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Posted: 1 years ago
#11

To save himself, Rocky taking demon form was a very nice sceneto watch, I was reminded of Ranav. Here Rocky is an atheist because he’s a demon.Rocky tying Shivangi’s blouse dori was romantic. Rocky saving Shivangi from fallingwas nice. Shocking that Shivangi is a naagin. So sacrifice was the mistake theytalked about earlier. Shivanya attacking Rocky, now it would be interesting to seeRocky’s reaction. Waiting for next. Perfect pics.

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Posted: 1 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: jasminerahul

Thank you very much



Salley

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Bahara(The spring of love) Part 2

I dedicate this FS to my dear friend Salley145 who wants a story where the bad demon turns good because of a nice girl.




Rocky was standing at the terrace.Shivangi went behind him with a knife to stab him.

Suddenly Rocky's size started becoming huge.His eyes were glowing.His fangs started sticking out.

Shivangi got scared.Her knife fell down from her hand.

She started running away.Suddenly Rocky called her:Shivangi...look here.

Shivangi turned back and looked at him fearfully.

Rocky:You wanted to kill me.Right?Can you kill me with your tiny knife now?

(Thank you Salley for the edit).

Rocky laughed.

Shivangi was sweating.

Rocky turned into his human form.

Shivangi:You are a demon.That's why you are heartless.

Rocky:Yes...I am heartless demon.I drink human and animal blood.I could have drunk your blood.I could have drunk your parents' blood too.But I did not do that.Because I have no intention to kill you or your family.Then why are you trying to kill me?

Shivangi:Because you the happiness of my family.Because of you,my dreams are shattered.

Rocky:But you can never kill me Shivangi.An ordinary human being like you cannot kill a powerful demon like me.

Shivangi became upset.






Shivangi was doing puja.Rocky felt discomfort.

Rocky:This is a demon's house.You can't do puja.We demons do not pray to God.

Shivangi:But I am not a demon.So I worship God.You can't stop me Rocky.Youare not praying to God.That's why you are so bad.If you had worshipped God,you would have had a heart atleast.

Rocky became dull.

Shivangi was struggling hard to tie the dhori of her blouse behind.Rocky saw it.

Rocky:You are wasting time.

He went near her and tied the dhori of her blouse.

Rocky:I did it easily which you could not do.

She moved away from him angrily.

Shivangi:Stay away from me.I don't need your help.

Rocky replied in a cool manner:Ok.No problem.

Shivangi was irritated.





Shivangi was enjoying in the garden.Rocky came there.

Rocky:Why are you in the garden?

Shivangi:I am bored of seeing your ugly face.So to refresh myself I wanted to see something beautiful.

Rocky did not mind it.

He smiled seeing Shivangi enjoying there.

He saw her stepping on a stone.

Rocky:Shivangi!

Shivangi began to fall down.Suddenly Rocky caught her.

They shared an eye lock.

Suddenly Shivangi turned off her face.

She pushed him.

Shivangi:Don't touch me.

Rocky:I am not desperate to touch you.I saved you from falling down.

Shivangi:I don't need your help.Get lost.

Shivangi walked away.





After some days....

Shivangi noticed changes on her skin.Her skin colour started changing.

She turned into a serpent shocking herself.

She herself got scared seeing herself as a serpent.





Shivangi visited her parents.

Ritik:Shivangi,are you alright there?

Shivanya:Did Rocky hurt you?

Shivangi:No,he did'nt hurt me.I am alright there.It's just that I can't tolerate him.

They were relieved.

Shivangi:I want to tell you an important matter.Papa...maa...I am a serpent.Yesterday night I turned into a serpent.

Ritik and Shivanya were surprised.

Shivangi:How come I am a serpent?I feel scared.

Shivanya:You don't need to be scared Shivangi.I was also a serpent like you.But I was asked to sacrifice my serpent powers to live with a human being.Since I loved your father I sacrificed my powers and became an ordinary human being.

Ritik:I was feeling guilty for that.I was thinking that if your mother had not become a human being,you would have also become a serpent and could have easily defeated Rocky.

But God is kind enough to turn you into a serpent though your mother is a human being now.

Shivangi smiled:God blessed me with serpent powers to defeat the demon Rocky.

Shivanya:Demon Rocky?

Shivangi:Yes.Rocky is a demon who lives in human form.

They were scared.

Ritik:How are you living with a demon?It's so dangerous.

Shivangi:Don't worry papa.He won't harm me.Before that I will kill him.

Ritik and Shivanya were relieved.





Shivangi turned into a serpent infront of Rocky.Rocky was shocked.

Shivangi:You said that being an ordinary human being I cannot kill you.Now you see what I can do.

Shivangi started beating Rocky with her tail.


Shivangi tried to kill Rocky, but she failed. Unable to make out whether Rocky is a good demon or evil as he didn't harm her and the family. He saved Shivangi twice. I am shocked that Shivangi turned into a serpent. It was nice to see Shivanya sharing her experience as a naagin and how she sacrificed her power to marry and live happily with Ritik. Loved Shivangi giving an assurance to her parents that she would kill Rocky in serpent form. Shivangi came to Rocky in serpent form. Hope she succeeds in her goal.

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Posted: 1 years ago
#13

Part 2

Great update... well written

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Posted: 1 years ago
#14

Loved it dear 😍

Awesome update 😃

Thanks for the PM ☺️

Keep writing ✍️

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Posted: 1 years ago
#15

Part 2


Interesting Update

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Posted: 1 years ago
#16

Both Shivangi and Rocky are not human. Even though Rocky says he is heartless, he is always there to help her.

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Posted: 1 years ago
#17

Thank you very much

Salley

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Taahir

khwaishfan





Bahara(The spring of love) Part 3

Shivangi turned into a serpent infront of Rocky.Rocky was shocked.

Shivangi:You said that being an ordinary human being I cannot kill you.Now you see what I can do.

Shivangi started beating Rocky with her tail.

Rocky took his demon form.

(Thank you Salley for the edit).


Rocky was so huge that Shivangi's attack on him did not have any impact on him.She was about to bite him.

A light passed from Rocky's hand which sealed Shivangi's mouth due to which she was not able to bite him.

Rocky started laughing.

Rocky:I am surprised that you are a serpent.But a serpent cannot kill a demon like me Shivangi.

The disappointed Shivangi turned into her human form and walked away angrily.

Rocky turned into his human form.

Rocky:Why do I feel sad when Shivangi tries to kill me?Till now nobody's hatred has affected me.Then why Shivangi's hatred is making me upset?





Shivangi was looking at the snow fall.Unknowingly Rocky started admiring her.

Shivangi looked at him.They both started romancing.

yeh hasin vaadiya yeh khula aasmaan
aa gaye hum kaha ai mere saajna
in bahaaro me dil ki kali khil gayi
mujhko tum jo mile har khushi mil gayi

tere hontho pe hai husn ki bijliya
tere gaalo pe hai julf ki badaliya
tere baalo ki khushbu se mehke chaman
sangmarmar ke jaisa yeh tera badan

mere jaanejaan yeh hai teri chandani
chhed do tum aaj koi pyar ki raagini
yeh hasin vaadiya yeh khula aasmaan
aa gaye hum kaha ai mere saajna

yeh bandhan hai pyar ka dekho tute na sajni
yeh janmo ka sath hai dekho chhute na sajna
tere aanchal ki chhaanv ke tale
meri manjil mujhe mil gayi
teri palako ki chhaanv ke tale
mohabbat mujhe mil gayi

yeh hasin vaadiya yeh khula aasmaan


aa gaye hum kaha ai mere saajna
in bahaaro me dil ki kali khil gayi
mujhko tum jo mile har khushi mil gayi
yeh hasin vaadiya yeh khula aasmaan
aa gaye hum kaha ai mere saajna

ji karta hai saajna dil me tumko bitha lu
aa masti ki raat me apna tumko bana lu
uthne lage hai tufaan kyo


mere sine me ai sanam
tumhe chaahunga dilo jaan se
meri jaanejaan teri kasam

yeh hasin vaadiya yeh khula aasmaan
aa gaye hum kaha ai mere jaanejaan
in bahaaro me dil ki kali khil gayi
mujhko tum jo mile har khushi mil gayi

mere jaanejaan yeh hai teri chandani
chhed do tum aaj koi pyar ki raagini


yeh hasin vaadiya yeh khula aasmaan
aa gaye hum kaha ai mere saajna
yeh hasin vaadiya yeh khula aasmaan
aa gaye hum kaha ai mere saajna(Roja).


Suddenly Rocky realised that it was his imagination.

Rocky thought:What kind of an imagination was it?Am I falling in love with Shivangi?

Shivangi:The snow is so white and pure.It looks so beautiful.But why my life can't be beautiful?

Rocky who was watching it felt sad.

Rocky:Shivangi...

Shivangi looked at him:What?

Rocky:What did you say?

Shivangi:I was thinking that with my Prince charming on the snow my life would have been beautiful.But my life is a mess with a demon like you.

Rocky got hurt.




Rocky was disturbed by Shivangi's words.

He went near her and pulled her aggressively.

Rocky:What did you say?You said that I made your life a mess?

Shivangi:Yes,it's true.

Rocky:How did I make your life a mess?Am I making you starve?Am I making you work like a donkey?Am I torturing you physically?Did I stop you from meeting your parents?

Shivangi:No.But you threatened me to marry you.You made me and my family upset.No girl can like the person who marries her forcefully.You snatched my peace of mind.Because of you,I did get my true love.Like this you made my life messy.And how can I forget that you are a demon who drinks the blood of innocent human beings?You are a heartless demon.

Rocky felt very upset. Shivangi walked away.

Rocky remembered Shivangi saying that since he does't worship God only he is heartless.

Rocky went near the God's Idol.

Rocky said emotionally:God...I never felt like praying after that incident in my life.I had become completely emotionless.But I don't know why..these days I started feeling emotions.I feel hurt when Shivangi hates me.I feel bad when she calls me heartless.Will my dead heart be alive if I request you?






Rocky went out.Shivangi noticed it.

Shivangi:Where is Rocky going?I have to follow him.

Shivangi followed him as a snake silently without his knowledge.

Rocky reached a forest.Shivangi took her human form and hide behind a tree to watch Rocky.

Rocky was secretly watching if anyone was coming that way.

He saw a human being coming.

Shivangi felt scared and upset.

Shivangi:Rocky has come here for hunting.What can we expect from a cruel demon like Rocky?He is going to eat that innocent man.So heartless the demons are!My fate is to live with this demon.

Shivangi turned into her naagin form and attacked Rocky.

Shivangi:I will not let you kill a poor human being Rocky.

Suddenly Rocky turned into a demon

and jumped upon Shivangi.Shivangi screamed.

Suddenly Shivangi realized that it was her imagination.

Shivangi:I can't even save that innocent man from Rocky as he is more powerful than me.What will I do Shiv bhagwan?Though I am a pure naagin,I am so helpless and weak now infront of that devilish demon.

Rocky:Like Shivangi thinks I don't drink the blood of innocent human beings.I have the power to sense whether a person is good or bad.I have eaten only bad human beings who don't deserve to live.

Shivangi who overheard it thought:Oh!I misunderstood Rocky.Rocky is not as cruel as I thought.

Rocky:This human being is bad.

Shivangi got scared.

She thought:Is Rocky going to eat him?It's going to be horrifying.

Rocky:But I won't kill him and eat him.Because I can't be heartless like him.I will not eat human meat anymore.I will eat like human beings even if it risks my life.

Shivangi was surprised.

Rocky:Shivangi is right.If we pray to God,we will not be heartless.God heard my prayer.So I am not heartless anymore.

Shivangi was again surprised.

Shivangi thought:Rocky listened to my words and started praying to God?Does he really want to change?


Edited by jasminerahul - 1 years ago
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Posted: 1 years ago
#18

Rocky is changing already, he’s getting affected by Shivangi’shatred. Imaginary romance was romantic. Hope. Rocky realizes soon that he’s in love.Rocky is right but yes he did force her to marry him, him praying to God was emotional.What incident happened I wonder. Glad that Rocky attacking her was just an imagination.So happy that he only eats bad humans but resisted eating him. Shivangi overhearingeverything was good to see. Waiting for next, perfect pics. Waiting for enchantedhearts and Humein tumse pyar kitna. It’s a coincidence, the ff plot which I wrotefor Rasiya is also named Humein tumse pyar kitna.

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Posted: 1 years ago
#19

Loved it dear 😍

Awesome update 😃

Thanks for the PM ☺️

Continue soon 🤗

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Posted: 1 years ago
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Part 2

Excellent update... well written

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