OUR LITTLE SECRET-RECREATING SHIVI (FF)PART 25 PG 64 - Page 20

Originally posted by: Jiyakumari

Oye oye ab or wait nhi hota yr 😂 thoda chapter bda bda likho na please ❤️

bda likhugi toh time jayada lagega.....aur main 1000-1500 words hi likhne me comfortable rehti hu😅😅

Originally posted by: YaadonKeBaraat

Please don't show that scene where Shiva hurts himself because of Dhara. Atleast FFs mein Bhabhi jaap nahi please

hey guys..........phele padlo phir baat karte hai.......

PART 10

Raavi looks at him and she gets shocked when she sees him burning his hands over stove. She rushes to him and pulls his hand away yelling ‘paagal ho gya shiva……haath kyun jala liya…….’. dhara hears this and turns only to see shiva’s brunt hand. Dhara and Shiva were not just Bhabhi and devar, they had a pure relation of a mother and a son. Tears falls from dhara’s eyes seeing shiva’s pain. She couldn’t control her tears and runs to her room crying. Raavi takes shiva to the sink and keeps his hand under running water. Dev, who was witnessing the whole scene with rishita, was about go inside the kitchen but rishita pulls him away and says ‘kya kar rahe ho tum?......unhe thodi derr akela chod do…..’. dev gives a fearful reaction and says ‘aree nhi dono ek dusre ka murder kardenge’ and tries to go back again. Rishita mentally curses her husband for being so bhola and pulls him back saying ‘oh god dev….tumna budhu ke budhu rahoge ….pyaar kar chuke ho….par ke symptoms nhi dikhte.’ Dev gives her a questioning look to which she replies ‘arre kabhi dhyaan se dekho……. raavi aur shiva ke beech na tume vo dikhega….unke beech na kuch kuch hone laga hai……’. dev looks rishita seriously for a min and then starts laughing as if he has heard the best joke in the world. ‘shiva-raavi….. kuch kuch hota hai…oh god rishita….’ says dev laughing. Rishita rolls her eyes and asks ‘dev, was it some kind of joke?😠’ to which dev replies ‘aur nhi toh kya……shiva-raavi ke mann me ek dusre ke liye feelings ……it’s a joke only’. Rishita looks him angrily. ‘dekho rishita…..ek baar mujhe bhi aisa laga tha……par ye possible nhi hai…..try to understand’ says dev calmly trying not to laugh. ‘okay then…..lagi bet…..ek din aayega jab shiva raavi khud bolege that they love each other’ says rishita challenging dev. dev too accepts the challenge and says ‘challenge accepted…….jo haarega……hmm, vo saamne wale ke liye kuch special karega…..okay?’. rishita gives him a wide smile. ‘acha chalo….shiva ko dekhle…..’ says dev moving towards kitchen but rishita pulls him back and says ‘vahan nhi…dhara Bhabhi ke paas chalo……and yes baby……mere special plan karne ke liye ready ho jao……because I’ll be the winner’ and pulls him to gaura’s room.

Elsewhere, in kitchen, raavi applies wheat dough on shiva's burnt plam. She flinches as if his wound was causing pain to her. Tears from her eyes were continuously falling. Shiva admires her. She loves him so much that too unconditionally. Does he deserve this love? He thinks. ‘kya ghoor rha hai? ....’ asks raavi being annoyed to which shiva replies ‘dekh rha hu ki tujhe mujhse jayada dard horha hai…..’. ‘hn toh…..mujhe pata hai ki mard kitna bhi keh le lekin usse bhi dard hota hai…….tu mere same shiii kar sakta hai…..main kisiko nhi bataungi….acha thik baad me tujhe bhi yaad nhi dilaaungi…..kitchen ki baat kitchen me rahegi’ retorts raavi. Shiva chuckles at this and mockingly asks ‘acha….kitchen ki baat kitchen me rahegi…..matlab ab jab bhi main kitchen me aaunga toh tu mujhe ye yaad dilayegi ki maine ek haath jalne par teri tarha ganga jamuna bahaye the….hn?’. ‘majak mat kar shiva’ replies raavi being irritated. Shiva gently lifts her head and wipes her tears saying ‘rona band kar……. rote hue bikul-’. ‘chipkali lagti hu…pta hai’ retorts raavi. ‘par rone ki wajha tu hi deta hai na…..pata hai na ki tujhe itna sa bhi dard hota hai toh main paagal ho jaati hu…..aur jinka attention paane ke tune ye kiya, unhe kitna dard ho rha hoga…..dhara di khud ko kosh rahi hongi……aree tujhe ek chheenk bhi aati hai na toh dhara di sar ghar pe utha leti hai aur tu ye’ says raavi not letting shiva to utter aword in b/w. ‘sar ghar par nhi…..ghar sar par utha leti’ says shiva like a kid trying to correct hi teacher. ‘hn vahi’ retorts raavi finishing her aid on his hand. Shiva holds his ears and says ‘sorry chipkali….please maaf karde……’. Raavi hugs him and says ‘it’s okay…..bas next time mat karna….’.‘vaise chipkali….hum ghr pe hai…..’ says shiva and raavi breaks the hug instantly looking around.

(when dhara was leaving kitchen crying, krish and gautum follows her to the room. There dhara tell about the incident happened in kitchen. Dev and rishita too goes there but stops outside the room as they didn’t know how to face and pacify dhara.)

In gaura’s room, krish and gautum try to console dhara who was still crying. Shivi and dev-rishita enter the room. They all rush to dhara and hugs her tightly. ‘sorry Bhabhi/di’ says all four together. They break the hug and kneel down in front of her. ‘bhabhi iss baar maaf kar do…..agli baar aisa nhi hoga….’ says dev emotionally. ‘hn Bhabhi aaj ke baad hum aapko sab batayenge……please maaf kar do…’ continues shiva. Raavi holds her ears and says ‘sorry di…..please maan jao……main kabhi koi baat nhi chupaungi…..aur na inn dono gadhedo(shiva and dev) ko chupane dungi……’. ‘sorry Bhabhi, please maaf kardijiye…..’ says rishita. Dhara gets more emotional and hugs them again. ‘gussa iss baat ka nhi hai ki tumne do saal se nhi bataya….par isse hai jab batana chahiye tha tab nhi bataya…….aisa nhi hai ki mujhe tum sab ke secret jaanane hai…. par agr kisi din tum sab uss secret ki vajha se mushkil me pad jao toh hume uske baare me pata toh hona chahiye taaki hum kuch kar paye…’ .‘dhara sahi keh rahi….aaj jo hua usse bhi jayada bada kuch ho sakta tha….aur usko samhaalne ke liye hume pta hona chahiye ki aakhir baat kya hai….isliye agli baar aisi koi baat ho jisme humara involve hona jarrori ho vo mat chupana’says gautum making reason. They all nods in yes. dhara looks at shiva and slaps his head (slowly) ‘aur ye jo stunt kiya hai na tune(pointing towards his hand)….agli baar mat karna, gadheda …..(togaumbi) gaumbi first aid box lana’. Shiva tries to say something but dhara pulls shiva hand and her eyes widden seeing his wound already covered with wheat dough. Her gaze turns to raavi whose eyes focused on shiva’s hand. ‘raavi, ye aata tune lagaya?...’ asks dhara with shock. Raavi without thinking replies ‘hn’. After this, shiva glares her whereas others be like 😲. ‘hn……pa..par kitni mushkil se aapko pata hai……sun hi nhi raha tha…..phir aapki aur gaumbi ki kasam di tab maana’says raavi being nervous. Shiva thanks god for giving some brain to his dobi. ‘tabhi main sochu ki shiva ne itni shaanti raavi ko haath kaise lagane diya’ says krish chuckling but one glare from shiva and raavi, krish goes to finger-on-your-lips mode. ‘acha ye chodo…..kal hume somnaath mandir jana hai, puja ke liye…..puja dev-rishita ke naam ki hai par ne kaha hai ki sab jayenge….’ announces gaumbi. ‘main bhi chalu aap logo ke saath?’ asks raavi being exicited. Shiva returns to his rowdy pandya form and says ‘aee tu kyu jayegi…..tu kahin jayegi samjhi!!’. ‘main chalungi nadi….’ asks raavi with pleading eyes. Dhara happily nods her head in yes.raavi looks at shiva smirks whereas shiva gives her tujhse toh main dekh lunga types look. But internally both were jumping with joy. Suddenly, all heard suman shouting ‘kahan mar gye saare….do bahu hai ghar me phir bhi time khana nhi milega kya…..ya shiva ki shaadi karau khane lene ke liye?’. all starts laughing at suman’s comment except shivi. ‘main kaki ko khana de deti hu…..’ says raavi and runs away to hid her blush. ‘ye toh aise bhaagi jaise yahi shiva wali ho’ says rishita trying to sound funny but she meant this somewhere. For a second, everyone looks rishita seriously but starts laughing thinking that she is just pulling shiva’s leg. Shiva looked them with red face. All thought that it was because anger but he is blushing instead. He thinks ‘abhi has rahe hai…..jis din pta chale ga uss din toh saare shock me chale jaayenge……’

so I end this part here only......I know family wala part thoda ajeeb ho gya hai and some of you find it like bhabhi jaap, though I tried best not to make so......phir adjust kar lo.....tbh I myself is not satisfied with the family part......but the main purpose was to recreate shivi scene.....which is done......so do mention how was it?......thanks for reading.....

**odette, recreated your suggested scene......kaisa tha😁😁?

part 11- pg 31

I want more of rishita pulling shiva's leg 😳show me unki bonding kaafi aachi thi fir sab kachra kar dia hai makers ne 🤢

It was really great virangana..........

I knew you will recreate the scene perfectly🤩🤩

I really like rishita teasing Shiva want more such scene..........

One more thing.......

Please let ShiVi also do puja chupke chupke or something like that as making promises what panditji tells to deshita and they both sbeak and do tge same.............

It was a suggestion rest is upto to you.......... As i know you would have thought of a nice idea 💡

This was amazing 😍😍😍😍

Originally posted by: sahapallavi

I want more of rishita pulling shiva's leg 😳show me unki bonding kaafi aachi thi fir sab kachra kar dia hai makers ne 🤢

glad you liked it🤗🤗

Originally posted by: Radhi12

Really nice update.

Originally posted by: Odette_delusion

It was really great virangana..........

I knew you will recreate the scene perfectly🤩🤩

I really like rishita teasing Shiva want more such scene..........

One more thing.......

Please let ShiVi also do puja chupke chupke or something like that as making promises what panditji tells to deshita and they both sbeak and do tge same.............

It was a suggestion rest is upto to you.......... As i know you would have thought of a nice idea 💡

will surely give more shiva and rishita's scenes😊😊

thanks for the idea but will be able to excute it later because bandar aur chipkali jungle trip pe ja rahe hai...uske baad tera idea likhungi.....idea!!! I'll recreate it as the puja scene of haweli😁😁😁😁

Originally posted by: aimmyangle

This was amazing 😍😍😍😍

read my today's os- PROMISE😁😁 and tell how's it😁😁