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Posted: 18 years ago
part 16

angad took kripa around the waist lightly and both went to find there seats. angad pulled kripas chair out like a gentalmen

kripa had to admit angad might be a player frontwards and backwards but sideways he was a bit of a genral

waiter-do you want any thing to dirnk

a-red wine

angad looked at kripa for her response for a drink

k-i will take the same

the waiter left and kripa blew up in angads face that kind of shocked him

k-angad your son is a spolied brat. you have to do something

a-come on kripa he is not that spoiled

k-angad he has 5 girlfriends and he is working his way up to ten

a-look i will admit it ok adi is spoiled, but its hard...

angad was cut off by kripa

k-angad if you dont take care of your son then one day he will take advantage of you, with your money, your mistakes and much more. you have to do something

angads temper was now riseing no one before told him strait to his face how to raise his own child

a-(angered tone)realy then what should i do, he is my son if i want to spoil him then i will

kripa was getting angry also because deep down kripa cares for angad and his family she might now know this now but it is still true

k-you need to find someone that will stop you from spoiling adi

angad tired realy hard not to punch kripa right in the face. angad always had a realy hard time when someone tried to stand up to him

the waiter came a put the wine on the table and he noticed there was tenshion between angad and kripa and decided to leave the place as fast as possible before one of them kills the other

a-fine, you are right(calming down abit) adi is a spoiled brat and he needs a mother and i need someone that would stop me from spoiling him so much. but where will i find girls to go out with

kripa laughed and angad was confused as to why kripa was laughing

a-why are you laughing

k-angad your rich and your a player and your asking me a girl that so far has only gone out with 3 guys and the last guy i had gone out with was in 7th grade

a-a girl as beautiful as you only gone out with 3 guys

k-what can i say i was never realy that out going

angad and kripa over dinner had a light conversation about what they should do over adi and what type of girl angad was looking for as a solemate and kripa talked about what type of girls he shouldnt date

after dinner angad paid the bill and went were adi was. kripa and angad saw adi and the little girls haveing coke and desert over realy dinner

k-that is it your son is going to be grounded for a year

a-kripa what did adi do now

k-he's eating desert over food

a-kripa, reliax its going to take time before he starts changeing into an unspoild brat, just chill

kripa then mumbled under her breath

k-who is going to change you from being a spolied brat

a-did you say something?

k-no

angad went to adi and said it was time to leave, adi left by kissing each girl on the cheek and haveing angad pay his part of the bill. as they left kripa couldnt help but ask how much the dinner bill cost, angad hadnt even give the chance for her to see the bill

k-angad i couldnt help but ask how did dinner cost you

a-kripa if i told you iam sure you would insist on paying me back

k-oh come on it couldnt have been that much

a-i will tell you the cost as long as you promise not to freak out by promising to pay me back

k-ok promise not say a word about paying you back

a-$5,673

kripas eyes grew in shock

k-your jokeing right

a-no iam not

kripa was about to say the words about paying him back but she never got the chance. angad gabed kripa around the waist turned her around and pushed her body against his

a-(whispering)sshhhuu, remembered you promised

angad was flurting with kripa physically by moveing his hands genltly up and down kripas back. it sent shivers down kripas whole body. kripa never relised how powerful angads arms where around her

adi-get a room

adi said this as he walked right past angad and kripa strait into the backseat of the car

kripa turned red head to toe from hearing a 5 year old kid saying that. with out saying anything angad and kripa sat in the front and angad drove off with a very awakward night with a friend and a son who thinks something is going on between his friend

hope u like this part
next part comeing soon
comeing up-adi hates angads new girlfriend, kripa hates angads new girlfriend, angad thinks his new girlfriend is hot 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: goldi2

lol hahaha but then does angad date Kripa?? lol u better watch it Ruhhe lol ur giving things away😉 lol not that i mind:P:P:P

i tell every one what will happen in my fan fic almost all the time but still it never ends up being the way every one expects it to be 😉

and i always have fun seeing everyone shocked when it dosnt turn out the way they expect it to😆

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Posted: 18 years ago
Awesome part... i luved it!!!!! Luved da get a room part loll OMG adi is seriousily such a spoilt brat!!!! LOLL 😆 Da preview seems sooooo kool!!! Pls do cont soon.. 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
great part!..i hope angad finnaly realizes that kripa is the rite mom for his spoiled brat adi 😆 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
WOW!!!! i am in love with this FF!!!! 😳
it is just PERFECT!!!! Adi is HILARIOUS nd i LOVE him!!!!! 😃
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i love how u update soon, so now i dunt have to say 'continue soon'!! lol!!
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: patelniyati2004

great part!..i hope angad finnaly realizes that kripa is the rite mom for his spoiled brat adi 😆 😆

angad wont relise that untill he get beat up by at least 20 diffrent girls...you know how guys are realy slow😆

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: berkeleygirl818

WOW!!!! i am in love with this FF!!!! 😳
it is just PERFECT!!!! Adi is HILARIOUS nd i LOVE him!!!!! 😃
👏
i love how u update soon, so now i dunt have to say 'continue soon'!! lol!!

you know i realy dont mind the continue soon but it would been nice to have other comments besides the continue soons😆

glad that you like my fan fic

my goal is to finish this fan fic asap so i can start my new fan fic i have in mind😛

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Posted: 18 years ago
next part comeing in a few mins
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Posted: 18 years ago
KOOL!!! Cant wait for da next part!!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
part 17

kripa turned red head to toe from hearing a 5 year old kid saying that. with out saying anything angad and kripa sat in the front and angad drove off with a very awakward night with a friend and a son who thinks something is going on between his friend

a week went by and angad was going through women like crazy. there wouldnt been one day were angad would have a date and ever time he would bring a date home adi would all ways run them of for one reason adi wanted kripa to marry angad.

all the while angad was dateing other women, kripa was stuck baby siting adi. at first adi didnt like kripa becuase she wouldnt let him eat what ever he wanted she wouldnt let him stay up late like angad did and it bugged adi alot. later adi started likeing kripa because she was a challange for him. kripa wasnt like angad or any of his girlfriends that would cave in to ever thing adi said, because of that reason adi wanted kripa to stay he liked the challage for haveing to fight for want he wanted. all the while adi relised its not fun haveing something if you dont work hard to get it

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a-ok that is it

angads loud voice boomed through the large house

a-adi i have dated about 50 diffrent girls and you want none of them to be your mother

adi-no, i dont like any of the girls you date

a-why not

adi-becuase they dont like me they like you more

these where the times angad wished that he had a wife before a son. angad loved adi a lot it wasnt like he didnt want adi it was just the plan fact that it was hard takeing care of a 5 year old kid alone

a-adi go to your room

as angad and adi were haveing there father son conversation kripa was standing right there in the liveing room. as soon as angad heard adi's bedroom door slam he sat on the sofa tired

a-god kripa what am i going to do with this kid, i love him but sometime he can be such a pain

k-angad try and understand it from adi's side. he is scared about shareing his dad with some one else. adi is so used to you just loveing him and at such an age maybe he thinks you will for get about him and get busy with your wife over him

angad listend to kripa carefully. angad didny understand how was kripa able to undersand his son better then him self.

a-(thinking)what if..what if kripa was the very girl that can take care of adi and stop me from spoiling him...all the time kripa has been living here she hasnt asked one think from me like my girlfriends i dated in the past week

k-angad? what are you thinking about

a-hun..uummm nothing

k-ok

kripa was about to leave when angad grabed her hand and made her sit beside him

a-you know what kripa, there is something on my mind but i dont think i am ready to tell you yet...when the time comes i will tell you...till then i was wondering if you can do me a favor

k-sure thing

angad just relised how every time he asked a favor from kripa she always said sure with out even hearing what he wanted her to do. angad saw kripa was diffrent form all the other rich girls he had dated

a-i need you to take care of adi for a few days.

k-ok

angad was suprised she didnt even ask why he need her to take care of adi it was like she trusted him with out a dought. angad thought to test kripas trust

a-i need another favor

k-sure, any way i can help iam there

a-i want you to sleep with me

k-what!?

a-sorry i just relised that you said yes to everything i said before i even told you what i need you to do

k-oh, for a second i thought you were seriouse

a-(under his breath)maybe i was

k-did you say something

a-no...by the way i needed you to look after adi becuase iam going to D.C. for a few days i need to resign for my post from the army before another war starts, if any things happens to me who will take care of adi after me

k-dont say that nothing will happen to you or adi

a-ya but i would rather stay on the safe side


hope u like this part
next part coming soon
comeing up-adi trys to get kripa to admit shes in love with angad 😉

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