Laws of the land/ last part page 29 - Page 11

hiya
i jus read ur ff and its Fab!!!!!

great part k i bet thats angad in the promo but the baby crying i have no idea on that 😆

ooooo gr8 prt.........n interesting promo!!

awesome part cont soon plz!!!!!!!!!! 👏

Originally posted by: candyprincess

great part k i bet thats angad in the promo but the baby crying i have no idea on that 😆

well, when it comes to my fan fic, you never know what will happen 😆

Originally posted by: goldi2

nice part Ruhee!!
i wounder wts bugging Kripa, i mean wat did the letter say?? and i acctully aspected Angad to force her to tell him lol but he didnt, he was muhc gental about the whole thing then i thought he would be
but im sure its all apart of his "character":P:P:P
continue soon
i'll be waintg for those promo's




Hina

well kripa never read the letter because she was still angry at her mom, and the reason angad didnt force her to tell is becuse they dont know each other so much that they would be best of friends and tell each other every thing but they know each other well enough to say there friends

so the reason angad didnt force kripa to tell what was the matter was because there friendship right now is a thin string that could break at any moment, if there not careful about what they say

dose that help? If not please tell me because a big twist is about to come that will make the story go to super mode

Kool part... n awesome promos, let me give ma prediction, da someone in da promos is angad, n i think he has a kid or sumfin coz da baby was crying, i know it is a weird prediction but thats all i cud cum up wid, loll 😆
Cont soon

P.S: R u gunna cont ur ff called human art, it was gr8 but u jus left it sooo plz do cont it if u can!!!!! 😊

part 11 THE BIG TWIST

k-let me leave

a-ok fine you can go but remember if you ever need any thing iam going to be there for you

angad moved from the door way and let kripa leave

the rest of the week went by fast becuase every one was busy packing and takeing out all the wepons they had in the base hidden and unhidden. angad and kripa didnt really get a chance to talk much as they were busy packing and getting ready to leave

kripa on the other had wasnt all that happy about leaveing because she was worried about where will she live. Before kripa wasnt worried that much when she first came to the base becuase she thought that she could stay here for 2 years and get her pay for serveing and then buy a place to live and work for a living but now sence the base was closeing early she wouldnt get full pay and it wouldnt be enough to pay the bills or any where to live

today was the soilders last night at the base tommrow moring they would be heading for the usa all going in diffrent directions, prithiv was headed for texas, josh was headed for washington, shaun was heading for florida, angad was headed for california, and kripa was headed for kansas her home town but kripa knew as soon as she landed in kansas she would have to get another flight to find a place to live

las night at the base

both angad and kripa where lieing on there own beds talking to each other

a-kripa

k-ya

a-dont take this the wrong way or anything but lately i noticed that you where realy up set and stuff. I just want you to know that if you need anything you can call for find me in california

k-thanks angad, thats sweet of you to say. can i ask you something

a-shoot

k-have you always been such a nice dude with anger mangement problems

a-are you kidding me, when i was in high school you should have seen me, i used to date a new girl every week. i remember there was this one time when i was dating 2 girls at the same time and both girls knew that i was dateing both of them at the same time and neither minded shareing me with the other.

kripa in a way didnt have a hard time beliveing angad because angad did look hot and sometimes kripa would notice a hit of playboyish tone in his voice

k-you know angad it might be shocking but i belive you when you say that you where a player back in high school

a-realy?

k-ya, sometimes in your voice you have a hint of player type of voice

angad and kripa gave off a laugh

a-god kripa iam going to miss you when i get back home

k-what are you going to do when you get home

a-well i own a vineyard

k-wait that means your rich

a-yup, make about 18 million a year

k-then why did you join the millitary

a-well,when i joined the millitary i had nothing, no family to go to or any of that, i realy liked the millitary and within the time i was in the usa i started to make millions form growing grapes and turning them to vine and soon enough i ended with my own vineyard and became super rich.

k-then why didnt you resign from the millitary

a-well i was going to but a few days before i was going to resign in court, war broke out and i never got the chance so now iam going to go home and get a few things straitened out and then iam going to go to court to resign,before a new war breaks out, how about you kripa what are you going to do when you get home

k-i dont know i dont plan on going home

a-why not

k-its a long story, but lets just say my mom lied to me my whole life and it hurt a lot

a-come on you cant be mad at your mom for ever...i bet she lied to help you out

k-my mom said that my dad was dead when he wasnt

a-oh,now that has to hurt but she ment well didnt she

k-i just cant go back, i just cant

a-look if you need a place to stay come live with me my house has plenty of room

k-takes for the offer but i think i can find a place to live

a-ok if you say so

next day

all the soilders were at the air port saying byes to there friends. angads termanal was to the right and kripas to the left. angad gave a light kiss on the cheeks and told her to take care

a-kripa you know where i live, remember your always welcome at my house

k-thanks

both friends went there seprate ways with there own problems and worries with out knowing if they will ever meet again

hope u like this part
next part coming soon
comeing up-kripa in california 😉

Originally posted by: nehagupta_9

Kool part... n awesome promos, let me give ma prediction, da someone in da promos is angad, n i think he has a kid or sumfin coz da baby was crying, i know it is a weird prediction but thats all i cud cum up wid, loll 😆
Cont soon

P.S: R u gunna cont ur ff called human art, it was gr8 but u jus left it sooo plz do cont it if u can!!!!! 😊

your prediction is headed in the right direction but i wont tell all details till my next part

and as for human art i will not be continueing it because i just dont have the time or idea to do so, sorry 😭