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Posted: 18 years ago
#81
continue soon i opened IF page for ff pretty plaz contd soon 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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part 13

angad was mesmorized by kripa's act.his heart enforcing him to fall for her but his mind dont wanna eccept that he actually starts liking(or loving)her.he continuesly staring her who is busy in playing holi with her frndz,gattu bhai n chetali.

kripa's gang(frndz)arrived at khanna house few min before n with in arrive they all start playing holi...k.t said to kripa:"tumney angad ko rang lagaya??".kripa feel herself blushing,she noded her head in yes.then kripa drag her gang where dadi n gattu bhai were standing n introduced them.mean while angad also came thr with his frnd kartik n introduced him to dadi.

kripa to angad:"angad!meet my frndz,he is prithvi,he is laksh,she is aliya n she is k.t"(she point out every one while introducing).prithvi apply some colour on angad face n wish him happy holi.n after then each of them apply different colour on his face.aliya starts laughing on angad n said:"i never saw such colourfull face in my whole life".kripa mention aliya with her eyes to stop this foolishness.then kripa wishpers in angad ear:"plz dnt mind,she is bit crazy".angad said:"she has to b crazy after all she is ur frnd". then angad wish them "happy holi". n then walks away frm thr.

k.t said to kripa:"my god!angad tumhey pagal bhi samajhta hai".prithvi noded his head with disapointment n said:"kripa!tumhara kuch nahi ho sakta".kripa look at prithvi like she will kill him.

then kripa recieve a call frm his dad(mr bajaj),she hardly hears clearly,she excuse herself frm her gang n went inside to listen her dad phone call,they both wish "happy holi" to eachother.n after some casuall talk,they said good bye to eachother.she is abt to came outside when her cell phone rings again.she recieve the call...it was a threatening call frm gangster who threat her that they will not leave her for the death of thr companion .

after 10 min or so k.t comes to angad n said:"did u saw kripa??"angad who was busy with some guest,said :"no".then after few min gattu bhai comes to angad n said:"tumney kripa ko dekha hai...wo mujh ko mil nahi rahi hai"(said with inosence).angad said:"gattu bhai!yahi kahin hogi".gattu bahi said:"nahi tum mujhey kripa dhoond k do..."(said stubbornly with having inosence).

angad found kripa in the corner of her room sitting on the floor,hiding her face under her knees...he said:"kripa!wat happen"(he ask concernly).kripa lift her head up,her face is all wet with tears..angad quickly kneeld in front of her n hold her ,he said:"wat happen kripa!"(he ask with worry).kripa point out her cell phone which kept on the bed n said:"they will kill me!".(she is stammering).angad squeeze her with himself to give her support.angad pick her phone n check the call list.kripa show him that gangster number.kripa was tightly holding his "kurta colar"when angad call in police headquater for high alert n tell them to block the roads of his area coz the gangster call kripa frm the"public telephone booth" of his area.(angad knew the area code).

angad get up n said to kripa:"let go".kripa said:"where??"(she look scared).angad make her stand by holding her arms n said her intensely:"i wont let them escape....i cant see u like this".



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Posted: 18 years ago
#83
magnificent with so much beautiful description of everything exquisite and smoothly perfect
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Posted: 18 years ago
#84
awwwwwwwwwww tht was gr8.....the lines lines were superb fatii!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#85
dat was a cute part. luved how angad said i can't stand 2 c u like this. hehe. so angads fallin 4 kripa yay!!!!!cont soon. 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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part 14

angad get up n said to kripa:"let go".kripa said:"where??"(she look scared).angad make her stand by holding her arms n said her intensely:"i wont let them escape....i cant see u like this".then angad took kripa with himself.angad told her to identify those gangster but its going hard for kripa to identify becoz of the crowd of the ppl on the road n faces of ppl r colour due to holi.angad cant move his car becoz of treffic.n kripa is try her best to identify those gangster.angad get off frm his car n hold kripa's hand tightly that he cant lost her in this crowd ,they start walking in the crowd of the ppl who r busy in playing holi.angad n kripa both r looking for that gangster when suddenly some one hit the punch on that wrist of angad by which he was holding kripa's hand.becoz of that punch angad lost his grip frm kripa's hand.that gangster snatch kripa frm angad.n another gangster starts beating angad very badly.on other side,kripa is screaming for help but no one is listening.the gangster which grabbing kripa,slap her twice for screaming.tears r fell out frm her eyes.

angad cant able to see her like this,a rage of energy n anger ran in his blood .that gangster who was beating angad get a powerful punch frm angad.that punch of angad cant let him stand in front of angad.angad garb the colar of that gangster n make him stand n start beating him again n again.....the an other gangster n kripa both r shock for a moment to see the insanity n madness of angad.that gangster was almost dead when another gangster who was holding kripa put the gun on kripa's head n said to angad:"leave him !otherwise i kill her".

angad look into gangster eyes with hate n anger,angad took out his gun n said:"if anything will happen to her...trust me!no one can save u frm me".on other hand kripa is crying for getting free frm that gangster's grip. angad keep moving toward them ,that gangster is abt to shoot kripa...when angad shoot the gun before he can shoot kripa.bullet hits the shoulder of that gangster by which the gun fall frm his hands n kripa runs toward angad n burried her face in his chest to feel herself safe.angad also put his hands on her bak to console her,but all of sudden she get faint in his arms.mean while police force came n take those gangster with them.


kripa was unconscious,sleeping on the bed.dadi,angad n her frndz standing beside her n doctor is sitting near her on the bed.doctor said:"well nothing to worry abt,she is too much scared n shock by which she got faint,she will b all right".then all of them leave her room.dadi was taking care of her n keep chekcing her that she is alright or not.

it was middle of the night,angad is restless becoz of kripa's condition.he get up frm the bed of his room n went to the balcony ,then he hesitatingly open the door of kripa's room n went in.he sit at the edge of her bed,quite near her n stare her face for a few min.

angad cant take off his eyes frm her,her beauty n inosence of face not letting him to take off his eyes frm her.angad slowly n softly move his fingers on her cheeks(caress her cheeks).the mark of slap which done by those gangster is still on her cheeks.he keep caressing her cheeks for few moments.then he take off his hands frm her cheeks n starts staring her again.he doesnt get his own feeling...

for this moment he understands only one thing that his every emotion has joining with her existence
one line of a song plays in background

male voice

sajnaa!kya yeh mera pehla pehla pyaar hai
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Posted: 18 years ago
#87

hey !!

finally cot up wid ur f-f !!

itz excellent !! 👏 👏

Edited by lildude13572003 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#88
hey dear i jusr read your lovely ff its too goood awesome dear please conti soon 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#89
awsome cant describe in words how much i adore ur fic
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Posted: 18 years ago
#90
awwwwwwwwwwwwww mindblowing 😳 😳 😳

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