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Posted: 18 years ago
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I am writing a story of sujal – kashish(rajeev and Amna)This is the first fanfiction of me . If there is any mistakes bare with me .If you don't like the concept please tell me .Then I will STOP to write the story "PREM KAHANI OF SK"

Anurag Garewal : He is the CEO of S& R companies .He loves his children very much

Prerna Garewal : Anurag wife ,loves his children very much

Sujal Garewal : He is 24 years old . He is working as managing director of S&R Companies . After completing his Studies he worked in UK for their

company.He loves his brother

Rishi Garewal : He is the only son of anurag and prerna Garewal . He is studing MBA He loves his brother very much.He flirts but good in heart

Mihir sinha : He is the CEO of KK Industries,loves his children very much

Tulsi sinha : mihir wife,loves his children very much

Karan sinha :He is the first child of mihir and tulsi ,MD of KK Industries,loves hisWife ,sister and daughter

Gauri sinha: karan wife ,lovabale by all the family members

Kashish Sinha : She is 21 years old . she is studying MBA . she is a sweet and bubblyGirl .she loves her family very much(especially mihir)

Sneha sinha ; daughter of karan and nandani, lovelable by all them

Angand Khanna(Iqbal khan):sujal best friend

Kripa Virani(Neha Bomb) ; Kashish best friend

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Sujal(Rajeev Khandelwal)

Kashish(Ammna shariff)

Karan(hiten tejwani)

Gauri(Gauri tejwani)

Anurag(cezen khan)

Prerna(shweta tiwari)

Mihir(ronit roy)

Tulsi(smriti)

Rishi(shabbir)

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Posted: 18 years ago
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nice story .............but who's son is sujal if he's not prerna's son then...u said rishi is the only son of anurag-prerna......then who's sujal....adopted?????? plz clarify......

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Posted: 18 years ago
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this seems interesting please do cont 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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PART I

IN MUMBAI

Its a bright sunny morning we see a big huge mansion called garewal mansion we see a lady praying in front of good .she completed her pooja and turned we see a handsome man is standing infront of her(anurag) after taking the aarti anurag asks prerna about their son prerna replies you know your son better yah yah some thing about the person .anu please wake up your son why don't you wake up your son because he is not listening to me prerna you are the one to spoil him prerna shocked me then prerna speaks me not you they argue for some time so they went up the stairs to wake the person

We enter a room someone is sleeping peacefully in their bed.anu and prerna enter the room to wake him up prerna goes near the person then we see the person face it is none other than our own rishi ,rishi wake up prerna tries to wake him up but he say soonenada mamma then prerna says you are late for your college then rishi says koi baat nahi hai mom all this was watched by anurag he smiles and then go to prerna where she stands

anurag prerna k pass jata hai then kehta hai you don't know how wake up your son prerna anurag ki taraf dekhti hai aur kehtai hai tum kyoun nahi utati apney beta ko aur anurag rishi ko jagana jata hai magar rishi nahii utadatha hai aur prerna anurag say kehati hai kyoun nahi uta pai apne lada beta ko aur anurag ki taraf dekhti hai with giggling aur anurag kehta hai mera nahi tumhari ladla hai aur prerna kehti hai mere ladla yaha hota tho mere kehna per ut jata hai tumhari beta ki tarah nahi aur kehta kehta prerna ki ankho mein aasu aa jata hai anurag yeh dehkta hai aur prerna pass jakar usse console kerta hai tabii waha ki phone bajti hai anurag aur prerna ek doorse ko dekata hai


Anurag phone utatahai then he hears some voice .voice suntay hai anurag cheekta hai prerna gabrajati hai aur doosery ek insaan hasatha hai prerna anurag say phone cheenti hai aur vo bhi chalati hai indono key cheeck sunathay hai rishi apney neened say utat jata hai thodi waqt usko kuch samay nahi aati oh apney maa baap ko phone keylia ladtha dekhata hai aur vo undonose phone laytha hai aur baat kartha hai
Vo bi phone per chailta hai BIGB aap



Who is this BIGB? Iska phone aatay hee sab kyoun cheeki

Preview : Sujal Entry

note:2-3 parts sujal character is very less
if dont like the story then will stop
i will improve myself also for comming parts and i will also write in hindi


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Posted: 18 years ago
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seems interesting pls cont. good part. But pls clarify who is sujal?
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Posted: 18 years ago
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gr8... 👏 ..seemng 2 be good ff...frst part was nice...do cont soon...so we gt 2 know further.... 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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its nice... so isnt sujal a gerewal(spelling??)

u said ap have one child, rishi... is he adopted.. is big b sujal???


continue sooonn!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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PART 2


Garewal mansion mein sub log idhar udhar goomraha thay prerna sab ko instuctions dey rahi hai anurag kisi say phone bath kar thay rishi in sab ko dekhrahatay aur kisi se bath karrathey kuch deir baad sab loog sara kaam kerney bad hall jama hua thay (yeh sab kaam kerney mein subha sey sham hogai kisiko is baat ka andaja nahi hai,)sab bhut khush hai , prerna apney soch doobi hui thi aur uski aanko sey assoo beheny lagi hai yeh baat anurag ney notice kii aur prerna ko bulaya .prerna apney soch say bahar aii aur anurag say poocha kay baat hai yehi mein tum sey pooch rahe hoon anurag ney kaha phir prerna ney kaha o aaraha hai ,char saal baad oo aa raha, mera beta aa raha, mera sujal aa raha hai tho insaka matalab who phone aaya wo sujal ka phone tha


Anurag prerna say kehta hai oo mere bi beta hai tabi peechey ek awaj aati hai sab loog uski taraf dekta hai aur waha ek ladki khadi hoti hai aur ho hai charu(charu khanna ,angad kii behen)sab loog puch thay hai kya huva aur vo kehti hai angad aur sujal bhayia aa raha hai I am very happy aisa thaisa raat guzar gaii subha hochuki sab airport chalna chata liken prerna ne kaha ki wohi rukagi prerna ke saath saath angad mom be rukgayi(angad parents and sujal parents are friends .the khannas are lived in the opposite house of garewals,there are always one family)

Airport per sab intajar karrahay they thabi enouncement hue the uk plane has landed some time have passed there two handsome guys are walking towards the people who are waiting for them and the two are none other then sujal and angad
Who se seeda ghar chalya gai jaha prerna undo the intajar karrehi hai

Sujal ko dekhtay he prerna usko pass chali gai aur galey milgayi sujal ne prerna ka ashwirvad liye prerna sujal ko andar le gayi aur ek wall pass lekar gayi aur sujal se kaha woh unka ashiwarvad le magar sujal ne prerna ka ashwirvad leya aur kaha mom mere asli maa baap app na hothay huya be app muzay ihtna par diya mere kudh ke baap ne be nahi de sakhata(sujal prerna aur ka beta nahi hai balki anurag ke bhai ke beta hai, sujal ke maa baap uski bachanpan mein he accident mein margaya tab se lakar aaj thak prerna aur anu hi sujal ki parents hai sujal be is such manthay hai)


Sujal aur angad sab logo sey mil chukay sab hall mein bhait kar bath kar rathay thay sujal prerna ke pass jagar betha hai prerna sujal ko bade pyaar se khana khila rahiti tabhi anu ney kaha bhai humey kabhi itney pyaar sey nahi khilaya thabi sujal ne kaha kyounki mama mujhse jada pyaar karhti hai aur prerna ne be ha kaha hai
Tab anu ney kaha yeh kab thak tumharai pass rehey ka prerna ,prerna jet se kaha vo sujal abb kabhi kahi nahi jaya ga vo mere pass he rehay ga tumney to vuse uk bhaja aur aey wahi rehgaya 4 saal mere sey door ab my usey kahii nahi janey doonga kyoun sujal mey ney sahi kahan sujal ney be ha kaha tab prerna ney kaha who sujal kii shaadi karagii aur apney pass he rakagey a sunkar sujal shoch hogaya kya mama app meri shaadi karni chati hai my tho shaadi kerna nahi jata

Preview :kashish entry

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Posted: 18 years ago
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PART 2


Garewal mansion mein sub log idhar udhar goomraha thay prerna sab ko instuctions dey rahi hai anurag kisi say phone bath kar thay rishi in sab ko dekhrahatay aur kisi se bath karrathey kuch deir baad sab loog sara kaam kerney bad hall jama hua thay (yeh sab kaam kerney mein subha sey sham hogai kisiko is baat ka andaja nahi hai,)sab bhut khush hai , prerna apney soch doobi hui thi aur uski aanko sey assoo beheny lagi hai yeh baat anurag ney notice kii aur prerna ko bulaya .prerna apney soch say bahar aii aur anurag say poocha kay baat hai yehi mein tum sey pooch rahe hoon anurag ney kaha phir prerna ney kaha o aaraha hai ,char saal baad oo aa raha, mera beta aa raha, mera sujal aa raha hai tho insaka matalab who phone aaya wo sujal ka phone tha


Anurag prerna say kehta hai oo mere bi beta hai tabi peechey ek awaj aati hai sab loog uski taraf dekta hai aur waha ek ladki khadi hoti hai aur ho hai charu(charu khanna ,angad kii behen)sab loog puch thay hai kya huva aur vo kehti hai angad aur sujal bhayia aa raha hai I am very happy aisa thaisa raat guzar gaii subha hochuki sab airport chalna chata liken prerna ne kaha ki wohi rukagi prerna ke saath saath angad mom be rukgayi(angad parents and sujal parents are friends .the khannas are lived in the opposite house of garewals,there are always one family)

Airport per sab intajar karrahay they thabi enouncement hue the uk plane has landed some time have passed there two handsome guys are walking towards the people who are waiting for them and the two are none other then sujal and angad
Who se seeda ghar chalya gai jaha prerna undo the intajar karrehi hai

Sujal ko dekhtay he prerna usko pass chali gai aur galey milgayi sujal ne prerna ka ashwirvad liye prerna sujal ko andar le gayi aur ek wall pass lekar gayi aur sujal se kaha woh unka ashiwarvad le magar sujal ne prerna ka ashwirvad leya aur kaha mom mere asli maa baap app na hothay huya be app muzay ihtna par diya mere kudh ke baap ne be nahi de sakhata(sujal prerna aur ka beta nahi hai balki anurag ke bhai ke beta hai, sujal ke maa baap uski bachanpan mein he accident mein margaya tab se lakar aaj thak prerna aur anu hi sujal ki parents hai sujal be is such manthay hai)


Sujal aur angad sab logo sey mil chukay sab hall mein bhait kar bath kar rathay thay sujal prerna ke pass jagar betha hai prerna sujal ko bade pyaar se khana khila rahiti tabhi anu ney kaha bhai humey kabhi itney pyaar sey nahi khilaya thabi sujal ne kaha kyounki mama mujhse jada pyaar karhti hai aur prerna ne be ha kaha hai Tab anu ney kaha yeh kab thak tumharai pass rehey ka prerna ,prerna jet se kaha vo sujal ko ab kabhi kahi nahi janey degney vo mere pass he rehay ga tumney to vuse uk bhaja aur aey wahi rehgaya 4 saal mere sey door ab my usey kahii nahi janey doonga kyoun sujal mey ney sahi kahan sujal ney be ha kaha tab prerna ney kaha who sujal kii shaadi karagii aur apney pass he rakagey a sunkar sujal shoch hogaya kya mama app meri shaadi karni chati hai my tho shaadi kerna nahi jata

Preview :kashish entry

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Posted: 18 years ago
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another great part loved it. cont soon

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