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Posted: 1 years ago
#21

Part 3


Fascinating Update

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Posted: 1 years ago
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Shivangi fought Rocky in naagin form but couldn't kill him. Nice to see change in Ricky after he heard Shivangi's harsh words. It is nice to see Shivangi acknowledging the positive changes in Rocky. It seems that Rocky began to love Shivangi.

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Posted: 1 years ago
#23

Chapter 1

Interesting start. I am surprised that Rivanya and Shivangi are Rocky's tenants. Poor people don't even have the money to pay the rent due to which Rocky lost money. Shocking that Rocky demands Shivangi to get married to him instead of money. It is very heartless and cruel from him. But Rocky is not interested in her. He just wanted to hurt Rivanya. Poor Rithik is regretting for Shivanya's past decisiob. Glad that Shivanya is not regretting for that.


Chapter 2

Shocking that Rocky is a demon and Shivangi couldn't even stand near him, forget killing. Shivangi's dialogues on god worship was nice. Shocking that Shivangi is a naagin due to her mother. Glad that she is also equally powerful as Rocky. Loved the garden scene and blouse scene.


Chapter 3

Rocky is so powerful that Shivangi's powers couldn't harm him. Very interesting. Snow scene and Roja song was so apt. It was so lovely. Even in the show, the snow scene was my favorite. I'm glad that Rocky is affected Shivangi's words and understanding his mistake. I loved how he decided not to eat humans (bad and good).

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Posted: 1 years ago
#24

Thank you very much

Salley

Shesha

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Bahara(The spring of love) Part 4

Shivangi was surprised to see her room decorated with small indoor plants in small pots.

Rocky:You love garden which is the only area you love in this house.So I made your room a garden.

Shivangi was surprised.

Shivangi:You did it for me?

Rocky:Yes.

Shivangi thought:Is Rocky genuinely trying to change?

Rocky held her chin softly and said:I hope now you will be atleast one percent happy here.

Rocky walked out.

Shivangi thought:Rocky touched me and I did not even resist.Why?






Shivangi was in the garden.Suddenly it started raining.

Shivangi:Oh no...because of the rain I will have to go inside.

Rocky came there.

Rocky:No need Shivangi.

Rocky removed his coat and put it above their heads as a shield.

Shivangi was surprised.

Shivangi thought:Rocky is so caring and protective now.

They looked at each other and shared an intense eye lock.

Rocky went to a dream world.

He dreamt of romancing Shivangi in the rain.

Chehre mein tere
Khud ko main dhoondhun
Aankhon ke darmiyaan
Tu ab hai iss tarah
Khwabon ko bhi jagah na mile

Yeh mausam ki baarish
Yeh baarish ka paani









Yeh paani ki boondein
Tujhe hi toh dhoondhe
Yeh milne ki khwahish
Yeh khwahish puraani
Ho poori tujhi se
Meri yeh kahaani

Kabhi tujhme utrun
Toh saanson se guzrun
Toh aaye dil ko raahat



Main hoon bethikana
Panaah mujhko paana
Hai tujhme, de ijazat

Na koi darmiyaan
Hum dono hai yahan
Phir kyun hai tu bata
Faasley…

Yeh mausam ki baarish
Yeh baarish ka paani


Yeh paani ki boondein
Tujhe hi toh dhoondhe
Yeh milne ki khwahish
Yeh khwahish puraani
Ho poori tujhi se
Meri yeh kahaani

Na na...



Parindon ki tarah
yeh dil hai safar mein
Tu mila de zindagi se



Bas itni ilteja
Tu aake ik dafa
Jo dil ne na kahaa
Jaan le…

Yeh mausam ki baarish
Yeh baarish ka paani

Yeh paani ki boondein
Tujhe hi toh dhoondhe
Yeh milne ki khwahish

Yeh khwahish purani


Ho poori tujhi se
Meri yeh kahaani
(Half Girlfriend).


It stopped raining.

They got relieved and moved away from each other.

Rocky:Change your clothes Shivangi.You will catch cold.

Shivangi nodded.

Shivangi and Rocky changed their wet clothes.

Rocky:Shivangi,it's nice to have hot coffee in rainy season.I have made coffee for you.It will give you heat.

Shivangi thought:Rocky is so concerned about me now.What should I do?Should I forgive him?

Shivangi asked Rocky:Rocky...why suddenly you are behaving differently?Why are you not behaving like a typical demon now?

Rocky:Because I really want to live like a human being.

Shivangi:But why you want to live like a human being?You are a demon.Then why?

Rocky thought:I can't tell the full truth to Shivangi now.

Rocky:Why I want to live like a human being is my personal choice.But I don't want to be a cruel demon.Because you don't like me that way and I feel bad to be hated by you.

Shivangi was stunned.Rocky walked away.

Shivangi thought:Rocky wants to change himself for me?

Unknowingly Shivangi blushed.





Shivangi was walking.Her toe hit a stone and it got hurt.

Shivangi:Ahh!

Rocky saw it.He made her sit on the bed and wiped her blood with cotton.

Rocky put ointment on her toe.

Shivangi:Thank you.

Rocky:No mention.

Shivangi got up from the bed.

Shivangi:Don't you feel thirsty seeing my blood?Don't you feel like eating me?

Rocky got irritated and pulled her closer.

Rocky:Don't dare to talk like that.I am not hungry for human meat anymore.And I can never think of eating you up.You are my wife Shivangi.

Shivangi became emotional.

They shared an emotional eye lock.

He came back to senses and left her.

Rocky:I am sorry.

He walked away.





After a month....

Shivangi was folding clothes.

Rocky came there.

Rocky told Shivangi:Shivangi...your mother is struggling hard to treat your father.I have made all the arrangements for his treatment.Your father's heart surgery will be done by the best doctor.You please inform your parents.

Shivangi was surprised.

Shivangi:Thank you so much Rocky.

Rocky just smiled.

Rocky was about to go.Suddenly Shivangi held his hand.

Shivangi:Now I am really sure that you have changed Rocky.

Rocky:I have to change as my wife is a nice girl.

They looked at each other emotionally.




Shivangi visited Ritik and Shivanya.

Shivanya:Shivangi,you said that you will kill the demon Rocky.But till now you did'nt kill him?

Ritik:You did not utilize your serpent powers yet?

Shivangi:No,I did not kill Rocky.Because I cannot kill him.

They were stunned.

Shivanya:But why?

Shivangi:Rocky is a demon.But he is not a bad demon like I thought.

Ritik:Then what about what he did to us?

Shivangi:That was very cruel.But he is changing.He is trying his best to make me comfortable and happy.He even made arrangements for your treatment and operation papa.Then how can I kill him?I want to give him a chance papa.

Ritik and Shivanya were surprised.

Shivanya:Really?

Shivangi:Yes Maa.I came here to shift papa to the hospital.

Shivanya:Now I also think that he has changed.God bless him.

Ritik:If he is really changing you are right in giving him a chance Shivangi.

Shivangi:Thank you for supporting me papa.

Shivanya:Shivangi...are you in love?

Shivangi blushed.

Ritik and Shivanya were surprised.






Shivangi blushed imagining having romantic moments with Rocky.

O tora Saajan ayo tore des
Badli badla badla saavan
Badla jag ne bhes re....
Tora Saajan ayo tore des re..e..e..e

Soyi soyi palkon pe Chalke
Mere sapno ki khidki pe aa Gaya
Aate jate phir mere Dil ke inn hathon mein wo khat pakda Gaya
Pyar ka...


Lafzon mein rang hai pyaar ka
(Bahara bahara hua Dil pehli Baar ve
Bahara bahara ke chain tho hua pharar ve) ×2

O.. tora Saajan ayo tore des
Badli badla badla saavan
Badla jag ne bhes re...
Tora sajan ayo tore des re..e..e

Wo.. kabhi dikhe Zameen pe kabhi wo Chand pe..
Ye ..e..e.. nazar kahe use yahan
Main rakhloon bandhke
Ik sans main dhadkanon ke paas main


Haan paas main ghar banaye hay bhoole ye jahan
(Bahara bahara hua Dil pehli Baar ve
Bahara bahara ke chain tho hua pharar ve)×2

Beech main tori o re savaria
Payal jaise khanke tijhuri
Cham cham nache dil pe badaria
Ho..o..o..o..o.

Savaria tu barse Ghana
Barse Ghana
Barse Ghana
Aa...a...a...a...a..


Nanadhinanadinanan nananana...

Wo..ye badliyan jo ched de toh chal ke barishe
Wo..de aahate karib se
Toh bole khwahishen ke aaj kal zindagi har ek pal
Har ek pal se chahe Haye jiska Dil hua


(Bahara bahara hua Dil pehli Baar ve
Bahara bahara ke chain tho hua pharar ve) ×2

Soyi soyi palkon pe Chalke
Mere sapno ki khidki pe aa Gaya
Aate jate phir mere Dil ke
Inn hathon mein wo khat pakda Gaya pyaar Ka
Lafzon mein rang hai pyaar ka


(Bahara bahara hua Dil pehli Baar ve
Bahara bahara ke chain tho hua pharar ve)×2

(I hate luv storys).



Shivangi:Does Rocky also love me?Anyways I will confess my love to Rocky today.

Shivangi went to his room in excitement.She got a shock there.


Edited by jasminerahul - 1 years ago
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Posted: 1 years ago
#25

Shivangi's words are affecting Rocky. Her hate is bothering him.

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Posted: 1 years ago
#26

Rocky is trying to change himself for Shivangi. Even though he was not bad, he is trying to be better.

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Posted: 1 years ago
#27

What did she find in the room? Was it a surprise?

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Posted: 1 years ago
#28

Loved it dear 😍

Awesome & beautiful update

Thanks for the PM ☺️

Keep writing ✍️

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Posted: 1 years ago
#29

Part 4

Majestic update... brilliantly written

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Posted: 1 years ago
#30

Rocky decorating the room with plants for Shivangi was cute.Shivangi is falling in love that’s why she didn’t resist. Rocky shielding Shivangifrom the rain with his jacket was romantic, reminded me it aashiqui 2. Rocky’s imaginationwas romantic. Rocky giving coffee to Shivangi, him saying that he’s changing himselffor her, and she blushing was cute. Thank God Rocky didn’t turn into a demon likeRanav seeing blood haha. Rocky saying that he can’t think of eating her up and puttingointment on her toe was emotional. Rocky wanting to get Ritik treated by the bestdoctor, Shivangi holding his hand and thanking him was nice. Shivangi is blushingonce again, she is really in love. Shivangi wants to confess her love, but whatshock did she get? Perfect pics. Waiting for next.

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