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Posted: 18 years ago
last part

k-i want to...kiss her lips and tell her i lover her, i want to hold her in my arms and never let her go. i tried going out with a few girls but it didnt bother kripa once, not even once. iam going to d.c. for a few day. i hope when i come back kripa will say she missed me just as much as i will miss her

over the past few days kripa thought a lot about what angad had written in his diary. and soon enough kripa relised that she did love angad a lot but it wasnt just angad who she loved it was also adi

kripa knew she wasnt ready to take care of a 5 year old at such a young age but if she could handel adi for a week maybe she could handle him for the rest of a life time but kripa just didnt know how to tell angad.

angad returned from d.c. with a smile

k-you seem happy today

a-the court allowed me to leave the army with high honors. iam going to be the youngest genral to ever retire from the millitary with high honors

k-THATS GREAT!!!

kripa knew how it felt to be wanting high honors because she was in the millitary after all. right then it clicked to kripa as to how she would tell angad that she loved him.

a-i couldnt belive it ....

angad didnt get to finish because before he could say any thing kripa stuck her toung in to angads mouth. angad was shocked at first but enjoyed his present that he got from kripa. angad put one arm around kripas waist continuing to kiss her and with his other hand he gave a tumbs up sign to the little 5 year old boy that was standing a few feet away from him

angad and adi planed to keep kripa in there house from the moment kripa steped into there lifes, and because of adi's player mind angad and kripa got married a few months later

hope u like this fan fic
i know the ending sucked but i just had to finish the fan fic up i was just dieing to start my other fan fic
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Posted: 18 years ago
ok every one i will have the new fan fic posted tommrow 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh I want to kill you why did you do it 😡 I hate it I thought there will be few more parts like two or three at least 😭
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: night girl

ok every one i will have the new fan fic posted tommrow 😃

stilll can't wait ot read it😉

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Posted: 18 years ago
im sad dat the fan fic is ova. but it was an okay ending. i wish it was more touching or memorable.but oh well. waitin 2 red ur new fan fic. start it soon.
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: night girl

i was thinking about putting a twist in a makeing it longer but right now i have a realy good fan fic in mind that could last up to 100-300 pages long so i think it would be better if i end this fan fic and start another

I see Black and You should only last 30-50 pages but another fan fic in mind that i want to keep a secret untill i post it.... that fan fic should last at least 100-300 pages

ohhhhhhhhh can't wait to read the 100-300 pages long ff 😉

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Posted: 18 years ago
cant wait to read ur new ff

great ending tho..
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Posted: 18 years ago
wow
this was good fan fiction
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Posted: 18 years ago
omg tht was as awsome fanfic ruhee....i hav no words n esp the ending was gr8 how angad gav thumbs up 2 kripa!!!!!!!!amazing....cnt wait 4 ur new fanfic!! 👏


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Posted: 18 years ago
😆 Ruhee you could have just said he kissed her you didnt have to go into the stucking the tounge in his mouth nevertheless that was faviorite part made me laugh for a whole minute in fact i am laughing as i type this. i cant wait for Black and you. I know i am going to love it just like this one!! So hurry up and get on it!! 😛

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