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Posted: 18 years ago
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Kyon kiya

Next day

Sneha : yeh laloo kab a raha hai

Piya : laloo ?

Sneha : haan voh mera notanki pati

Piya : uff…vaise yaar 15 minute hon gahai hai hana chayen

Raj house

Manthan : ZzZzzzZZ

Raj enter the room fiting his shirt bouton

Raj : i am ready manthan chal…

See manthan sleeping

Raj : manthaaaaan u r not ready

Manthan still sleeping : yeah yeah

Raj : get up we have to go

Manthan : yah..mm…tomorow

Raj :Tomorow ?

He goes near manthan and kick him (haha)

Raj : get up lazyyy boyyyy

Manthan : haaaa …ouch

Raj : ouch ke bache tayar ho humain aj tumari hone wali patni se milna hai

Manthan : NAUTANKI patni not for real

Sometimes later

Manthan and raj leave the house

Piya and Sneha side

A kid s ball fall on the of a dhaba

Sneha look at the kid

Sneha : he is so cute

Kid : uncle uncle kiya aph mera ball upar se nikal sakte hai

Man : chal chal mere pass time nahin hai khana dene ka hai mujhe sabko

Sneha his a litle angry , kid had a tear

Sneha : bara kharoos bandha hai

Sneha goes near litle boy and smile at him

Sneha :i will get it

She take a chair of the dhaba and give the man an angry look

She put another think on the chair so she can get the ball she on the chair

Meanwhile on the other side manthan is coming with is friend toward priya : manthan didn't see sneha

Sneha trow the ball down for the boy and then she want to get down but instance o that she fall

Manthan : this place is so

Snaha : haaaa

Manthan catch her , he look at her , her eyes were close , her hair come on her face than fell behind , she looked innocent, so beautyful , manthan can't take his eyes off of her ,

Sneha : am i alive

than she open her eyes ,first eyes slowly than the second quicly, they look into each other eyes but then

Sneha : heyyy live me

Manthan : … (still looking at her)

Sneha : UH ???hey u mister (clck her finger in front of him) leave me

Manthan : are u sure

Sneha role her eyes : yes dufer , i don't want to stay here all my life

Manthan : ok , don't blame me then

He leave her and she fall on the ground

Sneha : ouchhh…dufer

Manthan : i said don't blame …and yeah don't u dare to call me dufer again , u bhootni

Sneha : arggggg

Manthan : hooooo bhootni will atack me

Piya and raj come

Piya : i see that u meet

Sneha and manthan : hu ?

Raj : your are staying together

Sneha and manthan : what with HIM/HER

Piya : yes(cute face)

Sneha and Manthan give eachother a look

Piya : vaise lag rahai ho couple ke tara , you look so cute together

Manthan n Sneha : ewwww

Raj : anyway put it to her

Showing him a mangalsutra

Manthan : what i am not going to put her that

Sneha : like i want to wear it from you

Raj : main hi pena detha hoon

Come near sneha

Sneha : heeeyyyy hooo i can wear it myself

Raj : ho yeah hihi

Sneha :hihi (imiting him)

She put it

Piya : so mmmm raj you will drop them to their house , i have to go ,i have some work

Raj : ok , so new wed couple come

Manthan and Sneha : we are nOT MARRIED

Manthan and sneha look at eachother and give a angry look

Piya gigle and mugling : parfect couple

Snaha : kuch kaha

Piya : hu ??me nono

Raj : ok lets go will drop you

Piya : by manthan by raj

Raj : by (smile)

Manthan : yeah by (annoyed)

Piya to sneha : ur hubby is hot

Sneha : ewwww he is a monckey

Piya : anyway by

Piya hug sneha

Piya : have a good suhagraat

Sneha : PIYAAAAAA

Piya run away

Manthan : hey miss ider rene ka iradha hai kiya

Piya : na , tum ider kabse khare huwe ho ,chalo chalo time nahin hai

Sneha live

Manthan : HU ??ajeeb ladki hai

Edited by aisha1 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#42
thanks that part was really good!!! 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
#43
awesome part 👏
continue soon please
Edited by amrita93 - 18 years ago
72968 thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago
#44
i luv it tooo
pls contd. 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
#45

Nakul is in the bus thinking of what ganga have done for him

Nakul : agar voh mujhse itna pyar karti hai to voh mujhe kabhi milne kyun nahin ahi , agar mujhse itna pyar karti hain to kyon nahin ahi dekhne agar laksh or main thik the ya nahin kyun ???

Ticket wala : bahi saab aph ka stop ha gaya

Nakul :hu ?ho haan ok

Nakul enter in gangas office but ganga wasn't there , he than come near her desk to put paper in her desk , when he put the paper her pictur frame fall

Nakul : shit

Voh frame uthata hai , than look at the photo and see Him with nakul , he was shocked , than look at the other frame who where on her desk and see many photo of him and laksh then he see a photo when he was 15 and laksh 10

Nakul : yeh photo kahan se ahi , ganga mam to humare saath to nahin thi us waqt and see other photo were he was exit the college with his friend when he was playing with laksh , nakul was more shocked

Nakul : matlab pura waqt ganga mam was with there , voh humain chup chup kar dekhti thi , he had a tear

Than he heard some voice so he quickly hide behind the sofa

Ganga sit on her sit and look at the photo and smile than see that there was one frame missing and the photo weren't at the same possition she call his secretarthere , voh humain chup chup kar dekhti thi , he had a tear

Than he heard some voice so he quickly hide behind the sofa

Ganga sit on her sit and look at the photo and smile than see that there was one frame missing and the photo weren't at the same possition she call her secretary

Secretary : Yes mam

Ganga : yahan kaun aya tha or yeh in photo ko kisne chera

Secretary : no one mam , or photo ko kissi ne nahin touch kiya

Ganga : how can u say that there is one pisture mising and all the frame are not at the same place

Secretary : aph ne hi rakha hoga yahin kahin hoga mam

Ganga : ap ko pata hai ki mujhko pata hai ki yeh sare frame kider the itne salon se dekhti a rahin hoon , mujhe ar photo ka pata hai , jaye jakar voh frame dundye

Secretary : ji mam

Secretary leave and sanjhi enter she had heard everything

Sanjhvi : Mam aph ek photo ke piche itna kyun chila rahin hai

Ganga : sanjhi sirf mujhe hi pata hai ki photo mere liye kitna mahena(mean) rakta hai mere liya , yeh sirf photo nahin hai , mere bachon ka pachpan in photo se hi unko bare dekhte ha rahin ho , mere liye mere bache sabh kuch hai

Sanjhi smile : mam aph yeh saab nakul ko kyun nahin kheti ke aph itne salon se uske pass thi uske ar palon main uske saath thi , ke uski ar exam par aph bari pooja rakti thi , uski kushi par kush hoti thi , jab voh bimar hota tha ap mandir ke siriyan knee par chalti thi…

Ganga : sanjhi main nahin chati ke main nakul or laksh ko yeh sab kekar usse force karon mujhe ma khene pe , or vaise bhi ma apne bete ke liye itne to karti hai , or main chaati hoon ke agar voh mujhe ma kahai to apne chahane se , apni marzi , ke voh mujhe ma ban kar kahai anyway i will not bore you any longer , kiss liya ahiti

Sanjhi : mmm voh yeh lijiye file jo apne manghi thi

Ganga : thanks

Sanjhi : may i leave

Ganga : yes

Sanjhi : vaise mam , nakul bohut khush naseeb hai aph jaisi ma pa kar

Ganga : na ..main bohut kush naseeb ma hoon jo nakul or laksh jaise bethe paha ke.Jo sabka khawal rakte hai

Sanjhi smile and leave

Ganga on phone to her secretary

Ganga : photo mili

Secretary : no mam with keep serching

Ganga : find it soon

Than ganga heard a voice

Boy : photo mere pass hai

She look at the mam standing in front of her and of course its nakul , ganga was shocked there

Ganga : nakul ..tum

Nakul : maine sab kuch sun liya

Ganga : voh…nakul

Nakul : ap ne kyun nahin kaha ki itne salon se aph mere pass hi thi , ap ne humare liye yeh sab kuch kiya bataya hi nahin , apko kitni takleef hoti hogi yeh sochke ke apne mujh jaisa beta paya hai..

Ganga : nakul , ek ma ko apne bethe se kabhi takleef nahin mil sakti..

Nakul : itna sab kuch hote huwe bhi ap mujhe beta manti hai , (tear) i am sorry for all i have done (put his hand together) i am sorry ma

Ganga put her hand on his hand

Ganga : kiya kaha tumne

Nakul : i am sorry ma

Ganga : tumne mujhe ma ke diya , mujhe duniyan ki sari khushi mil gahi , or phir kabhi mujhse sorry nahin khena

They hug

Note : i know it was a boring part and there is no sneha manthan in it , but next will be about sneha manthan , tell me what do you like and what you don't like

Edited by aisha1 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#46
good part.. but i wanted to c sneha and manthan o well atleast their gonna be in the next part eh? ..anywayz keep going ur doin great!
72968 thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago
#47
thanks 4 update
kl part
waiting 4 next update 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
#48

Kyon Kiya

Manthan Sneha and Raj side

Raj : here we are

They some out of the car

Sneha and Manthan look around to see were they would stay

Raj : dekh liya to chale

Sneha : haan

Manthan : no choise to step back so chalo

In front of the litle appartement (not so litle maybe i will post the pic)

Raj : ok so now , u are LIKE pati patni , show some hubby wiffy think u know like you love eachother and ur can't leave with…

Sneha and Manthan :OKKKKK SAMAJ GAHAI

Raj : ho thik hai na i was just helping you ,anyway lets go

They enter , than the appartemen malik come

Raj : hello sir

Malik name mr poketwala

MR poketwala : haaaaa , kaisach hai ( H R U)

Raj : thik hoon , voh apko yaad hai na ki ek couple ider rene ahaiga to main un dono ko lekar a gaya

Mr Poketwala : kider aich vo (where are they)

Raj : ider

Raj point toward Manthan and Sneha , While Sneha was smiling to Mr poketwala and saying namaste , manthan was looking around like he was anoyed

Mr poketwala : namaste

Than he look at manthan who was still looking around , sneha look at manthan then and give him with her hand to tell him to say hi

Manthan : hu ???..

Mr Poketwala : NAMASTE

Manthan : ho namaste (he play like he is nice with him)

Mr Poketwala : Mera naam Rajpal poketwala hai or tumara

Manthan : Manthan Virani

Sneha : Sneha Khana

Mr poketwala : hu … tum dono ka shadi huwa hai to tera naam khaana or tera Virani , kaisech ho sakta hai

Sneha : (cough) voh …heu

Manthan come near poketwala with smile

Manthan : voh kiya hai na MR POKHETWALA

MR : poKETwala

Manthan : vohi to , poketwala , meri biwi ko apna mayka ka naam acha lagta hai isliye usne khaana ko nikala nahin , vaise pura naam hai Snaha khaana Vi ..Virani (thinking) ewww

Mr poketwala : ho thik hai , to kitna waqt ho gaya tumari shaadi ko

Sneha : 1 hour ,same time manthan : 1 SAAL

Mr poketwala shocked

Raj : voh in dono ka matlab hai ki EK saal or Ek hour , voh ek dusre se itna pyar karte hai ki ghante bi ghinte hai

Mrs poketwala come : how sweet kitna acha couple aich , dikhai de raha hai ki ek dusre se pyar karte hai , de do na ghar inko

Mrpoketwala : hey chokro , koi lafra vafra to nahin hai na

RAJ MANTHAN AND SNEHA : NAHIN

Mrs PW : chalo main tum ko apna flat dikhati hoon,

Manthan and sneha leave with her and raj was coming with same when MR PW stop him

Mr : tu kider ja raha hai

Raj : voh unke saath

Mr PW : tu kyon unke bich a rahai …hey tera us chokri ke saath lafra to nahin hai na

Raj : yaar mr poketwala , vo mere dost ki biwi hai

Mr PW : acha chal saath main chai pine jate hai

Raj : (thinking) yeh main kider pass gaya

NEXT : The flat , litle fight moree


Edited by aisha1 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#49
👏 👏 👏great n funny part
continue soon 👏 😆
72968 thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago
#50
thanks
that part was great
next time can you update quicker 😕 pls 😆 😆

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