Originally posted by: sea_nyx
hey sonali (ummmmm, not sure if tht's ur name, if not sorry) hiii.. no its not my real name, but you can call me by that 😛
anyway, just caught up with ur ff and it is just FANTABULOUS 👏 thank youu🤗🤗
i loved angad and kripa, especially angad, the best parts were the scenes after the marriage. especially whn he fixes her boo-boo with dettol and band-aid (sorry, the mention of cartoon patterned band-aid took me back to my childhood 😳 ) loll.. haha.. yeahhh...
and the final part especially was sooo cute(can't understand how jai fits into this ff though oh yeah i forgot to mention abt that.. jai is no longer in the ff.. if i write again someday then i'll try to finish that bit, but since i didn't start JB track exactly i hope im excused..and wht's angad's uncle's prob. 😡 i thought he wanted his nephew married and why is josh suddenly so guilty? 😕 , questions, questions, ah well , i'm sure u'll clear up everythng soon) soo glad you are bringing these up bc to be honest with you i have been writing for so long that i've lost track of some of the things.. i'll definitely clear these things now that you mentioned them.. though at this point even im clueless why josh is soo guilty.. loll..
u knw every writer has a usp, something tht's uniquely theirs and tht they just rock at, urs is definitely ur endings, u finish ur posts in a way tht leaves ur readers begging 4 more, i mean ""she thought it was a very, very, sexy kiss" ?!!!!!!!!!!!!!", thankssssss 😃😃😃 MAZING yaar 👏
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