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gr8 part!!! 👏 ^i agree w/ anu about rahuk
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hey I just started reading ur ff and this is a really cool story great parts
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Recap of part 49 [ this part begins wid pari and raman going to kaali maa's mandir which is 2km away from pune, in the car raman tells pari that rahul is left only on bail, and if police gets any proofs against rahul so he will again go behind the bars, scene now shifts raman and pari before going ahead they stop in front of kaali maa mandir, there pari takes the blessing, and then raman and pari moves ahead and then they reach the jungle where rahul took neha forcibly, in the jungle after walking some distances they finds proofs like neha's dupatta,her mobile, …. Now in the same scene

Part 50 begins…….

[same scene, pari takes the mobile n starts operating it, but it was not working, after trying several times the mobile do not work, n then raman n pari both gets upset… n thn raman says]

R:- pari mujhe nahi lagta ki ye mobile chalega, isko fek do… P:- nahi raman sir, isko fekna nahi chahiye… isko main baad mein theek karva ke dekhna chahati hoon, shayad koi na koi saboot mil jaey… R:- pari, ye mobile, ekdum bekaar ho gaya hai, mujhe nahi lagta ki ye hamare kisi kaam aaeygi.. phir bhi, tum chaho to rakh lo…(n then they both move towards the cliff, after walking for 4 long hours, by the map directions they, atlast, reaches the cliff…. Wind was blowing at a very high speed… n pari n raman were looking here n there)

P:- raman sir, yaahan aapko lagta hai kuch milega, I mean mujhe ye ekdum khaali maidaan nazar aaraha hai, R:- pari, agar neha ka duppata aur mobile mil sakta hai to aur baaki cheezein bhi mil sakti hai… ab chalo dhoondhna shuru Karen… (n they keep on finding the proofs till evening, but nothing comes in their hands) P:- main aapse keh rahi thi naa sir, yaahan kuch nahi milegaa.. aur… (n as she says this, suddenly raman looks at the ground n he says) R:- PARI!!!!... P:- kya hua sir… (n then raman bents n picks up something from the ground) P:- ye kyaa hai sir, (n then they switch on the torch light and see that it was a gem) P:- ye to koi gemstone hai, R;- nahi, mujhe lagta hai.. ye koi button hai… kisi ke shirt ka.. P:- raman sir??? R:- haan?? P:- kahin ye rahul ka to nahi, R:- samjh mein nahi aaraha… aisa karte hai, abhi shaam hogayi hai.. hum abhi hotel vaapas chalte hai aur jo bhi saboot hamein mile hai vo sab lekar chalte hai….(n then leaves the place..n goes back to the hotel)..

scene shifts, sanjay was sitting in the lock up… suddenly a constable comes

Const:- aey suno!! (n sanjay looks up) tumhaara phone aaya hai, (n then sanjay gets up, n the constable takes him near the phone) (on the other side of the phone was pari) S:- hello?? P:- hello?? Sanjay, main pari bol rahi hoon… aur suno vahaan meraa naam mat lena, aur jo main puchun uskaa sirf haan ya naa mein jawaab dena….theek hai??? S:- haan?? Pucho, P:- peheli baat, sanjay main iss waqt delhi mein nahi pune mein hoon, S:- kya??? Tum vahaan kya kar rahi ho,P:- main yaahan saboot dhoondhne ke liye aayi hoon, aur mujhe yaahan pe ek do cheezein aisi mili hai, jisse iss baat ki taraf ishara hota hai ki khoon ke waqt rahul vahin pe the..… S:- haan theek hai… kya mila hai, P:- ek mobile phone… shayaad vo neha ka hai, phir ek dupatta… aur ek neele pathar jaisa kuch mila hai… (n then sanjay gets upset) S:- tum ye sab karke kyun apni zindagi khatre mein daal rahi ho pari, tumhe pata hai agar rahul ko tumhare bare mein pata chal gaya to vo to tumpe jaanleva hamla karva sakta hai…kyun, kar rahi ho tum ye sab?? P:- (n then on the other side of the phone, a drop of tear slips from pari's eyes n then she says) kyunki main tumse bohot pyaar karti hoon, aur tumhe bacchane ke liye, main ye sab kar rahi hoon….(n then sanjay's eyes also gets filled wid tears.. n without saying anything he keeps the recievor, n on the other hand pari thinks) shayad sanjay, mujhse pyaar nahi karta… par main apne pyaar ke liye apna farz zaroor nibhaaungi… I will take him out of this trouble…

scene shift… rahul was wid his father sitting in the hall room..n talking

Mr mehra:- vaise jo bhi ho, beta… tumne unn logo ko phaasya bari acchi tarah se, Rahul:- (rahul smiles) haan dad!!! Inn viraanis ne samjha, shayaad main inn logo se darr jaaunga… uss sanjay ko to maine drugs ke case mein andar karvaa diyaa hai… aur ye viraanis ab zindagi mein part nership torne ki baat nahi karenge!!! BUT I WONDER, JISKE VAJEY SE YE SAB HO RAHA HAI … THAT PARI… vo kahaan hai.. kai, dino se dekhaa hi nahi use… ab mere hit list mein aglaa naam to usi ka hai dad…(n then mr mehra and rahul laughs, n when suddenly mr mehra looks at the main door… he stops laughing n when rahul also turns back they see that the commissioner is standing at the back… n then both of them stands up n the commissioner comes near them and says) Comm:- to matlab sanjay sach keh raha tha… ye tum dono ne use phasaaya hai, ab tak to main saboot ke liye interzaar kar raha tha, lekin ab nahi!!! Now I will personally look after this case… R:- sir… aap kyun apna blood pressure bara rahe hai, don't worry….mujhe bas itnaa bataaiye ki aap ko kitnaa chahiye, Comm:- TUM MUJHE KHARIDNE KI KOSHISH KAR RAHE HO, MR RAHUL MEHRA.. R:- ji bilkul sahi kaha aapne, main aapko kharidna chahta hoon, Comm:- ab main apni saari taakat laga dunga, sanjay ko iss case se bahaar nikalvane ke liye… ye tum log dekh lenaa… (n then the commissioner leaves n rahul n mr mehra looks wid hatred towards him)….

scene shifts to hotel in pari's room, where pari was roaming here n there n thinking about there next step

Pari:- ye saboot kaafi nahi hai, sanjay ko churvaane ke liye…. (n then she picks up the mobile out of frustration), aur ye mobile bhi nahi chal raha… vaise bhi kaise chalega ye, 5 saal se.. zameen mein pare pare kharaab ho chukka hai, raman sir theek hi keh rahe the…(n thn raman knocks the door, n pari goes n opens it) ..
P:- are raman sir… aaiye, (raman comes in a hurry) R:- pari.. ek bohot acchi khabar hai.. P:- kyaa, R:- abhi abhi, commissioner sir ka phone aaya tha, P:- KYAA YAAHAN?????.. sir, aapne unhe bataya to nahi ki aap aur main pune mein hai… R:- nahi…. Par unhone mujhe ek bohot acchi baat sunayi, P:- kyaa??/ R:- pari, commissioner sir ko rahul aur mr mehra ki asliyat ka pata chal gaya hai, ki unn logo ne hi sanjay ko drugs ke case mein phasayaa hai….P:- (pari smiles, but then something comes to her mind and she again becomes quite) R:- kyaa hua pari.. kya ye jaanke tum khush nahi ho… P:- nahi sir, main to bohot khush hoon, lekin main ek baat soch rahi thi, ki, sirf commissioner sir ke sach jaanne se sanjay iss case se bahar nahi aa sakta, balki.. hume saboot chahiye.. aur ye baat khud mujhe, commissioner sir ne ek baar kahi thi… R:- baat to tumhari bilkul sahi hai pari, lekin hum log koshish kar rahe hai naa, P:- RAMAN SIR… rahul ko neha ke murder case mein jail mein bhejne se, sanjay drugs case se kaise niklega…. Har baar ye rahul koi na koi bahaane se bahaar aa jaata hai…MUJHE SAMAJH MEIN NAHI AA RAHA KI… KAISE BACHAAUN SANJAY KO… (pari shouts n then tears drops from her eyes, n raman tries to make her understand that nothing will happen to sanjay…) Raman:- pari tum ro mat, sanjay sir, ne kuch nahi kiyaa, doosri baat ye ki commissioner sir khud ab iss case ko dekh rahe hai, sanjay sir ko kuch nahi hone doonga main…. P:- (pari's eyes were filled wid tears and then she looks up to raman and says) P;- sir, hamare pass sirf aur 5 din hai….. vahaan sanjay ke khilaaf case chal raha hai… aura bhi tak hum yahaan saboot nahi dhoond paaye… LEKIN, ghar se nikalte waqt kasam lit hi, ki main sanjay ko kuch nahi hone doongi….aur ye mera vaada hai, apne pyaar se ki main use jail se bahaar nikalvaake hi rahoongi…..(n then raman looks at pari, with a feeling of being proud for her).

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Posted: 18 years ago
Great Part Duyus i cannot wait till Pari finds information or ssomething against Rahul and i cannot wait till the (edalat)continue soon you coninued after a long time

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Woah, it's getting better adn better .. do continue :)
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its too good yaar,cont soon....
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Thanks a lot for this update! Plz continue soon...... Ur stories are very interesting....... 👏 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago

Recap of part 50,

when pari and raman were trying to find some proofs, suddenly pari finds a mobile she thinks when sanjay told her that when neha was talking to him and rahul was forcefully taking neha wid him then the mobile falls on the ground, so pari made a guess that may be that mobile belongs to neha, and it can be possible that there is any proof in that mobile, but raman says that as this incident happened 5 years ago and this mobile is not in use after the incident, so it may not work and it cannot help us either, but pari insisted off taking the mobile, scene shifts back to sanjay sitting in the lock up, when a police constable comes and tells him that he had to receive a call, when sanjay attends his call he finds pari at the other side of the phone, and pari tells him that she is in pune and she is here to find proofs against rahul on account of murdering neha, sanjay gets more upset on this and tells her that rahul is very dangerous and if he gets to know that she is in pune, so he might try to harm her, but pari insists that she will stay there and try to find the proofs and also tells him that she loves sanjay. On saying this, sanjay's eyes gets filled with tears and without saying anything he puts down the recievor and pari thinks that may be he does not loves her, but she will fulfill her duty as a friend. Scene shifts rahul was sitting with his father and talking about how he put sanjay in the drugs case, and suddenly he notices that police commissioner was standing there and the commissioner says that, now he will personally investgate in this case and will try to take out sanjay from the case, scene shifts again to the hotel room in pune, where pari was sitting and getting tensed about how she will take out sanjay from that case, after a while raman comes to her room and gives her the good news that, commissioner got to know the truth that rahul and his father played the game and put sanjay behind the bars, and he will personally investigate in this case, but pari was still upset and she says that rahul is very clever and he will try his best to stop the commissioner from investigating, and right now it is more important to take out sanjay from this case rather than finding proofs against rahul in neha's murder case, and they don't even have enough time to take out sanjay from this case as they are only left with 5days, and then pari breaks down into tears, but raman tells her that nothing will happen to sanjay sir, and they will take him out of the jail, because right now commissioner sir is also with them….. and now in the same scene

Part 51 begins…. Same scene…. 😳

[ Then, something comes to pari's mind and she tells raman]

P:- RAMAN SIR!!! R:- haan?? P:- ek kaam kar sakte hai hum, R:- kyaa?? P:- dekhiye kyunki iss waqt rahul ko jail bhejne se zayadaa zaroori hai sanjay ko iss case se bahaar nikalvanaa, to kyun naa hum pehele ek kaam ko khatam karne ki koshish Karen, R:- haan pari main bhi iss waqt yehi soch raha tha, ki pehele kisi tarah sir ko iss case se bahaar nikalvaale , aur phir uss rahul ko sazaa dilvaake chodrenge… P:- lekin sawaal ye hai, ki hum kaise Karen ye… R:- dekho, pari, sanjay sir ke ghar se drugs milaa hai, aur ye baat to pakki hai ki unke ghar mein kisi ne ye drugs plant kiye the, agar pari, hume vo insaan mil jaaey jisse rahul ne drugs kharide the aur plant karvaaey the… to shayad sanjay sir bach sakte hai, P:- lekin sir hum unhe dhoondhenge kahaan,(for a while they think and then something comes to raman's mind and then he says anxiously) R:- EK MINUTE PARI!!!!(then she looks at him) P:- kyaa hua sir???? R:- mujhe iss drugs case se ek baat yaad aayi shayad iss case mein hume koi madad mil sakti hai… P:- kya sir, R:- aaj se ek saal pehele, yaahaan pune mein main aur sanjay sir ek bar mein kuch youngersters ko pakra tha, jo drugs le rahe the, unke saath ek aadmi ko bhi pakraa tha, jo unhe drugs bech raha tha, aur uss aadmi ne sanjay sir se badla lene ki baat kahi thi, P:- haan to?? , R:- PARI, ho sakta hai ki, usi aadmi ne yaa uske kisi jaanne waale ne ye drugs plant kiye the… P:- aur agar usne plant nahi kiye to…??? (she asks with lots of questions in her eyes), R:- pari??? Koshish karne mein to koi buraai nahi hai… P:- theek hai??? To chaliye bar mein?? R:- nahi pari!! Iss waqt nahi dopeher ke waqt vaahaan koi nahi milega hume, ye log raat ko hi aisi jagaahon mein milte hai… P:- theek hai….

scene shifts it's 9:00 pm, and pari and raman enters the bar, both of them looks here and there

P:- raman sir!! Aapko lagta hai vo aadmi yaahan hoga, R:- hona to chahiye pari, lets see.. (after spending some hours in the bar, when they were about to go suddenly raman bumped off with a man, and that man was none other than that drug dealer, when the drug dealer saw him, he recognized him, and he pushed raman and pari and starts running…then raman, pari and the drug dealer comes out of the bar… the drug dealer was running away from them and pari, raman were running after him, then after sometimes, raman finally catch the drug dealer)

Raman:- RUK JAA!!! VARNA MAIN GOLI CHALA DUNGA, (and then the drug dealer stops running, and then pari holds his hands from the back and raman puts the gun on his head and takes him to a corner of the road, and punches him) drug dealer:- KYUNNN MAAR RAHE HO MUJHE????, R:- kyun maar raaha hoon tujhe, SANJAY SIR KE GHAR MEIN DRUGS TUNE HI RAKHE THE YAA NAHI, (and then he agains beats the drug dealer) Drug.d:- nahi, maine nahi kiyaa kuch bhi.. mujhe chor do… R:- lagta hai tu aise nahi bataaeyga… pari, ek kaam karte hai isse pass ke police station mein le chalte hai, iskaa muh vahin khulega, P:- HAAN CHALIYE!!

scene shifts it's 10:00pm, pari was sitting outside and raman was beating up the drug dealer, but the dealer was constantly denying that he kept drugs in sanjay's house, after sometime raman comes out of the lock up and meets pari

P:- (pari asks very anxiously) KYA HUA SIR!! KUCH BATAYA USNE??? R:- nahi pari!!! Ye apnaa muh kholne ke liye taiyaar hi nahi hai, jab se aaya hai, tab se ye hi keh raha hai ki issne kuch nahi kiyaa, main isse puch chuka hoon keh raha hai ki ye kisi rahul ko nahi jaanta… aur issne sanjay sir ke ghar mein drugs nahi rakhe… P:- lekin sir, ye bhi to ho sakta hai ki ye aadmi sach keh raha ho, ho sakta hai vaakiye mein issne sanjay ke ghar mein drugs naa rakhe ho, R:- pari?? Mere paas ek plan hai, hume abhi pata chal jaaeyga, ki issne rahul se rupe lekar sanjay sir ke ghar mein drugs rakhe the yaa nahi, P:- KAISE???(and then he tells the plan to pari) R:- lekin pari?? Isse tumhaari jaan ko khatraa ho sakta hai… tum isiliye ek baar phir soch lo, kya tum chahti ho ki main iss plan ko aage badhaaun, P:- (then pari passes a smiles and says) sir… main sanjay ke liye main apni jaan bhi de sakti hoon, agar use bachate hue meri jaan chali bhi jaaye, to mujhe koi dukh nahi hoga.. R:- theek hai??? Pari…

scene shifts it's 10:45pm in mumbai…. SN tulsi was going out of her room, suddenly her phone rings she goes and picks up the recievor

Tulsi:- hello… P:- hello naani, main pari bol rahi hoon, T:- PARI??? Beta kaisi hai tu, aur itne din hogaye, ek phone tak nahi kiya tune, P:- naani, iss waqt koi sawaal mat kijiye, bas mujhpe bharosa banaye rakhiye, main sanjay ko jab tak iss case se nikaal nahi leti, main chain se nahi baithungi, T:- beta??? Sab theek hai naa, tu bohot pareshan lag rahi hai… kuch to bata?? Kyaa hua hai, (n pari's eyes gets filled with tears) P:- kuch nahi naani, bas itnaa samjh lijiye, ki ab tak rahul aur mere bich mein sirf chupa chipi ka khel chal raha tha, ab jo kuch hoga, aamne saamne hoga, T:-main samjhi nahi??? Kya matlab, (and then pari tells everything to tulsi) T:- beta?? Tu jaanti hai ki tu kya karne jaa rahi hai, beta, mujhe tere liye bohot darr lag raha hai, meri maan tu vaapas aa jaa, P:- ye aap keh rahi hai naani, AAPNE TO MUJHE KABHI DARNA NAHI SIKHAAYA, phir aaj aap aisi baatein kyun kar rahi hai, main aapka ashirwad chahti hoon naani, taaki iss jung mein meri aur meri dosti ki jeet ho, T:- (then tulsi's eyes also gets filled with tears, but making her heart strong she says) beta… main tujhe jeet te hue dekhna chaahti hoon, aur meri baat yaad rakhna, SABOOT LEKAR GHAR AANA, main tere saath hoon… (then pari smiles) P:- ji naani…

And this part ends here enjoy reading!!!! And do comment😃

Edited by duyus - 18 years ago

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