jo nahi karna tha.(a-k lov story)#2 - Page 5

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: angullgrl91

".wow. awesome part. im confused about one thing. did kripa agree to go with angad to london or wateva place they r gonna go 2. or wat?

:"so get ready darling...we r going tommorow"...kripa feel helpless n said:"but remember one thing angad!u will never win me

Actually same here i was a bit confused about that as well, but didnt say anything coz i thought it will get cleared up in da nxt part loll 😆

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Posted: 18 years ago
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i cant believe im saying dis but wat a selfish....arrogant...self absorbed jerk..i mean all he can think abt is me me me...did he ever consider the pain she went through when he left her, when she was all alone pregnant...just tell her the truth nd get it over wid...
PS: i luvd it!!!!!!!😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
#43
oh my my angad is going gr8!!!!awsome prt
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awsome when i thought it wouldnt get more iteresting 😆 its kinda sad am a little angry at angad he has the guts to do so much but cant tell her the truth wierdo 😆 man ur writtings excellent
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Posted: 18 years ago
#45
wow its superbbbbbbbbb plzzzzzzzzzzz con soon plzzzzz make them2ghter agin plzzzzz con soonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn 👏 i love the way angad z challangeing kripa 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: shiv-gauri4eva

i cant believe im saying dis but wat a selfish....arrogant...self absorbed jerk..i mean all he can think abt is me me me...did he ever consider the pain she went through when he left her, when she was all alone pregnant...just tell her the truth nd get it over wid...
PS: i luvd it!!!!!!!😛

exactly my thoughts!!!😛

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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey i read ur whole fan ficion t was grt it was interesting and emotinonal u r really good at writing and i cant wait for u to continue
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Posted: 18 years ago
#48
omg.. i justt caught up w/ everything.. omg.. kripa wants a divorce.. no, she is just saying that cuz she is hurt.. i no angad will never take prateek away from kripa..


omg. now i dont even know who is rite.. i mean angad is wrong for lieing to kripa, kripa is wrong from hiding the truth about prateek and theyre both wrong for the divorce/custody thing.. angad is rite to try and save their relationship but kripa is rite cuz she is hurt but she better not take any drastic measurements!!!!!


continue sooooooonn
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Posted: 18 years ago
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part 118

next morning
kripa had unwillingly agreed for going bak to london.
kripa is crying putting her head in gayitri's lap,she said:"i hate him mom!y he is doing this..."gayitri wants to calm her but she is keep crying,when angad comes to pick kripa n prateek for air port.angad rings the door bell n gayitri get up to open the door n after opening the door she hardly smile to see angad ,she let him come in but didnt say anything....

angad by himself start talking to gayitri,he strt asking things abt suryabhan,tannu,n rahul,gayitri replies him in to the point...n then she said:"tum betho!mai kripa ko bulati hoo".angad said:"unty!where is kripa ...i want to talk with her".gayitri noded her head n said:"she is in her room,doing packing".angad smile n said:"ok"then he enters in her room where she is doing packing n prateek is standing on the bed,eating wafers.....prateek saw angad n scream:"daddy"
kripa look at entrance with furious expression but said nothing...angad:"caugh caugh!".but kripa keep avoiding his presence like he is not exsist in the room.

after awhile angad comes closer to her n said:"look kripa!i knw i hurt u so much but plz try to understand my decision".kripa look at him n said:"n wat abt that decision which u made 4 years bak".angad lowered his eyes for a second n then look into her eyes ,he said:"kripa!that was just a mistake-----"kripa interrupt:"but that mistake ruin everything ....n now u r forcing me to make up .....how it wud b possible angad!i cant start my new life with u...u who betray me so harshly"(she is crying).angad hold her by her shoulders n said:"plz kripa dnt say that...we start our new life again n this time i wont disapoint u..i promise".kripa grab his colar n said:"if u lov me that much then y did u let me go away...tell me angad".angad hold her hands which r in his colar n said:"believe me kripa i didnt had any wrong intensions but that time things were not worked".kripa look at him with having questions in her eyes n said:"wat do u mean??".angad said:"if u love me then plz do believe in me ".kripa said in anger:"i dnt love u......i hate u,i hate, i hate u"(she said stubbornly).angad quickly kiss her on her cheek,kiss was quite tight n warm.kripa's mouth fell wide open n prateek who looked confused by looking at his parents fighting all of sudden start blushing...

angad said:"we r getting late for the flight".kripa said:"remember one thing angad!im comming with u just becoz of prateek".

then angad,kripa n prateek said "good bye"to gayitri n suryabhan..n left for the air port.

laksh,k.t n kunal were at the air port....angad said sorry to kunal for his behaviour n then laksh said to angad:"i will catch u guys after few days"

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Posted: 18 years ago
#50
grt part as usual keep continuing

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