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Posted: 18 years ago
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Excellent part... kool kripa n angad will live in da same house for 15 days, awesome!!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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part 10

she give him quick hug before give him a chance to says:"its ok".angad find a strange kind of a comfort in her arms but he refuse to accept his own feeling.angad said:"thats my---".kripa take his word which he is abt to speak:"duty"i knw that....lekin phir bhi i wanna thank u"(she said smillingly).

angad n dadi r in the car,going bak to home when dadi said:"she(kripa)is a sweet girl"(dadi give a side glance to angad).angad said nothing.dadi said again:"i think she like u....the way she stare u all the time i really think that".now angad look at dadi with anoyance n said:"so wat dadi!if she likes me thr r thousands of girls around who like me but that doesnt mean u invite all of them to stay with us at our place"(angad being rude).dadi said:"n wat if i said that u also like her".angad said:"u must b joking dadi!"dadi said:"no angad...i saw u when u stealing her glances several times during pooja".angad was amaze by hearing this frm dadi,he thought that he succeed in stealing glances of kripa without let anyone knowing.dadi continued:"n wat if i said last night u randomly wrote her name in ur officials papers".angad said:"dadi!its nothing like wat u r thinking".dadi just smile n kept quite,she knw her grandson who was stubborn,egoist n never accept things easily...

thats true last night when angad came home after his job.then he was checking some official papers abt varoius cases when kripa's thought capture his mind n dnt knw when he wrote her name on those official papers unintensionaly.n dadi wud knw abt this coz dadi has the habit to organize his room every morning when he left for his job.


mr bajaj left for bussiness trip n kripa was waiting for angad who supose to pick her frm her house according to dadi's instruction.she was waiting in living room when she get a threating call frm those gangster.n when angad reach thr he found her in sweaty n with scared face.angad ask her:"wat happened y r u looking so scared".kripa said in trance:"they want to kill me"angad sit beside her n said:" in my presence,no one can touch u".kripa look at him with teary eyes having a messege of love in it,angad just ingnore that n pick her baggage n said:"lets go".kripa follow his foot step toward outside.

it was beautyful banglow,having greenery all around,she ask angad inocently:"nice banglow....tumhara hai??"angad give her a look like she lost her mind,he said:"nahi ....us gangster ka hai jo tumhey marna chata hai".kripa give him a dirty look n take step toward entrance.dadi was standing thr to well come her but thr some else also who was waiting for her....

angad n kripa both standing beside eachother in entrance when that person wishpers loudly in dadi,s ear:"aap is k baarey mai bol rahi thi mujhko ko....ye achi larki hai".dadi smiling noded her head ...that person said:"lekin ye to achi nahi hai...BOHAT achi hai....ye to bilkul gurya k jaisii lagti hai".(that person having so much inocence in his tone of speak)kripa found this a best compliment ever.

kripa look at that person,he is fat n cute,wearing half pant n shirt,she get in a sec that he is mentaly retard.kripa gave him a frndly smile ,dadi said:"kripa!meet gattu..he is elder brother of angad"kripa said smillingly:"hello gattu bhai".but gattu bhai has his own style he said:"jai shri krishna" in saluting way.
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kripa gigling n said:"jai shri krishna..gattu bhai".then she hug dadi.gattu said to kripa:"lekin tumney chetali(gattu bhai's 7 year old frnd)ki frok kyu pehni hai"...kripa ask:"kon chetali ?gattu bhai"...gattu bhai said:"wo meri dost hai...ashi ashi"(he figure out chetali height randomly which show she is a kid"..then gattu bhai said:"us k paas bhi aisi frok hai jo usey bari hoti hai....lekin tumhey kitney choti hoti ye frok"...kripa got embaressed as she was wearing mini fork(or skirt).angad hardly control his smile ,she look at angad like she will kill him if he will dare to laugh then kripa placed her albow on gattu's bhai shoulder n said him like she is telling him a secret:"its fashion...gattu bhai".gattu bhai said:"fashion??acha acha".then kripa said:"gattu bhai aap mujhsey dosti karengey"....gattu bhai said:"ek shart par!agar tum mujhey roz kahani sunao gi to".kripa said:"ok done".

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hi frndz,thnk u so much for ur apriciation,do write ur comment on gattu bhai's entry that u ppl like it or not.


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Posted: 18 years ago
#53
ohhhhhhhhh thats so sweeeeeeeeeeet thnks for gattu i love him 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
#54
awwww fati jaaan..tht was really cutee...aww gattu is such a cutie....cont soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#55
gattu is chooo cutee 😳 gr8 part 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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that was awsome so cute love gattus character ur fics becoming more interesting with every part 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#57
wow lovely part love the gutto bhai keep posting part soon 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Awesome part.... i think she will get closer to angad thru gattu bhai!!!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awesome part!! aww gattu bhai sounds cute 😳 ... and kripa still didnt kiss him 😉lol 😆 ... sorry for not commenting earlier, all were awesome parts like always... 😳 continue soon 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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great part continue soon 👏 👏 👏

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