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Posted: 18 years ago
Ohh how sweet they even have done family planning.. 😳 very cute..post soon 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
thanx a lot guys! Infact, this was even one of my fav parts. but y so little comments? plz readers do give more comments since the next part will be the LAST AND FINAL part in this story. so plz do read it when i update, which will be soon.

I repeat, "LAST PART COMMING UP SOON!"
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Posted: 18 years ago
hey dont make it last part..........we are going to miss ur ff a lot 😭 i hope u wrote more parts........... 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: ayeshacassim

thanx a lot guys! Infact, this was even one of my fav parts. but y so little comments? plz readers do give more comments since the next part will be the LAST AND FINAL part in this story. so plz do read it when i update, which will be soon.

I repeat, "LAST PART COMMING UP SOON!"

what r u saying?LAST PART?????why r u very busy wid ur studies so not being able to continue???update irregularly but pls don't end this beautiful story sooooo soon...😕

Edited by diya7000 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
Okay Guys! So here I am with the last part of this fan-fic. I have really really enjoyed writing this guys! And I hope you all have enjoyed reading this! RN is my favourite jodi and writing this story gave me ample time to imagine romantic scenes between them! But as you all can see, I am not able to do justice to the fic bcoz of my studies. And If I cannot give it my 100%, then its better I end it b4 it gets lousy. Right now school is my first priority! But perhaps in my next vacations I will try to start a new one! But for that I need your encouraging comments. So plz plz plz post your comments on this part and the fic as a whole soon. Even the silent readers, plz do! I will be waiting for all your comments! Thanx a lot once again for all your support without which I wouldn't have been able to go so far! LUV YA!!!!!

PART 24

The next few days proved to be extremely busy for everyone due to the upcoming exams. Raj and Naina spent all their free time together alright, but not romantically; in fact Raj was spending almost all his time teaching Naina whom he wanted to win the prize of best cadet. Raj felt like he was taking his exams all over again. And to add to the pressure, the next and final trial in the Naveen Singh Ahluwalia case was on July 20th – the day of Naina's first exam. So Raj would have to be in the court and as promised to Naina he would have to do all that he could to see to it that the case is won by them.

The day before the beginning of the exams, an orderly came to Naina's room and handed her a gift.
Orderly- Yeh Capt. Rajveer ne aap ke liye bheja hai.
Naina was surprised and asked the orderly to leave. When she opened the gift she could not control her excitement. In a beautiful, black, leather bound box lay a handsome gold plated pen, encrusted with small diamonds. When she saw the brand name she gasped with shock- Mont Blanc, one of the finest and most expensive pen manufacturing brands in the world. With it was a small handwritten note. It read as:

Dear Naina

Tumhare liye ek chota sa taufa. A good luck present for your exams.
I hope you like it!

Waiting for your response,

Love

Raj


Excitedly she picked up Pooja's phone and dialed Raj's number.

Raj- hello
Naina- Hi raj!
Raj- Pooja? Tumhari aawaaz ko kyaho gaya?
Naina- Oh very funny Raj. Tumhara present mil gaya.
Raj- Liked it?
Naina- Liked it? Loved it! Magar itne expensive present ki kya zaroorat thi? It must have costed so much!
Raj- Tumhare liye aasmaan ke tare bhi kam hai, to yeh pen kya cheez hai.
Naina- (laughing) Raj! Thank you so much!I love you!
Raj- I love you to.
Naina- Accha kal case hai na. to phir case ka….
Raj- Naina, main ne tumhe kitni baar kaha hai kit um case ki fikar mujhpar chod do. Tum bas exams par concentrate karo. Im sure case humare favour mein hi jaayega.
Naina- Yes! Accha ab mein chalti hoon. Bye
Raj- Bye.

The next day was very taxing for Naina. The pressure of Exams as well as the case. Soon after the exam was over, she was waiting for Raj. And when he came, his smiling face said it wall. She ran and hugged him, the happiest person in the world! The remaining exams went terrifically and time passed very fast. Soon the last exam was also over and it was graduation day. Everyone she loved was there- her parents, raj, Riya and even her bhaiya, now his picture on the wall of fame. How proud they all were when she was awarded best cadet! But soon Raj took the mike to speak. This surprised naina as she was not expecting it.

Raj- Good afternoon cadets… oh sorry, our new army officers, faculty and all others present here. Today is, as you all know a very important day in the lives of our new soldiers as well as their loved ones. Our dreams are finally fulfilled and I would like to congratulate you all. But today is also a very important day for me. I can finally declare my love to the whole world!

This was met by gasps from the crowd. Naina had no idea what he was upto.

Raj- 2 years back I met this girl, strong, responsible, smart, pretty, determined and ambitious who also happened to be my best friend's sister. But soon I started getting attracted to her and fell in love with her. To my joy, I found out that even she was in love with me. But we could not bring that to light since she was still a cadet and a cadet-teacher relationship was not allowed. But today she is no longer a cadet. Today she is a soldier. Yes, I am talking about Lt. Naina Singh Ahluwalia. And I can finally bring my love out in the open.

Most of the crowd looked shocked except Riya, Naina's parents (who appeared to know it all), Dr. Shalini, Huda, Yudi, Ali, Pooja and Aalekh, who were beaming with joy. Naina could not believe what was going on. She rose from her chair, numb with shock. Was it really happening? Raj came up to her, went on his knee and gave out his hand.

Raj- Naina Singh Ahluwalia, kya aap Mrs. Naina Singh Shekhawat banogi? Will you marry me?

Naina felt like flying, Her dreams were finally turning to reality. She said a shy "yes" and gave her hand in his. As he pulled her into a tight embrace and as the crowd applauded, she knew that this was just the beginning of her happiness……

THE END

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Posted: 18 years ago
hey great story ayeha

good going

all the best for ur schoola nd exams

hoping to read a new FF soon from u
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Posted: 18 years ago
thanks for posting ur fab. part....love it...i hope it wasn't last part but it is 😭 .......but i am eagerly waiting for ur new ff....... 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
hey it was awesome 👏 now il be waiting fo r your next ff
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Posted: 18 years ago
A magnificent story should have ended this way.. 👏..gr8 creation ayesha...after each of the episodes I appreciated your work...ur imaginary power is just brilliant... 👏 👏..though I am not happy as you ended the story so early..but as u said study is ur 1st priority n it should be d 1st priority...I'll be waiting for ur vacation...much more eagerly than you..hope u'll keep ur promise of starting a new ff...
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Posted: 18 years ago
great ending ayesha.. happily ever after!!! we enjoyed reading ur ff as much as u enjoyed writing it.. thanks for such a lovely ff.. hope u continue writing more..

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