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Posted: 18 years ago
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excellent part as always con soon 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#92
Awesome parts... jus read da last 2... i luved the fist fite it was sooooo cute!!! N pls do cont soon, cnt wait for da nxt parts!!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#93
Hey ruhee awesome parts. And you were going about how it was stupid. I love the story! And you better continue soon, because i know where you live 😆 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
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you just have to continue ruhee!!
this is an awesome fanfic! 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: munizaaa

Hey ruhee awesome parts. And you were going about how it was stupid. I love the story! And you better continue soon, because i know where you live 😆 😆

your so lieing, you know that this fan fic is not as great as my other ones but oh well next part comeing in a few mins

happy munizaaa and every one else out ther😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: dostokedost

no problem I think I have bother you more then enough so conti when oyu feel okay take care

JIA😊

lol you havent bothered me at all, turst me, but if you want to see me angry you have to try realy hard😆

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Posted: 18 years ago
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part 10

angads angry was boiling becuase some where down there he knew that kripa was telling the truth, that him being drunk caused him to do and say things that he should have never said or done

a-i will be back in a few hours, bye

by saying that angad left kripa and the room

k-(thinking)i have no idea how that idiot became a genral

a few hours later angad came back with a letter in his hand

k-whats in you hand

a-i stoped by the mailing office, the letter is for you

k-kripa didnt understand who would send her a letter

angad gave the letter to kripa. kripa looked at the mailing address to see it was from her house, which ment it was from her mom. with out even opening the letter kripa took a match and put the letter on fire and then said about 5 diffrent words that could have any soilder fired.

angad was suprised at seeing kripas reactshion for getting a letter from her home town.

a-kripa i know its not my buissness but why did you just burn a letter from your home town

k-angad ask me that question when iam not so pissed off

by saying that kripa went on her bed and slamed her head into her pillow

angad was very takeing back all together. angad knew it was none of his buisness to get in to kripas personal life but he couldnt help him self, it was like in the past 3 months kripa had become part of his family maybe more. angad didnt understand what was happening to him but what ever it was he was feeling something for kripa at the moment

right when angad was about to go near kripa he heard about 20 guys from out side yelling realy loud. kripa took her head out of the pillow and angad started running out side. within 10 mins all the soilder were outside wondering what was going on

soilder-genral a letter form D.C. just came it turns out the war has ended and we wont be needed to fight in battle. we have orders to leave within a week

angad took the letter and skimmed through the letter to make sure it wasnt a joke but it wasnt, his orders was to pack up and leave the base in a week

all the soilders cheered in happyness. It wasnt like the soilders werent upset in leaveing there new friends they made but the thing is when you are liveing in a war base expecting someone to kill you is not exactly how you want to spend your 2 years of your life

all the soilders are happy that they wont have to see battle but the only soilder that was unhappy was kripa and the only person that noticed kripas unhappy face was kripas

a-hey kripa, arent you happy that you will not have to see battle

k-ya iam happy

kripa lied right to angads face and any one in the world could tell kripa was lieing right to the genrals face

a-ok thats it come on, come with me

angad grabs kripas hand not realy giveing her a choise. angad takes kripa to the room and stands against the door so kripa couldnt leave. angad crosses his arms in a strict way as if he was kripas dad and cought kripa sneeking out of the house at 3 in the moring

a-thats it tell me whats going on

k-nothing, and you have to right to ask me this question

a-your right i dont have a right to ask you this question, but me being a human and all i cant help but ask why you burned a letter form your home town and now your upset about not haveing to worry about dieing. As a human i want to know truthfully. "ARE YOU OK"

k-truthfully, no, iam not ok but truthfully, it dosent matter anymore

kripa moved foward expecting angad to move away from the door but he didnt move

k-let me leave

a-ok fine you can go but remember if you ever need any thing iam going to be there for you

angad moved from the door way and let kripa leave

hope u like this part
next part comeing soon
comeing up-your going to have to see the proms that iam going to be posting soon to find out 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
#98

PROM

SOMEONE-"Kripa? Are you ok?"

KRIPA-"Hey, I was wondering is your offer still open"

SOMEONE-"Ya, you know your always welcome at my house. Come in"

KRIPA-"Thanks"

Right when kripa enters the large house she and _____ hear a little child crying from upstaris

hope u like the prom

Edited by night girl - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#99
hey great part. cont soon. 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
nice part Ruhee!!
i wounder wts bugging Kripa, i mean wat did the letter say?? and i acctully aspected Angad to force her to tell him lol but he didnt, he was muhc gental about the whole thing then i thought he would be
but im sure its all apart of his "character":P:P:P
continue soon
i'll be waintg for those promo's




Hina

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