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Posted: 18 years ago
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will cont. soon.

cheerz. 🤗
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Posted: 18 years ago
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3rd Epi;;
They had just stoped dancing, they had sat down to eat there food. When Ayesha & Vishal come to there table. . .
Vishal:Wow, guys you rocked the dance floor
Ayesha:yeah u guys were awesome!
Aarchita:Thanks guys.
Raj: We make such a sensationale couple we can rock the dance floor every day rite bebii?
Aarchita:ofcourse.
Vishal:Acha, stop the love-talk and listen to me. . .Nakul is having a party at 10:00 and we're all invited. Is it possible to leave at 10:00?
Aarchita:Naa baba, you guys go but daddy will kill me if I leave.
Raj:Come on Aarchi plz?
Aarchita:No raj, you can go.I'm staying.
Raj:Fine then I'm not going either.
Ayesha:Come on you guys dont be such party pooperz. Aarchita I'll talk to uncle, promise.
Aarchita:Fine go, lets see what you can do.
Ayesha:umm arrite then

Ayesha goes to her father and makes up a bunch of lies saying "Uncle, I have to go home we four have a projet to do, can Aarchita please come with me and do our project?" Since, aarchita's dad's really strict about homework he said yes and they got to leave.
Ayesha:See Ayesha's magic?
Archita:ok ok, but I cant go like this, in a sari?
Raj:Oh come on, why not? You look gorguzz.
Aarchita:uff raj i can't go to a college party with all of our gore friends in jeanz and stuff nd me in a sari?
Vishal:Oh whatever, saach mei to grownups and little kids your such a sweetheart. but with us..omg so much attitude!
Ayesha:Raj, take her home so miss perfect can change.
Raj:whatever, you've changed like 2 times already. Hurry up!

So they head to Aarchita's house, and she changes into...
Archita:How do I look?
Raj:Really bad, now hurry up and get in the car!

He was mad for her wanting to change once for the first party & now again. After getting in the car he thought archita would start talking like she does every time but she didnt speak...
Raj:hey jaan, are you mad?
Aarchita:No, I'm very happy for you calling me I look bad.
Raj: I was just joking, i'm srry
Aarchita:Don't joke like this!

Raj kisses her on the cheek [aww 😳 ]
**************End Of Epi******
What will happen at the party?
Will Aarchita's dad find out where she is?
Wanna know? Keep reading Dil Ka rishta.
Will update soon. Please comment!

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Lovely story, just started reading.
Continue soon Iqra 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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sssccchhooo sweet prt....i luved it... to excellent...but plz plz plz plz continue soon..i feel like i shud keep reading on...cant resist it..
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Posted: 18 years ago
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I will...I was going to yday but my cousin took my computer mouse lol 😆 yeah so i couldnt do it without a mouse. . .but yeah will do it tonite or tommorow.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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3rd epi;;
Aarchita&Raj had just entered the party, there freind Nakul, the guy whose party it was comes up to them
Nakul:Hey Raj Hey Aarchi, u looken gorguzz.
Aarchita:Thanks sweetheart.
Raj:So, like did you see Ayesha&Vishal?
Nakul:Oh yeah, there over there.

So they walk over to Ayesha and Vishal.
Vishal: You guys took like so daym long.
Raj:whatever man, Ask my lovely lady here, who had to change.
Aarchita:Rajj. . . Don't start.
Ayesha: 😆 😆 You guys are fighting like a married couple.
Aarchita:That's a good thing, Ayesha. This way we will have more experience.
Raj: 😆 😆 yeah we need the experience.
Vishal:Dude, there startin' to play a game on the dance floor lets go.

They walk over to the dance floor
Dj:Okkk partyy peepz, we got around 14 couples here and we're lay 14 peices of big paper on the ground, Each couple get a paper
All the couples go on a paper
Dj:Everyone got a paper? Good, now we are gonna play sum music and the couples have to dance on the paper who ever steps out of the papar is out! No Cheating. . .and everytime the music stops you have to fold the paper a little bit. . Everyone get the game? [YES!> Arrite then lets begin
The song Irreplaceable by beyonce plays. . . in the middle the dj turns it off. Couples fold there paper. Dance sum more on Don't Matter [akon> The fold it again. . The dance, 3 couples step it. 11 couples left. Dance on Dil Kya kare [SEI> Fold sum more. . dance, 4 couples gone. 7 left [Raj&Aarchita and Ayesha&Vishal still playing> Song Chanda Ki Doli [sonu nigam> playz. . fold sum more paper this time 3 couples are out. . .Only four left and the paper was getting really small. The song Salaam E Ishq playz, they fold sum more paper and dance wen song stops 2 of those couples were gone. Only Ayesha&Vish. and Aarch.&Raj are left.
Vishal:U guys quit we gonna win!
Raj:not a chance

The song Jaan mere Jaa rehi hae Sanaam from Lucky plays. . Paper gets so tiny. Ayesha and Vishal dancing still. . .and same wid Raj nd archi. Change of song. Paper gets so small that Aarchita and Raj wouldnt fit properly. Raj picks up Aarchita and holds her in her arms and dances. . .AYESHA STEPS OUT! THERE OUT. Raj and Aarchita win!
DJ:we have our winner, Our lovely couple Aarchita and Raj!
After the game was over they go sit down on there table, Dhoom Again [song> was playing in the bakkground, Aarchita's phone rings, It was her dad! But, she doesnt chekk who it is and just pikks it up.
Aarchita:Hello?
Her Dad:Aarchita where are you? Why this loud music arent you at Ayesha's??
Aarchita:Vohh dad. . .umm. . .
Her dad:ARENT YOU AT AYESHA'S?
Aarchita:uhmm. . yeah dad I am.

Right then, the Dj yells in the speakerGuys lets rock dis party all da way home!
OH NO.
Her Dad:Aarchita are you lieing to me? Are you at a party?
Aarchita:Dad vohh. . It was a change of plan.
Her Dad:You and Raj come home right now!!
Aarchita:Dad. . .
Her Dad:AARCHITA NOW! BOTH OF YOU.
Aarchita:Allrite

She hangs up.
Aarchita:Raj, it was dad. He knows. He wants us both home right now.
Raj:Oh no.
Aarchita:Hmmm. . .You stay I dont want dad yelling at you, I'll go.
Raj:No jaan. I'm comin too. But, whut did u say to ur dad wen he asked u were we at a party?
Aarchita:I sayd. . It was a change of plan.
Raj:But your clothe, won't he say how'd you change it, if it was a change of plan and you went to the party from Ayesha'z house?
Aarchita:Oh Raj, I'm dead. Nice plan Ayesha!
Ayesha:Sorry maan. I thought he wouldnt know.
Raj:it's ok Its ok. Lets go now.

They leave.
**********End Of Epi********************
Whut will there dad say?
How much trouble will they get in?
Wanna know? Keep reading DIL KA RISHTA.
Rise High 😳
Iqra.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: eijaz-anita

very very interewsting...excellent intro...i just luv it..waiting for u to continue.. 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

my eyes are burning from all those smilies😆

interesting FF....cont soon dear!

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: THiNKiN OF YOU


my eyes are burning from all those smilies😆


interesting FF....cont soon dear!




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Posted: 18 years ago
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hheeyy again a cliff hanger 😆 very good prt...keep it up!....nd continue soon...coz wen u end ur prts they are tyooo suspenseful..nd btw why did archita's dad call raj too...duz he know of their reraltionship 😕
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: THiNKiN OF YOU

my eyes are burning from all those smilies😆

interesting FF....cont soon dear!

lol they are alot.😆😆

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