padta hai itna khoobsurat hai, to phir humara kal to isse bhi zyaada khoobsoorat hoga na.
Naina: Of course hoga. Bahut jald…
Raj: Bahut jald humari shaadi hogi
Naina: Phir honeymoon ke liye kahan jaayege?
Raj: I dunno…. Bahamas?
Naina: Bahamas? Meaning the beach? No… I wanna go to Switzerland… snowy romantic alps…
Raj: Lekin snow to humein himachal jaisi jagah mein bhi milta hai na.
Naina: To? Mujhe wahan jaana hai.
Raj: Theek hai, hum france jaayenge. Wahan lovely snow capped mountains bhi hai or gorgeous beaches bhi.
Naina: Perfect.
Raj: Aur phir… kuch saal baad, mujhe ek beti chaahiye, bilkul tumhari jaisi…
Naina couldn't help but laugh
Naina: Raj.. that's a very very long time away.
Raj: I know…. Perhaps we should think of things more immediate, like your exams and that BC will be back in the academy at sharp 2200 hours.
Naina: Oh ya…..
And hand in hand, they quickly hurried back to the car, thus marking the end of their first, and beautiful date!

Edited by ayeshacassim - 18 years ago

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yoginisahakari

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Posted: 18 years ago

#179

its too good ayesha

pl continue

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Bhumika amin

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Posted: 18 years ago

#180

ayesha it was so good...........so romantic 😳 raj and naina were thinking about their weeding, their honeymoon and their 1st child.........ohhhhhhhhh so cute 😳

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