Tere Bina (RajivAmna ff) last part updt! - Page 27

sorry to keep u all waiting for such a long time... herez the next part 4 u all... 😳

Part-21

Recap-
Rayan aur Saima kuch waqt saath beetate hai...,ek dusre ko aur jaante hai...
Agle hi din Rayan se milne Rishabh malhotra aata hai jo ki ab se Aryan ke behalf per uska project handle karega.... Saima aur Rayan Shimla lautte hai.....

Story further.......
Jaise hi Saima aur Rayan ghar aate hai Adi daudte hue Saima ke paas aata hai...
Adi: mama.... i missed u so much
Saima: humne bhi aap ko bahot miss kiye.., isliye to jaldi se wapas aa gaye
Dadi: are unhe zara baithne to do Adi...
Rayan: koi baat nahi Dadi...., waise aapki tabiyat kuch thik nahi lag rahi, kya hua?
Dadi: bas beta,halka sa zukhaam ho gaya hai
Saima: to phir aapko aaram karna chahiye...., aap abhi apne kamre mein jakar aaram kijye...
Dadi: per main thik hu....
Saima: humne kaha na... aap chaliye...
Rayan:sssss baat maan lijiye Dadi, warna aapko bhi daant khani padegi aur phir main bhi kuch kar nahi paunga...
{saima just stares at him while he laughs. Saima takes Dadi to her room & asks her to rest for some time... she comes to her room....and just sits there}
Rayan: thak gayi?
Saima: nahi to...., bas zara.... waise kya hum Dadi ko kuch dino ke liye saath nahi le ja sakte? Unki tabiyat thik nahi rehti, aise mein unka u akele rehne thik nahi...
Rayan: maine to unse kitni baar kaha nahi per wo maane tab na...
Saima: hum baat karenge unse...
Rayan: waise hume kal tak hi lautna hoga....., i hope u dont mind...
Saima: kyun bhala? hum samajh sakte hai...aapko office ki fikr hai,kaamka tension hoga..... Aap jab kahe hum chalenge...
Rayan: {to himself} yeh itni achi kyun hai?
Saima: kya hua? kaha kho gaye?
Rayan: main yeh soch raha tha ki koi itna acha, itna understanding kaise ho sakta hai? i mean main jab bhi sochta hu ki shayad tumhe iss baat se gussa aayega..., ya tumhe meri kisi baat se aitraaz hoga...per tum to....
Saima: {gives him a confused look} yeh kahe jaa rahe ho aap?
Rayan: {laughs} chodo... hume kal ghar jana hai.... yeh lo mama se baat karlo {hands her the phone & leaves the room}
Saima: {to herself} yeh ho gaya hai inhe... {she calls Raina}
Raina: hello beta
Saima: ha mama, aap pohoch gaya?
Raina: ha beta..., aur tum dono?
Saima; ji... waise Rayan bata rahe the ki hume kal hi ghar aana hai.... phir kehne lage ki aapse baat kare.... baat kya hai?
Raina: {laughs} yeh Rayan bhi na... Beta parso karwachauth hai, ab kyunki tumhara yeh pehla karwachauth hoga to hume kuch tayyariya to karni hai na.... Waise Rayan ne tumse kuch kaha nahi?
Saima: nahi..., unhone bas itna kaha ki hume kal ghar jana hai , hume laga ki shayad office mein koi kaam hoga isiliye....
Raina: hmm..... waise tum kal doupahar tak aa jana phir kuch rasm bhi hai.....
Saima: ji mama, acha mama hum phone rakhte hai...
Raina: acha beta..., {hangs down}
Saima: {to herself} karwachauth.......
{tabhi rayan kamre mein aata hai aur saima ki taraf dekhkar muskurane lagta hai.....}
Saima: mama ne to kaha ki hamara aana itna bhi zaroori nahi hai..., waise bhi hume yaha jyada acha lagta hai....
Dadi ki tabiyat bhi thik nahi hai...to kuch aur din yehi ruk jaate hai.....
Rayan: per mama ne to kaha tha.., parso tak jana zaroori hai, phir tumhara pehla karwachauth bhi to.....
{both of them look at each other, and laugh.....
Rayan bas ekdum se Saima ki taraf dekhne lagta hai...., uski wo hasi, uski aankhein....., wo bas use dekhta hi jaata hai...
Saima yeh mehsoos karti hai, aur phir palat jaati hai... Rayan uske kareeb aata hai.... Saima phir uski taraf palatti hai.... wo apne aapko uski taraf dekhne se
rok nahi paati aur dheere se apni palkein uthati hai.... Dono bas ek dusre ki taraf dekhte hai.... na kisi ki palak jhapakti hai aur naa hi nazrein hatti hai....

~~~~Song in the background~~~~
baatein kuch ankahee si..... kuch ansuni si.....hone lagi
kabu humpe raha na.... hasti hamari khone lagi......
shayad yehi hai pyarrrr........
shayad yehi hai pyarrrr.........
~~~~Song in the background~~~~

Saima haskar waha se chali jaati hai...... aur phir ek baar palatkar phir Rayan ko dekhti hai....

~~~~Song in the background~~~~
Kehde mujhse..... dil mein kya hai..........
aisa bhi kya guroor.....
Tujhko bhi to ho raha hai...... thoda asar zaroor......
Yeh khamoshi..... jeene naa de....
Koi to baat ho.......
shayad yehi hai pyarrrr......
~~~~Song in the background~~~~

Rayan just smiles & winks at her.... & Saima smiles back blushingly & goes out of the room..... Wo Dadi ke kamre mein jaati hai
Dadi: are beta.., kya baat hai aaj bahot khush lag rahi hai
Saima: nahi to.., per ha hume khushi zaroor hogi agar aap hamare saath kal ghar chale to
Dadi: ghar? mera ghar to yehi hai...
Saima: ha per wo bhi to aaphi ka ghar hai na?
Dadi: ha, per Saima main...
Saima: nahi hum kuch sunna nahi chahte..., kya aap kuch dino ke liye hamare saath nahi chal sakte Dadi..., aur phir iss baar hamara pehla karwachauth hai...
Dadi: oh... tabhi main sochu ki tere chehre per itni chamak kyun hai?
Saima: aap baat ko taal rahe hai
Dadi: {smiles} thik hai main saath chalungi...., per sirf kuch dino ke liye...
Saima: ahhh....!!! thankyou so much Dadi..... Acha hum zara Adi ko dekhte hai
Dadi: thik hai......
{saima adi ke kamre mien jaati hai...Adi use dekhte hai mu phulakar baithta hai}
Saima: lagta hai...... koi humse naraaz hai...
{she comes and sits besides him...}
Saima: per mama ne to aisa kuch nahi kiya hai phir unka beta unse naraaz kyun hai?
Adi: kyunki mama Adi ke saath nahi khelte, Adi ke saath nahi rehte...
Saima: ohhh..... to isliye aap humse naraaz hai....
Adi: ha, aur hum aapse baat nahi karne wale
Saima: i'm sorry... dekho hum apne kaan pakadkar aapse sorry keh rahe hai....
{adi still doesnt look at her}
Saima: i'm sorry..., dekho agar aapne hume maaf nahi kiya to hum ro denge...... mama ro rahe hai Adi.... {wo apne chehre per haath rakhti hai....
Adi ahista se palatkar dekhta hai... use lagta hai ki saima ro rahi hai...wo uske paas aata hai aur uske haath hatata hai}
Adi: mama....
Saima: i'm sorry
Adi: maaf kiya.., per aap rona nahi
Saima: {smiles} nahi royenge.... {huggs him}
Adi: papa bhi aise hi rote the....
Saima: wo kyun?
Adi: pata nahi..., wo apne room mein baithe aise hi rote the.., hume acha nahi lagta tha... phir jab hum unse kehte to papa chup ho jaate the...
Saima: Adi to bahot strong boy hai na..... My sweet baby.... {and they both hug each other}

Later in the night....
{after dinner & all work, Saima slowly steps into the room. Rayan was sleeping so she made no noise & walked towards the dressing table, opened the drawer &
removed a white color diary. That was her personal diary..... Her that campanion, that use to be with her everytime....
She opened it & wrote something.... and than she smiled, thinking of something & than looked at Rayan with the same smile.....
she than turned towards the window... It was drizzling... she stood there, just feeling those tiny little drops of rains, that felt straight onto her face.....
she closed her eyes feeling every bit of this beautiful moment, she had never felt like this before.... she than opened her eyes....and turned towards Rayan..... it was now raining a bit heavily so due to winds the raindrops were coming all over his face.... Saima just stood there looking at him with those affectionate eyes.... Those eyes that had so much to say, so much to know.... so much to feel..... She than closed the windows & stepped towards Rayan & sat besides him... She than wiped off his face with her dupatta, and smiled...}
Saima: {to herself} jab bhi aapko dekhte hai, aapke saath hote hai, pata nahi kyun apne aapko bahot mehfooz paate hai.... maano jaise ab kisi ki tamanna nahi,kisi ki chah nahi.... Aise bas hum tab mehsoos
karte the jab bhi Aryan ke saath hote the.... {smiles} per shayad wo hamara kal tha aur aap hamara aaj hai...., phir bhi pata nahi kyun hum aapke kareeb nahi aa
sakte..., aapko Aryan ki jagah nahi de sakte...

~~~~ song in the background~~~~
Iss paar reh naa sake......
Uss paar jaa naa sake...
Khamosh reh naa sake.....
Jo chahe keh naa sake...
Yeh pagal samaa..... yeh mausam jawaaa.....
Yeh dil kya kare......
Yeh dil kya kare.....
Jadoo sa chane laga...... Pagal banane laga..
Kuch yaad aane laga... Kuch bhool jane laga...
Kya naa kare, kya kare....
Yeh dil kya kare......
Yeh dil kya kare......
~~~~ song in the background~~~~

She than gets up & goes to Adi's room...

....end of part 21......

comments awaited...!!!

luv,
ruksaar

wow ruksaar dear awesome part yaaar lloved it toooo tooooo gooood amazing fantastic...yaar yeh saima aisa nahin karsakti haarrh wakt rayan keh pass khichiii challi atti hi lekin abbi bi manaa kar rahin hai keh usseh aryan ki jagaa nahin deh sakti thats not fair...masth part dear...i hope next karwachaut part mein kuch romance ho continue soooon cant wait more👏

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awwwwwwwww....such a lovely part dear....saima is feeling ...rayan is too shy...lolzz...and adi is sooo cute....great...cont soon 👏 👏

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hey ruksaar nice part 👏 . loved the scene between rayan and saima when they r in conversation about karvachaut 😉 . that was awesome and the last part was the best when she is near window and the raindrops are on her face and also on rayan's 😛 . she goes and wipes them off his face with dupatta 😳 . that was so cute and adorable scene 😳 . she is perfect patni, bahu and maa 👍🏼 . i really liked her but whenshe says that she can't give him aryan's place was kinda disappointing yaar 😭 . now she is legally wedded to rayan, abb woh kisi ki patni,maa aur bahu hai .she should atleast try and forget aryan and should start thiking about rayan and her life to the fullest 😳 . i really like your story 👏 . continue soon plz..... can't wait any longer.bye and takecare. 😊 😛 😊

HEY WELCOME BACK YAAR.....we were missing u a lot..and your part was just awesome....plzzzzz continue soon. 😛

hey.....nice part....but dont separate them bcoz of aryan....ple continue soon.....thanks

aww... 😳 ..such a sweet part...2 gud.. 👏 ..loved it...do cont soon... 😊

dat was chooo romantic 😳, loved it.
Pyar inko hone laga..khona tha dil khone laga... 😳 😳 😳