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Posted: 10 months ago
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Taahir

Thank you so much for the lovely response.


Parichay(Introduction)Part 4

Raghuveer:I had heard you sing for the kids.But why did you sing in a low voice?You should have sung loudly.

Prarthana:I can't sing loudly.Because dad hates music.

Raghuveer:But why?

Prarthana:Dad wanted Ram bhaiyya to take over business.But ....

Flash back...

Lalit told his son Ram:Ram,I have arranged your admission for business studies in college.

Ram became dull.

Ram:Sorry Dad.I can't join Business studies.Because I want to learn BA music.

Lalit was shocked:What are you saying Ram?You love singing.I am okay with it.But you can't take music as a profession.

Ram:Please dad.Don't force me.I want to learn music.

Lalit was disappointed.



Ram joined the music college.After that Lalit waited for Ram's mind to change.


After finishing college,Lalit told Ram:Ram,as you wished you took BA music.But now you take over our business.

Ram:I cannot dad.Music is my life.I can't think of any other profession.

Lalit:Are you mad?How much can you earn by singing?It's not a good profession.

Ram:But I cannot do justice to any other job.Please forgive me dad.


Lalit became upset.


Ram became a full time singer.Ram had formed a music band with his collegemates.He and his friend Priya sang duet songs for most of the shows.

Bade Acchee lagte hai

Kyaa ????

Yeh Dharti ,yeh nadiyaa, yeh rainaa aur ?

Aur tum

Bade Acchee lagte hai

Yeh Dharti ,yeh nadiyaa, yeh rainaa aur ?

Aur tum mm mmmm

O o O MAjhi re

Jaiyo piya ke desh

Hum tum kitane paas hai

kitane duur hain chaand sitaare

Sach poochho to maan ko jhoothe lagate hain yeh saare

Hum tum kitane paas hai

kitane duur hain chaand sitaare

Sach poochho to maan ko jhoothe lagate hain yeh saare

Magar saccche lagate hai

Yeh Dharti yeh nadiyaa, yeh rainaa aur ?

Aur tum mm mmmmmm

hmmmmm

Tum in sab ko chood ke kaise kal subah jaaogi

Mere saath inhe bhi to tum yaad bahut aaogi

Tum in sab ko chood ke kaise kal subah jaaogi

Mere saath inhe bhi to tum yaad bahut aaogi

Bade Acchee lagte hai

Yeh Dharti ,yeh nadiyaa, yeh rainaa aur ?

Aur tum mm mmmmm

Bade Acchee lagte hai

hmmmm hmmmm hmmm hmmmm hmm

hmm hmm hmmm(Balika Vadhu).


But he could earn much through singing.So Lalit tried to get him married to a rich girl.But Ram shocked him.

Ram:Sorry dad.I love Priya who is the singer in my music band.She maybe a middle class girl.But I cannot marry anyone else.

Lalit was again disappointed.But Seema convinced Lalit to let Ram marry Priya.So Lalit allowed Ram to marry Priya.


Ram-Priya got married.

Ram started giving auditions to enter the film music field.But he faced rejections as he had no Godfather in the industry.Lalit started feeling that Ram is unsuccessful only because of his passion towards music.


Present....

Raghuveer:Oh so that's why Lalit Sir hates music.

Prarthana:Yes.Purvika and Meher find solace when I sing because when I sing they feel Priya bhabhi's;their mother's presence.

Raghuveer started humming a song.Prarthana was surprised and lost in his voice.She sat near him and looked at him deeply.

Musafir hoon yaaron

Na ghar hai na thikana

Hmm hmm ae

Musafir hoon yaaron

Na ghar hai na thikana

Mujhe chalte jaana hai

Bas chalte jaana

Musafir hoon yaaron

Na ghar hai na thikana

Mujhe chalte jaana hai

Bas chalte jaana

Ek raah ruk gayi do aur jud gayi

Main muda to sath sath raah mud gayi

Ek raah ruk gayi do aur jud gayi

Main muda to sath sath raah mud gayi

Hawa ke paron pe mera aashiyana


Purvika and Meher came there.They smiled hearing him sing.

Musafir hoon yaaron

Na ghar hai na thikana

Mujhe chalte jaana hai

Bas chalte jaana

Din ne hath thaam kar idhar bitha liya

Raat ne ishaare se udhar bula liya

Din ne hath thaam kar idhar bitha liya

Raat ne ishaare se udhar bula liya

Subah se shaam se mera dostana

Musafir hoon yaaron

Na ghar hai na thikana

Mujhe chalte jaana hai

Bas chalte jaana

Musafir hoon yaaron

Na ghar hai na thikana

Mujhe chalte jaana hai

Bas chalte jaana

(Parichay)

Meher:You sing like our mumma and papa.

Raghuveer:Really?Do I sing that well?

Purvika:Yes.You really sing well.

Raghuveer:Thank you bache.By the way you both studied enough for today.Shall we go for a small picnic to relax.

Purvika and Meher got excited:Really?

Raghuveer:Yes.

Purvika:We want to go for picnic.

Raghuveer:Get ready for the picnic.

Prarthana:Can I also join you guys?

Raghuveer:Why not?Please join us.

Prarthana smiled.




Raghuveer,Prarthana,Purvika and Meher went for the picnic and enjoyed.They sang together and had fun.

Sa Re Ke Sa Re Gama

Ko Lekar Gate Chale

Sa Re Ke Sa Re Gama

Ko Lekar Gate Chale

Papa Nahi Hai Dhani Si Didi

Didi Ke Sath Hai Sare

Sa Re Ke Sa Re Gama

Ko Lekar Gate Chale

Tum Bhi Gao

Sare Ke Sare Gama

Ko Lekar Gate Chale

Papa Nahi Hai Dhani Si Didi

Didi Ke Sath Hai Sare

Sa Re Ke Sa Re Gama

Ko Lekar Gate Chale

Sa Se Nikle Roz Sawera

Dur Kare Andhera

Re Se Reshmi Kirno Ne

Khud Kiya Ujiyara

Sa Se Nikle Roz Sawera

Dur Kare Andhera

Re Se Reshmi Kirno Ne

Khud Kiya Ujiyara

Suraj Ki Roshan Kirno

Me Sare Gate Chale

Papa Nahi Hai Dhani Si Didi

Didi Ke Sath Hai Sare La La...

Papa Nahi Hai Dhani Si Didi

Didi Ke Sath Hai Sare

Sa Re Ke Sa Re Gama Ko

Lekar Gate Chale Tum Bhi Gao

Ga Se Gungun Ga Ga Ga

Ma Se Madham Ma Ma Ma

Pa Se Ek Pujari Sa Sa Re Ga Ga Ma Pa

Pa Ma Ga Ga Ma Pa Pa Ma Re Ga Sa

Sa Sa Re Ga Ga Ma Pa

Pa Ma Ga Ga Ma Pa Pa Ma Re Ga Sa

Ga Se Gungun Karta

Hai Ghume Kyari Kyari

Ma Se Mithe Bolo

Me Pa Se Ek Pujari

Ga Se Gungun Karta

Hai Ghume Kyari Kyari

Ma Se Mithe Bolo

Me Pa Se Ek Pujari

Bhawre Ke Jaise

Phulo Pe Sar Gaye Chale

Papa Nahi Hai Dhani Si Didi

Didi Ke Sath Hai Sare

Dha Se Dhup Sunhari Hai

Ye Nee Nashili Lage

Dha Se Dhup Sunhari Hai

Ye Nee Nashili Lage

Sar Gum Ho Gayi

Puri Ab Kya Hoga Aage

Sar Gum Ho Gayi

Puri Ab Kya Hoga Aage

Sa Sa Re Ga Ga Ma Pa

Pa Ma Ga Ga Ma Pa

Pa Ma Re Ga Sa Sa

Sa Re Ga Ga Ma Pa

Pa Ma Ga Ga Ma

Pa Pa Ma Re Ga Sa

Sar Gum Ke Sathi Sar Gum

Ki Dhun Par Gaye Chale

Sar Gum Ke Sathi Sar Gum

Ki Dhun Par Gaye Chale

Papa Nahi Hai Dhani Si Didi

Didi Ke Sath Hai Sare

Sa Re Ke Sa Re Gama

Ko Lekar Gate Chale

Sa Re Ke Sa Re Gama

Ko Lekar Gate Chale(Parichay).



Prarthana prepared soup and brought it for Raghuveer.

Prarthana:Raghuveerji,you are tired of teaching the kids.Have this soup.

Raghuveer took the soup from her.

Raghuveer:Thank you.

He sipped the soup.

Raghuveer:It's yummy.

Prarthana smiled:Really?

Raghuveer:Yes.You proved that you are a good cook.

Prarthana smiled:So that means I am a marriage material?

Raghuveer was stunned by her question.

Raghuveer:What?

Prarthana:I mean mothers in law always prefer a daughter in law who can cook well.In that case I can be a good daughter in law.Right?

Raghuveer smiled:Yes.You can be a good daughter in law.You are a marriage material too.

Prarthana blushed.



Raghuveer and the kids were playing.They were chasing him and he was running.While running Raghuveer bumped into Prarthana and they both fell down losing balance.They both looked at each other with a smile.

Purvika and Meher laughed.

They both got up from the floor.

Prarthana:Stop teasing us children.

Because of both of you only we both fell down.

Meher:Because we have defeated you Raghuveer Sir.

They all laughed.



Raghuveer and Prarthana brought icecreams for the kids.

They were very happy.

Raghuveer and Prarthana also sucked icecreams.

Raghuveer noticed icecream drops on her cheek.

Raghuveer:There is icecream on your face.

Prarthana:Where?

Purvika:Bua does'nt know where it is.So you yourself wipe it Sir.

Slowly Raghuveer wiped her cheek.Prarthana blushed.

They shared a romantic eye lock.

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Posted: 10 months ago
#22

Beautiful update dear

Just loved it 🤗

All are bonding well ❤️‍🩹

Waiting for more

Thanks for the PM ☺️

Keep writing ✍️

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It's natural that Ram didn't want to take over business Ram Priya singing together was nice. Meher Purvika feeling their parents presence by PraVeer was lovely. Prathna giving soup to Raghu and asking if shes marriage material was cute. Falling scene was funny. Do these kids watch movies by hiding lol. Perfect pics. Waiting for next

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Posted: 10 months ago
#24

Hi thanks for the pm

Part 4

Dynamic update... superbly written

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Posted: 10 months ago
#25

reserved comment for part 4

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Posted: 10 months ago
#26

Part 3

Interesting Update

Sad that the grand parents blame both the little girls for

their parents death , which indeed is wrong because it was an accident

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Posted: 10 months ago
#27

Part 4

Fabulous Update

Loved the fact that Raghuveer,Prarthana,Purvika and Meher

went for a picnic and they all enjoyed themselves

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Posted: 10 months ago
#28

Salley

GOLDIE ABROL

khwaishfan

Taahir

Thank you so much for the lovely comments.




Parichay(Introduction)Part 5

Prarthana saw a cockroach in the room and ran in fear.While running she collided with Raghuveer and almost leaned against his chest.He held her.They shared a romantic eye lock.

Both came back to senses and moved away from each other.

Raghuveer:What happened?

Prarthana:There is a cockroach in the room.I am scared of cockroaches.

Raghuveer giggled.

Raghu:You are like a child.Why are you scared of a cockroach,Relax.Where is the cockroach?

Prathana showed him the cockroach.

Raghuveer picked it up and threw it out through the window.

Prarthana was relieved.

Raghu:I hope you are not scared anymore.

Prarthana smiled:Thank you.

He just smiled.




Purvika and Meher were watching a cartoon movie on TV.They showed the Christmas time in the movie.

Meher:We want to celebrate Christmas.

Prarthana:How is it possible?This is Summer.Christmas comes in December.

Meher:Christmas celebration will be fun.

Purvika was stubborn:Christmas maybe in December.But we want to celebrate Christmas now.

Raghuveer:Sure.We can celebrate Christmas now for the children.

Prarthana:What are you saying Raghuveer?

Raghuveer:In movies and TV serials they show Christmas without bothering about the season.Right?Like that we can also celebrate Christmas for the kids.

Prarthana:Ok.



Raghuveer and Prarthana decorated the house.Purvika and Meher also helped them.

Prarthana came dressing up as the Christmas Father.Everyone laughed.

Prarthana(Christmas father)distributed sweets and gifts.The kids were very happy.

Raghuveer,Prarthana(Christmas father),Purvika and Meher danced happily.

Seema and Lalit smiled seeing it.

Seema:The kids have changed a lot.They helped Raghuveer and Prarthana in doing work.They started studying also.

Lalit:Yes.I am also noticing it.The kids are enjoying the company of Raghuveer.He is the first teacher they did'nt send away.

Seema smiled.

After some time,Prarthana removed Santa Claus's mask and sat down to rest.Raghuveer sat near her.

Prarthana:Did I look odd as a Christmas father?I feel it did'nt suit me.

Raghuveer:Nothing like that.You looked cute as Santa Claus.The most important thing is that you made the children happy as a Christmas Father.

Prarthana smiled.



Lalit and Seema were sitting in their room.

Purvika and Meher entered the room.

They looked at them.

Purvika:It's time to sleep.So we thought .....

Lalit:You thought...?

Suddenly Purvika kissed their cheeks surprising them.

Purvika:Good night Dadaji...good night dadimaa...

Meher too kissed their cheeks.

Meher:Dadaji..Dadimaa...good night!And we are sorry for all the troubles we did to both of you.

Purvika:Really sorry.Please forgive us.

Lalit and Seema could not believe all this.They became so emotional that they hugged both of them.Purvika and Meher became very happy.

Seema:Who taught you to say goodnight and sorry?

Meher-Purvika:Raghuveer Sir.

Lalit-Seema smiled.

Seema:Why don't you both sleep with us?We will tell you many good stories.

Meher-Purvika got excited:Yes,we will sleep here.

They lay down on the bed between Lalit and Seema.

Prarthana watched it with a smile.

She thought:After a long time,dad and mom expressed love to Meher and Purvika.All thanks to Raghuveerji.He taught the kids manners and how to behave with others.


Prarthana started singing thinking of Raghuveer.

Beeti na bitai raina, birha ki jaai raina

Beeti na bitai raina, birha ki jaai raina

Bheegi hui ankhiyon ne lakh bujhai raina

Beeti na bitai raina, birha ki jaai raina

Bheegi hui ankhiyon ne lakh bujhai raina

Beeti na bitai raina




Prarthana's imagination:

Prarthana and Raghuveer started dancing romantically.

Beeti hui batiyan koi dohraye

Bhoole hue naamon se koi to bulaye

Beeti hui batiyan koi dohraye

Bhoole hue naamon se koi to bulaye



Chaand haan! ho

O chaand ki bindi waali

Bindi waali ratiyan

Jaagi hui ankhiyon mein raat na aai raina

Raghuveer imagined Prarthana near him and he encircled his arms around her waist.They looked at each other romantically.


Beeti na bitai raina, birha ki jaai raina

Bheegi hui ankhiyon ne lakh bujhai raina

Beeti na bitai raina

Yug aate hain aur yug jaayein

He also started singing remembering Prarthana.


Chhoti chhoti yaadon ke pal nahin jaayein

Yug aate hain aur yug jaayein

Chhoti chhoti yaadon ke pal nahin jaayein

Jhooth se kaali laage laage kaali ratiyan

Roothi hui ankhiyon ne lakh manai raina


His imagination:

Prarthana stood at the verandah and looked at the rain.Raghuveer pulled her closer and got cozy with her.The romantic rain poured upon them.


Beeti na bitai raina, birha ki jaai raina

Bheegi hui ankhiyon ne lakh bujhai raina

Beeti na bitai raina, birha ki jaai raina

Beeti na bitai raina(Parichay).

Prarthana stopped singing seeing Lalit at the doorway.She was nervous as Lalit does not like singing.

Lalit:You continue singing Prarthana.You are singing well.

Prarthana could'nt believe what she heard.

Prarthna:But dad...you...

Lalit:I realised that hating music was really stupid.Ram's identity was music.Hating music is like hating my own blood which I hate to do.

Prarthana became very happy.



The next morning,Raghuveer came there.Lalit and Seema smiled at him.

Lalit:We were waiting for your arrival.These days the children have changed a lot.They are well mannered now.

Seema:Actually they changed us too with their love.Till then we were indifferent to them.It's all because of you.

Lalit:We can't thank you enough.

Raghuveer:No need of thanking me.You both have always loved the kids.The kids have always loved both of you.But circumstance changed your relationship with them bitter.Now again love has melted the unnecessary anger between you all.That's it.

Lalit and Seema smiled.

Raghuveer:I want to tell you all something.

Seema:Say.

Edited by jasminerahul - 10 months ago
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Cockroach scene was hilarious. Meher Purvika wanting to celebrate Christmas was so funny. What did you mean by sat down to sit? Them dancing as Santa Claus and Christmas father was cute, I remembered the scene from the serial. Meher Purvika scene with Lalit seema was lovely. Lalit allowing Prarthana to sing was nice. Perfect pics, waiting for next

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Posted: 10 months ago
#30

Thanks a lot for pointing it out.I meant sat down to rest.


Originally posted by: salley145

Cockroach scene was hilarious. Meher Purvika wanting to celebrate Christmas was so funny. What did you mean by sat down to sit? Them dancing as Santa Claus and Christmas father was cute, I remembered the scene from the serial. Meher Purvika scene with Lalit seema was lovely. Lalit allowing Prarthana to sing was nice. Perfect pics, waiting for next

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