Kabhi alvida na kehna 4 sujal-kashish

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part 1 Sujal is returning home after a business tour.His friend vivan is in his car.
S:2day is a special day in my life.Our wedding anniversary
V:so sweet.how did u meet kashish bhabhi?
S:3 yrs back

Flashback:S is drving the car.K came from the wrong direction.Luckly S managed 2 brake.S becomes angry & cums out of the car:cant u c?
K is embarrassed.ppl cum. K lies:this fellow began 2 hit me.luckily I escaped. S:wht?she's lying
K whispers:evry1 wil stand with a girl.its better 2 giv compensation.otherwise u'l b insulted b4 others
S is stunned.S gives her Rs 500 2.K has a naughty smile on her face.S is irritated.

V laughs:very nice starting.but how did the luv prosper?
S tells.Once he gets a moneyorder.Tht time itself he gets a call.
"do u remember the naughty girl u met on the road?"
S:ya.u r …?
"yes.i'm tht girl.i'm the person who sent u the moneyorder.i felt sorry 4 u.so I struggled hard 2 find ur address& I returned ur money& I'm sorry"
S smiles:its alright she:thx.u r sujal.right?
S:yes.u r? K:I'm kashish

S 2 V:we met each other again.den we fel in luv.we married.she broke her tie with her family 4 me.my parents who r at US dunno tht I'm married.dey hav found a girl called Charu 4 me.sumtimes I keep her photo with me 2 make kashish jealous.she bcums so angry tht she fites with me.she's possessive.but I luv it.i did'nt tel her the 2day I'm reaching there.she wont expect me there.but I'l go there with surprise gifts.she'l surprised.she said she'l also giv a surprise.but it won't beat my surprise
V smiles:all the wishes
S drops him 2 his house. S drives the car.1 lorry was abt 2 hit his car.but he escaped.S reaches his house.he goes near the door gladly.He hears a laughter.he luks inside.he was shocked.Bcoz there K was hugging another man & laughing.S's gifts fal down.Its raining.K goes out of the gate with tht man.he gets inside the car:bye sweety
K:bye. S watches everything with a shock

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Posted: 18 years ago
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jasmine dear a very good start...me was waiting for you to start a fic for a long... and that wait has finally paid off... well the story has a very different and a very interesting concept... me D already have got hooked to it.... me sure the story will rock all the way through... the start already is very rocking.... you keep up the good work going... really very nice job done.... 👏 👏waise sujal , kashish ka milne was very sweet... aur sujal ka kashish ko tang karne ke liye charu ka photo rakhna..very funny... i can just imagine kashish getting jealous and fighting with sujal... too cute..too funny....😆 now i think kashish sujal ko bas tang karna chahthi hai.. she knows he is coming aur issi liye she did that kyunke woh hamesha usse tang kartha hai... well i think unke anniversary bohat achchi hogi.... very happy and romantic... this is my guess.... 😉 please jasmine yaar continue soon...waiting for the next part eagerly...😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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gr8 part
waiting 4 da next part 2 knw who the man was wth kashish
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Posted: 18 years ago
#4
part 2
Sujal's eyes r ful of tears.he enters their bedroom.Kashish is inside the bathroom.she's humming & singing.he luks at the bed.bed sheet was not properly put.S feels irritated:u cud'nt bear charu's photo kept in our bedroom.u said this bedroom is only 4 us.then how cud u b on this bed with sumother man?u tore my heart completely.u wounded my heart.i'l never 4giv u
K cums out of the bathroom.her lips were shivering 2 utter his name.she had a slight smile on her face.
S's eyes r red:how cud u do this 2 me?
K wanted 2 tel sumthing.but she cud'nt.she tuk the bedsheet & threw it on her face.she holded it tightly.K was trying 2 escape.but she cant breath inside the cloth & she falls down dead.S was shocked.he cries & sits near her:kashish!oh my god,wht did I do?i killed my kashish.how cud I do this?
S weeps like crazy& goes near the door weeping.sumbody calls him:sujal?
S turns back.he's shocked. She:wen did u cum?wht a plesant surprise!
She hugs him.S cant believe his eyes.bcoz tht lady was Kashish.S is scared.He moves away from her

jasminerahul thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago
#5
Part 3

Sujal shivers.Kashish:wht happened sujal?
S turns back & luks at the dead body&gets nervous.K luks.she was shocked & goes near it:Oh kangana,my sister
S was shocked. K:wht happened sujal?
S cries like crazy& tells the truth.K is shocked & she slaps him:if u c a shadow here,u suspect me?
S weeps:I made a mistake
K weeps:did'nt I tel u tht I'l giv a surprise.my sis kangana was the surprise.but u thot…u killed her baby along with her.she was pregnant
S is shocked.K:I've told u tht her husband tushar is an orphan brought by his uncle & aunty.they r not interested in kangana.bcoz they want their daughter 2 marry him.so they played dangerous games& thus kangana had a miscarriage.tushar& she settled in dubAI.she became pregnant again.tushar trusts only us,so he left her here & went back.but u broke his trust
S:I never epected kangana here& I'vent seen tushar b4.so..
S fals on K's feet&cries:I'm sorry,plz 4giv me
K:u shud seek tushar's pardon.cum,now itself we'l go 2 the airport 2 c him

After keeping kangana on the bed,S & K get a taxi.tht driver was the person who dropped T.he thinks:this lady was with the other sir too.now with this man.so she's tht sort of a lady
He has a naughty smile.K feels weird.They reach the airport.but T's flight had already left.dey feel disappointed& go bak.K goes 2 the room& screams loudly.S goes there:wht happened kashish?
K:kangana's body is missing
S is shocked

WHAT HAPPENED WITH THE CORPSE?

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Posted: 18 years ago
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aother great part. My god yeh kya hogaya?????
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Posted: 18 years ago
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nice ff...gr8 gng...cont soon... 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
#8
Part 4

Suddenly ph rang.Sujal tuk the ph.a voice:I'm surya.kangana's body with me
S is shocked.sur:if u does'nt want 2 get exposed u'v 2 giv me money
S:but why did u?
Sur:I thot I'l do a favor.but only if I get money
S:wht rubbish!
S kept the ph down.Kashish:whose cal?
S tells everything.K is shocked. K:whts happening?how did he no abt this?
S:I cant understand anything

Next morning.K goes near S:the milkman told policemen has reached the place.bcoz 1 lady's deadbody was found in the pond.mayb kangana
S:I cant tolerate dis anymore.its better 2 surrender instead of eating up tension.now itself v'l go 2 the police station & TEL THE TRUTH
K WEEPS.
They go 2 the police station& c the inspector Varun.
S:I'm sujal garewal
V:ok.whts ur complain?
S:I WANTED 2 TEL U SUMTHING
V:TELL
Suddenly policemen cum:sir,the relatives of the lady who committed suicide hav cum
V:sorry Mr.Sujal garewal.2day morning a lady's body was found in the pond.her relatives hav cum.let me speak 2 them.i'l cum immediately
V goes out.S & K r relieved. K:thts not kangana.sujal,don't tel him the truth
S:whts dis kashish?v thot of telling the truth
K:no,u shud'nt.i need him
S:but 1 day I'l b caught
K:but til the moment I can c u.plz
V cums bak:whts the problem?murder?
S&K r stunned. V:tell S:wen I was coming back home,1 vehcle came 2 hit my car.i doubt it's a murder attempt
V:u r suspect any1?
S:no V:ok,I'l enquire
S&K r relieved.They reach home.Ph rings.K takes.Tht was Tushar:hi kangana
K 2 S:its tushar.he thinks I'm kangana
T:how r u? K:I'm fine T:I no u r secure with ur sis.i completely trust kashish bhabhi.but still.ok,how is ur jeeju?is he serious?
K is upset:no T:ok.now giv me a kiss darling
K is shocked:not now
T:no,I cant wait anymore
K luks at S.S:whts up kashish?
K shivers.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#9
Part 5 Kashish:di & jeeju r here.thts why
Tushar:so wht?cant dey understand tht?
K:plz tushar
T:ok,but wen I cum there u'l hav 2 compensate the loss
K is upset.K cuts the ph & cries. Sujal:kashish?
K:tushar luvs kangana madly.he thinks tht I'm taking her of well.but the truth is…
S:everything is bcoz of me.i'm sorry
He cries keeping his head on her lap.K keeps her head on him.

S reads the paper& is shocked.S:kashish
K is tensed:whts the matter sujal?tel fast
S:in the morchury there is a body of a lady.age is around 23-24.dress is a black maxi
K is shocked:kangana?
K weeps.

They both go there.K sees the body.its not kangana's.They both sit in the car. K cries:wht a fate!my dear sister's body is'nt found
S:we'l stay in a hotel.bcz if v go bak,we'l reach home late

Dey both go 2 a hotel.There was a fashionable cuple Rishi& Mehek.S-K go inside the bedroom.M sees it& is shoked:rishi
R:whts up dear?
M:I saw kangana now
R is surprised:where?
M:she got inside tht room
R:wow!but y is she here?she's supposed 2 b with her sis
M:the shock is tht she was with another man
R is shocked:wht?den it must b sum1 else
M:no,I saw her properly
R:wht nonsense!u no kangana very wel
M:ya,but it was her
M dials T's no
R:whom r u calling?
M:tushar
R:r u mad?
M gets T & tells the matter
WHT"L B TUSHAR"S REACTION?

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Posted: 18 years ago
#10
Part 6 Tushar laughs.Mehek is wondered:did'nt u hear wht I said?
T:ya,I heard
M:then how cud u laf?
T:u fool,thts not kangana.thts her sis kashish &her hus
M is embarrassed:oh I'm sorry
Rishi:whts up?
M:tht was kangana's sis&hubby
R:I new it fool

Sujal-kashish reach home.Tushar calls.K takes the ph.T is quite angry:why did u leave kangana alone at home bhabhi?she gets scared
K:wht? T:my friends saw u&jeeju in the hotel
K:u r mistaken.kangana was also with us
T is relieved:realy?sorry 4 getting angry.i'm like this wen it cums 2 kangana
K:I no tht.its ok
T:can u plz cal kangana?
K:sorry,she's bathing
T:ok,I'l cal later

Caling bel rings.S opens the door.Rishi&mehek.
R:u r sujal jeeju.rite?
S:yes,but I did'nt..
R:v r tushar-kangana's friends.v came from dubai
S:hi,cum inside
Dey get inside.R:actually v saw both jeeju&bhabhi in the hotel.mehek did a blunder.she thot..
M:just stop it.where is kangana?
S cant say anything.K cums.S is surprised 2 c her in jeans&top.S thinks:kashish wore kangana's dress seeing them cuming
M goes hugging K:how r u?
K:fine
M:where is bhabhi?
K:di went 4 shopping
M:2day cum with us 2 hotel Rose 4 lunch
K:but… M:no excuse.v'l leave after lunch.just 4 sumtime
K:ok S thinks:how'l she survive there?

K with M&R in the hotel. M:sing man
K:me?no
M:why not.u were the top singer in dubai
K thinks:I cant sing like kangana.wht'l I do?
K faints.M&R r shocked.M pours water on her face.K opens her eyes.S cums there.
M:jeeju,kangana fainted
S is shocked:wht happened?
K:nothing.now I'm ok
S is relieved
M:how did u reach here?
S stammers:tht…I came here 2 visit my friend.so I thot I'l pick up kangana
M:where is bhabhi?
S:she's waiting at home.she wanted me 2 pick up her

S holds K's hand & she gets inside the car& sits in the front.M feels awkward.The car goes.
M:sumthing is wrong
R:wht? M:I think this sujal is'nt so nice.cant u c him holding her hand like husband?he made her sit in the front with him
R:wht's wrong with ur brain?y r u thinking like this?is he her driver 2 make her sit back?dont u no kangana wel?
M:ya,but stil..i feel weird


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