Tere Bina (RajivAmna ff) last part updt! - Page 28

hey plz continue yaar......we have missed a lot but dont want to miss more...... 😛 😛

Awesome part yaar!!! 👏

Loved it!!

continue soon!!

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vandu 😉

thank you so much 4 ur comments frnds... 😳 😳 Will be updating soon..

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ruksaar

hey ruksaar 😊 !.....i'm so glad that you are back 😊 ......just read your update...and it's awesome 👏 👏 👏 .....rayan and saima come back to shimla....where adi was waiting for the desesperatly 😆 ...(akela chordo kabhi 😉 ).....rayan receive a call from raina that they have to come back becouse karwa chaut was soon,...n it's was saima's first 😉 ....saima convince dadi to come with them to mumbai 😊 ....saima and rayan are falling with each other without noticing 😉 .....i think saima should forgot everything about aryan and accept her love for rayan.....don't you think so? 😉 ....continue soon plzzzzzzzz........can't wait 😉

yaar its been 9 days plz update soon its going great

Originally posted by: le_me_star

hey ruksaar 😊 !.....i'm so glad that you are back 😊 ......just read your update...and it's awesome 👏 👏 👏 .....rayan and saima come back to shimla....where adi was waiting for the desesperatly 😆 ...(akela chordo kabhi 😉 ).....rayan receive a call from raina that they have to come back becouse karwa chaut was soon,...n it's was saima's first 😉 ....saima convince dadi to come with them to mumbai 😊 ....saima and rayan are falling with each other without noticing 😉 .....i think saima should forgot everything about aryan and accept her love for rayan.....don't you think so? 😉 ....continue soon plzzzzzzzz........can't wait 😉

awwww...thanks a ton honey..!! well....this is just the beginning of a new beginning...😳 😳

Originally posted by: aishwaria

yaar its been 9 days plz update soon its going great

yes dear, i was busy last week, but i'll try n update very soon...

Part-22

Recap-
Rayan aur Saima shimla laut aate hai.... Rayan Saima se kehta hai ki unhe agle hi din Delhi lautna hoga...
Saima Dadi ko saath le jaane ki zid karti hai, aur Dadi maan jaate hai....

Story further.........
Next day... morning
Rayan wakes up... he than realises that he was sleeping for too long...He quickly gets up,just than Saima comes with
tea...
Saima: good morning
Rayan: good morning..., tumne mujhe uthaya kyun nahi..
Saima: koi baat nahi, jyada der nahi hui hai....
Rayan: oh... mujhe laga bahot der ho gayi.... Dadi kya kar rahe hai?
Saima: packing
Rayan: kyun?
Saima: ab wo hamare saath aa rahe hai to thodi bahot packing to karenge hi na?
Rayan: what? wo hamare saath aa rahe hai? per....
Saima: aur kya.., bhala dadi hamari baat kaise taal sakte?
Rayan: are wah! meri baat to unhone aaj tak nahi maani
Saima: humne kaha to wo maan gaye.... acha ab aap fresh ho jayiye phir hume nikalna bhi hai... humne breakfast bhi ready kar diya hai..,
aur aapke kapde yehi rakh dete hai jaldi kijiyega.... {and she goes on talking while rayan just keeps looking at her..., just than saima looked at him,
and he quickly gets up}
Saima: Rayan bhi na.... {laughs}
{kuch der baad wo delhi ke liye nikalte hai...Waha Raina saari tayyariyo mien lagi hoti hai... Usne ek chotisi party rakhi thi jaha bas kuch kareebi logo ko
invite kiya tha....
Rayan aur Saima ghar pohochte hai..., per Dadi ko bhi unke saath dekhkar Raina bahot khush hoti hai... Dadi kaafi saalo baad ghar aaye hote hai....
Raina ne pure ghar ko sajaya diya tha..., akhir yeh Saima ka pehla karwachauth jo tha. Rayan ke chehre per phir wahi hasi, wahi khushi dekhkar Raina bahot khush
hoti hai.

Shaam hoti hai.., Saima apne kamre mein hoti hai,tabhi Raina aati hai
Saima: are mama,aayiye na
Raina: {smiles} thank you beta
Saima: kisliye?
Raina: saalo baad aaj maine Rayan ke chehre per wahi muskurahat dekhi hai, aankho mein wahi khushi dekhi hai...
Saima: per iske liye aapko hume thanks kehne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai mama.., humne kuch nahi kiya hai
Raina: {laughs} tum bhi bilkul Rayan jaisi hi ho... Acha main tumse yeh kehne aayi thi ki maine mehendi wali ko bulaya hai, neeche aa jana
Saima: mehendi?
Raina: ha beta.... kyun tumhe pasand nahi?
Saima: behed pasand hai..., aap chaliye hum bas aate hai
Raina: thik hai... jaldi aana
Saima mehendi lagwa deti hai.. Uski haatho ki mehendi bahot khubsoorat lag rahi thi, per ab wo Adi ko naa hi khana khila paa rahi thi aur naa hi uske peeche dudh
ka glass lekar daud sakti thi, aur yeh Adi ke liye bahot acha tha, to janab apni mama ko khub sataa rahe the..
Saima: Adi beta please khana kha lo, warna dekho hum bhi nahi khayenge
Adi: aap to waise bhi nahi khaa payenge, aapne mehendi jo lagayi hai
Raina: to kya hua hai? hum unhe khila denge... aur Dadi aapko, ab chalo Adi khana kha lo...
Adi: per mama
Raina: Adiii..... chalo jao bhi...
Saima: bahot badmaash ho gaye hai ye... Acha mama aap bhi khaa lijiye
Raina: aao beta saath hi kha lete hai
Saima: per mama Rayan to
Raina: uska phone tha, keh raha tha aane mein deri hogi... ab tum zid mat karo, warna Dadi ko tumhe bhi khilana hoga..{laughs}
Saima: {smiles} thik hai chaliye...

Kaafi raat ho jaati hai, Rayan ab tak nahi lautta. Saima apne kamre mein baithi uska intezar kar rahi hoti hai... Wo baar baar watch ki taraf dekhti aur phir wahi khidki
se bahar jhaakti, per Rayan ab tak nahi aata... Aakhir wo wahi baithe baithe so jaati hai... Kuch der baad Rayan aata hai.
Rayan: {to himself} aaj to meri khair nahi, aaj phir Saima ki daant padegi... Rayan tum kabhi nahi sudhroge....
{kuch hichkichahat se Rayan apne room ka darwaza kholta hai, aur aahista se ander aata hai. Wo Saima ko yaha waha dhunta hai, phir dekhta hai ki wo
wahi sofa pe baithi so chuki hai.... Wo uske paas aata hai, aur bas use dekhta hai.... khidki se chaand ki roshni Saima ke chehre per pad rahi thi, Uske chehre ki
khubsoorti ko aur bhi bada rahi thi. Rayan uske aur kareeb aata hai aur use dekhkar muskurata hai. Tabhi tez hawa chalti hai aur Saima ke zulfein uske chehre per aati hai,
Rayan unhe hataane apna haath aage badhata hai per ruk jaata hai..., pata nahi kyun per wo apne aap ko use chune se rokta hai. Wo chahkar bhi uske aur kareeb nahi jaa pata... kyun yeh wo khud bhi nahi jaanta tha... Wo bas jhat se uth jata hai, aur tabhi Saima ki aankh khulti hai, wo dekhti hai ki Rayan wahi khada hai...}
Saima: aap... aap kab aaye? badi der laga di aaj...
Rayan: ha, bas wo clients the to deri ho gayi..., i'm sorry tumhe...
{saima uthti hai, per jaise hi wo aage badhti hai uska dupatta uss table ke corner mein atak jaata hai.., wo nikal nahi paati, per Rayan ye notice nahi karta...
Saima: Rayan...wo....
Rayan: hmm.... {doesnt look at her} kya hua?
Saima: wo...., emmm, zara yeh.....
{rayan uski taraf dekhta hai, saima dupatta nikal nahi paati, aur kyunki wo window ke paas khadi thi to hawa se uski zulfein baar baar uske chehre per aa rahi thi, wo kuch kar hi nahi paa rahi thi.., aakhir rayan uske paas aata hai... per jaise hi rayan saima ke paas aane lagta hai saima ki dil ki dhadkane aur bhi tez hone lagti hai, utni hi uske saansein bhi.....
Rayan uska dupatta nikalta hai aur phir bahot hi hichkichahat se uski zulfein uske chehre se hatata hai...aur phir jhat se palat jata hai, pillow leta hai aur sofa pe so jata hai...
Saima bas muskurati hai, aur phir so jaati hai...

Next morning.....
Rayan office ke liye jaa hi raha hota hai, tabhi Saima use breakfast ke liye rokti hai..
Rayan: Saima mujhe der ho rahi hai, main office mein kuch khaa lunga
Saima: sab tayyar hai, aap bas thode khaa lijiye
Rayan: ok fine....
{and he sits for breakfast, while Saima serves him}
Rayan: tum nahi baithogi?
Saima: {smiles} nahi, aaj hamara wrat hai
Rayan: oh...., {he quickly gets up}
Saima: kya hua?
Rayan: Saima, meri ek bahot important meeting hai, main chalta hu..... {and he leaves smiling, without having his breakfast}
Saima: inhe achanak kya ho gaya?

{Rayan reaches office, he was sitting in his cabin...., lost in his thoughts, smiling just than Sahil enters his cabin}
Sahil: good morning sir
Rayan: good morning Sahil
{Rayan notices, Sahil seemed a bit lost}
Rayan: kya hua? kaha kho gaye?
Sahil: kya batau sir, ammi ne phir koi ladki dekhi hai, lagta hai iss baar wo meri shaadi karwakar hi rahenge
Rayan: {laughs} to is mein problem kya hai?
{tabhi Sahil ko kisi ka phone aata hai aur wo aur bhi irritate hota hai}
Sahil: problem office mein aa chuki hai
Rayan: kya matlab?
Sahil: wahi, Mr.Rishabh Malhotra.... aa rahe hai
{just than someone knocks the door}
Rayan: please come in
Rishabh: hello, Mr Garewal
Rayan: hello...
Rishabh: so.., finally we are meeting officially.
Rayan: emm..., ji aap aise keh sakte hai... Sahil, wo files le aana zara
Sahil: ji sir...
Rishabh: waise to Aryan ne mujhe saare details bata diye hai, per phir bhi socha ki ek baar aap se bhi discuss karna thik hoga
Rayan: {seemed a bit confused} kaisa discussion?
Rishabh: oh, to lagta hai aap shayad nahi jaante. Anyways, i have a proposal for u.
Rayan: ji kahiye
Rishabh: as you u know, i'm new to this hotel business, & a bit choosy about the people i'm working with & who else other than the Garewals to start my new business with would be!
Rayan: well, your most welcome to work with us.
Rishabh: so yeh raha hamara proposal. I want to open a chain of hotels in India in collaraboration with the Garewals.
Rayan: {has a look at the proposal} interesting, but why in collaraboration? Aapke paas sab kuch hai, to aap independently bhi to yeh kar sakte hai
Rishabh: jaanta hu.., per agar iss waqt hum saath kaam kare to yeh hum dono ke liye fayde ka hoga
Rayan: hmm...,
{tabhi rishabh ko kisi ka call aata hai}
Rishabh: yes, Mr. Kumar................... to hell, us ek insaan ke liye main wo company nahi chod sakta..., use jitne chahiye utne paise do...kharido unhe... I want that company at any cost... we've got almost 45% shares of that company....... ok................ koshish nahi, i want results..... shaam tak mujhe details chahiye...{hangs down} Mr.Garewal,
aaj shaam ko maine ek chotisi party rakhi hai, aapke honour mein aur hamari success ke liye bhi
Rayan: main kuch samjha nahi
Rishabh: aaj humne ek aur company ko takeover kar liya hai, infact 2 the, per kuch silly logo ki wajah se wo dusri comapny mein problem ho gayi hai..., but anyways atleast we've got a reason to celebrate..., aur isliye main chahta hu aap apni family ke saath iss party mein shaamil ho
Rayan: thank you so much,per aaj possible nahi hai.
Rishabh: per aaj to kuch bahot important log party mein aane wale hai, agar unse mil liye to hamare liye kaafi faydemend hoga
{sahil enters}
Sahil: sir, aapko sidharth sir bula rahe hai
Rayan: please ex-cuse me for a minute
Rishabh: sure.....
{rayan leaves.... Meanwhile rishabh take a look at the office, and than he notices a photo frame kept on the table facing in the opposite direction. He picks it up, sahil was really irritated to see him behaving like that}
Rishabh: hey yeh Mr.Garewal ke saath kaun hai?
Sahil: Unki wife aur kaun
Rishabh: what? Yeh inki wife hai?
Sahil: ji hai...., aur yeh rahe amazon project ke details...
Rishabh: thanks... {has a look at those papers}
Sahil: aap inhe ek baar padh lijiye aur sign karke bhijwa dijiyega, aapko copy bhi mil jayegi
Rishabh: well, that will do.
{rayan enters}
Rayan: yes Mr.Malhotra kahiye
Rishabh: main chah raha tha ki ek baar construction site per ho aao, to agar aap free ho to kya hum abhi chal sakte hai?
Rayan: emm..... well, ok fine...
{they leave...., and after a while they reach the site.... Rayan showed him everything, and later they went upto the site office..
just than Rayan gets a call from sahil}
Sahil: hello sir, aap kaha hai?
Rayan: kya baat hai Sahil?
Sahil: sir, mujhe abhi pata chala hai ki Kanak companies ke shares ke daam gir chuke hai, aur kisi nayi company ne unke saare shares kharid liye hai
Rayan: what? per yeh sab... anyways tum abhi Mr. Singh ko contact karo aur saari details pata karo....
Sahil: ha sir, main bas abhi wahi jaa raha hu...
Rayan: ok, main bhi abhi waha pohoch raha hu...
Sahil: ji sir.... , sir kya yeh hume Saima bhabhi ko.....
Rayan: nahi, filhaal usse kuch mat kehna...., i'll handle that.
Sahil: thik hai sir.., main aapko kuch der baad phone karta hu
Rayan: ok... {hangs down}
Rishabh: well, Mr.Garewal.., i think hume iske promotion programmes ke bare mein bhi tayyariya karni chahiye, waise i'm not really satisfied with the last portion..,
Rayan: {interruptingly} Mr.Malhotra, i'm really very sorry per mujhe is waqt ek personal kaam se kahi jana hoga.., ek bahot hi urgent kaam hai...
{and he just walks away. Rishabh was very much irritated by Rayan's behaviour}
Rishabh: what kind of unproffessional behaviour is this?
Mr.Mehra: i understand sir, per koi bahot hi important kaam hoga warna sir aise kabhi nahi jaate...
Rishabh: pata nahi log business kaise karte hai.., huh..!!
{he was so annaoyed that he just walks out of the office}

......end of part-22.........

comments awaited...!!!

luv,
ruksaar

hey great part yaar....plz continue soon

hey great part 👏 . i really loved it ⭐️ . ufff!!! rayan aur saima ka scene toh bohot acha tha 😉 . it was so romantic 😳 . and this rishab, i think he will be a problem in rayan's lfe 😡 . sahil is right, rishab is really weird .and now there will be karvachaut taking place at night. i am really excited to know how this first karvachaut will be in saima's life 😉 . continue soon plzzz.....can't wait any longer.bye.takecare. 😊 😛 😊