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Posted: 18 years ago
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i love your fanfic please continue soon
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Chapter twelve

next morning its 8.30 and nimmo is still sleeping. everyone tried waking her up but of no use. she wont wake. atlast jaanvi arrived there. she tried waking up nimmo and nimmo opened her eyes.
jaan: thank god tum utt gayi. nimmo!!!! saade aat baj gayi, abhi tak tum so rahi ho. chalo, jaldi se thayyar ho jao. office jaana hai.
nims: jaanvi, tum office chale jao. mein aaj office nahi aa rahi.
jaan: lekhin kyun. kunal toh mujhse poochega.....
nims: ussse keh dena ki meri thabiyath teek nahi hai. i'm really very tired yaar.
jaan: teek hai. kunal se mein keh dethi hoon. aur waise bhi tumhe aaraam ki zaroorat hai, kal tumaari sagaayi joh hai.
nims: haan, toh tum samaj sakti ho na, please usse keh do.
jaan: ok then bye.
nims: byeeeeeeeeeeeee.....................

nimmo goes back to sleep. its 10.30 now and nimmo is slowly turning on her right and opens her eyes slightly to see what the time was and when she opened she saw kunal smiling at her, nimmo was so sleepy that she did not take it seriously and instead she said"good morning" but then she thought in her mind(her eyes were closed) "kunal????aisa laga ki meine usse dekha" she opened her eyes slowly if he was really there, and he was stil there smiling at her.
kunu: good morning dear!!!!
nimmo jumped up on her bed and sat straight.....
nims: tum???????????tum mere kamre mein kya kar rahe ho?
kunu: bait raha hoon, aur kya?
nims: stop joking kunal. tum yahaan kyun aaye ho? aur mummy papa kahaan hain?
kunu: voh kahin pados ke ghar gaye hain.
nims: kya???????????????????? mujhe akele chodkar, naina??????swati????
she calls for naina and swati....
kunu: kyun chilla rahi ho? voh sab toh office gaye hain. yahaan kaise honge?
nims: kya chahthe ho tum? kyun aaya ho?
kunu: mein tumhe uttane aaya tha.
nims: lekhin kyun? maine jaanvi se kahaa tha ki aaj mein office nahi aoongi.
kunu: patha hai, isiliye toh mein yahaan par hoon.
nims: offo, yeh mein kahaan phas gayi.....kyun baar baar mere thang karthe ho tum???
kunu: dekho? meine tumhe kabhi thang nahi kiya hai. tumhe patha hai?, main aadhe gante se yahaan tumaare bed par baita hoon.
nims: aadhe gante se?????lekhin tum utne samay mera chehraa hi dekh rahe the???
kunu: nahi toh, mein aur voh bhi tumaara chehraa. never, mein toh voh poster waali ladki ko dekh raha tha.
nimmo looks at the model's photo.
nims: kunal, voh naina ki friend hai, samaj gaye?
kunu: patha hai, voh humaare rival company mein model hai. phir bhi, kya structure hai?
nims: stop it kunal. tum yeh math bulo ki mein tumaari mangeetar hoon.
kunu: hello!!! abhi toh humaari sagaayi tak nahi hui hai, isliye abhi se biwi banne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai. aur waise bhi yeh shaadi sirf ek maheene ke liye hai.
nims: ok then, fine. dekh lo, shauk se dekh lo. mujhe kya, lekhin mere kamre se abh baahar jao....
kunu: are mein toh bhool hi. hum donon baahar jaa rahen hain
nims: mein kahin nahi aane waali.
kunu: lekhin meine apne doston se waada kiya tha, please aisa math karo
nims: lekhin kyun kunal? kis wajaah ke liye.
kunu: voh hum donon invitations dene ke liye jaana hai
nims: what? invitations? itni jaldi. hum kal dethe hain kunal, aaj nahi
kunu: lekhin kal humaari sagaayi aur...........
nims: toh barson dethe hain na....
kunu: yeh kaise ho sakta hai?
nims: kyun nahi ho sakta?
kunu: kyunki isme engagement ki invitation bhi hai..........
nims: oh my god kunal? kya zaroorat thi iski?
kunu: mujhe kya patha hai. dadaji ne hi order diya tha.
nims: toh mein abh kya karoon?
kunu: no other way nimmo, jaldi se thayyar ho jao.
nims: teek hai, tum hall mein jaakar baito, mein thayyar hokar aati hoon
kunu: ok, lekhin jaldi karna, mein tumaari help karoon.
nims: no thanks, i can manage.
kunal gives her a sweet smile and goes outside......
nimmo gets ready and surprisingly she was wearing a green saree(dark) and kunal as usual went into thoughts. nimmo came near him...
nims: toh chalen......kunal?????(she snaps her finger in front of his face) kya hua? kahaan kho gaye?
dont know what happened to kunal but suddenly he got up from the chair(they were standing close to each other) and he hugged her,
nims: kunal, yeh tum kya kar rahe ho? chodo mujhe, leave me kunal
and she tried to push him away and i think it was kunal's bad time. anand and neeta came in that instance and..........
neeta: nimmo??? kunal??? yeh kya ho raha hai?????
kunal came back to senses and let go off nimmo and felt really very embrassed.
kunu: voh actually, i'm really very sorry
he turned at nimmo
kunu: mein car mein tumhaara intezaar kar raha hoon
he leaves to the car and nimmo stands there with her head bend.
anand: lagta hai, kal tum donon ki sagaayi nahi, shaadi rakhna chahiye tha. galti kar di humne.
neeta: abh bas keejiye, nimmo, lagta hai kunal tumhaara intezaar kar raha hai, tum jao.
nimmo leaves without saying anything. kunal was waiting inside the car thinking-yeh mein kya kar raha tha. nimmo ko gale lag raha, yew, mein aur uss nimmo ko, kyun kiya maine aise. abh mein usse kaise face karoonga.(he sees her cuming) oh my god, woh aa rahi hai.
nimmo sits inside and starts
nims: yeh tum kya baththameezi kar rahe the kunal? tumne achanak aisa kyun kiya? aur woh bhi mummy papa ke saamne. whats all this kunal. dekho, mujhe patha hi tum bahut modern ho aur high class ho, lekhin iska matlab yeh nahi ki tum humaare saat kuch bhi karo, samaj gaye?
kunu: i'm sorry yaar, mujhse galti ho gayi. i promise ki future mein aisa kuch bhi nahi hoga.
nims: teek hai teek hai. abh jaldi se chalo.
kunu: lekhin tum achanak yeh saree kyun pehen lee?
nims: yeh meri mamaji ki gift thi, joh maine pichle theen maheenon se nahi pehni, toh socha aaj pehen loon. bas.
kunu: maan na padega, bahut khoobsurat lag rahi ho.
nims: hmmm, hem hem, bas bas, zyaada thaareef karne ki zaroorat nahi hai. abh jaldi se start karo.
kunal starts the car and off they go. kunal first takes her to jisha's house. jisha's mother(rohini) opens the door. but what a surprise, she knows nimmo and so does nimmo.
nims: aunty aap?
rohini: are nimmo, tum???
kunu: tum donon ek doosre ko jaante ho?
nims: kunal tumne mujhse pehle hi yeh kyun nahi kahaa ki hum jisha ki ghar aa rahen hain
kunu: mujhe kaise patha hai ki tum bhi jisha ko jaanti ho. waise aunty, jisha kahaan hai?
rohini: abhi bulaati hoon, pehle tum donon andar toh aao.
they go inside and jisha comes downstairs and sees nimmo first.
jisha: hey nimmo!!!!! what a pleasant surprise. kitne din ho gaye tumse milkar. oh my god. tum aur voh bhi saree mein. you are looking gorgeous yaar.
and then she notices kunal.
jisha: hey kunal, tum kab aaye. wow, this is quiet exciting. mere do puraane dosth aaye hain. well kunal, yeh hai nimmo meri bachpan ki dosth and nimmo, meet kunal sehgal, mera college ka dosth.
she doesnt know that nimmo and kunal have cum together.
jisha: patha hai nimmo, jab meine london mein join kiya tha, toh he was first one to give me a love letter. woh bhi pehle hi din mein. i was totally shocked and..........
nimmo looked at kunal and asked him what was she taliking about(like showing actions).kunal reacts instantly.
kunu: jisha, jisha, ek minute ek minute. humaari baat toh suno pehle. uske baad tum baat karo.
jisha: humaari baat?? yaani, tum donon saat mein aaye ho kya?
nims: haan jisha. aur hum tumhe invite karne ke liye aaye hain!
jisha: kis baat ke liye?
kunu and nims: humaare shaadi ke liye.
jisha was shell shocked.....
jisha: shaadi.....................................??????? oh my god, lagta hai kuch gadbad ho gayi, hai na kunal??????
kunu: i think so!!!!(he looked at nimmo)
nims: aisi koi baat nahi hai. kunal!!!!
kunu: kya???????
nims: invitation......
kunu: oh yes, just a second......
and he takes one invitation and writes nimmo's name....
nims: kunal yeh tum kya likh rahe ho?
jisha: lagta hai abh kunal ke dil aur dimaag mein sirf nimmo ki naam hai. kyun kunal????
kunal looked at nimmo and jisha and nimmo were busy talking. he was just looking at her and then nimmo just turned at him and raised her eyebrows asking him what???
he nodded his head and wrote jisha's name on the card and both of them ie. nimmo and kunal gave it to jisha.
nims: shaadi mein zaroor aa jaana.
jisha: zaroor aoongi. dont worry. aur kal bhi aoongi, aa sakti hoon na?
kunu: of course, yeh kaisi sawaal hai? teek hai toh hum chalthein hain.
nims: haan, humhe aur bhi invitations dena hai.
jisha: ok then guys, take care and bye.
nimmo and kunal leave from jisha's house and kunal takes nimmo to many of his friends house and drops her at about 6 in the evening.
kunu: ok then nimmo, kal milthein hain. goodnight.
nims: ok. bye goodnight.
and then nimmo goes inside to find a very tensed anand.
nims: papa??? kya hua?????
anand looks up at nimmo.
anand: nimmo????? kahaan chali gayi thi tum? hum bahut pareshaan ho gaye.
nims: pareshaan??? lekhin kyun papa? mein toh kunal ki saat hi toh gayi thi.
neeta: phir bhi nimmo, tum ek phone toh kar sakti thi na?
nims: sorry mama, aayinda aisa nahi hoga,ok?
she hugs her father and mother and goes straight into her room to find naina and swati.
naina: hey nimmo, welcome home......
nimmo felt that sumthing was odd...
swati: yahaan aao, aur baito.....
nimmo went and sat with them on the bed......
swati: batao nimmo, kunal ne tumhe kahaan kahaan lekar gaya, i mean like a drive, or to the beach....
nims: swati???? kya hua tumhe. tum teek toh ho na?
naina: voh toh hai, lekhin yeh batao ki aaj kya kya romance hua tum donon ke beech....
nims: lagta hai tum donon ko mental hospital bejna padega. hum donon invitations dene ke liye gaye the. aur kuch nahi. ok?
naina: bas????? sirf invitation hi diye kya???
nims: haan.
swati: these guys are so boring naina.. they are totally waste. kuch bhi nahi hone wala inn donon ka....
nims: dekho, abhi humaare sagaayi tak nahi hua hai, toh hum saat mein nahi goomenge......
naina: mama ne kahaa ki aaj subah kunal tumhe gale laga raha tha, humne socha ki shaayad kuch dher romance karne ke liye gaye honge, it was a total waste.
nims: oh no, yeh mama bhi na.......voh sab chodo, mujhe bahut neend aa rahi hai......i'm going to sleep. goodnight.
and she closed her face with the bedsheet and went to sleep.


thats all for now. hope u enjoyed it. pease post in ur comments. would like to know wat u think about my entire fan fic till now.

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Posted: 18 years ago
#13
omg so sweet. i read the whole ff. i think it is very very sweeet. but both are being really bad they wil fall in love. will kiya they have fallen in love. cant wait for more plz update soon. by the way some parts are making me crack. keep it up girl. 👏
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Chapter Thirteen


Next day nimmo woke up very early. At 7 in the morning. normally she would wake at 8, so this was an hour earlier. now what will she do. She looked on her both sides and found that both naina and swati had already woke. she thought that sumthing is going on. She refreshed herself and went to the hall to find everyone busy. She tried to talk to them but they were too busy. And atlast she successful in getting hold of KB. she asked her whats going on and she replied that they are making a kind of sweet. she is asking for what purpose....
KB: nimmo, hum log gujraati hain aur yeh ek rasam hai.
nims: achcha????? teek hai. toh mein sunny se milkar aati hoon. aaj uski exam hai. mama se keh dena.
KB: teek hai.
and nimmo leaves to sunny's house. she first sees sunny's mother(sheela).
nims: hello Sheela aunty! sunny kahaan hai???
sheela: woh apne kamre mein hai. thayyar ho raha hai.
nims: thanx aunty
sheela: waise nimmo, woh tumse naraaz hai.
nims: lekhin kyun???
sheela: khudh ussi se pooch lo.
she went inside his room and he was packing his bag.
nims: hi sunny, thayyar ho gaye kya? mein tumaari madad karoon????
sunny: uski koi zaroorat nahi, mein khudh kar loonga.(he sounded angry)
nims: tum mujhse naraaz ho???? lekhin kyun??? meine kya kiya????
sunny: aapne kuch bhi nahi kiya isliye....
nims: lekhin baat kya hai? mujhe batao toh sahi...
sunny: aapki shaadi hone waali hai, aur aapne mujhe bataya tak nahi. aur aaj aapki sagaayi bhi hai. mujhe yeh sab maa se patha chali, patha hai, mujhe bahut bura laga,
nims: achcha!!! toh yeh baat hai. i'm sorry yaar, i'm really very sorry(she holds her ears) aayinda aisa kuch bhi nahi hoga. mujhe maaf kar do, pleaseee
sunny: teek hai, lekhin this is first and last, ok???
nims: promise. abh batao, aaj kaunsa exam hai?
sunny: aaj English hai. bahut easy hai.
nims: achcha, toh mein chalthi hoon. tum thayyar ho jao. best of luck.
sunny: thanx didi.
nims: bye
and she leaves and as she was going towards her house.....
lady: nimmo?????(called her from her back)
nimmo turned around.
nims: are, sanjana aunty, aap???? aap london se kab aayi???
sanjana: mein toh ek hafte pehle aa gayi, aur tum ho, joh humse mili bhi nahi...
nims: sach mein aunty, mujhe patha nahi tha, kya mama jaanti hai.
sanjana: woh toh kabse jaanti hai..
nims: lekhin unhone mujhse kuch bhi nahi kahaa....waise, priya bhi aayi hai kya??
sanjana: haan woh bhi aayi hai. ek hafte se woh itni bore ho gayi thi ki mein keh nahi sakti, agar tum ghar aakar usse milogi, toh usse bahut khushi hogi. toh aao na nimmo
nims: teek hai aunty, mujhe bhi usse milna hai.
on their way to sanjana's house...
sanjana: toh nimmo, tu kar kya rahi hai?
nims: mein kaam kar rahi hoon, sehgal industries mein. lekhin koi phayda nahi.
sanjana: kyun???
nims: kyunki, meine barson join kiya tha, aur mein sirf theen din ke liye jaoongi.bas
sanjana: are, yeh kaisa kaam hai? aisa kyun??
nims: kyunki meri shaadi hone waali hai.
sanjana: shaadi hone waali hai?????? neeta ne mujhse yeh baat toh nahi kahaa.
nims: nahi kahaa??? aap mama se kab mili?
sanjana: mein toh pichle thursday ko mili thi,
nims: toh, unhe bhi tab yeh baat nahi maloom thi.
sanjana: matlab???
nims: matlab, meri shaadi toh shanivaar ke din fix kiya tha.
sanjana: aur shaadi kab hai?
nims: iss ravivaar ko.
sanjana: itni jaldi???
nims: aur aaj meri sagaayi hai.
sanjana: hai ram!! sab kuch itne jaldi???? mujhe toh wishwaas hi nahi ho raha ki, joh nimmo 12th mein pad rahi thi, joh hamesha mujhse doubts clear karne ke liya aati thi, uski shaadi hone waali hai????
nims: haan aunty, mujhe bhi yakeen hi nahi ho raha ki meri shaadi hone waali hai......
and they reached sanjana's house.
sanjana: mein abhi priya ko bulathi hoon....
nims: nahi aunty, mein usse surprise doongi, kahaan hai woh???
sanjana: woh apne kamre mein hai....
nimmo heads to priya's room and priya was lieing down on the bed and looking out through the window. nimmo goes near her silently and closes her eyes, changes her voice-with an increased bass, like men.
nims: guess who?????
priya: kaun???? patha nahi????
she turns around taking off nimmo's hand and ...................
priya: nimmo didi????aap?????wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!
they hug each other....
nims: kitni badi ho gayi tu????
priya: aur aap bhi, aap bhi kuch kam nahi, look at u, aap toh...kya kahoon, u'r rocking......bahut khoobsoorat lag rahi hain....
nims: come on, mera thareef karna bandh karo, abh batao, ki tum kitne dhin ke liye aayi ho????
priya: mein yahaan aur do hafte rahoongi, after that back to london....
nims: this is gr8, iska matlab tum mere shaadi mein aaogi!!!
priya: shaadi????aapki shaadi hone waali hai????
nims: haan....
priya: my god didi, aap aur shaadi????
nims: kyun????
priya: kuch nahi, sab kuch itni jaldi????waise ladka kaun hai????
nims: he's doing business, aur abh he's my present boss.
priya: lekhin pehle naam to batayiye
nims: oh, kunal, kunal sehgal......
priya: sehgal???????????
nims: haan,,,,kyun?????kuch gadbad toh nahi hai naa???
priya: oh god, didi, aap kunal se shaadi kar rahi hain?????hmmmmm
and she went into thoughts and nimmo shakes her,
nims: kahaan ko gayi???tum usse jaanti ho???
priya: haan, woh papa ke company mein kaam kartha tha.
nims: aisa kaisa ho saktha hai????
priya: kunal ne apni studies london mein kiya tha naa???
nims: haan!!!!!!
priya: toh usne......
nims: usne???????? unhone(like ordering)
priya: achcha baba, unhone, studies complete karthe hi, wahaan papa ke company mein join kar liya tha.
nims: lekhin tumhe kaise patha
priya: kyunki meine kunal se ek party mein mila hai.....and u know what, usse humaare school ki sabhi ladkiyaan jaanti hain
nims: woh kaise?????
priya: kunal ki ek cousin hai, preeti, woh humaare school mein padthi hai aur kunal usse chodne ke liye aur pick up karne ke liye aathe the..and u know what sabhi ladkiyaan uspar fida the. jab bhi uski car humaare school ke andhar aati thi toh sabhi ladkiyan line mein kade hote the. and u know what, meri ek dosth hai joh unke paas gayi aur unke......
nimmo was just shocked to hear all this and her mouth was wide open. and when priya was saying all this.....
nims: unke?????unke kya????kya hua?????
she thought sumthing like kissing stuff.....and.........
priya: cum on di, aap tense math ho jaayiye. uss ladki ne unki autograph liya tha, aur ek photograph bhi le liya.
nims: achcha??? toh london mein yeh sab hua hai.
priya: but trust me didi, he always behaved well. he never crossed his lmits.aur unke cousin preeti, woh hamesha sabhi ladkiyon se kuch na kuch kaam karvaati thi yeh kehkar ki woh unn logon ko kunal se milaayegi, but she never kept her word.
nimmo simply shook her head listening to all this and then suddenly burst in....
nims: woh sab chodo priya, mujhe lagta hai ki tum yahaan bahut bhor ho jaa rahi ho, toh aaj tum mere saat sagayi mein kyun nahi aa jaati???
priya: it will be great didi, i would love to cum...
nims: toh paanch baje thayyar rehna, teek hai?
priya: done.
nims: waise priya, tumaare computer mein net connection hai na?
priya: haan hai, kyun?
nims: mujhe kisise chat karni hai, isliye, kya mein kar sakti hoon?
priya: of course, chaliye........
they put on the comp and nimmo opens her chat box and sees that kunal is online....
nims: " hi kunal! how r u?"
kunal reads nimmo's msg and decides to play with her(rmbr nims still doesnt know that kunal is the same person)
kunu:" i'm fine. how abt u?"
nims: " absolutely fine here!"
kunu:" toh, shaadi ki thayyariyaan kaisi ho rahi hai?"
nims: " woh toh chal rahoi hai and aaj sagaayi hai"
kunu:" wow, congrats to u and kunal"
nims: " thanx. so sad u cant attend them"
kunu: " i know! lekhin mein kya kar sakta hoon?"
nims: "woh bhi toh hai. khair chodo, tell me, kaisa chal raha kaam?"
kunu: " its great. waise nimmo, mein tumhe kunal ke baare mein kuch kehna chahtha hoon"
in btw this, priya is all confused abt this kunal thingy and nimmo explains that he is kunal's friend and that both are kunals. but priya is still confused and is doubtful abt this.
nims:" haan kaho, kya baat hai?"
kunu:" woh kunal ki pehle pyaar ke baare mein"
nims: " what?????? kunal ne kisise pyaar kiya hai???"
kunu: " i know this is shocking to you, lekhin woh sab college days mein thi. they were the best couple there. sum of them were even jealous of this couple, lekhin unn donon beech kuch ho gayi jisse woh donon alag ho gaye. uske baad kunal ne kisi aur ke baare mein kabhi nahi socha. lekhin iska matlab yeh nahi ki woh abh bhi uss ladki se pyaar kartha hai. he's absolutely forgooten her. "
nims:" thanx kunal for telling me this. aur uss ladki ki naam kya thi?"
kunu:" Natasha"
nims:" natasha!!! kya woh bahut sundar thi????"
kunu:" haan, very beautiful. agar tum usse dakna chahthe ho toh its very simple. uski ek thasveer kunal ke laptop mein hai."
nims:" achcha???"
kunu:" ok then bye. mujhe jaana hai"
nims:" ok then bye."
kunal is kind of having a very naughty smile. and thinks- abh mazaa aayaga.. i'm sure ki woh meri laptop check karegi, lekhin bachaari, usse yeh nahi patha ki natasha aaj sagaayi ke liye aa rahi hai aur uski shaadi bhi ho gayi hai.
nims thinks- toh kunal ka pehla pyaar natasha thi.
priya: natasha??? abh kya karogi didi???
nims: kya???? kuch nahi. tumne pada na ki kunal ne kahaa ki woh usse bhool chuka hai
priya: shaayad didi. phir bhi, we're not sure ki.....
nims: i dont mind. mujhe koi pharak nahi padtha.
suddenly KB cums there...
KB: are nimmo, tum yahaan kab aayi? kunal ne phone kiya tha. woh tumhe office aane ke liye kahaa hai.
nims: office???? lekhin Kantamaasi, aapne usse poocha kyun???
KB: haan, keh raha tham koi imp meeting hai, aur vikrant aur jaanvi bhi nahi hain isliye....
nims: kya??? jaanvi aur vikrant nahi hain??? yeh inn donon ko kya hua. achanak, gaayab kyun ho jaate hain??? teek hai kantamaasi, chaliye chalthe hain, bye priya. shaam ko thayyar rehna...
priya: ok didi, bye....
and nimmo goes home, gets ready and leaves for her office. kunal is in his cabin.
nims: kya hua kunal? kaunsa meeting hai.
kunu: thnk god tum aa gayi. woh nayi product ki ek meeting.
nims: ohhhhh, ok toh meeing kab hai?
kunu: bas in just abt 15minutes. tum ek kaam karo, yeh check karo. i think there are some errors in this.
he tells her to check the file in his laptop. and he leaves from the cabin. nimmo checks the program and then remembers that natasha's pic was there in the laptop. she searched with the name "natasha" but there was no result. then she typed "love" still no result. and then she typed"pyaar" and there was a pic and she opened it and there was a photo. the following photo.

nimmo was like thought that the girl was very beautiful. no doubt why kunal fell in love with her but then she noticed kunal cuming in. in hurry she closed only the pic but the search window was still there. and then she went to get ready for the meeting and kunal noticed that she had searched for it was successsful. he had his naughty smile and then they both went for the meeting. it was over at abt 4. after that nimmo hurried back home and saw that everyone were ready and she was the one left. but that helped her a lot. everyone helped her get ready and she got ready very soon. no suspense. she was looking the same on her engagement in KHNK except her nosering, and you can modify her looks acc to ur wish as long as she is beautiful. everyone admire her. she simply blushes. and then priya arrives there and then the cars from the sehgal house arrive. nimmo, priya, naina, swati and vishal go in one car and others in the other cars.
all of them arrive at sehgal mansion and get inside the party and...............................................

u'll have to wait for the engagement.
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cont soonn yaar i am waiting 😍
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Chapter 14

ENGAGEMENT PARTY

nimmo entered the house and was escorted by rithi,priya,naina and swtai inside. shraddha came near nimmo and ........................................
shr: kitni khoobsoorat lag rahi hei, hay na rithi?
rithi: haan badi maa. bhabhi aaj sach much bahut sundar hain. i'm sure ki kunal bhayya aaj sirf bhabhi ko dekenge.
shr: kisee ki nazar na lag jaaye meri beti par
and she rubs little of the kaajal from her eyes and rubs it behind nimmos ears.nimmo simply blushes.
rithi: lekhin yeh bhayya kahan chale gaye . abhi thak nahi aaye?
shr: rishab se poocho aur kaho ki voh kunal ko lekar jaldi yahaan jaaye, waise bhi sagaayi ka waqt ho chuka hei.
rithi takes leave from there and finds rishab. on the other side payal takes nimmo & introduces her to everyone. just then nimmo sees kunal cuming down with samar. she was simply looking at him. The white shervaani he was wearing( PS- the atm of the party is same as that of the engagement of nimmo and kunal, same white dress for everyone and everything in white.) he was looking totally hoxy. and kunal also saw nimmo and was drowned in her beauty. payal notices this and takes leave as soon as kunal cums near nimmo.
kunu: toh, kaisa lag raha hoon
nims: sach kahoon ya jhoot???? u r looking great. kahen toh cool.
he moves forward and whispers in her ears: yeh sach thi ya jhoot???
nimmo chukles and
nims: tumhe kya lagta hai????
and then they laugh.
kunu: waise nimmo, tum aaj bahut....
nims: khoobsoorat lag rahi hoon!! mujhe patha hei ki tum yahi kehne waale ho. kabhi toh apna dialogue change karo kunal.
kunal did not reply anything and the announcement started....
dada: welcome ladies and gentlemen......aap sab ka kunal ke sagaayi mein swaagat hei.
dadi: toh hum sagaayi shuroo karthein hain, kyun ji?(to dadaji)
dada: haan. abh kunal aur nimmo, yahaan aao.
nimmo goes near dadaji and kunal too. varsha gives the ring to kunal and kunal puts in her finger and swati gives nimmo the ring and she puts it on kunal's finger. both are looking at each other after this and vishal cums in between.
vishal: abh jeeju bas bhi keejiye. theen din ka toh baat hai, uske baad aap jitna chaahein nimmo ko dekh leejiye. aur tum bhi nimmo.
they both blush and then rithi announces......
rithi: abh toh sagaayi ho gayi hai, toh i think we should start the real party. music please. i request all the beautiful couples please cum to the dance floor.
she notices nimmo and kunal keeping a step backwards
rithi: couples mein bhayya aur bhabhi bhi included hain, kyun naina?
naina: of course, yeh kaisa sawaal, actually they are the stars of todays function. cum on.
nimmo looks at kunal with a question mark????? kunal tells her- lets go.
suddenly she stamps on his leg
kunu: ouch!!!!! yeh kis liye????
before nimmo could reply vishal and jaanvi took them to the dance floor. the song" Tumhi dekho na" from "KANK" plays. kunal shows his hand and nimmo looks at him. he raises his brows and then she shakes her head(nuthing) and then places her hand in his. he places his other hand on her waist and she places her hand on his shoulder and both of them start dancing. all through they look at each other and the photographer is taking only their photo. but nims and kunu doesnt mind it. they are still deeply into their dancing. but then suddenly nimmo grins and looks away and sees jaanvi dancing with vikrant. it surprised her at first and then she noticed vishal with rithi, and then samar with payal, sanju with a little girl, rishab with priya and then she noticed that kunal was still looking at her and then she she raised her eyebrows twice(asking what?), and he simply shook his head. And then the song changed to the new song from" just married"( song for eijaz-anita wedding- i think its like: milaaye jodi, not sure) and then all the couples split except kunu-nims who are still dancing but then they are pulled apart by the girls side and boys side. then there is competition dance btw the 2 groups and at last nimmo lands up in kunal's arms and everyone give them a loud applause and kunu-nims feel very shy. tehy move apart and nimmo goes near anand and kunal goes near shradha. they look at each other and smile. and then dadaji starts speaking.
dada: i hope ki sabne party ki???? mein chahtha hoon ki aap sab issi tharah kunal aur nimmo ke shaadi mein shaamil ho jaayein aur unn donon ko aapki aashirvaad de. thanks a lot for coming.
and then slowly one by one all the guests leave. nimmo and priya were having dinner when kunal came to them and......................
kunu: hi lovely lady!!!!
nims: kunal ,meine tumse kitni baar kahaa hei ki sabke saamne aise ......
kunu: hey come on, tumhe kaun bol raha tha, mein toh iss lovely young lady ke baare mein baat kar raha tha. hi lovely lady.
priya was surprised and was blushing.
priya: hi kunal. kaise hain???
kunu: i'm fine dear, aur aap kaisi hain???
priya: i'm fine thanks.so?????
kunu: sach keh raha hoon, agar meine nimmo se pehle tumhe dakha hota na, toh mein tumse hi shaadi kartha
and he gave nimmo a look and she was simply smiling.
priya: lekhin hum toh pehle hi mil chuke hain...yaad nahi??????
kunal was shocked and started stuttering......
kunu: waaa waa waaat?????? pe pe pehle mil chuke hain?????
priya: haan, aapjo yaad nahi????
nims: are priya, meine kahaa tha na ki kunal ko kuch cheez yaad nahi rehthi
kunu: lekhin hum kahaan mile hain???? khair chodo, phir bhi mein tumse shaadi kartha......
nims: woh toh namunkin hai kunal, soch lo??? jail jaane ka shauk hai???
kunu: tumhe kuch bhi teek tharah se kehna nahi aata kya??? tell me what u mean clearly...
nims: mera matlab hai, priya minor hai and she is only sixteen
kunu: what???? sixteen?????? iska matlab yeh bachchi hai
priya: excuse me kunal, mein bachchi nahi hoon. samaj gaye.
kunu: hey, tum donon mujhe confuse math karo......
nims: iska matlab hai ki woh umr se choti hai lekhin dhimaag aur dil se bahut badi hai....samaj gaye?????
priya: waise meine aapse london mein mili hoon.
kunu: london mein?????????kab?????
priya: aapko Mr.Vinay Mehra ko yaad hai???
kunu: of course. he was my colleague.....
priya: mein unki beti hoon.....
kunu: oh my god, matlab tum priya ho????
priya: haan, toh aapko yaad hai
kunu: tab toh tum bahut choti thi, abh toh tum,,my my, u've grown up
and he places his hand on her head and shakes her head slightly. and then neeta calls priya. she runs off leaving nimmo and kunal alone.
kunu: nimmo! mein tumhe kisise milaana chahtha hoon, chalo mere saat.
he takes her to a man and intriduces him to her
kunu: nimmo yeh hain Mr. Sagar Mishra aur yeh unki wife.................
a girl near sagar turns around and ****************************THUD**************************** ******************nimmo was hsocked to see natasha........................
kunu&nims(2gether): NATASHA..................................................... ......
nats: hey kunal! kaise ho?? mein yahaan ek gante pehle aayi thi aur tum mujhse abh mil rahe ho??????
kunu: sorry yaar. by the way yeh hai meri fiancee, Namrata or Nimmo
nats: oh!!!!! hi nimmo, kaisi ho??? shaadi ka mubaarak ho. waise mein toh tumse pahli baar mil rahi hoon, lekhin tum meri naam kaisi jaanti ho?
nims: woh meine kunal ke laptop mein aapki ek thasveer dekha hai, aisi jaanti hoon...
nats: kunal ke laptop mein??? come on kunal, tumne abhi tak uss picture ko remove nahi kiya kya???? so bad of you.....
kunu: sorry, lekhin mein bhool gaya tha. lekhin isne yeh picture kaise dekha yeh mujhe patha nahi...i mean where did you find it from...
nats: never mind kunal. nimmo ek kaam karo tum woh thasveer erase kar do...
nims: nahi uski koi zaroorat nahi hai....its a very nice photo......you are looking gorgeous in that....toh mein usse apne paas rakhna chahoongi...no problems i suppose.....
nats: not at all... waise, tum donon ki love marriage hai ya arranged marriage.....????
nims: arranged marriage And kunal at the same time: love marriage....
sagar: hum samje nahi???? kaun sach bol raha hai???
nimmo gives kunal a look.....
kunu: humaara matlab hai, love plus arranged marriage....
nats: woh kaise???????
kunu: mera matlab, hum donon ek doosre se pyaar karthe the, aur humaare ghar walon doosri tharaf humaari shaadi ka plan kar rahe the. i mean it happened simultaneously.........
nats: wow, isse kehthein hain the perfect match.....kyun sagar???
sagar: exactly....toh nimmo, tum donon pehli baar kahaan mile???
nims: shopping mall mein......
sagar: uske baad??????????
nims: kunal tum hi kaho na!!!! tumne toh banaya tha.....
nats: banaya tha????
kunu: uska matlab hai, propose kiya tha!!!!!
nats: achcha!!! usme toh koi bhi doubt nahi hai...of course kunal ne hi kiya hoga...lekhin tum donon ko pyaar kab hua tha????
kunu: shuroo mein hum donon ek doosre de jagda karthe the, lekhin uske baad dheere dheere mein nimmo se pyaar karne lag gaya....
he looked at nimmo and continued...
kunu: pehle sochtha tha ki bahut boring ladki thi, but i was wrong, i travelled deep in her heart, aur patha chala ki woh dil se bahut achchi hai......usse dekhe bina ek dhin bhi nahi reh saktha tha...uske baad....
sagar: thats enough kunal...hum tumaare dil ki baat samaj gaye....aur nimmo tumhe.....
nims: mujhe toh shuroo mein hi kunal se pyaar ho gaya......dil se mein usse bahut chahthi thi, lekhin kehne ka himmath nahi tha, aur jaise kunal ne kahaa, humaara sirf jagda hua tha, toh mein sochthi thi kunal mujhe bilkul pasand nahi kartha tha....but i was wrong.....ek dhin woh mere paas aaya aur kahaa ki woh mujhse bahut pyaar kartha hai aur mere bina woh ji nahi saktha....aur....
nats: wow nimmo, iska matlab tum donon ek doosre se pyaar karthe the lekhin express nahi karna chahthe the......stilll it was a nice story.....
kunu: story!!! nahi yeh sach hai, trust me.....
nims: kunal, uska matlab hai, humaari love story........
kunu: ohhhhhhh.........
nats: well i guess ki tum donon abh bahut khush ho, kyun????
kunu: of course, lekhin what abt u and sagar....
sagar: well humaari toh purely love marriage thi......
nats: aur we told our parents aur unhe koi aitraaz nahi tha.........
nims: tumaari shaadi kab hui thi natasha????
nats: paanch mahine ho gaye and we have a happy news and .......
she whispers in nimmo's ears...
kunu: whta is it?????
nims: there is going to be a junior sagar or junior natasha....right????
both nats and sagar smiled with a shy...
kunu: wow, congrats yaar...lekhin natasha mujhe tumse yeh umeed mahi thi.....
nats: kyun??? meine kya kiya?????
kunu: i thought u were modern and u are so...mera matlab hei, tum toh hamesha kehthi thi ki tum shaadi ke do ya theen saal ke baad hi kids ke baare mein sochogi, but...
nats: come on kunal, tab mein college mein thi...lekhin jab mein sagar se mili everything changed........
nims: kuch bhi ho jaaye, but we ladies know what to do at the right time, kyun natsha????
nats: exactly....i think its time, aur hume jaana chahiye.........
sagar: haan its late....hume packing bhi toh karna hai....
kunu: packing???
nats: hum london jaa rahen hai, kal......
nims: kya? what abt our marrriage, tum log shaadi mein nahi aaoge???
nats: sorry nimmo, hume jaana bahut zaroori hai......
nims: so sad.....anyways kabhi kabhi phone karna waise ghar mein bore ho jaoongi....
nats: tum kaam kyun nahi karthi????
nims: yahi toh mein keh rahi thi, lekhin kunal mana kar raha hai.....
nats: kyun kunal????
kunu: i dont want her to work...thats all and nuthing is going to change that....isliye natasha tum bhi shuroo mat ho jao....
nats: ok, i dont want to interfere...bye guys....and congrats again..
sagar: ya, congrats and bye...
and natasha and sagar leave.....
nims: kunal!!!! kya zaroorat thi tumhe jhoot bolne ki, ki humaari love marriage hai....
kunu: woh jab meri aur natasha ki split hui thi toh meine usse kahaa ki mein sirf aur sirf love marriage karoonga, isliye....sorry...
nims: its ok, lekhin u should have told me earlier....
kunu: aur tum!!! tum bhi kuch kam nahi, tumne natasha ki pic mere laptop mein kab dekha, and that too without my permission????
nims: woh, mein toh bas aise hi dekh rahi thi thats all and kunal ne mujhe sab kuch keh diya ki natasha tumaari ex-girlfriend thi...aur tumne yeh baat mujhse kyun nahi kahaa????
kunu: woh mein kehne hi walaa tha.......
nims: teek hai teek hai. koi baat nahi....mein chalthi hoon.........
kunu: itne jaldi.......
nims: kunal, its 10.30, bahut raat ho chuki hai, and i'm sleepy too...bye.....
and nimmo goes to her father and then everyone take leave and they all go.........
kunal goes back to his room and while he is about to change he sees a strand of hair on his dress.....nimmo's hair...he thinks back......

*flashback*
nimmo was having her food and unknowingly the curry falls on her own dress and she is going to the bathroom to wash it and washes it. after that she opens the door and hits kunal and both fall down with nimmo over kunal.
nims: ouch...kunal, kyun itne speed mein aa rahe the?????
kunu: koi itne speed mein bathroom ki tharaf kyun aayega???? what a stupid question nimmo.
nimmo tries to get up but her hair got strangled in his dress....
nims: ouch mera baal, kunal try karo na
kunu: kya???
nims: are meri baal, usse mikaalne ki koshish karo..
kunu: oh teek hai.....
and then nimmo who had raised herself from kunal with the help of her hands looses grip and she falls on him with head on his chest....
nims: ahhhhh
kunu: ouch nimmo, that hurts.....
nims: sorry kunal.......i just slipped....
soon she raises back and now she is face to face with kunal and he is busy trying to unknot the hair and nimmo is looking at him........kunal was trying hard and then at an instance he sees nimmo looking at him and he looks at her and they look at each other (but his hand is still working on the hair). Successfully he takes her hair off and then he looks deep into nimmo's eyes and .....
kunu: suno!!! tumse ek baat kahoon...
and nimmo who was also lost in thoughts......
nims: haan kaho......
kunu: agar tumhe koi aitraaz nahi hai, toh kya tum utt sakthe ho???
nims: sure, anything.........
nimmo was not in her senses.....
but then kunal raised hi eyebrows......
nimmo understood and came back to her senses.....
nims: oh sorry, i'm extremely sorry...
kunu: what??? kya kahaa tumne???
nimmo knew that he wanted her to say sorry again...but then she thought she'll say it this time...
she slowly started moveing backwards...and....
nims: meine kahaa i'm sorry
and she felt shy and turned to run but kunal got hold of her hand and......nimmo closed her eyes tight.......
kunu: thanks for the sorry....
and he turns her around but she still closed her eyes.....and he whispered in her ears.....
kunu: mein iss sorry ko kabhi nahi bhooloonga.....thank you for that.....
nimmo opnes her eyes slowly looks at him and slowly smiles.......she pushes him pressing his chest and runs away and kunal stood there smiling............
* flashback*

kunal slowly rolls that hair and takes a box inside his cupboard......opens it and keeps it inside.........
kunal had the habit of writing diary and he took out his diary and started writing everything.................

Mathuria house

nimmo changes and goes to her bed and looks up.......and thinks.......
nims: yeh mujhe kya ho raha hai??? achanak mein kunal ke upar aur mein usse dekh rahi thi, aur.............patha nahi.......lekhin woh bahut achcha hai....i'm sure ki woh mujhe khush rakhega......par phir bhi mujhe aisa kyun lag raha hai ki woh mujhe pasand nahi kartha....aur mein.....mujhe usse ...........nahi...aisa nahi ho sakta...its just my infactuation.......aisa kuch bhi nahi hai....hum donon ke beech toh hamesha jagda hua hai.....toh yeh sab.......its just simply happening like this........patha nahi aage kya hone waali hai................bas mein yahi chahthi hoon ki sab kuch teek ho......kaash kunal aur mein sach mein iss shaadi ko apnaathe toh, shaayad hum sach mein pati patni ke baat ko apnaakar pyaar kare toh............dekhthi hoon aage kya hogi.........
and then she covers herself under the bedsheet.....and goes into sleeping and there is a dream........

*Dream*
nimmo is standing in a rose garden. the place is filled with roses and in the middle of the garden there is a tree and nimmo is standing under that tree.....someone is coming near her........with a bunch of flowers(we are seeing from the person's point, ie the camera is behind him and he is not turning....i think by now u've guessed who the person is) in his hand towards nimmo. nimmo who is wearing a white chudidar with full hand and open hair is standing facing the opposite side(i hope u can picturise it). the man places hi hand on her shoulder( the place is full of mist) nimmo turns around slowly, her hair flying in the air and the mist cleraing off and nimmo looks at the person and the camera revolves around to nimmo and the person is shown and it KUNAL...... nimmo smiles at him and he gives her the flowers and they both hug each other.......
nims: thank you kunal.........
kunu: thanks kis liye????? pyaar mein yeh sab kyun???????
nims: I LOVE YOU KUNAL.....................
kunu: ILOVE YOU TOO...... and then they move apart and nimmo keeps a step back......kunal looks deep into her eyes and slowly moves forward....nimmo moves back and comes clser to her......she hits the tree and closes her eyes tightly......kunal goes reallly close to her and raises her chin.......looks at her closed eyes and then her rosy lips.....he moves forward closer and closer and then his lips touches hers and.........................*******************THUD********* ****************

*dream*

nimmo wakes up all sweaty and tensed........she wipes her sweat on her forward touches her lips...........and then closes her eyes placing her hand on the forehead and drinks some water..........
nims: yeh mein kya dekh rahi thi??????? sapna thi.....still it seemed to be so real......meine socha ki usne mujhe kiss kar hi diya......lekhin iss sapne ka matlab kya thi???? kahi yeh ek signal toh nahi ki kunal mere saat aisa karega........mujhe toh careful rehna padega aur usse dhoor bhi.........

and then she goes back to sleep..............................


hope u enjoyed it.........................thats all..........
post in ur comments......
LUV NANDINI
Edited by nandini90 - 18 years ago
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i loved it
plz do continue
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guys plz atleast reply to nandini...don't just read atleast comments 😳

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hi every one....i'm so happy to see the replies u have written 😭 😭 😭 and thanks a lot for that.... 👏 👏 for that i'm going to close this ff.....soon 😊 😊 ....as i'm not satisfied 😭 😭 .....i take abt 3 hours to write each chapter and no replies.....i feel so sad 😭 😭 😭 .....is the ff that bad.???? 😕 😕 if yes then pls tell me 😊 ....let me know..... i'll b closing this ff within a day and b4 that if i'm satisfied with any replies then i'll continue......


LUV NANDINI 😭
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Originally posted by: nandini90

hi every one....i'm so happy to see the replies u have written 😭 😭 😭 and thanks a lot for that.... 👏 👏 for that i'm going to close this ff.....soon 😊 😊 ....as i'm not satisfied 😭 😭 .....i take abt 3 hours to write each chapter and no replies.....i feel so sad 😭 😭 😭 .....is the ff that bad.???? 😕 😕 if yes then pls tell me 😊 ....let me know..... i'll b closing this ff within a day and b4 that if i'm satisfied with any replies then i'll continue......


LUV NANDINI 😭

oh noo😭😭 yaar i love ur fanfic...continue plz😕

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