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Posted: 1 years ago

Lagna

Her FIL needed little convincing, he was even more impressed with her, he teared up. Manas was shaking his head in amused disbelief

“I cannot believe you two are planning this”

“We are asking a nice homely girl to marry your brother, what could be wrong?”

“Nothing” he shook his head but looked at Suhasini worriedly

“Baba he thinks I am out of control”

“No you are not beta, you are just the DIL we need in this family to keep us together”

“She likes Ms Vyas so she wants Indraneel to marry her Baba, they hate each other” Manas was blunt

Senior Deshmukh was shocked

“Why what happened why does the teacher hate my son?”

Suhasini was furious at Manas

“Why do you say that” she hissed

“They hate each other” Manas muttered hesitantly

“What happened, will someone share?”

“Well Baba, they both had a competition to teach Kunal and Indra won”

“So? He is a good teacher na?”

“No”

“Oh the teacher’s ego was hurt?”

“Yes yes” Suhasini didn’t go into the detail

“That can be fixed, he is in another profession altogether, he works for a bank I think….” He leaned back smiling pleasantly

“What if the girl is unable to take the hurt and pain”

“then she will say no, I have 3 or 4 girls lined up in the next month for him” he beamed like a tube light

“You two are crazier than circus clowns” Manas muttered

Baba laughed out loud

“Well Baba… looks like your son has rewarded us”

“He loves you… only I am the crazy one…. Aai has left me and I am crazy” he choked up

“BABAAA” Suhasini was sitting on the floor crunching on peanuts, Baba sat in his easy chair

She pressed on his knee

“I want to see his wife, I want to see his babies, then I am done”

“No you are not Kunal’s wife and Kruti’s husband will not like it” she laughed

“I am almost 70”

“Lets not talk about that Baba” she smiled

She had a round beatific face with a large forehead and a pointed chin, she didn’t have time to take care of herself, after two kids she was filled out in the right places and generally only wore a saree at home

“I don’t know if she will wear a saree haan Baba?” she teased

“Oh no” he laughed

“She looks like bohemian hippie… skirts, and scarves and long curly hair”

“I have seen her she was wearinga saree”

“You saw her when she came here from school directly” Suhasini corrected him

“Well… then it’s a no ?” he teased his bahu

Manas chuckled and got up to leave

“Does he like her?”

“Well… he only likes me… you and the kids”

“And Indra” Baba chimed

“Depends on the day and time of day” Suhasini mumbled

“You will bring the brothers closer”

“I don’t know… but I want to see that rogue married”

Pankaja Vyas was not greatly excited to go, but Suhasini had been nothing but nice to her, she loved Kunal too, he was her best friend in that house.

Kruti was adorable and Baba was just too kind

She HATED Indraneel

They had a big fight, that other day, all the way down to the gate of the apartment complex

“If you cannot handle it, don’t dish it out Bhadra” he bit out

She had called him a gigolo angrily

“You started it, I wasn’t even talking to you”

“You have the nerve to slander me but get outraged when I defend myself”

“Do it, be my guest, I am not the one to shrink away”

Indraneel was thankfully not around

The food was excellent

Her brother hadn’t come along, neither her sister. It was their ticket to go out with friends.

Ajji was delighted, she craved to make new friends

Ajji and Baba yammered non stop

They found near and far connections in every village in Maharashtra

Suhasini was trying to bring the topic up, Pankaja Vyas looked stunning today in a peach cotton saree and a navy sleeveless blouse, her eyes seemed green and blue sometimes to her

She wondered if she married Indraneel then then if she would still like her or begin being mean, afterall Indraneel made 5 times as much money as both herself and Manas combined and had traveled the world

Would the dynamic change?

Will she no longer be respected?

A beautiful gorgeous Deshmukh bahu might be adored by all

Suhasini felt self pity for a second

The kids went to their room to play with the toys Pankaja had bought for them

“Ajji…. Tujhi naat majha naatvashi lagna karela kaa?”

(Will your grand daughter marry my BIL?”)

Pankaja turned bright red

The front door bell rang

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Posted: 1 years ago

Magni ghatli and mulala mahet paan nahi 🤣

Now he will come to know and we are eager to see his reaction.

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Posted: 1 years ago

Love this take Nisha smiley27

You are such a gifted writer, smiley31

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Will write the next part first thing tomorrow

Kal chhutti hai meri

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“I will”

It was Indraneel Deshmukh, Punky wanted to shrivel up and die. She drilled holes into her plate.

“Hi?” he whispered, in absolutel shock…

Ajji looked at him admiringly “To mulgaa aahe na? Khup chhan aahe” she said in her loud screechy voice

“FANTASTIC” Punky muttered

“dhanyawada Ajji” Indraneel nodded acknowledging her

Suhasini looked afraid for a second

“I am OK with my grand daughter marrying you” Ajji declared in an even more screechy voice

Kruti ran into the large dining area and careened into him, almost making him buckle, he grabbed and hoisted her

“What is this hair?” he flicked her tiny braids

There was a collection of it

All having beads at the end

“I don’t know Aai made me me”

“I KNOW Aai made YOU, who made the hair” he smirked

Manas heckled

“Come eat with us” Suhasini summoned

“I am not really hungry” he claimed looking at Punky

“We are done here, so you can eat” she told him boldy

“No you are not” Suhasini found her voice

Getting up to push her down by her shoulder

Shyam Rao and Ajji were discussing something delightedly, Ajji periodically glanced at Indraneel to make sure he was real and he was standing there

Manas urged his brother to sit with a nod

Of course the only seat available was the tail of the table by Punky

He sat down

“Punky cooks every type of food”

“No Aajji Don’t” Punky was polite trying not to offend Baba

She didn’t want to throw a giant fit, screaming and scowling,

She wanted to actually

“Why in the world will she marry Indraneel Deshmukh, he thought of her as a s—toy”

“I mean seriously…. What a jerk… I want a real relationship, I want to have a connection, 6 months down the road he will go off to find himself another date…. Or even better when I return from honeymoon he will go back on the site”

She looked up at him at that point

Shyam Rao asked his son

“I think she is the most suitable for you shakkara… she is educated homely and so quiet”

Indraneel spit his food out

Quite literally

“I am not a quiet person Uncle” Punky shouted

“Yes yes… no its good beta”

“INDRA” suhasini hissed

“Who am I marrying again?”

“There is only one here” Manas whispered

“I am supposed to marry Pankaja Vyas?” he looked at her piercingly

“He talks English like you” Ajji nudged Punky

“The similarity ends right there” she mumbled

“”Why will he be similar, similar people should never get married, he is a man he should be strong and protect you, he should make money and buy you everything you want, be virile enough to have many children, be a good father, be respectful to elders like me, “ Ajji gave a bhashan

The brothers laughed out loud

Pankaja was ashamed of her Ajji for the first time in life

“Ajji, the 12th century called they want their speech back”

“She is right” Shyam Rao interjected

Suhasini was as dumbfounded

Manas and Indraneel laughed away

“virile” Indraneel repeated in Marathi

“Sorry Ajji doesn’t know there are kids in the house” she was genuinely embarrassed

“That’s fine” Manas nodded “She is super honest

“Indra can we talk about the proposal?” Suhasini cornered him

“If u call me Indy, yes”

“OK Indy… Indraneel please”

“We should go” Punky stood up

“No sit…. Now YOU are acting like its 12th century” Suhasini scolded her

“I am not afraid of the answer, I AM NOT SHY” she spoke slowly but firmly in Marathi

“Then just be here I want to know,…”

“If he were the last man on earth I wouldn’t marry him”

“I will marry her” Indraneel said quietly

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Posted: 1 years ago

Wohoo! Fireworks! Explosion! 😜😄 Fantastic Nisha!!

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Posted: 1 years ago

Cant wait for next update

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Posted: 1 years ago

Yaaaay……

He agreed

How interesting

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Posted: 1 years ago

Dil mein haan honto pe naa??? Pankaja Vyas, what do you want to say now? Take your man go in corner, let him know your ask and see what he is willing for.

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Posted: 1 years ago

“If he were the last man on earth I wouldn’t marry him”

just let Indy know why you are declining the proposal.


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