IKKS2- the end Pt22 Pg39 - Page 8

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Posted: 18 years ago
#71
Awesome Part

I hope sujal kashish didn't die
Edited by unum ali - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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😭 Dat was soooooooooooooooooooo sad!!!!!! 😭
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Posted: 18 years ago
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that was way...tooooooo...tragic...........if it was longer I can bet there would be tears in my eyes......when I was reading I was totally absorbed in it......till it finished....when I was reading I didn't notice what was happenning around me and i had no idea what I was reading is a fanfic........I was really absorbed in it......but anyway plz do continue...
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awesum gng...sorry coudnot post my comments earlier i was away..which i still am....simply stunning parts.....were amazing...dont stop writting ur story me will defneitely comment on it regularly..... 😳 😳 PAKKA PROMISE.... 😳 😳........u rock with FF's and as i said earlier tht U HAVE BROKEN THE RECORDS OF EKTA MAI but today i will say tht u BROKEN THE RECORD OF KARAN JOHAR.... 👏 me proud to be ur frnds.......cont veryyy soon me will wait!!


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Posted: 18 years ago
#75
gr8 part 👏
n hope sk r alive........
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Posted: 18 years ago
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omg what a saaad part 😭
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Posted: 18 years ago
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rache dear sorry 4 commenting late the last 2 parts were awesome and please don't stop writting your fic rocks continue soon 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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~*~Previously~*~
K - NAHIN! yeh nahin ho sakta, voh kaise? nahin unke bache hai....voh unhe akela nahin chordenge. unhe kuch nahin hua, main keh rahi hoon na, mujhe pata hai
A - voh bhabhi aur Sujal hi the! (cries) bhabhi aur Sujal the.....
Kripa hugs Angad and cries, Naina consoles Suhana
~*~Part 5~*~
Angad and Kripa put Aryan and the kids to bed, they waited for Prithvi and Nihaal to return home, Angad didn't have the courage to tell Prithvi what happened over the phone, soon Prithvi arrived home, he rushed in
P - Angad, koi khabar mili?
A - Prithvi.....Nihaal kahan hai?
P - voh hospital mein hai, maami ke paas, tu bolta kyun nahin? Sujal aur Kashish teek hai?
Angad turned his face away from him, Prithvi went to Naina
P - mom, kya hua?
Naina stayed silent, Prithvi got up in anger
P - koi kuch bolta kyun nahin!!!
Suhana put her hand on his shoulder, Prithvi looked at her and noticed the tears in her eyes, he backed away from her slowly
P - nahin! yeh sach nahin....Angad main jaanta hoon voh teek hai, mere dost ko kuch nahin ho sakta
Angad got up and held Prithvi
A - tu chilaa Prithvi, jee barke chilaa lekin sachai badalne vali nahin hai, Sujal aur bhabhi ab is duniya mein nahin hai
P (cries) - nahin....Angad voh...
Angad hugged Prithvi as he cried.....later everyone was gathered in the living room, Angad's dad, Kripa's parents and Sujal's parents was also there
V - ab Aryan aur Roshni ka kya hoga? kaam umar mein maa aur baap ka saaya unke sir se ut gaya
A - aunty agar aapko aitraaz nahin tho main Aryan aur Roshni ki zimidaari utana chahta hoon
CG - voh humhare saath bhi reh sakte hai
A - jaanta hoon uncle, lekin mujhe apne bhai aur bhabhi ki koi nishaani apni paas chahiye
V - teek hai beta
Aryan came running inside and sat on Kripa's lap
Ar - chachi.....mama kahan hai?
K - kyun beta?
Ar - mujhe unki yaad aah rahi hai, mujhe mama ke paas jaana hai
Kripa cries and Angad picks up Aryan
A - Aryan, tumhare mama aur papa kahin gaye hue hai...
Ar - kab aayenge?
Angad hides his tears
A - bohat jald beta
Angad holds Aryan close to him when he hears a knock on the front door
Suh - main dhekti hoon
Suhana goes to open the door, she opens it and is shocked to see Sujal and Kashish, very much alive
Suh - Kashish! Sujal! lekin tum dono tho....
Suhana hugs Kashish and Sujal and brings them inside, Aryan runs to Kashish, she hugs him tightly, everyone is shocked
A - Sujal?
Angad hugs Sujal and Kashish, Prithvi hears the commotion and comes to see what is going on, he gets shocked as well, he hugs them both
P - lekin commisioner uncle ne kaha tum dono ki maut hogayi...
S - what!
A - haan, teri gaadi ka number plate TV pe aaya tha....aur commisioner uncle ne kaha ke gaadi mein ek aadmi aur ek aurat the aur vahan bhabhi ka purse mila unko
Ka - haan, voh hum aah rahe the lekin raaste mein ek young couple humhe mil gaye the, voh ladki bimaar thi aur usse hospital lekar jaana tha isliye Sujal ne unko humhare gaadi de diya, shahid mera purse usi mein reh gaya tha
K - mujhe tho sirf is baat ki khushi hai ke tum dono salamat hai
Ka - haan lekin voh couple.....agar hum gaadi mein rehte tho voh hum hote
V - ab is baare mein sochna bandh karo, chalo ghar chalo
S - Roshni kahan hai?
K - main lekar aati hoon
Kripa brings Roshni, Kashish holds her, they are about to leave when Angad stops them
A - aise kaise jayege? mere paas khaafi gaadiyan hai, unmein se ek leja
Angad hands him the keys to a car, Sujal takes them and leaves with Kashish. A few days later Angad is on his India tour, Kripa and the kids miss him a lot
Ku - mama, papa kab aayenge?
K - tere papa abhi abhi gaye hai aur tum aane ki baat kar rahe ho?
Kar - lekin papa ne humhe vaada kiya ke voh humhe circus lekar jaayenge
K - acha? ab kya hoga, tere papa tho yahan nahin
P - haan lekin bade papa hai
Karan and Kunal run to Prithvi
Ku - bade papa aap humhe circus lekar jaayenge?
P - haan kyun nahin, Kripa inhe tayar kardo please
K - lekin Prithvi.....
P - kya lekin? inke papa yahan nahin lekin main tho hoon na? agar Angad ne vaada kiya tho usse poora main bhi kar sakta hoon
K - acha baba agar tumne faisala kar liya tho ajao tum dono ko tayar karti hoon aur saath saath Ria ko bhi tayar karti hoon
Kripa goes off with the boys, soon they're ready and Prithvi takes them to the circus. In their absence Nihaal is sitting miserable in his room, Suhana sees him
Suh - Nihaal, kya hua? kya maami...
N - nahin voh abhi teek hai....pata nahin kitne dino ke liye
Suh - tho tum unke paas kyun nahin jaate?
N - tum kya chahti ho? ke main apne aankhon se apni mom ko maarte hue dhekoon?
Suh - mera yeh matlab nahin tha, I mean....agar maami ke paas zyada waqt nahin bacha tho jitna waqt hai tumhe unke saath badana chahiye
N - whatever.......anjaam tho ek hi hoga, meri mom maarne vali hai...aur main kuch nahin kar sakta
Suh - come on Nihaal, tum apne aap ko doshi kyun maante ho? This is not your fault
N - it is my fault! agar maine achi tarah se mom ka kayal rakha hota tho aaj voh is haalat mein nahin hoti, it's all my fault
Suhana puts her hand on his shoulder but takes it away straight away, Nihaal looks up at her
N - kya tum mujhe kabhi maaf nahin kar sakti?
Suh - agar tumne galti ki thi tho shahid main maaf karti lekin tumne gunnah kiya Nihal, ek gunnah aur uske liye shahid main zindagi baar tumhe maaf na kar paoon
N - acha, khair... mujhe akela chordo please
Suhana nods her head and leaves
N (thinks) - main tumhe paa kar rahoon ga Suhana, kisi bhi keemat par
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awesome part!!!!!!! yes.........they'er alive!!! 😳 soooooo happy!!!!!!!!!!!! i had predicted that maybe, just maybe, someone had like stolen their car or sumthing, and they were alive, i dint think ud kill them!!!!! 😳 ...stupid nihaal didnt change for good, did he? 🤢 idiot..... i hope he just, like, leaves soon and doesnt do anything!! continue soon 😛 😳 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#80
great part
so Nihaal is evil and I had a feeling that Sujal and Kashish would be fine

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