:Hamare Pyaar Ki Nishani::(P:74(LP) pg:101) - Page 71

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Posted: 17 years ago
I just caught up. Its superb. Plz continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
what an amazing ff.. i just started reading it .. couldnt put it down.. i love the way you write.. so well written .. describe the emotions.. the feelings.. the romance sooooo well.. romantic scenes are soo cute.. but yaar.. laksh ko itna kyun tadpa rahi ho.. kt is being too shy for being married for so many years.. and also usse ghussa bhi bahut aata hai.. hehehe
it be nice to see her flirt with laksh and surprise him.. lol.. his reaction would be fun to read about.. (just a thought)

please update next part soon?!

Is KT going to have that second baby!? lol
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Posted: 17 years ago
itz been so long plzz cont....soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
wow i thought of this ff jus a couple of days ago. i miss it alot...plz continue soon, i rly rly love it!
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Posted: 16 years ago

Hi Guys,

I know i am comming here after like sooooooooooooooooooooooooooo long.....but i didn't thought that i would cont. this fanfic....but these days my mind is going crazy.....and i got this brilliant idea for this ff and a big NEW TWIST.......I hope you all will like it......This part will be the last part to this Fanfic and then i will be starting a SEQUEAL of this Fic which will contain New/Old characters.....so here it is...and i will try my best to start the SEQUAL asap.....
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Part 74 LAST PART
Few Months Later

Few months have passed and lots of twists and turns had taken place in LKt's life….They lost their most precious diamond of their life ……..PRINCESS……..and that was all because of "Meera" (a new character in the story, she is a daughter of tripti and step sister of laksh who came to SN to take revenge for her mother tripti's death.) after she killed Princess (which only Kt knows about and no one is believeing her…..only Kt knows her true colors, Laksh also didn't have the same trust in Kt anymore…..he was also broken after he lost Princess) Life was miserable for both. Kt had been through a lot and was hurt many times physically and emotionally…………Laksh and Kt's relation was getting weaker…..which is what Meera wanted……She wanted to ruin their life… and which I believe she will…….

Meera is trying to mainly taking revenge from Ganga,Sahil,Nakul,Sanchi,Laksh,Kt and their kids………….No one had trust on Kt anymore….and Kt, she was trying her level best to get some clues……..

The one day morning Meers proves with false proofs that Kt is the one who killed Princess…….All of them in SN are shocked to hear this…….no one wants to believe the proofs…..but Meera had given some very strong proofs against her……and that left no options in front of them……else then to believe that Kt is the one who killed Prnicess……..Laksh is standing there with a shocked face……..as just few days his most important part of the life has been take away from him……and now he is getting to know that it's no one else then his own life…..his own heartbeat Kt has taken his diamond away from him……..he is like its all over……nothing is left in his life after this…….Kt is screaming and telling everyone to believe her…….but she fails……then Kt goes to Laksh and tries to tell him to believe her…….but he gives no reactions……

Kt: Laksh……tum toh mera vishwas karo…….bhala mein asia kyun karuge…….mein apne hi haatho se meine di hui zindige ko kyun khatam karuge………Laksh plz mera vishwas karo………..(criyingly falls down on laksh's feet……she is all broken down…….)

Laksh: (still has no reactions……)

Meera notices that Laksh might believe Kt…….so she starts her nautakin……..

Meera: Laksh……..jab mujhe yeh sab proofs mille toh mein khud hairan thi……ki Kt yeh saab nahi kar sakti…….Kt kasi apni hi bachi ko maar sakti hai……phir lekin yeh saab sabot mujhe bhi toh joothe nahi ho sakte na…….

Laksh: (all this talks are bothering him…….but still he is not giving any reactions other than shock…..)

By hearing Meera's words…….Kt gets up…….and goes to Meera…..

Kt: Mujhe saab pata hai…..ke sare sabot jote hai…..aur yeh saab tumne hi banaye hai……taki tum mujhe saab ke samne nicha dikha sako………lekin mein yeh hone nahi dungi……….

Meera: Aree……babhi yeh sab aap kya keh rahi hai……bhala mein aisa kyun karuge………

Kt: Yeh saab tumnehi kiya…….leink mere pass tumhare killaf koi sabot nahi issliye……..

Everyone is now getting dissuged by Kt…and her thoughts…….and now laksh is also getting pissed by hearing Kt……..he is so mad at Kt……that if she speaks one more word…..then laksh will break his silence……..

Kt: Mein yeh bhi janti hoon ke mere Prnicess ko marne vali koi aur nahi uski bua hi hai……aur tum ho……

Laksh: (is all mad…..and sreams……) KT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Everyone is shocked……..including Kt………

Laksh goes towards Kt……with all the anger……

Laksh: BAS KT…..bouth ho chukka…….aur bouth sunliya…….aab aur nahi……

Kt: Laksh meri baat…….

Laksh: Kt……aab bolne sun ne ke liye kucch nahi raha…….

Kt: Lekin……

Laksh with his eyes red…..and full of tears………looks at her……..

Laksh: Sirf ek sawal puch na chahta hoon……..Kyun Kt……Kyun kiya tumne aisa…….????

Kt: (just by hearing that…….Kt is all broken down from inside…….as she thought that if no one belives her but atleast laksh will believe her……..)

Kt: Laksh……aaj tumne yeh sawal puch kar hamare rishte ke akhri kasam bhi tod di…….

Laksh: Kasam maine nahi tumne todi hai Kt………..

Kt: Aaj hamara rishta jis mood par khada hai………usski vaje sirf aur sirf yeh Meera hai………..

Laksh: Bas Kt……..

Then Kt goes to tulsi…….and tries to make her believe her……..

Kt: Baa aap toh mera vishwas kijiye……….kya main aisa kabhi kar sakti hoon………

But this doesn't effect tulsi………and she just looks down with shame……..and says…..

Tulsi: Mujhe affsos hai ki tum mere beti hoo……..mujhe apne diye hue sansakoro par pura bharosa tha………lekin aaj tumne uss bharose ko tod diya Krishna…….Kyun…..kyun kiya……..??

Kt: (just by hearing that she falls down on the ground……with eyes full of tears of pain……..and a heart with millions of pieces…. )

Laksh: (he also cannot see Kt it this situation………as he loves Kt a lot……..and cannot even a single tear in her eyes……..but today she is the one who gave him tears in his eyes for his whole life………)

So he just goes to Kt…….with all force he jerked Kt to bring her up…….and makes her face him……….He hold her by her hand with all force…… it's really hurting her…….Laks is triying to take all his anger out on her……

Kt: (with tears in her eyes…..) Laksh chodo mujhe……..plz Laksh mujhe dard hoo raha hai……….

Laksh: (with anger……and tears…..) Dard……..huuuuunnnnn…….Dard sirf tumhe nahi hota Kt………Dard mujhe bhi hota hai ……..

Kt: (looks up into his eyes…..and feels the pain he is going through……)

Laksh: Main tumse bouth pyaar karta hoon Kt…..issiliye tumhe saalkohke pich nahi dekh sakta….....varna main abhi tumhe Police…….

Kt: (has shocked face……)

Laksh: Lekin main apni beti se bhi bouth Pyaar karta hoo…..issi liye tumne jo kiya hai us ski saza toh tumhe millege………

Kt: (is scared of what laksh is gonna punish her……)

Laksh: (with hard heart……..but with eyes full of anger……) Kt……aab tum iss ghar mein nahi rahi sakti……..tumhe yeh ghar chod kar jaan hoga………

Kt: (her eyes stayed widen……..with shock…….) Laksh……………….!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Laksh: Mein aur kuch suna nahi chahta……..

Kt: (looks at each and every member with hope……that at least someone will believe her………but she gets no response………

Then Kt goes to her room and starts to pack her bag……….she opens her cupboard…..and starts to take some sarees…..and her eye falls on the saree that Laksh has gifted her………she takes it in her hand…..and remembers the when laksh has gifted her that sarees……and she gets some flashback of moments she spend with laksh……….and her heart cries…….then she continues her packing……and after its done…..she goes to the dressing table and picks the photo of Laksh….Prnicess and hers……and holds it and stares at it…..

Kt: (to herself……) Laksh bhale hi tumne mujhe par vishwas na karke hamre rishte ki haar kasam ko tod diya hai…….lekin phir mein iss rishte ko apni puri imaandar se nibahuge……..maine hamesha se tumhari khushi chahi hai……aur agar aaj tumhe khushi mere yeha se jaane mein hai toh…..mein tumhare liye yeh bhi karuge…..kyunki tumhari khushi mein hi mere khushi hai……aaj jab mere ankhoo ka tara Princess hamse dur hogai hai……aur mujhe tumhari saab se zayada zaroot hai…….toh aaj tumne mere saath chood diya Laksh……….Laksh hamesha tum hamse salamt aur khush raho…..yehi mere dua hai……..(and her tear falls on it…….but prepares herself…….strong….and puts the photo in the bag…..closes the bag………)

The scene shifts to downstairs…..where Laksh and everyone is waiting for Kt………and Meera is standing…..she is so dammmmm happy she her paln is successful……..then after sometime Kt enters with a bag……..She then goes to the thakurji……

Kt: Hey thakurjii……..mere parivaar ki raksha karna………mein jaanti hoon ke mere bachi ko mujhse alag kare vali iss ghare mein hai………lekin haalato ke vajh se main kuch nahi kar sakti….thakuji…..lekin aap toh saab dekh sakte hai na……aap mere Parivaar ki Meera se raksha kar na…………

Then she goes to Baa……and takes her blessing………then she goes to tulsi…..and take her blessing……but she does not gives her the blessing………she all the elders blessings but no one gives her blessing…….except Baa…….then she goes to laksh……and tires to takes his blessing…..but he moves back…….and that leaves Kt in shock…….

Then she goes toward the door…….and just as she reaches the door….she turns around the look at her family for that last time………and she closes her eyes……and her tears fall on the ground…….and with a hard heart she puts her leg out of the house……..and as soon she leaves the house……the toran (you know the thing that they put in entrance of the house to protect the house from the evil eyes……..) falls down……..and all the Diyaas in thankurji's mandir are blown off as they feel the strong storm winds blowing into SN, which indicates a sign of something bad and evil. Everyone were first shocked to see that..As kt left the house….think of as the soul left its body….

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I know I know this is a very stupid ending you all might be thinking.....but don't worry.....i am starting a SEQUAL and after getting the concept of my SEQUEAL you all will understand to where i am going.......for now this is it......This was the last part to this Fanfic.........I hope you liked it......Will try to start the sequal asa i can......😳😳😳 Thank you soooo much to alll ones again......😛
Pari
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Posted: 16 years ago
OH MY GOSH!!!!!!! 😭 That was the most touching update ever!!!!!!!!!!! EXCELLENT EXCELLENT FANTASTIC MINDBLOWING PHENOMENAL job Pari!!!!!!!!!!!!!👏 I cannot wait for the sequel!!!!!!!!!!! this is amazing thank you soooooooooooo much for continuing it! It's so weird that today i was just thinking about this because i suddenly got an idea of a cute scene for laksh and kt...but then realized tht it could only happen if they r married, and the only ff i kno in which they r married is this one!😃 Thank you so much Pari for continuing and pm'ing me! I'm so happy! Good luck on the sequel, i know you'll do an excellent job as always!!😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
Wow it was just tooo amazin to even compliment!! I loved the endin it was jus tooooooooooooooo good!!! Please continue soon with the sequellll and thanks for the pm!!!!! Loved it simply loved it!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
OMG
it was wonderful
i am speechless
i have no words to explain how goodit was
i didnt even want this to end
seriousli i was wicked
i loved it
i am now dyin to read ur sequel
plz update soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
awesome ending pari👏
thnx for the pm😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
wonderful awesome ending!!!!!!!!!!!😛
👏I love it👏
can't wait for your squel!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😳👏
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